Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»The Kriyam Story (episode 1)
Fan Fiction Suhani Si Ek Ladki

The Kriyam Story (episode 1)

KriyamloverwriterBy KriyamloverwriterFebruary 28, 201740 Comments5 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

Hey Guys! This is my first evr Fanfic so i hope you like it. My story will go on per the recent track on SSEL. Yuvaan is still bad and he is trying to win Krishna. Baby has turned good as she has understood her mistake.
– – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – – –
Dadi’s memory has regained so the Biroa Family has decided to throw an in-house family party. As a punishment Baby was to do all the decorations by hand. Baby didn’t mind as she knew she deserved it.

In Kriyam’s bedroom

Krishna was looking at the mirror holding two sarees trying to decide which one to wear.
Sayyam enters the room but Krishna thought it was Yuvaani
Krishna: Yuvaani which sari shall i wear in today’s party- oh Sayyam
Sayyam: i don’t understand what is wrong with you girls. Just choose one and wear.
Krishna: No! I have to know which looks better. I am going to Yuvaani.

Sayyam rolls his eyes at her at goes near the water jug. Krishna starts walking towards the door but then she had an idea and stopped. Krishna turned around.

Krishna: Sayyam, can u help me choose which sari to wear?
Sayyam: Krishna i dont care. Wear anything you like.

Krishna pouts in an angry way. Sayyam looks lovingly at Krishna’s face. He admires how her pout is so perfect. How are soft cheeks is a little shade of pink. And how her lips look so soft and perfect. He feels like going forward and grabbing Krishna’s face and never letting her go.

Sayyam starts to walk forward. But then Reality strikes him.
Sayyam: (thinks) Oh god sayyam what are you thinking? You dont like Krishna! Stop thinking about her.

Sayyam: Fine Krishna i will help you choose a sari.
Krishna smiles she holds out the two saris.
Krishna : okay Sayyam choose. The blue one or the pink one?

Sayyam looks at the two saris. He notices that thhe pink one is transperant so Krishna’s stomach could be seen. The pink saris blouse was also sleeveles so Krishna’s back would be backless. Whereas the blue sari was perfect. It could cover Krishna’s body.

Sayyam: wear the blue sari.
Krishan looks at the sari : But the blue sari is so thick. I am going to die.
Sayyam: u told me to choose and i choose the blue sari. Besides i will wear a green shirt inside the suit.
Krishna: uff! If u wear the green shirt we wont match. Besides i wont wear the blue sari.
Sayyam: i dont care if we dont match besides i choose the blue one so wear that.

Outside the room Yuvaan was listening everything. He wanted to wear exactly the same colour as Krishna.
Yuvaan: Krishna is wearing a blue sari so i will wear a blue suit and tshirt.
Yuvaan leaves.

Krishna: No i will wear the pink sari. Besides whats wrong with it?
Sayyam: Its too….. Um…… To exposive.
Krishna: what?! Why do you even care ? I am wearing the pink sari.
Sayyam: Fine do as u wish.
Krishna: but ……. Are you wearing ….. The green shirt?
Sayyam: yes
Krishna: oh

Krishna leaves the room. Sayyam looks at the way Krishna went. Sayyam knew Krishna was upset that there dress colour wouldn’t match. Sayyam didnt know why he was going to do it but he smirked and started shovelling through his wardrobe searching for a different shirt.
–
At the party. Everyone was having a good time.
Suhani: Baby u did really good woth the decorations
Baby: Ghank you mummiji. I have learnt my mistake.
Yuvaani: please! U and realise? Ha
Rags: i know right
Yuvraaj: Bhaabi.
Pratima: rags and yuvaani! Dadi is calling you

Krishna was standing there alone. Yuvaan comes out of the room wearing a blue suit and starts to look fir Krishna

Yuvaani: Wow! Krishna you look soo nice in this pink dress.
Krishna: thanks. I hope sayyam thinks the same.
Yuvaani: Oh dont worry he will. Ah look there he is.

Krishna looks back. There was Sayyam wearing a black suit and a pink shirt. Krishna was shocked with surprise. She kept looking at the handsome figure. Krishna was overwhelmed at seeing thst they wore the same colour. Sayyam stared at Krishna. She looked so pretty in the pink dress. They had an eyelock.

Yuvaani: okay i will leave you guys.

Krishna smiles looking at Sayyam

Krishna : not bad you know. Our dress colour matches!
Sayyam: thought to Impress my bibi you know
Krishna smiled
Sayyam: besides you look……. Ummm……. Beautiful
They both have an eyelock.

Yuvaan spots Krishna. He is shocked to see her wearing the pink sari not the blue one. He is more shocked to see Sayyam and Krishna in the same colour. He fumed with range

Dadi: okay lets all eat cake.

They all ate cake but someone behind the window was looking.

Shadow: have fun. I have mixed wine in the cake. Lets see how it works

PreCap: Krishna- Sayyam u r so hot.
Sayyam- u are so prettyy. I ….. Lo-

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleIf you’re with me, I would stay alive (shot 26)
Next Article A note by Nishita || EDKV TRIBUTE ||
Kriyamloverwriter

    40 Comments

    1. Shaani on February 28, 2017 6:32 pm

      Nice..Good start… Keep writing… Waiting for the next part..?

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:27 pm

        Thxs sooo much dear. ? NEXT part coming out tomorrow. If u have instagram follow me on @_.kriyamlover._. Thxs for the support

      • Shaani on February 28, 2017 9:29 pm

        Yeah.. Sure. I will

    2. Kavi on February 28, 2017 6:44 pm

      So superb love ur story dear..??? I am so excited.. good luck ya…

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:28 pm

        Thxs dear. Pls keep reading ?

    3. Abhay on February 28, 2017 7:06 pm

      Amazing story track I love it plzzzz update as soon as possible….pllzzz

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:28 pm

        Thxs so much dear. I thought no one would like my plot. ?❤️ Next episode tomorrow.

    4. saniyaa on February 28, 2017 7:09 pm

      wowww….really nice…waiting for nxt…

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:29 pm

        Next tomorrow. Thxs dear ❤️

    5. asia on February 28, 2017 7:19 pm

      Llovly episode??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:31 pm

        Thank you so much ?

    6. Isha on February 28, 2017 7:31 pm

      Nyc start dr….keep writing & Update ASAP…. 🙂

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:32 pm

        Next update tomorrow hopefully. Keep reading dear ?

    7. Ashu on February 28, 2017 7:35 pm

      Wow…Such an awesome start.Pls continue dear.U made my day.Such a beauty..Can’t stop praising..

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:33 pm

        Omg thxs dear. Ur comment made my day? Keep reading. ???

    8. Ajivika on February 28, 2017 7:53 pm

      Wowww realky good… keep it up??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear ❤️

    9. sana on February 28, 2017 8:20 pm

      Cute, I love the starting…both Sayyam and Krishna are more carefree and happy in this ff…it’s nice 😀

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:41 pm

        Yes I have made the kriyam couple free to eachother ✨More love and twists coming up on the next chapter as u can see in the precap. Keep reading ??

    10. Sugarpop ? on February 28, 2017 8:51 pm

      Cute

      • Kriyamloverwriter on February 28, 2017 9:42 pm

        Thxs❤️????

    11. Aarti32 on February 28, 2017 9:47 pm

      Amazinggg start!! Saiyyam is kinda funny..But d precap has made my hopes high!!

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:23 am

        Thank god my orecap was interesting ? Thank u so much. Next episode is up

    12. Prachika on February 28, 2017 9:51 pm

      Amazing start.. waiting fr da nxt part

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:23 am

        Thxs ? Nest part is uploaded

    13. Zani Saleem on February 28, 2017 10:23 pm

      Wow I’m so excited about this❤it is going to be amazing?

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:24 am

        Thxs darling soo so much. ??

    14. A!$#@ on February 28, 2017 10:47 pm

      Wow tooooooooo good ??

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:25 am

        Thxs dear. Bext part is up ?

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:26 am

        Thxs dear. Next part is up ?

    15. Itshafsa on February 28, 2017 11:14 pm

      Got a good start plus I love that baby’s character is positive
      Kriyam the best Like always…looking forward to read your ff❤️❤️?

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:25 am

        Yes. I loved the bondin of Krishna and baby in the recnt episodes. ❤️Next part posted ?

    16. syedul on March 1, 2017 3:20 am

      Nicee

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:26 am

        Thank you ?

    17. Himanshi on March 1, 2017 6:41 am

      Nice start….
      Keep it going on and update soon dear….

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 11:27 am

        Thxs dear. Next part is up ???

    18. ragini on March 1, 2017 12:37 pm

      superb……start….u have kept the expectation high….pls update the next part soon….

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 2:26 pm

        Next part already updated ?

    19. Neethu on March 1, 2017 1:08 pm

      Great start?!! Keep writing

      • Kriyamloverwriter on March 1, 2017 2:26 pm

        Thxs dear ?

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • NRI on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.