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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam: Kyun karte ho muhjse itna pyar (Chapter 50)
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Kriyam: Kyun karte ho muhjse itna pyar (Chapter 50)

NnnyaBy NnnyaJuly 7, 201716 Comments7 Mins Read
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It had been approximately 5 minutes since yuvani said those 3 words…Raj hadn’t said a word..instead they both stood in silence holding each others hand..

Yuvani: Raj..kucj toh bolo…raj tum teek hona (Raj say something..are you ok)
Suddenly Raj jerked off yuvani’s hand and started to dance on the spot..
Raj: (singing and dancing ) Oho simran…aha simran..oh simran…oh simran…
Yuvani: (Grabbing his arm and trying to make him stop) Raj….RAJ!…yeh kya simran simran laga rakha hai..maine tumse apni feelings share ki aur tum mujhe jawaab dene ke bajai kisi doosri ladki ka naam le le ke naach rahe ho..what’s wrong with you..(Raj..RAJ!..what simran simran huh…I just shared my feelings with you and instead of giving me an answer you are dancing around saying some other girl’s name..what’s wrong with you)
Raj: Arey yuvani ji yeh mera jawab hi tho tha..(Oh yuvani this was my answer)
Yuvani shot him a confused look..
Raj: Nahin samjhe…ab dekho..mera naam kya hai..(You don’t understand..look..whats my name?)
Yuvani: Raj..
Raj: Aur mujhe sabse zyada kis cheez ka shauk hai..(And what is my favourite thing)
Yuvani: Filmon ka..(Films)
Raj: Aur sabse romantic hindi picture kaun si hai…(And whats the most romantic hindi film)
Yuvani:DDLJ…
Raj: Toh bas….ab dekho main tumse pyar karta hoon..aur tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho..aur main toh raj hoon hi, toh tum bani na meri simran….(That’s it. Now see I love you. And you love me…and I am raj itself..so you only have become my simran na)
Yuvani: God…yeh kya ajeeb tareeka hai proposal accept karne ka..seedhe seedhe I love you nahi bol sakte…(god what is this weird way of accepting a proposal..cant you just say I love you.)
Raj: Teek hai toh woh bhi bol dete hai..I Love you too yuvani ji…(Ok then I will say that also…I love you too yuvani)
Yuvani had a smile on her face…Raj was now looking at her mischiviously..
Yuvani: Kya…What…

Raj: Akir aapko mujhse pyar ho hi gaya yuvani ji….i love you bol hi diya aapne..(At last you fell in love with me yuvani..you said I love you)
Yuvani playfully punched him on the arm and was about to hug him when raj stopped her….
Raj: (Sarcastically) hai hai hai..besharam ladki…yeh sab shaadi ke baad hota hai….Shaadi bhai ki hai lekin par aapke nikal aaye hai….(my, my ,my, you shameless girl..this all is done after marriage…the wedding is of our brother’s but you are the one over the moon)
Yuvani: Tum na…main..maar doongi tumhe….(you…I will kill you..)
Raj: Maar toh diya hai yuvani ji……aapke pyar ne…..(I have been killed yuvani..by your love..)
Yuvani: tumhari bakwas kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti hai…ab jao..baaraat nikalne wali hai..main bhi jaati hoon tum sab ki swagat ki tayaari karne….(Your nonsense never ends..now go..the wedding procession is about to leave and I will also go prepare for your welcome..)

Scene shifts to Krishna..She had just gotten her makeup done and was about to put on her bridal lehenga..she was standing near the mirror picking out her jewellery when she noticed her sindoor box… she recalled whemn she and saiyyam threw sindoor on each other and confessed their love….she smiled and picked up the box
Krishna: Yakeen nahi hota ki aaj tum khud mujhe yeh sindoor lagao ge..pehele toh kitni chid hoti ti tumhe jab mein tumhare naam ka sindoor laga thi thi…par ab..ab sab acha hai…( I cant believe you will be putting sindoor on me today..You used to get so irritated when I would put on sindoor of your name..but now..now everything is good..)
Krishna was about to put the sindoor box back when it slipped from her hand and fell to the ground scattering the sindoor…
Krishna: He bhagwan yeh toh bohot bada apshagun hai….kahin kuch bura toh nahi hone wala…..Saiyyam ko phone karthi hoon…..Saiyyam phone kyun nahi utta raha…mera jee bohot ghabra raha hai….(oh god this is very inauspicious…is something bad going to happen..i have to call saiyyam..why isn’t saiyyam answering my call…im getting very scared…)

Suddenly there was a very loud noise outside….Krishna screamed Saiyyam and ran towards the noise…..Outside saiyyam was about to get into the car that would take him to his carriage with the wedding procession,when Krishna came running and hugged him tightly…
Krishna: Saiyyam, tum teek to ho…tumhe kuch huwa toh nahin (Saiyyam are you ok…did anything happen to you)
Saiyyam freed himself from the hug, wiped krishna’s tears and cupped her face..
Saiyyam: Krishna..im absolutely fine…Kya huwa hai tumhe tum itni ghabrai hui kyun ho….(what’s wrong with you why are you so scared)
Krishna: Woh abhi todhi derr pehele who awaaz…(That noise..)
Saiyyam: woh yahan decoration ke liye jo pillar rakha hua he uss mein se ek ghir gaya tha bas us ki awaaz thi..(one of the pillars kept for decoration fell that was the noise only..)
Krishna: Pillar ghir gaya…mujhe pata ta..itna bada apshagun ho gaya mujhse…kuch toh bura hona hi tha….(Pillar fell? I knew it…something so inauspicious happened at my expense…something bad definitely wil happen)
Saiyyam: Apshagun? (Inauspicious?)
Krishna: Haan saiyyam..woh mere haat se na sindoor ghir gaya tha aur yeh bohot bada apshagun hai..aur agar patni ke haat se pati ke naam ka sindoor ghir jaae to uski jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai…( yes saiyyam I dropped sindoor by mistake and this is considered very inauspicious. Especially if a wife drops the sindoor of her husband’s name..it could even mean your life is in danger….)
Saiyyam: Krishna..maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki yeh sab baatein bakwas hai..koi apshagun nahi huwa hai..woh pillar islilye ghir gaya kyunki usko band ke rakhne wali kisi ne teek se nahi baandi toh bas choot gayi…(Krishna how many times have I told you thid inauspicious things and all are nonsense..that pillar fell because someone had not tied the rope that holds it in place )
Krishna: par saiyyam…(But saiyyam)
Saiyyam put his finger on her lip…

Saiyyam: Krishna aaj hamari shaadi hai…humare saath humara poora parivaar hai..sab kitne khush hai….isliye tum please yeh sab bhool jao…aur sirf humari shaadi pe focus karo……jaake mere liye aise tayaar ho jao ki main tumhe dekhta hi rehe jaaoon… Can you do that.( Krishna today is our wedding day..our entire family is with us everyone is happy so please forget all this and focus on our wedding…go and get ready for me and look so beautiful that I cant take my eyes off of you. Can you do that)
Krishna nodded and saiyyam kissed her on the forhead…
Saiyyam: I promise main sahi salaamat baraat leke tumhare paas aa jaoonga….meri life ko wife banaane….Now give me a cute smile….( I promise I will come safe and sound with the wedding procession to make my life my wife..now give me a cute smile..)
Krishna smiled and saiyyam gave her a thumbs up and was about to enter the car when Krishna gave hm another hug.. Saiyyam reciprocated the hug and then freed himself..
Saiyyam: Krishna..shaadi ke baad ke liye bhi toh kuch bachaake rakho..(Krishna save some for after the wedding)
That made Krishna let out a small laugh and saiyyam, satisfied that her mood was better got in the car waved her goodbye and rode off…
Krishna: He bhagwaan saiyyam ki rakhsha kar na…(Dear god please protect saiyyam)

Precap: Kriyam wedding…will everything go smoothly or will krishna’s fear come true..

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    16 Comments

    1. Aarti32 on July 7, 2017 10:41 am

      Such a lovely episode..Kriyyam, their love, their care..always make me smile

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:14 pm

        Thank you aarti dear 🙂

    2. Zani saleem on July 7, 2017 2:11 pm

      Half century??Congo?And episode was fab❤

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:14 pm

        Thank you very much Zani.. 🙂

    3. muniya on July 7, 2017 2:23 pm

      Cute epi with YuvRaj and Kriyyam…???
      Loving YuvRaj to the core???
      Kriyyam’s care for eachother is so lovely ???
      Waiting for the next part… Plz don’t do anything wrong with Kriyyam????

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:15 pm

        Thank you Muniya..and i cant make any promises……hehe….

    4. Isha on July 7, 2017 4:30 pm

      YuvRai & Kriyyam r rocking couples…new twist..can’t wait to read next epi update Asap?

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:15 pm

        Thank you Isha. 🙂

    5. Palak on July 7, 2017 5:13 pm

      congrats, on 50th ch…i wish u reach till 100…grt going..lyk ur ff vry much…
      and one thing more 55 ch pr plz kriyam honeymoon dikhana plz plz…plz .
      agar tum dikha sako to…

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:16 pm

        Thank you sooo much Palak..and i will try ok but right now honymoon by the 55th chater doesnt seem likely sorry..

    6. Kriyyam fan on July 7, 2017 6:04 pm

      Cute epi and finally yuvraj confessed and update next part asap plzzzz i am eagerly waiting for the next epi don’t take too much time plzzz

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:17 pm

        Thank you

    7. Fidato on July 7, 2017 11:09 pm

      Congratulations for reaching 50… naina… I think for the first time I love this YuvRaj giving equal importance like kriyam the leading couple… Really love Raj..And his reaction.. please update soon …precap..Is Somewhat scary…

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:17 pm

        Thank you so much Fidato 🙂

    8. yura on July 7, 2017 11:58 pm

      Congratulations on your half century. Loved the update. Seriously I loved ur writing. It is beautiful. Update sooon

      • Nnnya on July 8, 2017 11:18 pm

        Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. it means alot to me. 🙂

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