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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam- two bodies one soul- episode 4
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Kriyam- two bodies one soul- episode 4

TaniasharmaBy TaniasharmaMarch 5, 201712 Comments4 Mins Read
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Episode starts
Its morning…Krishna is shown serving food to everyone…when they have a knock on the door..
Krishna goes to see and opens the door..she was a bit amazed to see who it was…it was saiyam with yuvaan and yuvani…
Krishna( thinks): why is he here??…anyways it is good i will apologize and finish the matter..
Saiyam:( thinks) i need to say sorry but not now or else she will think i came here due to her..
Yuvani: hi Krishna..how are u..

Krishna: ya..im fine..u guys here..
Saiyam: just came to see the kids
Krishna: hmm..come inside..
They go and all kids get happy to see saiyam…they hugged him…saiyam too had a big smile as he knelt down and kissed them…
Krishna sees him playing with them and a fair smiles comes on her face..
Saiyam gave them chocolates and enjoys then he joined them for breakfast…
Krishna is serving him…they exchange looks..they both wanted to apologize but were looking for a chance…
Krishna then goes and sits in front of saiyam..they both think how to say sorry to eo…

Saiyam was thinking and mistakenly some tea falls on his shirt…
Trisha: oh..!! Saiyam r u ok??…
Saiyam: ya ya im fine..
Yuvani: u go and wash the stain .
Saiyam: ya.a..kaka where us the washroom..
Kaka: krishna beta show him the washroom..
Krishna was about to say no..when she realized this was the perfect time to apologize
Krishna: ji kaka..
They go..

Krishna showed him and he went inside..he came out but still had the stain..
Saiyam : it still has stain..i will go and just change..
Krishna: but if u dont wash it now stain will be permanent..
Saiyam: but i have many more shirts..
Krishna: that doesn’t mean u will waste one..i know u r enough rich but that doesn’t mean u will waste things..look at us..we all buy clothes once in a year and that too on Diwali…we do no waste them..u should also learn to value things..
Saiyam felt bad for her and even for the kids..
Krishna lets him to the washroom and makes a mixture of detergent and water…she asks him to rub it on the shirt..he does but couldn’t do it properly…..
Krishna : tum se nai hoga ..let me..

She goes to him and rubs his shirt..saiyam watches her continuously…but he soon realized what he was doing and looked away…
Both were thinking of apologizing..
Both together: actually i..
Both stopped..
Krishna: u say first..
Saiyam: no u..say 1st..

Krishna: but..
Saiyam: i said na say it..
Krishna: ok..aah…actually i took u wrong yesterday..u came to help me and i scolded u..even in front of guests i scolded u even u were not at fault..im sorry
Saiyam;( a bit amazed) no..no it,s ok..actually i should apologize i should have walked properly..im sorry..
Krishna: ok then u forgive me i will forgive u..
Saiyam: ok then done.
Both smile..
Krishna: look the stain also vanished..come lets go now..

They go out and see yuvani and yuvan playing with kids..
Saiyam: ah..actually 8 was thinking about something..
Trisha: yes say na..
Saiyam: i was thinking of just going for shopping…we will buy clothes and some toys for everyone..
All kids get happy and thank him..
Kaka: but beta..
Yuvani: no buts kaka..baby trisha and krishna will come with us ..they know what kids like right??…
Baby: right it will be fun..

Krishna:( whispers to saiyam) when i said we buy clothes only on Diwali i didn’t mean to say that u need to buy clothes for us..then why did u..
Saiyam: shhh…its for the kids..i want them to be happy..
He goes and krishna smiles…

After sometime..

All get gathered near the car..except Krishna
Yuvan baby sit in front while yuvani and trisha at the back..
Saiyam was about to sit when he realizes that there was no space for krishna..
Krishna comes…
Yuvani: oh no yuvan there is only one seat left how will both of them..
Krishna: its ok..u all go i won’t come..
Trisha: but..

Saiyam: u will come..
Krishna looks at him..
Saiyam: i mean my car is free we can go in that..
Krishna: lekin..
Trisha: lekin vekin kuch nai..tum jaao saiyam ke saath..
Krishna hesitantly agrees…

Precap: saiyam makes Krishna wear a locket..
Saiyam : it looks beautiful on. U

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    12 Comments

    1. fenil on March 5, 2017 1:35 pm

      Awesome Chapter
      Can’t wait for next

    2. Aarti32 on March 5, 2017 1:45 pm

      Hey, looks like u really love lockets..
      Amazinggg episode..Lovely..N it’s d beginning of friendship which I find really sweet..

    3. Sinni on March 5, 2017 1:54 pm

      Superb

    4. aaravjaikar on March 5, 2017 1:55 pm

      amazing epi we love irt pz kepep wrting waiting for next epi

    5. Kavi on March 5, 2017 2:01 pm

      So. Nice yaar.. plz try to update as like ur first kriyam ff.. really luv ur writing…???

    6. Kriyamloverwriter on March 5, 2017 2:52 pm

      Nice epi. But please do ask me before using my edits as the front cover. Anyways i dont feel offended btw ❤️

      • Taniasharma on March 5, 2017 10:17 pm

        Im so sorry..really..i will take care next time

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 6, 2017 9:02 pm

        No its okay ?

    7. Himanshi on March 5, 2017 2:56 pm

      Very nice

    8. shabnan. on March 5, 2017 3:15 pm

      Superb waiting for next update

    9. sana on March 5, 2017 4:28 pm

      love it…update soon… 😀

    10. Isha on March 5, 2017 5:33 pm

      The episode is just so good!!!… I think in ur last ff also u had a locket scene ryt..so u r really obsessed to love lockets.. Waiting for the next epi.. 🙂

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