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Home»Fan Fiction»Khubsoorat-A fairy tale with a magical world (Kaanchi#Os)
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Khubsoorat-A fairy tale with a magical world (Kaanchi#Os)

NegisanyuktaBy NegisanyuktaMarch 14, 201824 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hiii dearies….How r u all?????This is basically a fairy tale on Kaanchi.In my last os,i asked my lovely commenters for my next writting nd most of the votes were in favour of “Kaala Chashma”.But due to exams i’ll try to post its intro after 16 of this month.

Sorry for grammatical mistakes.Critics nd suggestions r most welcome here.

So let’s start:

Once upon a time there was a kingdom named AHITYAPURAM???.The kingdom was very well known for its beautiness because each citizen of this kingdom wasvmore beautiful than any normal person.There was a royal palace in which king ???lived with his wife(Jaya) nd daughter(Saanchi).The princess???of the kingdom was that much beautifull that the angels of heaven couldn’t compete with her beauty.Even princess was blessed with some magical powers…..if someone forcefully try to touch her he/she will convert into a statue.But she had a disquality of hating ugliness.

One day when princess Saanchi was playing in the garden.Suddenly a bright light beamed nd there appeared an ugly witch(daayan)???The witch was dressed in black colour gown with a magic stick in her hand.
Saanchi:Yeeeeeeeehhhh…go away,u ugly lady.
Witch was fuming in anger ???after hearing ugly word for her.Her eyes become red as burning coals.
Witch(angrily):U r the most beautiful girl i had ever seen.I will kill u nd then ur beauty will be mine.

She starts her haunted laughing.When witch came forward to harm her she herselfly turned into a statue.

In night,???
When Saanchi was sleeping the same witch appeared in her dream nd cursed her that soon her beauty will convert into ugliness.
She opened her eyes nd was badly disturbed by this dream.She decided to forget the dream as tmrrw was a special day for her.

Next day,
The royal palace was decorated with flowers and the whole kingdom was invited for the feast on the occassion of princess Saanchi’s birthday.When everyone was busy in???? enjoying party,the whole hall covered in green smoke nd when the smoke was gone Saanchi’s beautifull face really converts into an ugly one???.Everyone was shocked even Saanchi was sure that it all happened because of that witch’s curse.

With the passage of time,her pride on beauty starts breaking down.There was a time when she was used to spend her most of the time in front of mirror but now she can’t bear a single mirror in her room.???

To break this curse,the god send his one of the messenger in the form of a knight and adventrous prince.The prince was very kind nd benevolent.
(The prince is none other than our Kabeer)

Kabeer who was childhood friend of Saanchi decided to propose her for marriage.
One day when Kaanchi were walking in garden Kabeer kneels down and proposed her.
Kabeer:Will u marry me??
Saanchi(teary eyed):No,i can’t…Kabeer u r my closest friendnd i don’t have any right to spoil ur life.???I don’t want u to suffer just because of my ugliness…..

Before she could say complete her sentence,he placed his hand on her mouth.

Kabeer:Shhhhh…..I really don’t care whether u r beautiful or not because i loved u not ur beauty nd it’s human nature that we admire beauty not ugliness but for me internal beauty matters nd internally u r beautiful.

Saanchi:Thank u Kabeer for teaching me this lesson.

Kabeertook her hand nd kissed it…a wonder happened soon she get her beauty again.Now she was free from witch’s curse.

After this,they married to each other and after one year of marriage the couple was blessed with a girl Kaanchi nd they lived happily.

Guys!!It was my first attempt to write a fairy tale .I know it was totally a crap but thank u for reading this.??
Take care ???

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    24 Comments

    1. Samidha on March 14, 2018 4:06 pm

      Such a lovely os dear with such a nice message that internal beauty is important. Come back soon with another os

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:46 pm

        Thank u dear for commenting.Nd ya i m coming back soon with a new story on Kaanchi.???
        Keep reading nd commenting dear.

    2. Mahin on March 14, 2018 4:47 pm

      it was the cutest fariyyale i ever read…..post soon..

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:48 pm

        Awwwww……thank u so much for such a lovely comment.???
        Love u dear???Keep reading nd commenting .

    3. Mannat77 on March 14, 2018 5:59 pm

      woow….it was too cute…i lvd it…bst of luck for ua xams dea…by…tc…lv uh

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:50 pm

        Thank u dear for ur wishes nd thank u for commenting???It really means a lot to me.
        Luv u tooo dear??

    4. Aafiya on March 14, 2018 7:12 pm

      Superb.. All the best for your exams.. Take care…

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:53 pm

        Thank u dear for commenting nd thank u for ur wishes.???

    5. RuCh23 on March 14, 2018 7:34 pm

      Awww…. cutesy fairy tale ??? good luck for your exams dear, do your best ???

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:54 pm

        Thanks a lot dear for commenting and wishes.
        It really means a lot to me.???
        Love u sweetie.

    6. Anee on March 14, 2018 11:59 pm

      Wowww…so cute and Beautifull Fairy tale Os Dear…..

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:55 pm

        Thank u dear for ur wishes nd thank u for commenting???It really means a lot to me.

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:57 pm

        Thank u dear for commenting.???

    7. vanu on March 15, 2018 1:34 am

      well it was cute

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 12:57 pm

        Thanks dear???

    8. Anu88 on March 15, 2018 10:32 am

      Sanyunkta dear you are rock and amazing dear…….I am just speechless yaar reading this story yaar it’s really superb and amazing and mind blowing and awesome story yaar……..and sorry dear for not helping you ……….love u dear……tc yaar…… please yaar write some other fairy tales i love it so so much

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 1:01 pm

        Itni taarif bhi mat karo …warna chakkar aa jayenge.???Thank u for such a long and lovely comment.
        And no need to say sorry.Take care …luv u loads???

      • Anu88 on March 15, 2018 5:36 pm

        Sach me yaar it’s really so so amazing hae ………pura hum logo ka childhood bala story hae re…..post some other story yaar…….tc dear

    9. swethaa on March 15, 2018 11:41 am

      its sooo beautiful dear

      • Negisanyukta on March 15, 2018 1:02 pm

        Thank u dear for commenting.

    10. Rishika on March 16, 2018 11:11 pm

      Superb os dear. This is the best ever fairytale story I’ve read till now

      • Negisanyukta on March 20, 2018 2:08 pm

        Thank u dear for such a wondeefull comment.
        Keep reading nd commenting dear???
        Love u loads???

    11. Amnaa on March 17, 2018 3:09 am

      Its beautiful

      • Negisanyukta on March 20, 2018 2:09 pm

        Thank u dear for commenting.???

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