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Home»Fan Fiction»KITNI BAATEIN, AN AVNEIL FF, EPISODE 1.
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KITNI BAATEIN, AN AVNEIL FF, EPISODE 1.

8B4756By 8B4756June 19, 2018Updated:June 20, 20185 Comments4 Mins Read
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Episode 1;

Scene 1:Stuyvesant high school ,New York.

Aakash:Hey ,You are Vidhyut,aren’t you.

Vidhyut:And you ,are you Aakash,I have heard a lot about you from Sunehri.

Aakash:Good things I guess,BTW where is Avni .

Vidhyut:Oh ,so you even know her,she would be coming.And Sunehri told you about everybody didn’t she.

Aakash:Oh ya she told me about you,Juhi,Avni,Ali and Reha.And she told you about everybody,didn’t she.

Vidhyut:Ya she told me about you,Mitali and DD and I already know her so are we meeting at the cafeteria during lunchtime .

Aakash:Ya of course and you know my cousin Neil joined the school recently so he will also join us.

Vidhyut:That’s great,Ok then we will meet at the cafeteria bye.

They both go to there respective classes while Avneil enter the school at the same time and bump into each other while searching for there class.

Avni:I am sorry.

Neil:It’s Ok babes.Btw I’m Neil ,Neil Khanna.

Avni:You are such a jerk,don’t you have any manners,how did you even dare to call me babes.

Neil:Hey you know when you are angry you look more beautiful.

Avni storms off.

Neil:She was very weird.

After some hours everyone went to the cafeteria except Avneil and When Neil entered the cafeteria,he bumped into Avni and Avni fell over him and they had an eyelock.

Vidhyut,Juhi,Aakash,Mitali,DD,Sunehri,Reha:Done both of you.

Avni hurriedly tried to stand up but her locket got stuck in the button of Neil’s shirt and then Avni fell over him and they both ended up kissing.

Then Sunehri helped them both to stand up .

Neil:Who’s she.

Aakash:She’s Avni.

Neil:So finally I met you.Friend’s.

Avni:I would die rather than being friends with you.

Reha:Oh my god ,now stop fighting,Avni shake his hands orelse(she whispers something in Avni’s ears.

Avni:Friends.

Neil:What did you say to her…um …..your name.

Reha:I am Reha,her cousin,and ya leave it let let get introduced .

Everyone introduced themselves to each other.

Ali:So Neil you want to become a singer right,then sing something,you even have brought your guitar here , so start.

Neil:(In a croaky voice)Aaj Khamoshiyon Se Aa Rahi Hai Sada

Dhadkanein Hai Deewani

Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Sun Sun Zaraaaa

Beetey Lamhon Ke Saaye Toh Bas Yahi Tham Gaye Hai

Yaad Mujhe Aaye Teri Baatein

Palkon Ki Surkh Chadar Pe Ask Bhi Jam Gaye Hai

Teri Ankhon Se Na Hatti Aankhein

Bebasi Ka Hai Aalam Kya Karoo Main Bata

Dhadkanein Hai Deewani Dil Bhi Kutch Keh Raha Hai

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaaa

Sun Zara Soniye Sun Zaraaaa

Avni:STOP IT YOUR VOICE IS VERY BAD.

Neil:No my voice is very good and one day I will become a great singer ,and if your voice is so good then you sing and show us.

Avni:Ok so listen,

aaj jaane kee jid naa karo

yu hee pehlu me baithe raho

aaj jaane kee jid naa karo
hay mar jaayenge, ham toh lut jaayenge

aisee baate kiya naa karo

aaj jaane kee jid naa karo

hay mar jaayenge, ham toh lut jaayenge

aisee baate kiya naa karo, aaj jaane kee jid naa karo

tum hee socho jara, kyun naa roke tumhe

jaan jaatee hai jab uthake jaate ho tum

tumko apanee kasam jaanejan, baat itanee meree maan lo

aaj jaane kee jid naa karo, yu hee pehlu me baithe raho

aaj jaane kee jid naa karo, hay mar jayenge ham toh lut jaayenge

aisee baate kiya naa karo, aaj jaane kee jid naa karo

Neil:Wow ,but why is your voice so much melodious.

Avni:Because my voice has pain.

Neil:Huh …..leave it wait …what the …Look there …

They all turned back and saw Aakash and Mitali were saying I love you to each other.And then they kissed.

Avni started feeling uncomfortable and went from there.And Reha went behind her.

Neil:Now What happened to her.

Ali:It’s a long story……(he tells everything about Avni’s past to Neil and Aakash and Mitali also heard it)

Mitali:i And Aakash will apologise .

Precap:2 months later,

Boy:Avni I love you not your identity,will you be my girlfriend.

Avni:Even I love you,and I will be your girlfriend.

So,now you all guess with whom was Avni talking.

And I hope that you all enjoyed the episode and please let me know what you all thought about the episode in the comments section and hit the like button if you all liked the episode,bye have a great evening.

—Shia Verma.

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    5 Comments

    1. somya13 on June 19, 2018 6:14 pm

      Awesome……

      • 8B4756 on June 19, 2018 7:11 pm

        Thanks

    2. Anshika on June 19, 2018 8:54 pm

      Nice

      • 8B4756 on June 19, 2018 9:56 pm

        Thanks

    3. Avneil1811 on June 19, 2018 11:25 pm

      Vidyuth??????

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