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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam: Love Diaries Chapter 2
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Kriyam: Love Diaries Chapter 2

Khushi1707By Khushi1707March 27, 201716 Comments4 Mins Read
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17.3.17
Episode 948
(When Krishna teased Sayyam by calling him Baba and he had brought her close giving her a warning)

Krishna’s POV:
Does he love me? If yes then why doesn’t he express it out..He was so close to me, holding my hand going through my cheeks..I couldn’t meet his eyes, I felt shy..he was smiling, I could figure it out even though I didn’t look at him..I wanted to hug him, hug him tightly and say that ‘’I love you, I love you Buddhu’’…I didn’t knew he did the same or not, that he did that just for fun..or..but enjoyed it.. I enjoyed our proximity..

Sayyam’s POV:
She went off to her bed shyly.. I was pleased in my mind..I didn’t knew why I did it, but I was glad she didn’t break us apart..that meant.that meant she loved me..yeah, she loved me as I did..I don’t know whether she knows how much I love her, but I think she feels it..I wish it was longer, I wish she was still close to me..”Don’t you dare call me Baba again’’ I said to her, which I think she smiled at..I love her smile, and even love it more when I’m the reason..

Krishna’s POV:
I knew he was watching me, my smile, and I wish I could go and hug him.. I smiled when he said me not to call me Baba..I guessed everything was fine between us now, which made me elated.. I wish I could hug him, be in his arms forever,they feel the safest place for me..

Sayyam’s POV:
I was moving to my bed when I heard her say ‘’Good night ‘Baba’..’’ I looked back and glanced at her..she was looking at me with her beautiful eyes giving a pretty smile..she turned to the opposite side shyly..I moved towards her..I guess she figured that out, so she tightened the bed sheet around her..’’Listen, if you called me again by that name..’’ ‘’Then..then what?’’she asked standing up..I pulled her and pinned her to the wall..I got closer to her.

Krishna’s POV:
He brought me closer again and looked straight through my eyes.. This time I didn’t close mine, I wanted to sail through his eyes..He had a faint smile across his face..he got closer, I clutched his shirt closing my eyes..’’looks like you want tear it’’ I heard him say..I opened my eyes and smiled shyly ..I pushed him and tried to go but he hold my hand.. I tries not to smile, but my lips will not stop forming a curve..He brought me to him, and I tried to look confident…

Sayyam’s POV:
She was trying to look confident, but I knew she was feeling shy..I smirked at her condition..I got my lips closer to her ear whispering ‘’You cant escape from me so easily..cause you are mine..’’ She smiled, I could feel it on my face.. I made myself to her straight, face to face..I moved to but she pushed me going away..

Krishna’s POV:
My ears were ringing by his last three words..I felt shy, but I wanted to admit it that I cant be anyone else’s, except you..I went to the bed covering myself from head to toe, I just felt like clutching his chest and hugging him tightly..

Sayyam’s POV:
I let her go, I knew she was shy to admit it, but I wished she would have..I went to the bed thinking about her, she looked so cute..and more than that she accepted me, the son of the person who killed her mother..I am so lucky to have her, her as a wife, a friend, a lover and a life-partner..suddenly my world from the dark night and entered the light of dawn, the dawn of new beginnings…

Hey guys..hope you liked it..guys this ff will just be the POVs of Kriyam of the scenes which the show has provided…please suggest some scenes on which I could write their POVs ..and do comment..

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    16 Comments

    1. shabnam on March 27, 2017 5:20 pm

      Awwww so cute moments awesome ??????????

      • Khushi1707 on March 27, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thank u..

    2. aaravjaikar on March 27, 2017 6:09 pm

      Hmmm cool one….

      • Khushi1707 on March 27, 2017 9:53 pm

        Thank uu..

    3. Kudrat on March 27, 2017 7:35 pm

      Kushi di aap kya hoo,
      itna acha kese lik lete hoo..
      didi heads of to u..
      kushi di u r totally SUPERB, MINDBLOWING actually I’ve no words to praise u..
      di I love u sososooo much..
      thanku thanku thanku thanku so much di for writing BEAUTIFUL ffs like u..
      take care di
      bbye…a
      b happy..
      heste rhna di..
      keep missing me or loving me..

      are ha!!
      m to puchna hi bhul ga..e
      di kese ho aap..

      • Khushi1707 on March 27, 2017 9:56 pm

        He he, I guess I dont think I deserve that much appreciation dear..there are lot many talented writers on TU and I’m nothing as compared to them..I’m fine dear, and u too stay happy forever..and yeah I love you, u also keep loving me..
        Khushi(please, for god’s sake, no dii again)

    4. Isha on March 27, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awwsome episode khushi….OMG I was getting butterflies in ma stomach…loved it khushi..update ASAP 🙂

      • Khushi1707 on March 27, 2017 9:56 pm

        Thank u Ishu..

    5. Ridita on March 27, 2017 8:18 pm

      Really cute

      • Khushi1707 on March 27, 2017 9:57 pm

        So I have seen ur comment after many days..thank u..

    6. Aarti32 on March 27, 2017 10:39 pm

      It was amazinggg..In d show also I wanted Krishna to call him baba again..But d CVS hv many more interesting ideas u know!!

      • Khushi1707 on March 28, 2017 11:32 am

        Yeah, ideas which know to ruin the trp..thank you so much reading n commenting dii..

    7. shivani on March 27, 2017 11:18 pm

      This is beyond any expressive words khushi. I am stupedified and numb after reading this. One more update from you and I am sure that I am going to become speechless. Your words, depictions and dialogues make me go crazy…

      • Khushi1707 on March 28, 2017 11:34 am

        Thank u so much Shivi, love you lots buddy..

    8. Fidato on March 28, 2017 2:30 pm

      Khushi…such a fabulous…POV.. u r an amazing writer…dear… Just read it in one breath I should say… I just couldn’t take off ma eyes… Loved it to core…still blushing..???
      Next part please…

      • Khushi1707 on March 28, 2017 3:36 pm

        Thank u so much dear

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