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Home»Fan Fiction»Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 16)
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Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 16)

AgddiyaBy AgddiyaMay 21, 201711 Comments5 Mins Read
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So guys..this the next chapter….do read and give your reviews…

Saiyyam-(shouts)ur asking me to stop this..the how tell me how will I sleep?
Krishna-saiyyam..saiyyam..relax….please…(he holds him by shoulder…)
Saiyyam-I always tried..to stop it…but I cudnt…and im sure….i will not be able..to….(he goes to the dustbin..to take it back…but krishna stops him….
Krishna-why cant you try?
Saiyyam-no krishna….i cant….
Krishna-ok fine(she takes the tablet packets…opens it..and takes water from jug…and asks saiyyam…to have it…saiyyam gets shocked….)
Krishna-its ok saiyyam….i can understand…you cant stop…this by one night suddenly….have this…otherwise you wont sleep today….(saiyyam stands there silently..)
Saiyyam-but krishna….i know this is bad….but I re…really want to stop it…
Krishna-mmm….can we go and see a doctor tomorrow…?
Saiyyam-are you going to help me in this?(krishna doesn’t say anything…)
Saiyyam-will u help me get out of this….(krishna smiles..)
Krishna-yes….(saiyyam feels happy…)
Krishna-now have this…and sleep….dont get late…(he has it and they both go to their resp..beds to sleep…)
The next day…they both meet the doctor…doctor gives them some instructions…and krishna helps saiyyam to follow those….
Krishna-now…you have to reduce your dose…you will have only one tablet…now….(she gives him..and he haves it..)

After sometime when krishna looks she sees saiyyam tossing in his bed….so she goes near him…
Krishna-saiyyam..i know its difficult…but you have to try…remember..your doing this for suhani aunty….if anything happens to you…she will never b e happy in her life then…just think of that….
Saiyyam-but krishna…im not getting sleep….now….(Krishna thinks of doctor’s words…she goes near saiyyam..and sits next to him..and asks…him to lay down…)
Krishna-ok…but ill tell you something….when me and yuvan were small.to make us sleep…aunty used to say us story….
Saiyyam-you think..im an lkg child to sleep hearing..bedtime stories….
Krishna-im not doing this to make you sleep…im just saying…this as your mother used to say..about her childhood…which was really interesting…(krishna starts narrating….and saiyyam starts listening…and finds it very interesting…slowly…even bcos of the pill effect he falls asleep….krishna gets happy…)
Krishna(thinks)-see…saiyyam…you can do this….now im sure..you will get out of this soon….
Saiyyam wakes up next day….and remembers about..yesterday…he gets surprised…about the fact that he slept with just one pill….

Then few days goes like this…
Krishna-today you will have to sleep without sleeping pills…
Saiyyam-bu..but krishna…will I be able to….
Krishna-yes…..(Suddenly suhani comes….there..)
Suhani-wat happened saiyyam…krishna told you r having headache…?(saiyyam looks on confused…)
Krishna-haan..aunty he is having…so I thot…tha.t..i mean..when we used to have headache …you used to do our head massage…so…
Suhani-yaa…saiyyam….come …..(saiyyam looks at krishna….he goes near her…)
Krishna(whispers to saiyyam)-im sure saiyyam…you will sleep today..with another sleeping medicine-ur mother’s head message…..but please don’t get addicted to that….(he smiles…)
Krishna-please god….make saiyyam sleep…doctor told that if he just sleeps atleast once without that…..that means…that he don’t need to use…it anymore….(she starts praying as suhani starts massaging saiyyam’s head…saiyyam was feeling very happy to…lay on his mother’s lap for the first time…he felt very relaxed….slowly slowly he falls asleep there….)

Krishna was still praying…when suhani comes next to her…
Suhani-saiyyam slept….im leaving now….(krishna gets happy and looks there..and sees saiyyam sleeping peacefully…she unknowingly hugs suhani..suhani gets confused..)
Suhani-why are u getting so happy that he slept..(krishna realized wat she is doing…)
Krishna-actually if he dint sleep…then he keeps on disturbing me…saying one thing or the other…thats..why…(suhani smiles thinking them getting closer…and she goes..)
The next day saiyyam wakes..up..and sees krishna standing there….
Saiyyam-I slept yesterday….without….
Krishna-yes saiyyam…..i said no…i was sure…that..you can do it….(saiyyam looks at krishna..)
Saiyyam-but why did you do this?wat was your gain in this?why did you help your enemy…who you hate the most?
Krishna-i…i dint help my enemy…i helped..ma..my friend….(saiyyam gets surprised..)
Saiyyam-(happily and innocently)you consider me as your friend?
Krishna-mmm…yes….
Saiyyam-but…u dint like me wright?
Krishna-but that’s bcos you were that bad…you always showed everyone that you are bad….like everyone even I thot you are bad and cruel…
Saiyyam-yes krishna…im still bad..and cruel..
Krishna-no…u were bad….not now…and for your kind information…its people around you…who will decide that….not you…
Saiyyam-but I cant believe…do you really consider me as your friend?
Krishna-yes saiyyam…
Saiyyam-thankyou….i promise you…i will always be a good friend of yours…(krishna gets sad hearing this…)
Krishna-ok….now freshen up and come for breakfast….all will be waiting for us…(saiyyam smiles and goes for breakfast…

In dining hall
Yuvraj-I wanted to say you all something…Nikhil and his family will be coming to stay with us…day after tomorrow…and me and suhani with nikhil’s parents took a decision…suhani will say that…
Suhani-we decided yuvan’s marriage with…nikhil’s sister…(yuvan gets shocked..)
Yuvan-but…you both dint ask me about this….
Yuvraj-you already married baby against our wish…and look now wat happened…so now we will decide..we are sure..its for your good only…(Yuvan gets annoyed…he thinks not to react now..)
Saiyyam…was…still thinking of krishna…being his new friend..so he was in his onw world…
Yuvraj-saiyyam…saiyyam…(saiyyam suddenly cums out of his thoughts…)
Saiyyam-yes…
Yuvraj- so I was thinking..if nkhil and yuvan…stays in your room..and krishna yuvani and nikhita…in yuvani’s room…and nikhil’s dad and mom in guest room…(saiyyam looks at krishna…krishna feels sad hearing this..)
Yuvraj-any problem?
Saiyyam-no….no problem…its ok…
(yuvraj luks at suhani and signs..)
Suhani-anyways u both dint want to live together wright….?so its ok….(Both krishna and saiyyam…stays silent…yuvraj and suhani feels happy seeing them like this..they were happy bcos their plan worked out…)
Krishna comes to her room..and starts packing her bags…saiyyam looks on…
Krishna(thinks)-why is this…happening….?i don’t really feel like going from here…
Saiyyam(thinks)-why do I feel bad that krishna is going from here….no no no…i shudnt feel bad…ishould be happy that krishna…made friendship with me….(Saiyyam goes and helps her in packing and takes the bags…)
Saiyyam-your friend will help you in everything from nowonwards..(Krishna..smiles…Saiyyam goes and keeps the bags…in yuvani’s room…)

Precap-Nikhita(new entry)….sees…saiyyam and gets impressed….

Did you guys..think the new entry is on right time?please..do tell your views about this….and thank you so much guys..or your support..

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    11 Comments

    1. Dinu on May 21, 2017 6:09 pm

      Loved 2dy epi 2 d core dr.i’m so glad dat finally kriyam r getting close.n i’m excited 4 d new entry. Nw we can see jealous Krishna. Bt plz make sure dat at last yuvan should marry nikitha.plz don’t make her negative. U can write about their love story too right. Till dat happens we can see sayyam n Krishna’ s jealousy track. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi.plz update soon. Byeee tc

      • Agddiya on May 21, 2017 7:23 pm

        thnku so much…keep reading…

    2. Aman on May 21, 2017 6:31 pm

      Loved it!!! Update soon!!!!

      • Agddiya on May 21, 2017 7:23 pm

        thnku so much..keep reading

    3. Kriyyam fan on May 21, 2017 7:03 pm

      Its amazing. But i think this time i feel saiyyam should feel jealous. Bcoz in every ff mostly we see krishna jealousy. Its amazing to see that how saiyyam react when he feels jealous. I just give my opinion . If you dont like it just neglect this. And sorry if hurts you.

      • Agddiya on May 21, 2017 7:24 pm

        dont worry dear..ive not planned…of any jealous..track…now….i know it sounds..funny..but this is not a jealousy track…so dont worry..

    4. Surbhi on May 21, 2017 7:04 pm

      Hi dear its fab.but i have one request plz krishna would jealous but not that much.why krishna always jealous make siyyam also.otherwise its superb.

      • Agddiya on May 21, 2017 7:25 pm

        dont worry dear…its not a jealousy track…ill try…to bring something new in this….and thnku…

    5. sumayyah on May 21, 2017 7:24 pm

      amazing amazing and amazing
      seriously what to say and what not
      but in short I loved it to the core
      just read all parts in a go and I must appreciate your writing skills and plot mind blowing and fantastic

    6. Sree on May 21, 2017 7:37 pm

      Nice episode. Update soon plz.

    7. AnahitaAnnie on May 21, 2017 9:50 pm

      That was soo cute..and looks like Nikita is going to be the new villain or cupid
      .don’t know but this so interesting ..absolutely loving ur storyline soo much.keep posting..

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