Hi.. this is my first fan fic for kriyam…hope you like it..
The story starts from the time when Sayaam gets Krishna arrested in goa. Sayyam: (asks some of his men) do her tests and free her from the police. Then follow her. Remember she should think that u r molesting her..but no one
will even touch her until I come.
They agree and go..
Sayaam thinks u love krishna more than ur life suhani birla now u see how i will use her for my revenge..
In the police station
Police frees krishna after the tests..and sayam’s men give her a lift to suhani,s shack.. on the way they tell her that the car has broke down… krishna gets off and they began to molest her.. she runs and they follow her.. One goon holds her shoulder but she hit his hand and runs but her Kurta tears in this process.. she runs until she gets in front of a car which hits her leg. ..
The car was actually sayam’s.
Sayam thinks itx show time and smiles
He gets of and fights the goons..
Krishna cries and looks on..
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Precap sayam:- you can be stronger than u think u r…. just start to be believe in urself
Krishna smiles
Do tell me how was the episode….. all suggestions are welcomed
11 Comments
It was very nice. Pls post a longer update
Thats really good. One suggestion if you could make the updates longer and upload daily thanks x
Like it x please update soon
Dats goooood
Ni’s epi good but plz longer epi upload fast
That was amazing..wen i really watched this scene on the show,i so badly wanted sayyam to be the one to save her from the goons..u made my dream come true..pls update asap…nd longer..
Nic one
Beautiful ? good start…but too short…plz try to upload long episodes?
So cunning of Saiyyam..actually so cunning of u..coz u’re d writer?
Very nice.plz update regularly
Thanks everyone ??