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KKB- Whisper Of Hope (Part 5)

Hi all…tank u all for ur wonderful cmnts….love u all soooo much……many of u read ffs n doesnt post cmnts….dats y I told dat no.of cmnts in not wat I want….I juz want u all to read this ff…….if it brings a smile in ur face wen u c d name of any ff, d writers will get happy….to d top of d world…..dats wat even I want……n no partiality ….so forgive me ppl if I hav not mention d ppls name who cmmntd…..n tanks to silent readers too….pls keep reading ffs…….not only mine but everyone’s……..Im really overjoyed dat my ff has come to its 5th part successfully….tq u all sooo much…..tq to d person who considered me as their frnd….hope u all njoy this part….????

KKB – WHISPER OF HOPE PART-5

Recap: 8yrs leap……grown faces of our characters…..ppls problems n their decisions….

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To dadis room:
Dadi: so wat do u wanna tell me??(in a stern voice)
Purab: Dadi, bhai will marry d girl of ur choice…..so y cant u do wat he asks for??(blurted out)
Dadi(calming down): Purab , u noe na??I love u both equally……I know wats good for u both…..dont wry, I’ll do wats bst for u both……secondly, u r gonna do ur 11th grade….U hav to concentrate in ur studies….pls beta….
Purab: but Dadi…….—
Dadi:no ifs n buts…..go back to ur room…..come back after breakfast to my room….I’ll tell u my decisions…tk??
Purab: ok Dadi…..(with a nervous laugh)
Dadi: Purab, DO NOT COME IN MY ROOM UNTIL I CALL U BOTH….UNDERSTAND????
Purab:o..ok radio bo—
Dadi:hmmmmmm(in a angry tone)
Purab: o..ok d..d…Dadi
Purab came out of dadis room n let out a sigh….n went to his room by keeping his hands in his pocket n whistling…?
Purab opened his room door…..
Abhi: oi…duffer!!wat happnd??did Dadi accpt??
Purab: arrey bhai!!wait till she calls us after ur breakfast….tk??(n lies on his bed by keeping his hand on his head like lord ranganathar is sleeping)(hope u can imagine)
Abhi:arrey!!wat did u tell Dadi??
Purab gives out a naughty smile….
Abhi: oi…im asking n ur smiling??

Purab:I talked to Dadi abt–
Abhi: abt wat??(in a eager way)
Purab: u goin to ur clge…in London..
Abhi:wow…then wat else,??how did u start d tpc??
Purab: dont ask me how I did …. I did wat u asked for…
Abhi:pls duffer…..
Purab:dont ask me(in an irked way)
Abhi: sky is not goin to fall down if u tell me…..
Purab:huh??really!!then I started ur clge tpc with ur mrge tpc…..tk??(blurted out all)(oops)
Abhi:u duffer….good fa nthg…..did I tell u to talk abt my clge r mrge??huh??I dont know how Im gonna face dadi….ughh
Purab:bhai!!calm down…
Abhi:how do u expect me to calm down duffer….u totally complicated evrythg….
Purab: bhai! Evrythg is under control…..dont wry…
Abhi:really??(surprised)

Purab:haan…..wen Purab is here, y fear??
Abhi(murmurs): d prob arises wen u r here..
Purab: wat did u tell??
Abhi: nthg duffer….
(Q:1 wat will b dadis decision??)
(Q:2 will they meet others now??)
Stay tuned……
After breakfast…..Dadi asked Robin to ask Abhirab to come n meet her……
To dadis room:
Dadi:………..
Purab: kya hua dadi??
Abhi: u called us to tell smtg imp??
Purab : must b bhai…..
Dadi clears her throat….Abhi gives her water….Dadi gives him a sharp glare…..
Abhi: tk hai dadi??
Dadi: hmmm…mein teek hoon..koi bath nahi hai….
Abhi: fyn Dadi,come Purab, lets go to our room..

Abhirab turns towards d door…wen abhi was abt to open d door, dadi says “rukho”
Dadi: I wanna ask u smtg….u really wanna bcme a rock star…..??
Abhi: Dadi, its my dream….I dont wanna bcme smtg wat ppl always wanna bcme…..I wanna b unique….I will make ppl happy n I will always give my best……
Dadi: u really hav dat much interest in music??
Abhi: Dadi, u know na…..music is d only way by which u can express all ur feelings…it is ur one n only bst frnd…….its beautiful….it doesnt hav any shape…..but has heart…it has love , hatred , sadness , eager , n many more emotions……they cannot b explained in words…..its juz…..gr8

Dadi tells gimme 5 mins…..dadi walks here n there……she keeps her hand on head n gives an sigh expression…..she removes her specs n rubs her eyes….
Abhi: D..da..dadi??
Dadi was in deep thoughts….she then came out of those thoughts…..
Dadi: Abhi…..I know dat ull always obey my words ….so listen to my words
Wen Dadi said this…..Abhi knows that his Dadi did not accept d proposal….so he told….
Abhi: its ok Dadi( with a heavy heart)u dont hav to tell it out…..I know wat u r gonna say….
Dadi: oi…liste—

Abhi: no Dadi….I cant hear it out…I hav already dreamt alot n I dont wanna dream anymore abt this….
Dadi : fyn…..but atlest hear wat im gonna tell……ull b happy latr….
Abhi with all -ve thoughts sits on his knees in disbelief by looking down….Purab juz patted his shoulder…(wat else can he do??)
Dadi: Abhi bfr I declare my report….u shd know wat lyf means…..it has may ups n downs…u shd hav a heavy n brave heart to move ahead…..u shd always think +ve….if not this , then dat…..this thought shd always b in ur mind……dont get broken down for small things……b strong……u can go to anywhere in this world one n only if u hav d courage to do things on ur own which would b a gr8 difficult task for others to accomplish…..will u b lyk dat??
Abhi did not hear everything ….but only few thngs…..so shook his head in a “s” way as Dadi has stopped her speech…..
Dadi: tk hai!!u both can go…..
Abhirab gets up n goes to d door….

Dadi: arrey!wen did I ask u 2 to get up n go??
Abhi: now only Dadi…..
Dadi: arrey buddu!!u did not understand wat I told u??(in a questioning way)
Purab thinks for a sec n tells……”hooooyyaaa”
Purab: wow….Dadi…u r sooo gr8….tq sooooo much….
Dadi smiles , purab cups Dadis face…..
Abhi remains clueless…..he did understood nthg…..
Purab: arrey bhai! Kya hua??u dont wanna go??its ur dream na??

Abhi looks more confused as his Dadi first said no…..n now he thinks dat she might of hav “s”
Abhi asks dadi is a confused way yet a hope was there in his heart which told him dat his dadi will sat yes….
Abhi:da..Dadi,u r allowing us to go??to London??(his eyes with full of tears)
Dadi:yes mera bachhu…..I will allow u both to go to London….on—
Purab:yo ho……Wait for us LONDON…
Abhi: yea….wait for us LONDON…
Abhi n Purab:HERE WE COME LONDON…..YOOOHOOOOO…..
Dadi gives a nice face palm to herself…..
Dadi them came n twisted their ears…..

AbhiRab: DADI….NO ROTATION N REVOLUTION…
By this tym both our boys went back to fb…
ABHIS FB:
15/06/2008
On d day wen Abhis dadi had a pain in her chest, AbhiRab got worried soo much….they even decided not to go to school n b with their Dadi…..
But Raj somehow made them to go to school as he himself discontinued his studies after his clge 2nd yr….due to family pressure, he started working in AbhiRab s dads place….
16/06/2008

The nxt day , AbhiRab went to hav breakfast n to everyone’s surprise,both of them were vry quite while eating….they even completed their food w/o any complaints….Ramu kaka(a worker in MM, AbhiRabs fav servant uncle….they usually call him Ramu uncle)was worried abt AbhiRab….both d boys went to Dadis room to bid bye n went to see wat their Dadi doin…..she was sleeping peacefully after a hard night pain……both d boys kissed on their Dadi s face n went to school with a heavy heart….
At school…

Abhi went to his place n sat n noticed dat he did not get any lectures frm his four eyes frnd…r u could say chashmish….he gets worried as he did not see her today as she never takes leave for school….in another way, she used to scould others who takes leave for school….Abhi was quite depressed as he did not get any lectures dat day frm Pragya…..he has her photo of being in a school uniform in his mind…..his nxt few days were lyk this….he shared his day experience with Raj who told him dat “mayb her bday is cmng n she took leave to give surprise for u all”
Abhi was quite convinced with dat answer as he did not think frm dat pt of view…
20/06/2008

“Chashmish ki b’day”
Abhi thinks he should give some gift n bought some chocolates for her on her b’day as she loves choky….n he got another gift d day bfre Pragyas bday…. bigger one too…..
He went to school with much happiness …..he was overjoyed…..actually he woke up @4am with out any lectures n this was noticed by Raj….he looked at Abhi who was jumping here n there with much of joy……everyone in his house knows abt Pragya,Bulbul,Aryan n Purvi….they were much happier than Abhi as he got a frnd who gave d smile which was gone smewere aftr his parents death…
To school@ 8am…

Abhi was in his class with d bigger gift , even Nikhil n Nisha bought a gift for Pragya but dat was not as bigger as compared to Abhis…..tym passed away….it was 10am….d 2nd period was goin….Abhi did not lose his hope….he gathered all his courage n told his frnds dat “chashmish will come today….she must come”while saying this , Abhis eyes were filled with tears as he missed her for d past 5DAYS….
During lunch period, A pune came n told d class teacher smtg….he gave a paper to her….ten he went away frm dere….
Class teacher was a bit sad aftr reading d letter n aftr knowing d reason, she had tears in her eyes…but went out of d class….dis was noticed only by Abhi as he was continuously looking at d door ….. he bcame curious as to know wat hppnd to teacher…y chashmish did not come to school yet……these two questions were running here n there in his mind…..
After a while teacher came n told dat…

Cls tchr: students….listen to me carefully….I’m gonna tell u all a sad news….
Abhi n his two frnds, Nikhil n nisha, were listening to dat carefully as they felt smtg fishy abt wats gonna hppn nxt….
Cls tchr: our bst frnd , bst girl , cls monitor , Pragya Arora has been moved to ….
Nikhil,Abhi n Nisha had tears in their eyes….their Pragya has moved away frm them w/o informing them…..
Cls tchr:(took a deep breath):she moved to abroad due to some health issues….
Cls tchr(in mind):I’m sry students….I dont wanna say wat hppn to Pragya….she is suffering frm *************
(Q:3 wat hppn to Pragya which made her to move to abroad??)

Abhi was fully in tears…..he cried lyk a baby inside his mind…..he did not showed this outside….he went to cls tchr n told dat he wanna go home….as he dont feel well….cls tchr understood dat he is in pain n told him dat he can go….same goes to Nikhil n Nisha… but tchr called Nisha n told d reason y Pragya went to abroad…..Nisha was shell shocked….she was standing lyk a statue….emotionless…breathless body….tchr asked her to go home…….
(Q:4 do u think dat Nisha will tell AbhiNil abt Pragya??)
Abhi went to his home as he called his home n Ramu kaka took d call n said dat he will come n take him….
(Switch ur volume to full…..I’ve inserted an audio….if it works , its ok….if not then also no prob…)

Abhis eyes were fully red…in anger n in sadness too….Ramu kaka did not uttered a word as he understood dat Abhi was in anger…..they went to MM……Abhi went to his room n he throws his bag away forcefully …… he crushed all d chocolates which he got for “his” chashmish…..he looked at d gift n unwrapped it with gr8 anger n force…..He looks at d gift with teary eyes…….he suddenly hugged d teddy bear tight……(s, it was a teddy bear …. in brown colour….dark brown…..it is covered with plastic cover )
He sobbed for 1/2 an hour …..Raj passed by dat side n looked Abhi sobbing vry hard n facin hard tym to breath also……Raj rushed inside n took d teddy n kept it on d couch n consoled Abhi….Abhi hugged him vry tightly which made Raj a bit uncomfortable…….his shirt was soaked in salt water cause , Abhi cried dat much…..
Abhi: bhaiyya…..w-w-wat d-did i-i do??(he sobbed heavily)

Raj:see….u r my Abhi rite?tell me wat hppnd??y u did not give ur gift to our chashmish??
Abhi:n-no….she is m-my ch-c-chashamish…she did not even bid a good bye to me n went far away frm mee…..she went abroad….

Raj : hmm??she will never do dat unless she doesn’t want others to know wat hppnd……smtg must hav hppnd n dats y she is lyk dat…..dont wry …..
Abhi: pakka??
Raj:pakka
Raj thinks “even though Abhi is a grown up kid……he is still a small child by heart…..he will hav a long way to go…..I’ll always b there with u , Abhi……”
Abhi sleeps down on Rajs lap n his days were empty w/o his four eyes frnd r so-called chashmish…….
4yrs later…..

20/06/2012
“Chashmish ki b’day”
Abhi still did not forget his bff chashmish but he is not with his frnds anymore….he gave them gifts bfre they r leaving so ad to not forget them …..Nisha went to Trichy n Nikhil went to abroad…….
Abhis anger grew towards Pragya as she did not come there yet….to meet “him”……@9pm…..on d same day…..he looks at d teddy n told dat……(it is muted)
(Q:5 wat do u guys think dat Abhi will do??r wat he had done with d teddy bear which he got for “his” chashmish??)
“I HATE U …… I HATE U CHASHMISH……IVE WAITED FOR A VRY LOONG TYM BUT NO RESPONSE…..NOW I’LL PUT AN END TO THIS……”
Nikhil n Nisha moved away from Abhi at d same yr wen Pragya went…..Abhi went abroad d nxt yr…I.e. his 6th grade was started frm abroad…..

To d present Abhi:
He somehow made sure dat he shd not show his anger to his Dadi n bro…..so he controlled himself n went to his room with heavy heart n with teary eyes , full of anger…..
Thats all for today folks….
Sry for d late update…..I’ve thought of nice entry for someone……
(Q:6 who is dat some one??)
Think ppl……d screen freezes with Abhis angry face….
Guys I’m really sry for d short update ad today I only concentrated on Abhis POV……full of fb rite??…..tomorrows will b diff….I promise u all…..Hav a gr8 day tomorrow guys…..

Precap: Y DID U LEAVE ME DAMNIT!!CANT U UNDERSTAND IM IN PAIN..??

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