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LET’S GO TO OUR STORY:
Abhi turns to me and askāsāPragya! Is Atharv not coming with us?āI stood drum struck with his wordsā¦!
I canāt able to believe this wordsā¦Abhi is asking this ? That means..He didnāt have any problem? If Atharv will be in his House? Is this all true? My mind drives me crazy with these thoughtsā¦ I getās lost still Tears r flowing from my eyesā¦!
Abhi shakes me and askāsāPragya! Could u hear me? Iām asking uā¦Atharv is coming with us or not?? Where is he? āI came back to senses and seeās him with teared eyesā¦Abhi getās confuse seeing me like thisā¦My Mom askāsāAbhi beta! App sach bolrahey? App ko Atharv say koie problem nehi?[Abhi beta! R u saying truth? U didnāt have any problem with Atharv?]ā Abhi shoutāsāWhat happen Auntyji? Why r u behaving like this?? U all thinks I have problem with Atharv??ā Abhiās choti Dadi shoutāsāAbhi! Tum pagal hogayiho? Tummy pathabhi hai tum kya keharaheyho? Atharv tera beta nehi..! Oh tera khuun nehi Abhi! Tum uss bachey ko ghar lana chathiho??ā[ Abhi ! have u gone mad? U have any idea about what u r saying? Atharv is not ur Son..! heās not ur Blood! U r thinking to take him to ur home?]
Abhi shoutāsāDadi yeh kya kehrey app? App essa kysey sochsakthey Dadi?[ Dadi! Hw can u think like this? Hw can u?] āAbhiās choti dadi shoutāsāAbhi mei eh sab tumhari balayi kehliyeh kehrarihu..! Abhi agar Atharv tummhara beta hotanaā¦tho sab kuch teek hota..phar OH tera beta nehi hai puttar..![ Abhi! Iām telling this all for ur goodness and betterment..If Atharv would be ur child then, everything would be kk..but heās not ur son..!]
Abhi shoutāsāDadi what r u saying? Atharv mera beta nehi issliyeh oh merey saath nehi rehasakthaā¦phar shyad app bhulrahiyeh ki..Adhya bhi Pragya ka beti nehi..! Phar phir bhi app Pragya ko Adhya ki saah rehneykehliyeh keyrihey ? issliyeh Hamara shadi bhi karliyatha app sabh ney.!Agar pragya meri beti kehliyeh Maa bansakthiti..phir mei kyu unki bachey ki papa nehi bansakthi?? Kyu dadi? Agar mei galath hu..tho app sabh bhi galath hu na..!!ā[ Dadi! What r u saying? Atharv is not my son so, he canāt stay with me..but u all forgot that, Adhya is not Pragyaās daughter.! U all wants to stay her with Pragya! Thatās why u done our marriage..Iām Asking u now, If Pragya can become Mother for my child..Then why canāt I becomes Father to her son? If Iām wrong..that means u all r wrong Dadi!] I stares with Respect eyes for himā¦
Abhiās choti dadi shoutāsāAbhi! Eh sab terehliyeh assan hoga puttar..phar iss society eh baath ko kabhi accept nehi karthi..! Oh tunjhpar ungli utatiheyā¦!ā[ Abhi! Itās easy for u..but not for this society..This society will not accept this and Always Questions u..!]
Abhi shoutāsāMujhey koie parak nehi padta..! App ko society ki phikar hai..phar Uss masum bachey ki nehi..! Pragya ka mamatha ka nehi..! app ithna giriviyu soch sochbhi kysey Dadi..!ā[ I donāt care for this society..! U all care for society but u didnāt have any care about that child!! U didnāt have any care about Pragyaās motherly love..! Hw could u think like this.? Itās Disgusting!!]
He turns to Mom and sayāsāAuntyji! Mei Atharv sey milna chahithihu..! kaha hai oh..?ā[ I want to meet Atharv! Where is he?] Just then Abhi notices Atharv is hiding behind My Momās back by holding her palluā¦I seeās him and getās happyā¦
Abhi kneel downs to Atharv and sayāsāHey champ! Yeha kya karraheyho? Ghar nehi jaana?ā[ What r u doing here? U donāt come to our home?] Atharv looks very scared he keeps on seeing Abhiās choti Dadi and nodes Noā¦!
Abhi notices this and covers him with his shoulders and sayāsāAtharv kya tum appni PAPA key saath nehi aavungi? Ha?ā[ Atharv! U will not come with ur PAPA?] Iām having happy tears by listening this wordā¦.! Atharv looks confusing and sayāsāPAPA? Mera Papa?ā Abhi nodes with smileā¦.Atharv sees me with confusion..I nodes Yes with happy tearsā¦
Abhi sayāsāWeysey..Tum Appni Mamma sey puchatana hospital mei..! oh tho bataya nehi..hei na?ā[ ya..i know u have asked this ur Mamma! But she didnāt gave any answer right?]I getās shocked listening thisā¦that means he heard our conversation..!
Abhi continues āAtharv agar mei Adhya ki papa huu tho..tera bhi papa hu na?[ Atharv! If Iām Adhyaās daddy..the, I will be ur Dad too!] ?āand expands his Armsā¦Atharv getās super happy and runs to himā¦He hugs him tightly while Abhi cares his hair with a smile..
I getās touched seeing this side in Abhi..!I feels guilty..i have misunderstood him..! I hope time stops at this scene only..My one and only pain getās reveled now..I really donāt want anything than thisā¦! I admires them with happy tears..
Abhi picks Atharv in hands and goes to his Dadiā¦Dadi smiles happily with his decision..! Choti Dadi stops and shoutāsāMei hey kabhi man nehi sakthi Abhi! Tummy andasabhi nehi tum kithna badaa galthi karraheyho! Abhi! Atharv tera beta nehi hai..tho phir kiss hakk sey oh tera saath teri ghar mei rahengi??ā! Eh society eh kabhi nehi maneyga..!ā[ Abhi! U didnāt have any idea what ur doing? Atharv is not ur son..so, then my which right he will stay with u?]
Abhi shoutāsāDadi mey appko pheheyley bathachukihoā¦Logg kya sochtey hai..issey mujhey koie pharak nehi padtaa..!Ek aur baath dadi, Atharv ko merey sath rehney kehliyeh hakk nehi balki pyaar ki zarurath hai..! aur app iss baath mey pareyshan hu naā¦ki..Atharv mera beta nehi hai..tho teekey Ajj say Atharv mera beta hai..! Ajj sey Eh Atharv Abhishek Mehta..! haiā¦Aur kuch dhin badh mei Atharv ko legally adopt karthihuā¦tho abb kisisko koie problem nehi hogaa ā¦ā[ Dadi! I already told u I donāt cae abou this society..! and I more thing, Atharv didnāt need any right to stay with me..but he just need Love..! U r bothering about this fact, Atharv is not my Son..right? so, let me clear u all..Atharv is my son from Todayā¦Heās Atharv Abhishek Mehta..!! And I will adopt him legally very soon..so, donāt worry about this..] Abhiās relatives getās shocked listening thisā¦while My and My Momās happiness have no boundariesā¦
Choti Dadi shoutāsāAbhi! Tum hey nehi karsaktha..! Agar tum iss bachey ko ghar leygayina..! tho mei uss ghar mei kabhi kadamm nehi rakungi..yaadrakna!!ā [ Abhi! U canāt do this..iām warning uā¦If u took this boy with u then, I will not enter ur house..!Remember this!]
Atharv whoās in Abhiās hands getās scared by their shouting and hugs Abhi tightly…Abhi patās him gently and sayā Yeh Meri Akari physlaa hai!! Jiss ko manjuur hai oh asakthi hai..!ā[ This is my Final Decision..! U are kk with this can come..] Dadi patās his shoulder and sayāsāAbby eh hum sab ki Akari pyslaa hai.! Agar kisi ko Taklif hogi..Oh Ruksakthi hai..![ Now, itās our All decision..! who is having problem with this can stay away..]!āSaying this Dadi ask driver to start the car..Abhi seated beside me with Atharv in lap..Dadi seated in front seatā¦!Our car starts from thereā¦
IN CAR: I seated with Adhya in lap..Atharv seeās me and hugs me..I happily hugged my two kids and kissed themā¦I just keeps on thanking Abhi with my Eyes and itās happy tears..Abhi smiles nodes in Acceptanceā¦
IN MM:
We all enters Mansionā¦Dadi instructs me do the Grahapravesh Ritual with Abhi..Iām just following her every instruction with a happy faceā¦Dadi took Arthi for 4 of usā¦ Dadi hugs Atharv and sayāsāAtharv! ajj sey yehi tera ghar hai..tera parivar hai..! [ Atharv! This is ur house and ur family from Todayā¦!] Finally I enter In to My New Home..! In Which I have to start my new lifeā¦With My kids and with My Husbandā¦!
I felt something new in āMy Husband!!ā but, Iām really very Happy..After seeing That Abhishek who understood the real meaning of Relationā¦! Who can understand Affection and Loveā¦To be frank, Now Iām feeling new Respect for himā¦Now, He has done everything that a Husband does..! As a father does..! Now, Itās my turn to Accept him whole heartedly..And has to do my duties of A Wife..! And as A Mother as well..! I just lost in these thoughts by seated in our bed room..Just then, Abhishek came insideā¦I came back to sense and stood up seeās him..Abhishek smiles and sayāsāIf u donāt have any problemā¦I want to talk with u for some time..!āI nodes Yes with a smileā¦Abhiske startsā Pragya! I know we r two different people who didnāt know anything about each other..! But common thing among us is We love our children A lot..! Iām so Happy..U came in to my life..! My Angel finds A Mother in u..! She callās u Maa! For the first timeā¦I donāt know what affection u have..but Must say U Feel Unconditional Love for Adhya..! Thatās enough for me..! If u want some more time to involve in this Relation..! Iām ready to support uā¦!!āI holds his hand and sayāsāAbhishek! I donāt know what u feels about me..But, I have misunderstood u a lot..Iām sry for that, But Today, After listening ur Decision about Atharv..I understood that, U know the Real Meaning of Relation..! Love! What else I want than thisā¦?? Iām ready to be ur Wife..! I will always ready to walk with u even it is toughest path..!āI said firmly with a smileā¦
Abhi cares my hand and sayāsā Thank u..! Thank u pragya..! tum merey sath kadhi hey itās really means a lot for meā¦and I want to say , I donāt want other kids in our lifeā¦U got ur daughter in the form of Adhya..! and even I got my son in the form of Atharv..! I feels Iām complete nowā¦! Thank u so much for making my Family complete..!
I getās overolled listening his wordsā¦Yes, Itās True.!! He completes my life..!!
Suddenly, Someone knocks and Abhi opened the door..Itās our Kids! Abhi kneel down to Atharv and askāsāWhat happen? U both didnāt sleep till now?ā Atharv sayāsā Papa! We r not getting shleep [sleep] without u both..!!āAbhi smiles and hugs him he picked both Atharv and Adhya in Arms and walks towards meā¦I picks Adhya from his Arms. And we both layās our kids in middle and start caring them..Atharv is beside Abhi and Adhya curdle to me..Atharv askāsāPapa! Stlory[story]āAbhi smiles and begins to tell him story..while I too getās busy in listening while caring my kidās hairsā¦! I slowly thanks my Destiny for Making My Life complete with A Man who stores my Inner soul in him ..!!
Our Beautiful Life Journey starts from that Dayā¦.! Now, Itās been 3 yrs of our marriage life..Everything changes with timeā¦Abhi and I starts loving each other..we didnāt do proposing or something..becoz, we know we love each otherā¦! We also know, Love canāt express just only by words. It can also be expresses by care and sharing b/w each otherā¦! Thatās why We sayā¦RISHTAA DIL SE BANTI HAI..!!
This is Pragya Abhishek Mehta..! and This is My Storyā¦..Thank u all..
That’s it guys…Hope u will like this…And plz don’t be sad..becoz, I will be back with Another Beautiful Story which have Heartly Emotions…Thank u all for supporting me…Bye Bye..!!
29 Comments
awesome diii it was really really good the words which abhi spoke was superbb and abhi’s choti dadi aarghh i hate her how can she hate aatharv just for the sake of the damn society but i must say dii it was a fantastic episode abhi and pragya’s love was eternal and will alwyas be one cute family i would never forget will miss this story but still waiting for u to update ur next stories u will surely update na? pinky promise? finally love u dii take care keep smiling….
Thank u so much my dear choti..! I’m so happy for ur new ff…infact i loved it….Yes, i will be back for sure..pinky promise!! kk…Love u too choti…Take care and Keep Rocking…dear
suupperrbb…sssuuppeeerrbbb…sssuuppeeerrbbb…really very emotional and touching..but so sad that u ended it…can’t u continue it with some more episodes…but whatever ..this is one of the beautiful ff which i will always remember…everthing was perfect in it..the way of writing…emotions…evrything…
Than k u so much for such a cute …beautiful ff..don’t stop writing ..continue to do this…u r really superb..
Love u..ur ff..and ur writing
Thank u so much…Aarthi..! I’m so happy by seeing ur msg..Thanks for ur support dear…Will be back for u all…Love u loads…I’m so happy by reading ur ff..dear Keep Rocking
beautifull awesome dear
wish u happy pongal
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Such a Beautifulllllllllllllllll Storyyyyyyyyyy Dearrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it sooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! & Happyyyyyyyy PONGAL Dear………….
Thank u..Reshma..~! Thank u so much..I’m so happy after seeing all ur wonderful response…..Love u too dear…Happy pongal to u sry for late…
pakka baby. i love this. i have no words actually. really this made me speechless.
abhi…aww…such a cutie pie he is. pakka dialogues. he is a perfect husband and a perfect father too. the way he cares for athrav makes me stunned. the way he spoke to pragya in their marriage night, it was wonderful. really, in this he has understood the real meaning of love. i love his character in this story. well portrayed.
pragya’s love for adhya is also unconditional. i love the line where she says, rishta dil se banti hai. cent percent true. and the time when she says we didnt do proposing or something…loved the way she actually confessed her heart on abhi. and truely, words are not enough to express love.
dadi (not choti dadi)…i like her so much. she is so supporting. pragya’s mom, she is a lovely understanding woman.
and of course, the two kids are so charming and wonderful. so cute??? they are, just like their parents!!
so this story on the whole proved to be a masterpiece of adhya…my dear adhya.
so come up soon with another.
love you so much???????????????????
take care?????
Thank u so much Ani….Love u so much dear…U r always there for me to support in this long journey..I’m so blessed…Will be back with another story hope..u all will like that too..hahh..Always keep smiling dear….Thank u once again becoz, u made my day happy with ur energetic msg…
Awesome dear…
Cute story…come back soon dear..m
Superrrr….. Wish u happy pongal dr….
Fabulous shots yaar…keep continue like this.. Love it…and Happy Pongal….
awesome it was am feeling like my mind is blank so I no words… b back another story for sure I will comment.. I want to u write lot about so please come back..
Thank u so much dear….sure will be back for sure…Happy pongal dear…thank u for wishes
inniya thithikum pongal vazhthukal..
Awesome dear!!!!!!
Thank u…sugan….I’m so glad receiving ur msg
tooo sweet dear I really enjoyed it a lot but I felt bad to know its the end and about abhis dadi nature it doesn’t happen only in stories but also happens in reality,some peoples thought is, u ve to be Worth to something before u are claimed bt even God doesn’t justify us that way so I would lyk each and everyone to be each others keeper bcos today was yesterdays tomorrow love u with ur writing skills and I lyk the way abhi devoted himself to stand against his dadi for the poor boy lovvvvvvvvve u hope u could come sooon
Thank u so much..Lopez I’m very happy after seeing ur msg..Thank u dear..Yes, God doesn’t justify us….! Yes, will be back soon dear..Keep Smiling
Honesty it is a good story not only for entertain us but also gave a good message to society… perfect start and perfect end…really loved it so much…plz come back with another ff… waiting for you…
Thank u so much..Akshaya…Yes will be back with another story…for u..hahh..Love u dear Keep smiling..
Awww Adhya baby awesome one!! Loved it to the core.. Waiting for your next heart touching story darling..
Thank u so much..Prathi…. i’m so glad seeing ur comment…tank u dear ..yes, will be back for sure….
wow it is a wonderful update sis abhigya’s scenes are such a lovely Abhi’s claim towards atharv is nice such a beautiful story sis with awesome pair with cute kids Glad that you come with another story waiting for that
wish you a happy pongal
Thank u so much..Minu darling…I’m glad seeing ur responce…Thank u for always supporting me…Yes, will be back with another story dear…Always keep smiling…
swt
Thank u…sethidisha
Happy pongal adhu
My dr darling I love u so much
Such a beautiful work this is
You have a big future baby
The way you wrote this story was outstanding
Thank u so much..Di…I’m desperately waiting for ur Msg….I’m very happy ..Thank u Di…Love u loads Di…Miss u