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#kanchi #OS #the_attack #by_TRISHA

Trisha139By Trisha139August 14, 201748 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hlo guys…I am trisha here … hope u all remember me …
I am here for a new OS specially for the Independence Day…and I will post my ff later on…!

First of all Thankyou so much guys for ur valuable comments … they mean so much to me …

HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY ??

And

HAPPY KRISHAN JANMASHTAMI …

So let’s start….

It was around 6 years after saachi got revealed her identity case and won too as she got proofs against dr Malhotra …and now after 6 years dr Malhotra is still the owner of SDCH but co owner wd jaya mishra….dr saachi helped priya to free from Vikram so he was obliged to her and that’s why he sweared to mend himself…kanchi are married …
Now I won’t disclose further let’s peep into the story …

It was around 5:30 am or so of the morning …

@kapoors residence …

A voice disturbed the whole peaceful room…”goooood mooornninnggg”
She said turning backside coming out of washroom after a little long hairwash nd bath…

Saachi-( making an unbelievable face )- oh god ! These two …Kanchi wake up its ur school ….wake up otherwise I am going to call ur dad…!

Saachi(murmuring to herself)- no doubts he’s also sleeping like kumbhkaran…!

She saw her little angel trying to hide her little laughter …and replying …acting in a sleepy tone ….”mom wake up daad frst…pkka I will wake up then ”

Saachi- fine ! Kabeer ….(shouts)… Kabeer wake up !!

He too acts like sleeping
Kabeer-( acting to be sleepy)- oh saachi u r so khduus let us sleep na frst wake up Kanchi !

Saachi- oh how you both got me into this dharm sankat early morning ….wait I am calling ur teacher and mr Malhotra for u Kabeer …?

Both wake up and sat on the bed asap shouting …”nnnhhhiiiiiiiii”….

Saachi(laughed out loud )- I don’t know why u both always forgot I am ur mom !

Kanchi -(giggling )…hehehhe mmi mother of papa hihihi….

Both saachi and kabeer look at each other wd a “what the wuck happened just now ” face !

Saachi- madam if u r done wd ur tantrums on ur little innocent mummy then pls go and get ready !

Kanchi- oh god maa (patting her head)….u r always behaving like typing moms of serials…try being modern and yes happy Independence Day …to both of u !

Saachi- (giving an unbelievable look)…shaitan !!! Now do fast !

She runs downstairs …
Kabeer was still sitting on the bed ….!

Saachi-(turning towards him)- I don’t think I am going to wait for some sort of muhurat…?

Kabeer- I was going .myself..there was no need of ur tantrums …?

Saachi- yeah I knw how much u were supposed to go ?

Few hrs passed and it was the time for leaving from the house ….
Saachi(shouted)- kaaanncchhii….identity card is on the table ….kabeer ur tie is near almirah….don’t forget ur documents of case no 309…nd…lunch….

Kabeer and kaanchi both shouted…”…and lunch have been prepared …finish that and don’t forget to pray to god …” we know …

Saachi-“not fair u both always pull my leg…”

Kabeer- “of course sweetheart …u tell this almost evryday …”

Kanchi- what ? Mom u never told me ur name is sweetheart ?

Saachi- oh god ! Thts nothing like that…ur dad is a kh…

She founds Kabeer glaring at her…
Saachi- ahm nothing !!

Now she got to found kanchi glaring…

Saachi- glaring is my thing …now don’t give me glares and continue ur work…

All leave for their work …kabeer and saachi dropped her to the school…and left for hospital..

After few hours of working it was almost mid afternoon…
There was a terrorist attack on the whole hospital…there were around 15 men they put the guns on their forehead…diff crews were made in the hall of the hospital..one side were ward boys ,nurses…and others were doctors interns…and one side were veer saachi kabeer garv riya Isha Pragya and some other doctors…

It was Saturday and Kanchi had her half off as it is in mostly schools so she was also with Saachi and kabeer…
When the attack happened kanchi was playing wd dr veer so she was with him…now let’s give terrorists few names…T1 , T2 like this….!

Kabeer (aggressively)- who r u people how dare you …?
He turned towards them and one of them stopped him putting gun on his forehead…
Saachi shouted coming in btw the terrorist nd Kabeer…-“noo don’t kill him…no u can shoot me …u don’t know how khduus he is”

Kabeer- r u mad Saachi this can be dangerous…

Saachi- of course I know…

T1- wait what the hell is happening here stay away otherwise u both r gone !

Saachi- what ! You know what it’s in front of u how khduusly this person is behaving !

Kabeer- oh hlo…do I behave ? Look at you ….u. R becoming sati savitri !

Saachi- I hope u remember how carefree u behaved a little time ago !

Kabeer- this is my life then my wish !

Saachi- what ! your r a father behave responsible !

Kabeer- oh wow ! Look who’s behaving u don’t even know these bullets can be taken out !

T1- what the hell sshhuutt uupp just shut up u both…who u both r to each other that u fight like hell ! And yes bullets can be removed how dumb u r …!

Veer(signing)- oh mr of course pati patni hi honge kya sir ji u couldn’t even guessed this one…

Veer(whispered to kanchi)- vese r they same at home ?

Kanchi- of course mamu! Exactly!

Saachi- veer stop talking !

Kabeer- or be ready for store room !

Veer- look who r talking they themselves can’t stop their talks and sir pls atleast for now stop glaring like this…!

T2- oh hlo (pointing a gun at saachi)- I will blow off her forehead or stop ur nonsense…

Saachi- of course bhaiya look he is saying there bullets can’t be removed !

T2- bhaiya ? And yes bullets can be removed and shot too…!

Kabeer- thts good pls try removing one or two otherwise she will kill me wd her tantrums !

Saachi- what ! My tantrums ! Huh ! They r urs !!

The terrorist tried taking out bullets in this…among all this the young doctors attacked terrorists along wd the help of police…the matter was solved…!

All were safe and went to their places safely after the flag ?? and anthem…..
At night….
@kapoors place-

Kanchi slept downstairs wd kusum…

In kabeers room…

Kabeer- saachi ! Is everything alright ?

S- of course !

K- sure ?

S- oh now don’t act like spying ok !

K- I mean r u normal ! U were behaving little stubborn…!

S- what do u mean by stubborn…u were behaving so weirdly and if u r thinking like I am pregnant or anything else then pls stop I am not going to bear that pain again and as far as my nature is concerned……

Before she could say much he pressed his lips against her…at first the kiss was small…but then it grew bigger and more intense…his gentle touch prickled her skin making kiss even longer…they parted as they felt short of breath…

He picked her in his arms and they turned towards bed…!

The end…!

That was their love hate relationship …

So this was it guys…I know it could have been a little longer but as an os I thought this as perfect…I am too nervous at this time so I really need ur opinions…pls pls give ur comments if u like this …
Regards
Trisha

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    48 Comments

    1. Neha7873 on August 14, 2017 11:33 pm

      It was a nice idea . I liked the way kaanchi nokjhok carried on … how stupid are the terrorists .???

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:44 am

        Thanku neha glad u liked it

    2. Ashnita on August 14, 2017 11:42 pm

      It was amazing superb funny and many more . Luv u sis

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:44 am

        THANKS a lot Di nd lv u too

    3. Kriya agarwal on August 14, 2017 11:42 pm

      Oh trisha this is amazing n perfect os with full emotion love fight n the terrorist attck with cute fight best was bonding btw kanchi kbir

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:45 am

        THanku kriya I am so happy that u liked this one

    4. Abhilasha on August 14, 2017 11:50 pm

      It was so funny…. O god those terrorists must be regretting to capture sdch…. ROFL?????????it was so gud yr….. Loved it!!
      Happy independence day and happy janmashtmi!!

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:46 am

        Thanku and glad u liked it abhilasha

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:46 am

        Happy Independence Day and happy Janamasthami

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:47 am

        SOrry I forgot to wish in frst so need to cmmnt again

    5. Nutts on August 14, 2017 11:51 pm

      Awesome n mind blowing

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:47 am

        Thanku nutts

    6. Divya on August 15, 2017 12:47 am

      Wow Trisha it was awesome update ur ff soon

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:48 am

        Thanku divya nd sure

    7. Swetatitli on August 15, 2017 1:30 am

      Awesome episode yaar ???

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:48 am

        Thanku sweta

    8. anu on August 15, 2017 1:46 am

      Trisha this story is amazing.how can u write those type of os.you are so sweet.sach mae this story is so much amazing??????suvo krishna ostumi and HAPPY INDEPENDENT DAY????

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:48 am

        Thankuuu so much anu for such a sweet comment

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:49 am

        ND same To you deer for both the occassions

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:49 am

        Dear*

    9. Aafia on August 15, 2017 1:58 am

      Nice one
      Waiting for ur ff

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:50 am

        Thanku aafia nd I will be updating the ff shortly

    10. Anee on August 15, 2017 8:27 am

      Happy janmashtmi to you Trishu story was amazing,

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:50 am

        SAme to u anee and thanku

    11. Sneha on August 15, 2017 8:37 am

      Trisha can you please tell me about IG post divya is talking about it is true or just fake spoiler by some one I am a vk fan and I want to know please ? tell me I read your ff they are always amazing

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:54 am

        Sneha frst of all thanku for liking the ff and I don’t know which ig spoiler r u talking abt …if u r saying abt that saachi nd veer will tell truth to each other then I am also not sure abt that dear

    12. Riya on August 15, 2017 8:42 am

      After reading this I felt like awwww..so cute..??as far as sanchi & kabir r concerned, they alwz rock??but iss baat hamari kanchi proved ki woh kisise kum nahi???at first when i read abt the terrorist attack, i felt like..omg nothing wrong should happen..but hamare Trisha ke hote hue kaise kuch bura hoga…in fact it turned out to be a hilarious one???just love u dear for ur amazing ideas and concepts ????
      And a very happy Independence day to u ???

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 11:59 am

        A big thanku to u riya nd same to u sweetie

    13. QVZRQE3M on August 15, 2017 9:23 am

      It was amazing as usual Trisha u nailed it again, last part nd first was best they both r so cute when they fight. Really loved it.

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:23 pm

        Thanku dear

    14. Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 12:03 pm

      Thanku dear

    15. alia on August 15, 2017 12:46 pm

      Amazing dear

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:24 pm

        Thanku

    16. RuCh23 on August 15, 2017 2:55 pm

      Amazing dear ? those terrorists were so stupid if they thought they can win against our Kanchi ?

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:24 pm

        Thanku ruwani

    17. sundari on August 15, 2017 3:04 pm

      nice and funny os ..
      it was really awesome and beautiful
      i love it

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:24 pm

        Thankq

    18. hema69 on August 15, 2017 4:41 pm

      the couple fight is toooo gud trisha

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:25 pm

        Thanku Hema di

    19. alia on August 15, 2017 5:09 pm

      Awesome dear I wanted to write many things in praise for u but was not getting any free time.
      I just wanna say ur are amazing . I love everything things written by u. All ur ff and also ur OS

      It’s amazing dear . OS is mind blowing .
      I always wait for ur update to come.
      I always feel happy when I read ur ff or OS.
      Waiting for another chapter

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:26 pm

        Awww tht is so so sweet of u alia
        I ma honoured to hv a reader like u
        Thanku

      • Trisha139 on August 15, 2017 7:26 pm

        Am*

    20. Nkh on August 15, 2017 8:08 pm

      Trisha ur an amazing writer… words and words wont b able to say how much i like ur work… n hey plz waiting for ur ff… lots of love dear

      • Trisha139 on August 16, 2017 5:11 am

        Thanku nkh

    21. Kachi437 on August 15, 2017 10:36 pm

      Fantastic Yarr Trisha. Mindbogglingly supeeeer comedic. You are such a great writer. No words.
      Happy independence day.

      • Trisha139 on August 16, 2017 5:12 am

        Thanks a lot kachi nd same to u

    22. Neera on August 15, 2017 10:50 pm

      Superb Trisha especially last conversation of kabir and sanchi. happy Independence day and janmashtmi to u

      • Trisha139 on August 16, 2017 5:12 am

        Thanku so much neera nd same to u

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