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Home»Fan Fiction»khwahishein (part 1)
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khwahishein (part 1)

Kriya.nBy Kriya.nMarch 20, 201736 Comments5 Mins Read
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Laksh was sitting in his cabin engrossed in his deep thoughts ….. When there was a knock
He composed himself …..
Laksh in bossy tone – come in

Person – did I got the information about mam whereabouts

Laksh happily – really kabir (laksh pa )

Kabir – her sir I have mailed it to you ……

Laksh immediately opened his mail ….. His heart felt relif seeing the mail after all why not it’s been 5 long years it’s been away from his solace …..

Laksh – arrange private plane I’m leaving in a hour and cancel all my meetings for this month ….

Kabir – but sir …..
He stops on middle seeing laksh angry glare and just nodded his head …

Laksh – now what are you waiting for just move from here

He immediately left from there knowing about his boss anger very well

Laksh – finally the day has come I was waiting for . ….. I know ragini I have you much pain but now I am coming to feel all your wounds dear …. Just wait for me …. This time we will be together for …… ALWAYS ….
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Laksh stood on front of a small flat ……
he smiled n inhaled the sweet aura spreading …..
His heart was jumping in happiness feeling peace ….. Same peace which he got near her …..

He was waiting for someone to open door after ringing the bell …

Finally the door slowly opened …..

There stood his lady love looking at him shockingly ……

His eyes met with hers …… He wants to run n hug her tightly but his legs refused him …… He wants to speak so much but his throat betrayed him …..

But

Wait ….. Is she crying ….. Did he saw clearly …… There were tears in her eyes ….

He immediately moved forward to cup her face but ragini stops him showing her hand ……

She was about to close the door but he held it on no nick of time and pushed it slightly making his way inside ….. While ragini stood there protesting but he gave her deaf ears …..

Ragini – what are you doing now …… Just leave …..

Laksh – I didn’t came here to go …..

Ragini looks at him teary eyed
Ragini – don’t do this laksh …. I don’t have power to bear all this again ….. Please

She fell in her knees crying badly ….. He stood there seeing her helplessly …. When ever he tried going near her she always shove him away ….. Now his heart is feeling pain what she might have gone through …. He was breaking from inside with each drop of tear she shed …

Laksh – ragini please don’t cry ….. It’s hurting me please …..

Ragini wiped her tears standing straight facing him …..
Ragini – why it’s hurting you

Laksh – n why it should not

Ragini – because it was you to break out relation damit ….

Laksh calmly – ragini I never broke it ….. It’s just that ….. (he was finding words to explain her )

Ragini mockingly – just that there is only the DIVORCE left to break our relation officially right mr laksh Maheshwari …..

Laksh sighing – I’m not here to listen your nonsense ….. I’m here to take you back …..

Ragini – with what right laksh …..

Laksh – being your husband

Ragini – no you’re not get it straight in your mind

Laksh – please ragini don’t say like this

Ragini – you know what hurts so much? …… It’s when someone made you feel so special yesterday but makes you feel like you are nobody today …

Unable to control anymore tears again started flowing uncontrollably from her eyes while a lone tear escape from his eyes …..

Laksh was about to say something but he was interrupted by a door banging sound ……

Both looked at the direction ……
Before any of them can react the person came and hugged ragini tightly making laksh frown with anger n heat raising in his eyes

Person happily – Ragu darling you know I got selected ….. I’m so happy ….. Finally I got the job I desired …..

Ragini quickly composed herself and was about to hug him back ….

But when laksh saw her going to respond back …… He literally turned like pressure cooker which can burst any time ……

He quickly separated ragini from him n held her from waist ……

Laksh angrily – who are you ……

Person looks at laksh confusingly and then ragini …

Ragini tried moving away from his hold but with her each struggle his grip tightens …..

Ragini – idiot leave me ……

Laksh looks at her raising his eyebrow

Person – dude you’re hurting her …..
He pulled ragini towards him …….

Laksh glares him angrily …… He again pulled ragini towards him holding her arm ….

Laksh – n who are you to tell me that …..

Person pulled ragini towards him again
Person – n who are you to ask me that …..

Laksh – pulling ragini again – I’m her husband ……

Person ??? – he looked at him with wide eyes but then pulled ragini again –
Person – I don’t mind anyways ….. She is my girlfriend ……

Now it’s time for laksh to get shock ….. He looked at ragini then him and was about to pull ragini again …..

But ….

Ragini shouts – stop it ….. You both just stop …… Am i looking like a toy to both of you dodging me from one to another …..

Both at same time – he started – pointing to each other .. ..

Ragini angrily – stop ….. Not a word …. (she turned to laksh ) I hope your work is done over here so just leave from here …..

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    36 Comments

    1. lovely7 on March 20, 2017 11:08 am

      Amazing ???

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:14 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    2. lilly on March 20, 2017 11:32 am

      Awesome….waiting for next….

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:15 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    3. xshreyax on March 20, 2017 11:43 am

      Awesome dear…. ????…..Poor ragini…
      Both are husband wife ?? what happened that they separated ….. Next part soon … Tc ??

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:16 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    4. Asw on March 20, 2017 12:19 pm

      Nice keep going

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:17 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    5. Mintu on March 20, 2017 12:42 pm

      Awesome dear…. It’s lovely ? raglak r married??? Y they separated??? Eagerly waiting to know the reason… Post it soon

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:17 pm

        Thanks dear … ?? …. You’ll get to know in next part ….. Raglak married

    6. raglakholic on March 20, 2017 12:56 pm

      seems itresting….plz cntinue…..

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:18 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    7. IQRA222 on March 20, 2017 1:03 pm

      awesome episode kriyuu di
      loved the fight at the end it was funny
      poor raglak
      waiting for the next part

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:18 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:19 pm

        Thank you so much dear ….. ??

    8. a on March 20, 2017 1:26 pm

      Interesting

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    9. Follybraverl on March 20, 2017 4:38 pm

      Omg omg this is awesome plastic next part sooooonnn

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    10. Akshata on March 20, 2017 8:43 pm

      awesome, update soon

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:20 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    11. Ammu on March 20, 2017 9:07 pm

      Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes. Who is this new entry?

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:21 pm

        Thanks dear … ??….. You’ll get to know about new entry in next part

    12. Arjuna on March 20, 2017 9:49 pm

      AWESOME

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:23 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    13. mk on March 20, 2017 10:02 pm

      awesome

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:23 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    14. abi on March 20, 2017 10:31 pm

      Super

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:24 pm

        Thanks dear … ??

    15. tëìtō kUn on March 21, 2017 1:05 am

      Interesting….
      Loved the fight of Raglak & the new entry….

    16. A.xx on March 21, 2017 1:46 am

      Amazing and why do i think the other person lied xx

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:25 pm

        Thanks dear … ??….. ?? the other person lied is true …. You’ll get it in next part

    17. tëìtō kUn on March 21, 2017 2:26 am

      Waiting to know the reason for Raglak separation….
      Awesome….

      • Kriya.n on March 21, 2017 1:26 pm

        Thanks dear … ??…. You will get to know the reason in next part …. tc

    18. jazzy on March 22, 2017 9:48 pm

      Superbb

    19. Affaa on March 26, 2017 12:06 am

      Haiii yaar I’m hell excited for coming epi…. Please do asap… And this just out of words…..its very interesting lovely… Amazing…

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