Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega ,Jaise main karti hoon- (OS on DevAkshi)

Hi people I’m Rithu
I new in TU I read so many ff, OS and fs by many people I’ve got inspired to write my own OS hope it is good and upto mark if it’s boring sorry for wasting time


The story started with a happy married couple getting into a fight
Dev- Enough is enough Sona u can’t talk nonsense
Sona- Ok Dev…..leave this I’ll tell u a good news
Dev- Get out of my house now
He unknowingly threw her out of the house without knowing she was pregnant. There was no one to take care of her she shifted to a new house with her only daughter Khushi. Sona told khushi all about Dev and showed his picture to her but always lied to her about him. One day while Sona was reading the magazine
Sona- Mr. Dev Dixit married to Natasha Gujral
Next line shocked her even more
Sona- Love marriage !!!
This made Sona’s eyes water and she started crying
Khushi- Mummy what happened why r u crying
Sona wiped her tears
Sona- Nahi kuch nahi howa tum jao khana khao
Khushi- Ok mummy
Khushi leaves
Sona- Inhone dusri shaddi kar liya. Humari beti uska kya hoga unhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ki hamari beti hui hai or woh bhi ”Love” Nahi Dev aisa nahi kar sakte lekin…….

Sona forgot about this till one day(after 3 years)She saw Dev roaming around with Natasha she had Khushi along with her and did not want Dev to see her and turned to leave
Sona- Chalo Khushi
But Khushi stayed back and started crying because she was lost
Khushi- Muma kahan ho aap
Dev goes to her but doesn’t know that she is his daughter
Dev- Kya hua beta mummy kahan hai ro kyun rahe ho aap
Khushi- Nahi pata mein kho gayi
But she recognized him that he was her father
Khushi- Daddy aap yahan lekin mummy…..
Dev didn’t understand
Dev- Beta mein aap ka daddy nahi hoon. Chalo aap ko ghar choddh tha hoon
Dev leaves herhome he rings the bell and is shocked to see Sona over ther
Khushi- Mummy aap kahan thi
First she didn’t see Dev
Sona : Thank u Mr. aapne meri beti ko ghar…..

She gets shocked to see Dev
Sona : U here
Dev gets tears in his eyes
Dev- Sonakshi please meri baat …..
Before he could complete she shut the door on her face
Dev- If I listened to what she said we would be happily married now. Mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ki humari beti hai or mein ne dusri shaddi ki. Mein kitna bada befkoof hoon agar uski baat suni toh yeh saab nahi hota
After some weeks another news Sona saw on the magazine
Sona- ”Mr. Dev Dixit divorced Mrs. Natasha Dixit. Reason : Mr. Dixit found out that Natasha only married him for money and divorced her. ” But y am I feeling bad he did so much to me
After few hours she saw Dev outside her house
Sona- Now y r u here for reminding me what happened 2 years ago. No need
Dev- Sona please listen to me I love u a lot I couldn’t control myself u know how am I please listen
Sona- Y did u listen to me ?
Dev : No it was my mistake u know how am I will u please forgive me
Sona : Ok only for Khushi because she needs u
He hugs her tight
Dev- Thank u thank u thank u so much
Sona- Ok Mr. Dixit don’t scream Khushi is sleeping
Dev : Good come with me
He takes her to a hall beautifully decorated
Sona- What is this Dev
Dev brings a guitar
Dev- Remember this
It was the same guitar that he had gifted her when they were in college
Dev- I still remember it u’ll play our favourite song
Sona- Yeh bhi kuch puch ne ki baat hai of course
She holds his hand tight and she starts singing

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bharti hoon
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Hawa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaki hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chhuke

Meri nigahein hain teri nigahon ki
Tujhe khabar kya bekabar

Main tujhse hi chup chup kar
Teri aankhein padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

Tu jo mujhe aa mila
Sapne hue sarphire
Haathon mein aate nahi
Udte hain lamhein mere

Meri hasi tujhse
Meri khushi tujhse
Tujhe khabar kya beqadar

Jis din tujhko na dekhun
Pagal pagal phirti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

Haa.. Aa..

They both enjoyed the whole night
Sona- Ab pata chala koi nahi hoga jo tumhe pyar karega jaise mein karti hoon
Dev : Han
Sona- Koun
She frowned
Dev- Tum or koun
They both smiled at each other

How was it hope it wasn’t boring and if it was so sorry to waste ur time and please post ur valuable comments to share how it was


  1. Aarti32

    I luvd it as I luv d song..

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u aarti

  2. Manya


    1. Rithu2089

      thank u ayushi


    Nice one dear???

    1. Rithu2089

      thanks u shaheer

  4. Nice DI I luv it posted again OK ….

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u sonakshi

  5. Varsha94

    I loved it.. Great effort..?

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u varsha

  6. Really great…..??????

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u maleeha

  7. Bharti123456

    Amazing Rithu
    Come up with something great??

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u bharti

  8. Awesome

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u princess

  9. Niki645

    If u get the time, do come up with something new!!??????

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u niki
      will surely come up with something

  10. Rockzzzzzz

    Hey this is Pari and i really liked the episode…and yes i loved the song?
    keep posting

  11. Rj12

    Amazing amazing totally amazing rithu ????
    post something good soon

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u rithika

  12. Erina

    Awesome one dear loved it nd I madly love this song yaar ☺☺??. Thnxu for this nd do come with another… Nd sorrrryyyyy for late comment .. ??
    With loads of love

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u erina even I love this song I’ll surely come up with something It’s ok for late comment

  13. Awesomeeeeeee
    Keep it up and post new one plzzz…

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u nikita will surely come up with something new

  14. Amazing! A short and sweet story!
    And, I love this song! #MSDtheUntoldStory
    Do come up with something new!
    And, till we encounter again, take care!<3

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u anshita even I love this song will come up with something new and we’ll surely encounter again

  15. Pinkyangel

    It’s great dear love ot

    1. Rithu2089

      thank u pinky

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