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The Kriyam Story (episode 3)

KriyamloverwriterBy KriyamloverwriterMarch 1, 201747 Comments6 Mins Read
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Chapter 3
Hey guys! Thxs for soo much love. I appreciate it. Anyway here is the ff
Its gonna be a bit short as i am busy today.

AFTER BREAKFAST AT NOON
Suhani: guys. We need to find out who mixed wine in that cake.
Sayyam: someone mixed wine?
Suhani: yes me and yuvraaj have found out that someone mixed wine.

Yuvaani: i am so sure its Baby.
Baby: What? But mummiji i didnt do anything
Suhani: i k i believe you. The person is out of this house.
Rags: huh. How are u so sure?
Yuvraaj: Because bhabi they have sent us an text.it said that evry valuable thing will be taken from you Suhani. And the text was sent from somewhere outside

Sayyam: But the person might-
Suhani’s phone rings.she opens the text and stares at it with horror.

Sayyam,yuvaan,yuvaani: Maa what happened.

Suhani : the text says “KRISHNA”

All the colour from sayyam’s face went away. He felt like someone opened his chest,took out his heart and stabbed it. He thought it was a dream. Still…..

Sayyam: KRISHNA? WHAT DOES IT MEAN BY KRISHNA??

Another text came- Find Krishna in the washroom.

Sayyam runs to his room. Everybody follows him. He quickly reaches the washroom at bangs it hard

Sayyam: Krishna! KRISHNA!

Krishna(inside the washroom in an confused voice): what happened sayyam?
Sayyam: Krishna come out.
Krishna(still confused) : why
Sayyam: Krishna your life is in danger please come out!
Krishna: ok wait.

Krishna walks towards the door. She pushes the handle. Its doesnt open. Krishna is locked. She is confused.

Krishna: the door is not opening get the key
Sayyam: what?!

Yuvaan: Sayyam get the key.
Sayyam: but the door doesnt have a key.
Krishna: sayyam tell me what happened
Sayyam: Yuvraaj uncle sharad uncle help me break the door
Yuvaani : Krishna stay far from the door
Rags: Yes Krishna.
Krishna: what happened to you guys.

Suhani’s phone has another message

Suhani: wait. Lets read this text
Sayyam: Maa. Krishna is locked. Her life is in danger. I dont care ABOUT A TEXT!
Bhavna: it might be important

Sayyam is impatient still they read the text
Suhani: it says – 1.2.3

Suddenly there is a loud bang from the washroom and Krishna suddenly gives a loud scream. Sayyam eyes grow big and his face becomes white. He runs to the door

Krishna: SAYYAM SAYYAM!!! Help me. This gas!!! I …. Cant…. B b b rreeathe
Sayyam: KRISHNA!!! Wait i am breaking the door

Sayyam,yuvraaj and sharad tries to break the door. Yuvaan stands there. He thinks. ‘ even tho i care about krishna let them save her and i will tell her that i saved her’

Sayyam gives one huge push and breaks the door. Krishna falls in his arms unconscious.
Sayyam: Krishna Krishna !! Krishna uthoo
Rags and dadi: Krishna!

Suahni: piye bhaiya. Call the doctor
Sharad : yes okay

AFTER A FEW HOURS :(Kriyam’s bedroom)

Sayyam was walking here and there. He felt such fear in his soul. He felt like his soul has ripped to pieces whenever he looked at Krishna. He didnt kniw why he cared whether or not Krishna was okay but he did. He cared for her from deep down to his heart.

Sayyam:(thinks) Why am i thinking about her? Why do i care about her? Do i have feelings for her ? Do i like her? I think i d-

Suhani: Sayyam! Krishna is opening her eyes!

Sayyam forgot all about his thoughts. He rushed forwards to Krishna. He sat beside her looking at the face he thought would never open its eyes. Krishna opened her eyes looked up and sat up

Sayyam: No krishna rest.
Krishna: i am fine
Doctor: No krishna u should rest at this situation or there might be trouble.
Sayyam(standing up ) : What situation ?
Doctor: Krishna is pregnant .

Everybody stares at the doctor. Krishna stands up. No one can believe what they heard. Yuvaan was shocked and expressionless. He wanted to tear Sayyam apart. Sayyam and Krishna were also shocked

Suhani: but …. How? RAMDEEN take the doctor to the door

AFTER THE DOCTOR LEFT:

Suhani turns to Sayyam with a disbelieving look.

Suhani: sayyam how can Krishna be pregnant? Did you do something?
Yuvraaj: You guys dont even have that type of relationship
Yuvaan : did u force Krishnaa?
Sayyam couldnt here anything they said. He turned around to face Krishna. He didnt know why but he just did it. He should have been sad that they were having a kid without their own will
But there was a happiness of being a father and mother and having there own baby which both of them could feel. They ran towards eachother and hugged eachother with smiles on their faces

Sayyam( holding Krishna’s face) : I am going to be a father!
Krishna: i am going to be a mother
Suhani: wait…… U guys have that kind of relationship?
Sayyam and krishna: wo umm uh

Suhani: WHATever. I am going to be a grandmother. Guys we should also celebrate.
Baby goes and hugs Krishna

Baby: congrats Krishna! I will help you
Krishna : thxs.

Everyone spends time congratulating them. Dadi said that their will be a party. Everyone went to prepare for the day after tomorrow. When all of them leaves. Sayyam looks at Krishna.

Sayyam: Krishna whatever u have to say say it tomorrow. Now u rest. My babies are tired.
Krishna: but-
Sayyam stops her and puts his hand on her belly and looks at it.
Sayyam: Kids tell ur mom to argue later and go to sleep

Krishna smiles looking at Sayyam’s concern. Sayyam looks at her and smiles. His hand is still touching her belly but she doesnt mind. Krishna goes to sleep in her sofa when sayyam stops her.

Sayyam: you will sleep in the bed.
Krishna overjoyed:(imitating voice) Okay papa.

They laugh

In Yuvaan’s room:

He is having a dream. In his dream he had proposed Krishna. Krishna was looking at him in an horrific way. She slaps him. Then someone holds his collar.
Sayyam hold the collar of Yuvaan
Sayyam: SHE IS MINE UNDERSTAND?! Krishna is my wife! Mine!!!

Yuvaan wakes up with a start. He doesnt know why but the dream looks so real. It feels like it will happen in the future. Then he remembers how Krishna is pregnant with Sayyam’s baby. How they were one. He clutched his finger with anger and forgot his dream.

Precap: Yuvaan: i have to kill the baby. I will mix this poison to Krishna’s sweets and kill the baby.
He smirks mischievously

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    47 Comments

    1. dwidha on March 1, 2017 9:45 pm

      Awesome episode lovely dear
      I hope it happens in serial too??
      U r a awesome writter
      Keep it up ??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:37 pm

        Thank you so much dear. It means alot ❤️❤️

    2. Prachika on March 1, 2017 9:51 pm

      Nice episode

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:25 pm

        Thank you ❤️

    3. Zani Saleem on March 1, 2017 9:51 pm

      Hhhh I want to kill this yuvaan??but story is beyond amazing❤

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:26 pm

        ??? thank you ??❤️

    4. Safaa on March 1, 2017 10:06 pm

      This is the best ff I have ever read this so beautiful carry on writing hope you upload another one today so I can read it and love it

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:28 pm

        Thank you so so much ?? I have uploaded the 4th part

    5. Prachika on March 1, 2017 10:41 pm

      Nice episode.. waiting fr da next

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:37 pm

        Next part uploaded

    6. Hibaaa on March 1, 2017 10:48 pm

      You are such a good writer❤️❤️ Wait for the next one

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:33 pm

        Thxs. Next part uploaded ✨

    7. tanisha on March 1, 2017 10:52 pm

      Awsam episode …u are doing a very good job i just love your writing

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:35 pm

        Thank you so much tanisha dear

    8. Aarti32 on March 1, 2017 10:53 pm

      Aww..It’s so sweet.. Saiyyam’s such a caring..But dis Yuvaan!! Disgusting??n d precap is..??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank you dear for thinking that my ff is good. I appreciate it ???

    9. sanjana on March 1, 2017 10:54 pm

      Awesome!!!..good have baby as positive and that evil yuvaan?

      but you are a nice writer ?keep writing..

      waiting for next part update ASAP

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:37 pm

        I like the plot of good baby and evil yuvaan. I have already updated chapter 4 ❤️

    10. Neethu on March 1, 2017 10:57 pm

      Oh wow! That was totally unexpected. I just loved every part of this episode ?. Keep writing..

    11. Itshafsa on March 1, 2017 11:00 pm

      I really like it but isn’t it too early for Krishna to be pregnant????

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:44 am

        Omg ! I am so sorry i wanted to right AFTER A FEW WEEKS But i guess the 2nd episode got into my head so i wrote AFTER BREAKFAST. ?

      • Itshafsa on March 2, 2017 8:27 am

        No it’s good? but I just felt it was too quickly and couldn’t understand what was happening because saiyyam was confused about his feelings for Krishna and then suddenly he was happy that he was gonna be a dad and Krishna as well
        Sorry but I just got lost Because of Krishna’s pregnancy ??

      • Itshafsa on March 2, 2017 9:01 am

        It’s good but Krishna’s pregnancy was too quickly and it got me confused cause I couldn’t decide on saiyyam’S and Krishna’s feelings ??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 3:33 pm

        I just wanted to fit it in. I know everyone is confused. That what i want my readers to be so that they can actually read the 4th part and understandd. ?? Do Read the 4th please dear when its uloaded

      • It'shafsa on March 2, 2017 7:51 pm

        Ofc I will ? You’re the best❤️❤️❤️

    12. Hibaaa on March 1, 2017 11:05 pm

      Waiting*

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 6:39 pm

        Posted ?

    13. Avnish on March 1, 2017 11:37 pm

      Such a awesome epi thanks for the epi plzz update soon as possible

    14. saniyaa on March 1, 2017 11:53 pm

      wattt…it was a dream..i want saiyyam to say dat..in ff as well as in ssel..but really love reading ur ff..waiting fr nxt..update soon..

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 3:34 pm

        If sayyam said that so quickly. The fun would. Be gone. Thxs soo much dear for reading it ??

    15. sana on March 2, 2017 12:18 am

      Awesome update…but its been,only a day since…you know…so I’m kinda surprised Krishna’s already pregnant…but I like the plot so far. Hope Sayyam actually says that in real life

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:45 am

        I am sorry. I wanted to write AFTER A FEW WEEKS but i dont know why i wrote that

    16. sana on March 2, 2017 12:22 am

      Loved how Suhani was like “whatever”??

    17. malhanyashvika on March 2, 2017 12:49 am

      pregnancy of Krishna was just so unexpected..keep writing much love ????????
      A silent reader

    18. syedul on March 2, 2017 1:54 am

      Nice buh how did she get pregnant in a day

    19. syedul on March 2, 2017 1:55 am

      Ur storyline is similar to mine

    20. Annie on March 2, 2017 5:19 am

      Plz don’t kill the babies. Anyways fantastic episode.

    21. Himanshi on March 2, 2017 9:36 am

      I just loved it…
      But plzzz don’t kill baby ….
      Anyway its was a nice episode and plz update soon dear…

    22. Shaani on March 2, 2017 10:06 am

      Nice… waiting for the next part… Keep writing…

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:36 pm

        Next part uploaded

    23. Shaani on March 2, 2017 10:58 am

      And yeah.. I started to follow ur instagram kriyam fan club also.. _.kriyamlover._
      Guys follow her on instagram..

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 3:34 pm

        Thank you so much ??

    24. Somi on March 2, 2017 4:04 pm

      Wow nice dear next part post soon . some small mistakes are there in your narration so pls check them and then post .I am just suggesting u,n it judging.

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:35 pm

        Ik. Thxs for helping me by pointing out the mistakes. I appreciate it ?❤️

    25. Isha on March 2, 2017 4:26 pm

      Plz someone go and kill thos stupid yuvaan…..nyc episode saiyyam ‘s concern…krishna becoming pregnant…really nyc episode… 🙂

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 2, 2017 5:36 pm

        Ik ? But without Yuvaan there will be no fun. Besides next post is up

    26. Ashu on March 2, 2017 5:52 pm

      Wow..dear…Such an awesome episode..Krishna pregnant…Wow…Superb work dear…Sry for commenting late…What a relief after writing my exam…

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