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Home»Fan Fiction»khwahishein (part 2)
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khwahishein (part 2)

Kriya.nBy Kriya.nMarch 21, 201718 Comments7 Mins Read
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Ragini angrily – stop ….. Not a word …. (she turned to laksh ) I hope your work is done over here so just leave from here …..

Laksh – but ….. His words left incomplete as ragini held his hand dragging him out she closed the door on his face ….

Laksh looked at the closed door sadly

Here ragini stood taking support of door with two heavy tears slipped down her cheeks ….

Ragini crying – why did he came …. Why ansh ….. (the person was ansh -her best friend)

Ansh went near her and made her sit on couch …..

He sat in front of her on ground holding both her hands in his ….

Ansh – ragini till now I didn’t ask anything from you but now it’s high time …. If you ever consider me your best friend then tell me what’s wrong with you both ….. N he was saying him as your husband is it true …..

Ragini slowly nodded her head ….

Ragini – we were married six years before

Ansh – what?

Ragini – yes ….. We both met in college fest …. It was love at first sight for both of us ….. He was a orphan but I had dadu Dadi … Both agreed for our relation n we were married …. Everything was fine …. He loves me truly we enjoyed our married life ….. (she smiled remembering her moments with laksh )

Ansh – if everything was fine between you both them what was the reason of your separation …..

Ragini smiles sadly looking at him ……

Ragini – after five months of our marriage …. Everything was going ok until …. (tears started flowing again from her eyes )

Ansh held her hands tightly – let it out ragini …..

Ragini – there was a business party going on in our house for success of deal ….

Flashback
We can see a couple standing on stage ….
(No doubt they are our cute sweet couple raglak ??)

One by one people were coming n congratulating them …. Raglak were looking happy …… Smile never leaving there face ….

Laksh secretly held ragini hand and entangled his fingers with hers ….
Ragini looked at there hands then at laksh ……

Laksh whispers in her ear – baby stop staring otherwise we’ll land up doing something against situation …..

Ragini blushes listening him …

Laksh in warning tone – baby I told you not to blush in front of me …. Didn’t I … It always make me loose my control on myself …..

Ragini blushes even more after hearing him …..

Laksh – damn I just want to …..

Ragini said raising her eyebrow – to …

Laksh went near her in pecked her cheeks and immediately back off …. While ragini stood there in shock keeping one hand on her cheek where he kissed …..

Laksh naughtily – to kiss your red cheeks which turned more red due to blushing ….
Ragini glared him n turned her face other side ….

Laksh – baby sorry ….

But no use ragini still didn’t turn
So
laksh excuse himself saying to her that he’ll be back in a minute…

Ragini still didn’t respond …. Laksh sighed n went from there …..
As soon as he left she turned in his direction keeping a cute angry pout

Ragini – idiot here I’m angry on him n instead of convincing me he went …. A big idiot ….

after a while all lights went off and a spot light fell on ragini …..

She look around being confused n that’s when another spot light fell on laksh who was standing in the middle… he took the mike and said

Laksh – this song is for my life …. my wife …. Mrs ragini laksh Maheshwari

** Mila hoon ab jo tumse
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila… **

song start and laksh came toward ragini …… he bend down and took her hands in his …..

** Tujhe hai paya Rab se
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. **

Laksh took ragini in centre still holding her hand….. He pull her closler …. Ragini put her hands on laksh’s chest and he held her waist

** .Har pal haseen sa huaa hai
Saanson ko tune chhua hai
Badhi tujhse nazdeekiya
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila…**

Raglak move according to the beat lost in each other…..he twirl ragini and hug her from behind…

**Mila hoon ab jo tumse
Hai dil ko mere kasam se
Sukoon mila, sukoon mila…**

He slowly kissed her near her ear still back hugging …..
He whispers – I love you ….

Soon the song ends ….. Both were lost in each other’s eyes but came back to reality hearing clapping sounds ….

Ragini looked down smiling shyly …. While laksh smiles looking at her ….
____
Everything was going smooth when one man in his mid 40s came near them ….

Ragini was feeling uncomfortable due to the smirk on his face n his continuous face on her ….
Laksh who saw this clenched his fist in anger …..

He stood in front of ragini hiding her at his back

Laksh coldly – what do you want Mr Malhotra …. (he was one of laksh rivals )

Man – nothing much …. Just seeing you young man growing ….. But (he smirked evily) …. Still you can never win over me ….. Poor fellow …..

Whole hall went silent hearing him ….

Man – oh …. Just by wining one deal do you think you can survive in business world ….. No my dear child …. You are wrong …..

Parole present there stars to talk something or other ….

Laksh felt angry not because of his insulting words but seeing people talking all soughts of ill things ….

Anger n rage room place on his mind destroying his thinking power

He stood in front of Mr malhotra pointing his finger to him

Laksh in determined tone – I challenge you Mr malhotra ….. Soon you will see me reaching heights of business ….. There will be no one who can defeat me ….. N I mean it no one ….
___
Flashback ends…

Two heavy tears slipped down ragini cheeks remembering that day ….

Ansh curiously – then what happened that led you both to part away ….

Ragini smiling plainly – what will happen…… He got fully involved in his company ….. He use to work day n night dithering that there will be some one waiting for him at home ….. You know there were times when he used to mr away from home for weeks ….. No news nothing ….. We hardly got time to talk after that …. N if by chance we talk only a yes or no …..

But I understood his condition so I never complained …. One month passed … Two month passed ….. Like this six months passed but he never cared ….. He was changed ….. I thought to give him time but what I got in return loneliness ….. What was my fault in this ….

Ansh – you could have waited for him if you did for six months …. why did you left him

Ragini – I never wanted to leave him but it was him who forced me …. It was him who left no other option for me ….

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    18 Comments

    1. Sindhura on March 21, 2017 2:50 pm

      Nice

    2. IQRA222 on March 21, 2017 2:53 pm

      awesome episode
      raglak were so happy loved their dance
      but feeling bad for raglak
      i hope di that you make ansh a positive entry but who is playing ansh
      waiting for the next part

    3. lovely7 on March 21, 2017 3:14 pm

      Nice
      Feeling bad for raglak

    4. a on March 21, 2017 3:43 pm

      Nice

    5. lilly on March 21, 2017 4:36 pm

      Nice epi

    6. Asw on March 21, 2017 4:37 pm

      Nice keep going

    7. mk on March 21, 2017 4:51 pm

      feeling bad for ragini

    8. Mintu on March 21, 2017 5:32 pm

      Amazing dear.. Waiting for next part.. Post it soon

    9. Soni on March 21, 2017 6:19 pm

      Epi was awesome ……. N d most amazing part is dat while reading d update n song my frnd was playing d same song dat of d update….. Hehe post d nxt part soon eager to know wat laksh did dat ragu had to leave him.

    10. abi on March 21, 2017 6:58 pm

      Wow
      Awesome

    11. Ammu on March 21, 2017 8:05 pm

      Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes. What happened next? Waiting for next episode and post soon

    12. Slk on March 21, 2017 10:54 pm

      Nice update dear….

    13. A.xx on March 22, 2017 3:20 am

      nice wonder what happened,,,xx

    14. Vk on March 22, 2017 9:34 pm

      Nice

    15. jazzy on March 22, 2017 9:55 pm

      Superb

    16. Ammy on March 22, 2017 11:00 pm

      Nice

    17. asra on March 23, 2017 9:52 am

      awesome dear…..raglak past superbbb….loved it alot….eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

    18. Rehna on March 27, 2017 10:54 am

      Superb dear

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