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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 9)
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Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 9)

AgddiyaBy AgddiyaMay 17, 201716 Comments8 Mins Read
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Thank you so much guys…..i am very happy..with ur support…thanku so much…so here is the 9th part…hope you guys enjoy it…

It starts with the couple dance…kriyam where in their own world…the music stopped….but they dint know it….after couple dance all were looking at them….infact even they were surprised to c them like this…sharad goes to them and clears his throat…they both comes back to sense…they both get embarrassed..as all were looking at them…they both quickly part away…both were…so embaressed…so suhani quickly changes the topic…
Suhani-come yuvraj…its very late …let them cut cake naa….?
Yuvraj-haan..yes….(kriyam were so embaressed that they cudnt even look at each other…so they were trying to avoid each other….)
(baby saw two gift packs there with bavna….she wanted to know wats in it…so she goes to rags…)
Baby-rags..do you know…what gift mummyji and papaji..bot for yuvan and yuvani?
Rags-yes baby….infact..as they don’t know about yuvani’s choice..they asked me to select for her…and you know what…its an 18 lakhs..necklace for her….(baby gets shocked…..)
Baby(thinks)-so maybe for yuvan also it will be something like that….
Baby-rags…and for yuvan?
Rags-for yuvan its an appointment letter..from birla company…he doesn’t have a job wright?so yuvraj thought to give him a job…(baby gets shocked and angry with this..)
Baby(thinks)-for yuvani such a big gift and for yuvan…this?wait and watch yuvraj and suhani…look how I ruin your…surprise party…(she goes to yuvan and says the whole thing..)
Yuvan-wat job?
Baby-yes yuvan…look now how papaji..will insult you infront of your friends saying…that you don’t have any job…every1 will know that..now…they all will think you as a man who lives bcos of his family money without doing any job…(yuvan gets angry..)
Baby(thinks)-I think my work is done…now rest yuvan will do….
Riya comes to yuvani..
Riya-yuvani u cud have told me…about saiyyam and krishna….
Yuvani-but look at the best part..they both danced 2gether bcos of you…
Riya-do they have any problem…I think yes…isn’t it?
Yuvani-hmm..yaa…
Riya-so unknowingly did I play a cupid for them..?
Yuvani-yaa….
Riya-if I knew this before…I wud have made krishna more jealous…but this went well na..?
Yuvani-yaa….(they hug..)
So all gather to cut cake….
Yuvraj-before that…me and suhani..has brot gift for u both…hope you like it….(yuvraj and suhani gives the gifts…yuvan looks at baby..)
Yuvraj-arey…open it and look…don’t you want 2 c..wats in it …(yuvani quickly opens it…and likes the gift..and hugs yuVani and rags…yuvan still doesnt open…so yuvraj takes it and opens…)
Yuvraj-this is your appointment letter…so 2morrow itself you can join….in our company….(everyone claps…)
Yuvan’s friend-yuvan how lucky you are…?you dint even pass your exams…but still look you got a job…that is the advantage if your father has an own company…anyways congrats..(yuvan gets angry..hearing this..)
Suhani-ok now cake cutting…come yuvan yuvani…(yuvan was thinking of baby’s words and his friend’s words…he thinks that now every1 got to know that I dint have a job..he was so angry..)
Yuvani-cmon yuvan…hold the knife with me…lets cut….(yuvan looks at yuvraj angrily..he takes the cake..and throws it away…every1 gets shocked….and he takes the knife…and is about to throw it..but by mistake….it hits saiyyam…
Saiyyam-Aaahhh….
and saiyyam’s hand starts bleeding….krishna who was standing next to saiyyam…removes bavna’s shawl…and ties it…saiyyam looks at her….while she was tying it with concern….suhani also goes to saiyyam
Suhani-are ok saiyyam…?
Saiyyam-haan maa….im fine
Yuvraj-yuvan…have you gone mad….what did you do ….?say sorry to saiyyam…now..
Yuvan-im not here to say sorry to some illegitimate..guy….(everyone gets shocked …saiyyam looks on…suhani and krishna looks at saiyyam who was looking down.at his wound trying to avoid eye contact with others..…)
(Yuvraj slaps…yuvan….hard…)

Yuvan-so this is my 2nd bday gift….thanks papa…(yuvraj suddenly realizes wat he did..and he feels bad..)
Yuvan-you wanted to make me small in my friend’s eyes…you wanted to show that im a good for nothing in their eyes…and congrats…you succeeded in that..(he tears the job appointment…
Yuvan-this company and house is just not yours….its family’s….so I have equal right here…I don’t need your guidance…I will do wat I want…(he goes saying this….yuvraj luks on angrily…even he goes…)
Suhani asks every1 to leave..we will talk later…every1 leaves…after sometime…suhani goes to saiyyam…saiyyam was doing his aid..suhani..goes and does his aid..
Suhani-I know saiyyam..these many years…you were doing all this alone…but now you don’t have to…im saying sorry for yuvan…
Saiyyam-its ok maa…..but what happened..to yuvan suddenly..?
Suhani-don’t know…
Saiyyam-but I know….till that baby is with him..he will continue….to be like this….
Suhani-but today this must have not happened….yuvraj is very upset….(tiger comes to saiyyam..)
Suhani-and yaa….my son was not alone….this friend of yours was there na…with u like a shadow…?
Saiyyam-haan maa…whenever I used to get hurt like this..or if im sick…he will always be around me…and you wont believe…if I forget to take medicines..he even used..to remind me…
Suhani-haan saiyyam…animals..will even give their lives for us…like our snoopy….he gave his life to save me…acha..leave all this you take rest..if you want anything..call me..okay?
Saiyyam-okay..gudnyt maa…(suhani kisses his forehead..and goes..)
In yuvani’s room
Yuvani-this yuvan..ruined..everything…..i think he turned mad…
Krishna-yuvan doesn’t know the value of having a mother and father like aunty and daidu..im sure..he will regret for this…
Yuvani-but the best part was your and saiyyam’s dance….thats the only good thing which happened today,…
Krishna- I just did that so tha aunty will feel good…
Yuvani-oh really?(she gets up from bed and imitates krishna…
Yuvani- who are you to stop me from dancing with my husband?(she laughs…)and this dialogue..?
(Krishna gets embaressed…even she cant believe that she told that…)
Yuvani-krishna now jokes apart…today…I got to know one thing…today…you don’t hate saiyyam…
Krishna-no I really really hate him…
Yuvani-u can say that and defend yourself….ok krishna…I know its difficult for u to accept himthis fast…whatever it is he did very wrong with you…but don’t u think he already got punishment 4 that…just imagine..about him…he got 2 know such a big truth of his life…but I still believe even b4 knowing the truth..he was not that…bad…he was just showing that he is bad….bcos ive seen seen a glimpse of the good one….(krishna looks on..)
Yuvani-u mit not be knowing…but…when people gets drunk..na?they will open up with everything….they will b who they are actually….i mean they will be their real self…ive seen the real saiyyam before anyone else….that day wen u and saiyyam were found drunk..where all the marriage drama started….that day even I was with saiyyam….we both had drinks together….and I understood that his only problem was that he wanted…his mother’s love and attention….4 that…he was behaving badly with every1…the sameway wat u r doing now….
Krishna-what?
Yuvani-yes krishna….im not sure ….but whenever I see u getting angry with saiyyam…I feel the same…
Krishna-yuvani..what are you trying to say….that im doing this to get saiyyam’s attention?
Yuvani-maybe yes….otherwise…y do you get annoyed wen he is not talking to you?or not minding you?you keep on asking him to stay away from you….but sometimes you yourself goes to him…mayb to taunt him or scold him….but still you like being around him…isn’t it?
Krishna-stop all this yuvani….i don’t like him…..i don’t have to make it clear to you….its very late…im feeling sleepy…good nyt…
Yuvani-(laughs a bit..)ok gud nyt….(krishna thinks of yuvani’s words..)
Krishna(thinks)-wat is this yuvani saying?is it actually true?but when saiyyam was not talking to me..2day…I felt annoyed…why?i shudnt have get affected na?then y was it affecting me so much?stop all this now….he will be sleeping there peacefully destroying my sleep….

In YuVani’s room..suhani comes…
Yuvraj-how is saiyyam..?
Suhani-he is fine…yuvraj….
Yuvraj-please suhani ..not today..weel talk 2morrow…and he goes out….(suhani thinks to leave him alone…)
In saiyyam’s room..he was talking to tiger…
Saiyyam-do you know tiger..… I dint want to dance with her..but at the sametime..i dint want her to dance with any1 else….but look the whole party was ruined by yuvan…from past three days..his dad and maa…were behind this…how easily he ruined everything within three seconds….let himcome to my orphanage and see…how children there are craving for parents’s love….here when he is getting that….he doesn’t want it…you know wat..in my childhood…when I used to go to school there children used to tell me how their parents arranged surprise bday party for them…I used to get so jealous of them…I used even dream of my bday party with my parents…atleast once….last birthday also I tried..to celebrate with..maa…but….anyways I don’t deserve all that….but this yuvan….he is really mad….bcos of him the whole house is sad….dont know when people like him..will realize their parent’s worth…hope its not too late….(Yuvraj….was standing…at the window he came to check whether saiyyam is fine….and heard all this….he was teary eyed…he went from there…and went to his room…he saw suhani sleeping….he remembers that day wen pratima came to meet him in jail and..asked his opinion in giving the baby to orphanage…)
Yuvraj(thinks)-I shouldn’t have seen sambhav in that baby….if I had asked maa…to not give that baby to orphanage….now I wud have had two sons….i should have made suhani understand and made her accept saiyyam….but…even now…..i was doing wrong with him….im sorry suhani….im sorry…I promise you..from now onwards…I wont hurt him…I will help..you…in his case…he holds her hand….and sleeps there…

Precap-Krishna-he is not that bad person….i think I was overreacting….

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    16 Comments

    1. shabnam on May 17, 2017 10:49 pm

      Superrrrrr next post soooon pls

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:14 pm

        Thank u so much..

    2. zani saleem on May 17, 2017 11:07 pm

      Wow:) superb!!

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:15 pm

        thnku so much

    3. Muniya on May 17, 2017 11:14 pm

      Wow amazing epi…loved it to the core..precap seems to be interesting…waiting for the next epi…

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:15 pm

        thnku so much..

    4. Shiza arif on May 17, 2017 11:16 pm

      Really nice…. loved it alot…. waiting for the next part…. if u dont mind can u add a romantic scene like falling in arms…. or carrying in arms or falling in bed together…. if cant its absolutely fine…. ur ff is always great

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:16 pm

        yaa…ive tried to do something like that in the 11th chapter..dont know if you wud like that..and thnku so much..

    5. Maria on May 17, 2017 11:44 pm

      Such a romantic one in start some slap ? drama and even the adorable talk of sayyam with tiger ? u have actually touché do my ❤️

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:16 pm

        thnku so much….keep reading

    6. djodishwari on May 18, 2017 2:07 am

      ????

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:17 pm

        thnku so much

    7. AnahitaAnnie on May 18, 2017 5:35 am

      Superb.. And Yuvani’s character has been upheld really beautifully. I loved the mix humour and emotional scenes..it was great and the dialogues were epic.. Way to go girl

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:17 pm

        thank u so much…keep reading..

    8. Akshaya on May 18, 2017 6:18 am

      So emotional

      • Agddiya on May 18, 2017 3:17 pm

        thnku so much..keep reading..

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