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kartik and manish reunion part-5

sorry guys for beibg so late

Kartik reached the hospital. Anyone help!!! Help please!!! Doctor arrived. What happened?? Kartik: doctor inhe goli lagi hai doctor: oh god…there has been a heavy blood loss. Bring the stretcher fast and take him to the OT. Kartik falls on his knees. Akhilesh and Naira comes there. Naira sees kartik on knees. Akhilesh: kartik bhaisahab kahan hai?? Kartik: unhe operation theatre mei leke gye hai. Nurse arrives. Please do the formalities and deposit some amount so we can start the operation asap. Akhil: come i will do. Naira teary eyed looked towards kartik. Kartik: Dont cry Naira…..nothing will happen to that guy….he is very strong……mujhe pata hai woh mera peecha tab tak nhi chodenge jab tak mujhe acche se pareshan n kar le. They all go and stand out of OT. Kartik peeps through the transparent window…..

the bullet was being removed…then he noticed despite of giving anesthesia manish was murmering something. Then akhilesh gets a call of suwarna. Akhil look towards kartik and naira….they all looked at each other. Finally akhil picked the call. Suwarna: hello devar ji….maine disturb toh nhi kiya na…aap log kisi important meetung mei toh nhi the na. Akhil: Nhi nhi bhabhi boliye na kya baat hai. Suwarna: actually devarji mai manish ji ka phone kabse try kar rhi hun…but wo switch off jaa rha hai…..woh mujhe unse kuch important baat karni hai….kya aap meri unse baat karwadoge. Akhilesh looks towards OT.Naira cries hearing this. Suwarna: Naira bhi aapke saath hai?? Woh ro kyun rhi hai…

kya baat hai devarji boliye na….. Akhilesh: actually bhabhi woh.. suwarna: aap rehn dijiye…aap meri manish ji se baat karvaayi woh hi mujhe sab bataayenge… akhilesh loses his patience: woh baat nhi kar skte…woh ICU mei hai…..Suwarna shocked?. Suwarna: kya..yeh aap kya hol rhe hai devarhi… akhilesh: han bhabhi yeh sach hai… unhe goli lag gyi hai…. and he narrates the entire story. Suwarna cries and falls on her kness. dadi comes there she sees suwarna on the floor Dadi: what happened suwarna?? Suwarna was not able to speak the truth to dadi. Dadi: sach sach bolo kya baat hai. Suwarna: woh….woh….. manish ji…… Dadi: han bolo kya manish…. Suwarna: manish ji ICU mei hai…unhe goli lag gyi…..kartik ko bachane ke liye unhone apna seena bhed diya?. Dadi: hospital chalo jaldi. Luv kush and other fsmily members also listen their talks. Luv & kush: Tai ma aao mat roiye humsre tauji ko kuch nhi hoga….woh toh superman hai.

Tai ma…tauji hai very very strong
Tensions lena hai very very wrong
Pyaare tauji theek ho jaayenge
Luv aur kush ko apne haath se khana khilaayenge ….
Suwarna hugs them. Ab mujhe poora trust ho gya ki aapka tauji bilkul theek ho jaayenge. Luv & kush: ab aap jaiye tai ma.. fatafat se tauji ko leke aaiye…hum aapka wait karenge. They leave for hospital.

Doctor comes out of the OT. Akhilesh: kaise hai woh…woh theek toh ho jaayenge na. Doctor: see there was a heavy blood loss….we need urgently A+ blood but there is bo A+ blood in blood bank due to some issues and other blood bank is very far which will take time…and we dont ahev enough time Kartik(thinks): A+ blood group toh mera hai but his hatred towards manish doesn’t let him speak a word. Akhilesh: kartik tumhara blood group bhi toh A+ hai na. Doctor: dekhiye aap logo ko jo bhi karna hai jaldi kijiye..hunare time bahut kam hai….he needs blood or we will lose him. Everyone turns pale. Kartik: reminisces his moms death and saying time would have saved her. Kartik: wait doctor…i will give blood..my blood group is A+. Doctor: ok.come this side. Kartik goes and give the blood. The family arrives. Dadi:Manish kahan hai. Akhilesh pounts towards the ICU. Dadi sees him through the window all drained in blood. she faints seeing him in auch a condition. Kartik: Dadiii… and he runs towards her..koi paani lao…. akhil gives him a glass of water. He sprinkles it on dadi. Dadi open eyes. Kartik: aap theek toh hai na dadi. Dadi: kituu…yeh kya ho gyaa..mera bacchaa….

kya halat ho gyi uski… suwarna is silently watching towards manish. Naira comes and console her. Naira: kuch nhi hoga unhe…acche insaano ke saath bhagwan kabhi bura nhi karte. Doctor arrives: we have removed the bullet but he as the cullet striked the heart….it was dangerous… abhi kuch nhi kaha jaa skta…..we have to wait for him to come in conscious..till the time he is critical we cannit say anything whether we will be able to save him or not. A cinematic pause.

Precap: not decided yet

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