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Kriyam- Journey From Hatred To Love (Chapter 13)

So guys…thanku so much for the support…so here’s the 13th chapter…hope you guys like it…

So suhani and bavna started preperations for karwa chauth…..krishna and yuvani comes and looks on…
Yuvani-so u all will be fasting tomorrow…
Suhani-yes….(suhani looks at krishna…)
Krishna(thinks)-even I want to fast for saiyyam…but..how is it possible?
Suhani-krishna..wat are you thinking?
Krishna-no nothing aunty….actually aunty….there’s a friend of mine…whose husband is not living here with her…and its her first karwa chauth…so how will she take….the vrat..
Suhani-actually..its done when our husbands are there wuth us..but nowadays they do the pooja by using husband’s photo….(Krishna gets thinking..)

Yuvani(whispers )-krishna do you want saiyyam’s photo..(krishna looks at her pretending to be angry…)
Yuvani-I just asked…sorry sorry…
Suhani-im sorry to ask…but are you taking this fast for saiyyam
Krishna-no aunty…why shud I fast for him..there’s no any husband wife relation btw us..(saiyyam hears this…)
Saiyyam(thinks)-maa is really mad…why wud she take fast for me?
Krishna(thinks)-this is my first karwa chauth….and I think…I should take…it….(she was walking…but she slipped…and was about to fall…she closes her eyes…but someone catches her..she opens her eyes..and sees…saiyyam…)
Saiyyam-you don’t have anyother job ather than falling….(krishna stands properly…
Krishna-even you fell today….so did you take my job..of falling always…
Saiyyam-I don’t have time to talk with you…
Krishna-so are u joining birla company today itself?
Saiyyam-no…why?

Krishna- then why are you saying that you don’t have time…wat else do you have to do…
Saiyyam-ok I don’t have interest in arguing with you…so let me go..(suhani comes there…)
Suhani-saiyyam where are you going now?
Saiyyam-just simply….i thot of going…out for sometime….
Suhani-but saiyyam tomorrow is karwa chauth..and some gusts are coming tomorrow…all the men started decorating there….so if u can also…
Saiyyam-yaa..ma ill come…after buying….(he pauses there..)
Suhani-after buying what?if you want anything you can ask ramling kaka..to buy..you don’t have to go saiyyam…tell me wat you want to buy…
Saiyyam-no maa…ill go…and come fast…(he leaves from there…)
After sometime saiyyam comes back…ramling goes and collides with saiyyam…and the slleping tablets falls down…(krishna sees this….saiyyam quicly puts it in the cover….and goes to his room..)
Krishna(thinks)-is saiyyam using some medicine?i very clearly saw that it was some medicine…so is this wat saiyyam is hiding?(she thinks to find it …..)

Saiyyam goes to help them decorate the house…Yuvraj sees him..and goes to him…
Yuvraj-saiyyam I have to talk to you…come to my room now…(saiyyam goes..there..)
Yuvraj-that day you deleted the files in harddisk ….but who asked you to do it?(saiyyam doesn’t say anything..)
Yuvraj-saiyyam im asking you something…who asked…you to do that..?
Saiyyam-i d..did it by mistake..
Yuvraj-ok…so…you were coming from office…you saw that harddisk there…you thot of simply deleting the files in that…or did the harddisk ask..you to delete…the files it had…?(saiyyam doesn’t say anything..)
Yuvraj-saiyyam….im asking you..why did you do that..?who asked you to?(Saiyyam was still looking down without saying anything….yuvraj goes to him..keeps his hand on saiyyam’s shoulder..)
Yuvraj-saiyyam….just tell…
Saiyyam-yu..yuvan asked me to do that….
Yuvraj-ok ….then y dint u tell us before..?(he looks at saiyyam…saiyyam is still silent..)
Yuvraj-you thot….that we wont believe you?you thot..that even if we come to know..we wud support yuvan?saiyyam…answer me…
Saiyyam-yes…..i know nobody wont believe me…even now…u all believed bcos..yuvani told….u all….(saying this he goes…yuvraj gets shocked..)
That night in yuvani’s room
(yuvraj was thinking of saiyyam…)
Suhani-wat happened..yuvraj?

Yuvraj-suhani…..i think we should concentrate more on saiyyam’s case….now..i think he is feeling very lonely….
Suhani-but yuvraj..he is talking well with me….
Yuvraj-but suhani…u just think…yuvan asked saiyyam to delete those files..then y dint saiyyam tell us that…atleast he cud have told you….but no…he dint tell even you…cos he still believes..that we all including you wont trust him…that means he feels he is alone…(suhani looks on with teary eyes..)
Suhani-its all my mistake..yuvraj….i made him like that….
Yuvraj-its time to stop all this suhani…and we should bring saiyyam back …..the old saiyyam….who had confidence..in wat all he did…..the one..who wud talk to any one…with his head held up….but how?i really don’t know..where to start….
Suhani-I know….we have to start from krishna…..
Yuvraj-but will krishna…do this?i mean she doesn’t like himwright?
Suhani-no yuvraj….i know krishna very well….she will forgive saiyyam….
Yuvraj-but we should try to bring them closer…hope everything goes on well…
Suhani-im really happy seeing your concern for saiyyam….even I was not this concerned…
Yuvraj-he is not just your son…..he is mine too….so stop talking all this nonsense..and sleep…(they both off lights and sleep..)

The next day krishna eats food..early in morning…by hiding from others…and starts her fast…
All the men were sitting for breakfast…
Yuvraj-yuvani and krishna…you both sit..and have food…
Krishna-daidu…ill eat after sometime…I don’t feel hungry now….
Yuvraj-but krishna….ok fine…do as you wish….(krishna goes from there…)
After sometime….krishna was looking her phone and walking….suddenly she sees saiyyam and stops….even he looks at her…
Krishna(thinks)-thank god..he atleast looked at me…(Saiyyam comes close to her…)
Saiyyam-when are u going to eat ur brunch?(Krishna gets shocked)
Krishna(thinks)-how did he know that I dint eat…so that means he was observing me…
Saiyyam-heloo….im asking you…
Krishna-I had my breakfast…

Saiyyam-no u dint….i know that..
Krishna-r u trying to say that im taking fast for you?
Saiyyam-no I dint mean that….but I dint c u eating anything today..thats why asked that…
Krishna-maybe u dint c…but I had my breakfast…in my room….and u can see….ill even have lunch…
Saiyyam-ok fine…(he goes saying this..)
Krishna(thinks)-now how will I escape from lunch….im sure…he will be looking whether im eating or not….
Everone sits for lunch….Krishna stands there….while everyone sits….saiyyam sees this…
Saiyyam-krishna come…na…sit..have your lunch…(krishna looks at him…yuvraj and sharad gets..surprised at saiyyam’s sudden question…yuvraj was sitting next to saiyyam..but he moves one seat forward…leaving one seat between yuvraj and saiyyam…)
Yuvraj-haan..krishna come and sit..next to me..here…come fast…(krishna..goes and sits there…)
Krishna(thinks)-please god….help me from this….please let me complete my fast…(suddenly suhani calls krishna for some work….krishna happily..rushes to her…)
Saiyyam(thinks)-this girl dint eat breakfast…and now why is she not eating..lunch….(saiyyam doesn’t feel like eating..so he gets upto go…
Yuvan-wat happened saiyyam..ur wife is not fasting for you…so are u planning to fast for her…?(saiyyam looks on…)
Yuvani-first you look whether your wife is fasting for you or not..cos today…I saw her eating ladoo…just few minutes back…so u better keep a check on her…because..better than faking to take fast for your husband’s long life..is not to take….(everyone laughs silently…yuvan..gets angry …)
Yuvraj-saiyyam eat full and go….

Sharad-leave it guru..maybe he will eat when krishna comes..let them …have together…wright saiyyam…
(saiyyam gets annoyed with all these comments..so he sits to eat….yuvraj and sharad…sign each other..)
Its night all the ladies gather to hear the story..and they are waiting for moon to come…krishna decides…to go somewhere secretly..to do her pooja….she had made all the arrangements…she had made her thali ready…..
Suhani-saiyyam and yuvani just bring water….to fill the pot..(they go to get it from house….and while coming back…saiyyam hears some sound….and goes to see krishna holding the the thaali and gets shocked….)
Saiyyam(thinks)-was she taking fast ?no…how can she….i think..im overthinking…( moon comes..saiyyam remembers about water.so he turns to go…when…krishna takes the sieve and is about to show it to saiyyam’s photo…but suddenly she feels dizzy..saiyyam hears something…and turns to see..krishna about to fall….he catches her on time….but slips…and falls over her….Krishna slowly opens her eyes..and sees saiyyam through the sieve..she smiles seeing him….they have an eyelock…..suddenly saiyyam realizes wat he is doing…..so he gets up…
Saiyyam-krishna wat happened…..(krsihna suddenly starts loosing her consciousness…saiyyam gets worried…)
Saiyyam-krishna ….krishna..wake..up…(he sprinkles….water on her face….he starts rubbing her hands….slowoly krishna starts gaining consciousness….)
Saiyyam-krishna …are you okay?krishna..wat happened..to you….(suddenly krishna starts coughing….so saiyyam makes her drink water…krishna looks at him in shock…..she feels really happy…)
Saiyyam-are you okay…wait …ill go call ma…(he turns to go..but krishna holds his hands)
Krishna-they all will be busy….im fine..its okay…
Saiyyam-but wat was this?wat happened to you….
Saiyyam-were you fasting?(in a confused state and in low sound..)
Krishna-not at all….i was busy doing work today….there was a lot of work that’s why…
Saiyyam- then wat were you doing here with this thali…

Krishna-I was going to give this to one of the guests..who wanted thaali…nothing else..(suddenly she sees saiyyam’s picture lying on floor….saiyyam was about to see..that..when krishna pulls the photo..under her dress….
Saiyyam-but….why dint you eat luch too today…?
Krishna-why wud I fast for you….dont think too much….
Saiyyam-okay….are you fine..shud I call doctor…
Krishna-no..im fine its..ok…and again….we don’t have any relation like this..that I keep fast for you..so its better..you get out of your misunderstanding as soon as possible..
Saiyyam(thinks)-yaa…why wud she keep this fast..wat a fool am I to think like that…
Saiyyam-ok…come weel go there…I think everything might have got over…by now…
Krishna-mmm….(they both go….)
Everone were praying in front of the idol….krishna and saiyyam too goes there…
Krishna(prays)-thnk you so much..you made saiyyam break my fast…now I completed my fast….i just pray that….saiyyam stays healthy and happy forever…and please help me in reuniting with him(on the other side..saiyyam was looking at krishna while she was praying…)
Saiyyam(thinks)-how innocent she looks….
Saiyyam(prays)-I hope maa…and krishna stays…happy wherever they are….(he looks at krishna..and sees her…praying..so hard..)
Saiyyam(prays)-wat is she praying so hard…..i don’t have anything to pray…wat I always prayed was that I want a mother….and you gave that….now I wont ask for anything else…so you go listen to people like krishna..and fulfill their wishes…(he again looks at krishna…and smiles)


Precap-Yuvraj-krishna tomorrow…onwards..you will stay with saiyyam…you both should act as husband and wife…wat say both of you?
Saiyyam-ok….

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