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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam: Kyun karte ho mujse itna pyar ( Chapter 17 )
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Kriyam: Kyun karte ho mujse itna pyar ( Chapter 17 )

NnnyaBy NnnyaFebruary 15, 201718 Comments4 Mins Read
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Saiyyam sprinkled water on Krishna and she woke up…. Krishna noticed she was resting on saiyyam’s shoulder and quickly moved away… her mangalsutra got stuck on his shirt collar…she fell right back on his shoulder… she removed her mangalsutra and looked at saiyyam …
Krishna : Saiyyam please mujhe vrat rakhne do…. Main teek hoon…. ( saiyyam please let me fast..im fine..)
Saiyyam gave Krishna an irritated look…
Saiyyam : tumhe jo karna hai karo… par main tumhara vrat nahi kholne wala… mujhe in sab cheezon mein vishwaas nahi hai… ( do whatever you want… but I wont break your fast..i don’t believe in all this )

Krishna looked extremely sad and got up from the bed…she stumbled and saiyyam held her….
Saiyyam : kahan ja rahi ho? ( where are you going? )
Krishna : woh… khana….. ( umm to get food..)
Saiyyam : RUKO… chup chaap yahan baito hilna mat… ( wait.. sit here quietly…don’t move )
Saiyyam left the room in a hurry…
Krishna : ab isse kya huwa? Abhi toh kehe raha ta ki use mere vrat se problem nahi…toh phir… ( What happened to him… just now he said he has no problem with my fast )
Krishna looked at the clock…it was 3:45..
Krishna : he bhagwaan….sirf 15 minute bache hain….. ( Oh god there’s only 15 minutes left )
She quickly ran out the door and stopped as saiyyam came infront of her…. He had a food plate in his hand..
Saiyyam : kya kar rahi ho..maine bola than a chu chaap wahi baiti rehena…. Pheron ke waqt meri baat naa sunne ki toh jaise kasam khai hai na tumne… ( what are you doing… I told you to sit there quietly..its as if you took an oath while we got married not to listen to me )
He held her hand and brought her to the bed and made her sit… She forwaded her hand for the food plate…
Saiyyam : tumhari tabiyat teek nahi hain… main khila deta hoon ( you’re unwell..i will feed you )
Krishna : nahi saiyyam main kha loongi.. ( no saiyyam I’ll eat on my own )
Saiyyam : 4 bajne hi waale hain…agar tumhe apna stupid vrat rakhna hai toh chup chaa mere haat se khaa lo… ( its almost 4.. if you want to keep your stupid fast then don’t argue and just eat from my hand )
Saiyyam fed her the food while Krishna stared at him lovingly…kaun tuhje yoon pyar karega jaise main karti hoon played in the background…

Krishna finished all the food on the plate.. she got up and started to move towards her sofa.. Saiyyam grabbed her arm and stopped her..
Saiyyam : tum aaj bed pe so jao.. wahan main so jaaooga.. aur please meri baat maan lena agar hum dobara jaglhe na toh tum phir se behosh ho jaoogi. ( you sleep here tonight..i’ll sleep over there and please listen to me this time.. if we start arguing again you might pass out again )
Krishna smiled and lied dowm on the bed.. Saiyyam too lied down on the sofa..

Krishna : Saiyyam…….thank you…vrat wali baat maan lene ke liye….aur muhje umeed hai ki tum kal zaroor mera vrat kholo ge… ( saiyyam..thank you..for letting me fast… and I hope you will definitely break my fast tomorrow…)
Krishna thought to herself….
Krishna : kal main sache man se saiyyam ke liye vrat rakhoon gi… mujhe poora bharosa hain ki uske is zidd kai aage mera pyar nahi haarega… iss vrat main sachai aur shradda ke saath der saara pyar bhi hoga.. aur mujhe ummed hai ki mere pyaar ki yeh tapasya kal poori ho…aur vrat ke baad main saiyyam ko bata sakun ki…main sache man se uski patni bana chahti hoon….ki main use bohot pyar karti hoon.. ( tomorrow I will wholeheartedly fast for saiyyam.. I’m confident that his stubbornness will lose against my love for him… in this fast along with faith and purity..will be loads of love.. and I hope that I will pass this test of love tomorrow.. and afterwards I can tell saiyyam that I wholeheartedly want to be his wife..that I love him a lot..)

Precap : All ladies break their fast..Krishna waits for saiyyam……

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    Nafrat paas aane de, Pyar door jane na de

    18 Comments

    1. Ridita on February 15, 2017 2:22 am

      Loved it…really liked saiyyam’s concern for Krishna….really cute…

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thank you ridita

    2. Sugarpop ? on February 15, 2017 3:13 am

      So cute ?

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thanx

    3. lavanya on February 15, 2017 4:33 am

      Very nice

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 1:21 pm

        Thank you lavanya

    4. rockstr on February 15, 2017 8:22 am

      U r such a wonderful writer nnnya…pls update asap

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 1:22 pm

        Awww thank you soooo much Rockstr.. i’ll try to update an episode today

    5. Aarti32 on February 15, 2017 10:31 am

      Wat to say abt dis episode..It was sweet..Caring.. Awesome..

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 1:22 pm

        thank you aarti dear.. how are you doing?

      • Aarti32 on February 15, 2017 1:32 pm

        I’m enjoying..??

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 3:36 pm

        Enjoying my ff? or Life in general.. hehe…. either way that’s great..stay blessed dear

    6. Kriyam rocks on February 15, 2017 1:34 pm

      I love this ff so much…Sayyam’s concern for Krishna is so cute…lovi.g them both…keep writing…plz update fast!!! Cant wait!

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 3:36 pm

        Thank you sooo much…. ive uploaded the next one ..should be there in 3-4 hours

    7. Shaani on February 15, 2017 4:54 pm

      Soo nice Nnnya… Very nice… Keep writing…good going..

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 9:55 pm

        awww thank you shaani dear..

    8. pinkyyy on February 15, 2017 9:19 pm

      Nice update dear

      • Nnnya on February 15, 2017 9:56 pm

        thanx pinky..

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