Hey guys that’s trisha with another Kanchi OS…and I am discontinuing unspoken feelings now there will just be cravings and Kanchi forever ….this os is a little emotional and may be ending can make up throw rotten tomatoes on me ….I am in for that too ??…
Aunthors request ; I already apologise for whatever will happen in this OS…!
Let’s start ….
KABEERs POV ;
“How much time left ?” I asked …
They replied “just 15 minutes sir “…
“Ohk no problem “…. I agreed ….
I was looking around me …at a distance I saw a couple sitting hands in hands with love in their eyes ….that was new ? Really new ? No …but yes may be after so long …this just remind me of her ….my love…my life …my wife ….mrs saachi kapoor…she taught me how to act kindly how to behave a little sweetly with my students …she taught me to get out of my rudeness and look at my normal side …!!
Actually that was not too straight …she was confusing too much confusing at start ….yet she managed to make a special …a very special place in my heart…
I still remember the very first day she bumped into me and already started accusing me instead of accepting her fault …we started with hatred …yes hatred for each other after all she was the first one to speak in front of me … to speak in favour of interns…
We fought every day every time …I never had a word “love” in my heart…but yes with her entry in my life I learned that “hatred” well …yet that was not some sort of evil…we just fought that’s it …that too with love in it…
I knew that later but she always loved me …from the very first day it was just that she preferred her career more…that’s why she never admitted this …
The first time when I felt I had something more than frnds wd her was …when veer tried to flirt with her…I always got irritated …even couldn’t let her go wd that prankster …unknowingly I was always afraid of losing her…
And that time I still remembered how the squad made us confess our love for each other …!
FLASHBACK :
Unknown by saachi veer send his friend to dr kabeer cabin …his name was karan…
Karan- Gm dr kabeer
Kabeer- Gm
Karan- I wanted to meet dr saachi I guess she is ur assistant !
Kabeer- yes but why I hope u know these r working hrs
Karan- oh sorry I forgot to tell u I am her fiance…her mother sent me here to meet her …!
Anger boiled inside dr kabeer ….
Kabeer- oh she’s busy in some conference u can come later !!
Karan – but I thought she told me tht she is free in these hours …
Kabeer( almost yelled)- I told u Na she is busy now leave !!
Saachi entering …..
(She got to know the whole plan from veer )
Karan- oh here u r saachi….u know na I was missing u jaan !!
Sayjng this he tuned to hug her …and kabeer turned more furious..!
Saachi stepped backwards preventing hug !
Kabeer- jaan ?
Karan – yes jaan sweetheart darling !!
His anger reached the peaks he just wanted to have punches on him !
Saachi (whispered to Karan)- don’t overreact or be ready to die !
Kabeer couldn’t control his anger anymore….he just slapped him hard for his words …..
Kabeer-“oh sorry that was some mosquito on ur cheeks ”
And yes don’t u dare call her again …she is my girlfriend …now leave !
Karan – what !
Saachi- (her mouth turned o)
Kabeer- jaan pls close ur mouth !!
Saachi- aann ?
Karan left as he had guessed the heat of the moment otherwise he would have been dead !
Saachi- what was that dr khduus ?
Kabeer-I don’t know
Saachi – what ! Then who knows …I am not ur gf then what was all that !
Kabeer- my wish ! I don’t think I need to tell u!
Saachi- fine I am calling him back u will apologise…
She turned to go …he holds her hand and forced her close to him with a jerk…
Kabeer(slowly) ….he pinned her to the wall…-” I don’t seem the need to apologise”…
“I don’t think I should apologise for confessing whom I love ”
Saying this she placed her lips on his giving a peck….he was shocked my her sudden gesture….she turned all red…this time they leaned into each other and both had a lip lock…
After few hrs….
Veer- congrats dr Kabeer
Kabeer- for what ?
Veer- for getting a gf btw I didn’t knew u r this jealous !
Kabeer- record room is calling u for next one week !
Veer- omg no pls noooo sir !!
Kabeer- leave !!
Saachi entering and veer leaving…
Veer- I am sure u both r going to have a super khduus baby….
Both coughed hard on this !
FLASHBACK END…
Kabeers POV…
A phone call took my focus…
“Yes I am coming wd in 20 minutes”…
This was just the start of our love story…she completed her internship….it was the time near to our mrrg…I didn’t knew what happened to her she started behaving rudely ignoring me…unknowingly she wanted me to hate her…but as there’s a saying
“once u start loving someone it’s impossible to stop”…
And at last she gave in….she always said “if something ever happened to her I shouldn’t cry instead I would remember her and smile…”….Nd I always pouted on her this dialogue….!
That was almost 1 and a half years after our marriage…I got to know she had oral cancer…thts why she was behaving this rude for sometime back…and that too in her last stage…i always regret if I had known this earlier I could have saved her….it was not that she told me…instead she was taking care of kanchi and suddenly felt unconscious…we operated did everything but couldn’t save her…at frst time I was feeling bad even after being a dr but for her wish ….I continued as a doctor…even now whenever I think of moments spent wd her a wide smile takes place on my lips and tears in my eyes…
Tears started to appear in my eyes…
Nd a voice shook me…”sir it’s over”….
“Ohk can I go in “…I asked.
“Yes “…the peon replied…
I turned just to find a little angel running towards me…my sweetheart…our daughter “kanchi”…I picked her in my arms and turned towards the car…
Kanchi- papa why so serious hv some fun mr akdu…chlo give me my chocolate fast…!
“Ohk my majesty there is ur chocolate…”…I said …..she was exactly her shadow…with my attitude….always reminded me of saachi….and now I had a wide smile thinking abt her as she always wanted me to remember her without tears…
We reached home…she ran and hugged her garndma….
I just admired their bond…
A voice took my attention “kya hua mr hitler kha tha na she will never make u feel my absence “…
I turned to find saachi in beautiful white saree…looking wd lovely eyes towards me…!
I replied…”yes but I still miss you”…
Mom interuppted…”kabeer ;beta who r u talking to ?”…
I replied “mom vo s…. nothing maa “….
I turned again to find no one there and smiled like an idiot…who always fell in love thinking abt her…!
so I had completed this one…pls pls drop a cmmnt if u guys like this…and if u don’t like them flying chappals…rotten tomatoes….are welcomed…??
76 Comments
It’s amazing Trisha but saanchi’s oral cancer news was little sad. It was really emotional nd kabeer’s jealousy part was awesome. When r u posting ur ff missing it a lot.
Thanku dear
I am glad u liked it
Oh no I am feeling like crying.
Plz be like ekta and give our Sanchi back
This was too sentimental.
I am touched!!!
I am really sorry for making u cry dear
So emotional.rula diwa hum logo ko.????but bhot acha story hae
Thanku anu
Oh Trisha it was too emotional yaar?.Tears were rolling down from my eyes ??but kaanchi was just like her mother saanchi but anyway ur OS was awesome not words to and update ur ff soon ???
Thanku divya nd I had updated the ff dear
So emotional.pura tula diwa hum logo ????but story bhot acha thake . Pura amazing
Thanku anu
And it was lovely mind blowing no flyingchappies, rotten tomatoes because u r always soo it was awesome ??☺?
?thanku sweetie
It was so ? emotional……………
It was very nice n amazing but it almost made me cry
Sorry for making u cry nd thnks u liked it
Really nice and emotional too
I saw post on instagram in which writer of sdch has written that week saachi will tell truth to veer and veer will tell her truth about dr malhotra.
So their will be no kaanchi scenes???
Thnku divya Patel nd yes I know that ??
What a emotional os Trisha but sanchi should not be dead ?? feeling bad for kabir . U always make me smile but today u made me cry. Love u dear for yr superb writing skill u r truly a best writer.
Thankyou neera tht means so much to me
you are such a good writer hatsoff??????
I know you personaly like kanchi but pls do one os for sanveer fans plsssssss its request pls
Take care and write more awsm os
love ya
I was thinking for this seni….so I will try dear
Nd thnku
Ooo really heart touching,especially the last portion.Trisha dr,dnt make me cry??
Sorry for making u cry mayoori nd thanku
My eyes cried yaar y u gave this much of shock pls take care from next time my thought was if somebody fells in love n they have their huk to live together and enjoy the life so pls take care…
Sure prema I will try mah best
U made me cry trisha…I must say u can able to write heart breaking stories also…Luv u a lot dear
Thanku anandi…love u too sweetie
U always manage to rope in new ideas… but i hv to admit dis one is very emotional.. n a big thumbs up to ur writing… always everyday something new is in store for us… plz continue wit ur os.. its a treat to see kanchi together in sdch and den read ur updates
Thanku nkh this means a lot to me
It’s really nice one like such cute love stories
Thanku
It’s so heart touching. I will not throw shoes at u but I will throw some kisses to u a lovely person
Return kisses from me ???
it was so emotional trishna dear..you made me cry a lot
the way you told about un separable even after death hat off to your concept.
i realy become your crazy fan for os dear
i like it and love it
thank you so much for such nice os
Thanku sundari I am so happy I liked this one …I always wait for ur cmmnt ?
sorry i forget to call you with your title “QUEEN OF OS”
Thts so sweet of you ?
its so emotional but the jealousy part was awsummm
Thanku hema
Really Trisha it was so emotional that my heart was crying reading it. I really very love emotional love storys . I can’t say any word for its ending it was that much emotional. U told real meaning of love. Hats off to u. I too have a story and I m going to post it in 11 Aug episode of sdch in comment box because I m unable to reg. my name in ff. When you get time please read it.
Thanku vrushti but I would suggest u should post in ff after registering …
I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.
Thanku guddooo and sure
I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.
This is really a treat for me to see any of silent readers commenting
I An Silent Reader.But Fistly Commenting Here.Trisha You Are Best Writer.An OS Make Me Cry,so Imotional.Please Keep Writing.Please Write OS On Nowgoing Kanchi Scenes.
I will try ?
It was so emotional that I began to cry but ya trishu dear u never ever disappoint us sso don’t say rotten tomatoes line….. And it was superb.
Thanku abhilasha ….this means a looot
Superb,Emotional and Tremendous shot dear.Who will throw chappals and rotten tomatoes on u dear for such a good update?Keep writing dear.
Thanks a lot bro…thts such a pleasure for me that a writer like u liked it …
trisha ur r too gud tumne to rula hi diya n dear divyapatel jo nws instagram ki bta rhe ho sch h to i really hate sdch n rashmi sharma unhe suru se hi kbir ko na to wiki pe ml dkhana tha n na hi koi single scn dkane the koi umeed dkha kar kyun todi i hate sdch but love u all kanchi ff writter
I agree wd u niyaa…Nd thanku dear
Ohh no Trisha I can’t write kanchi story in sdch episode because it would heart sanveer fan but I really want to write something I tried too hard to register but its error . can you help please?
Yes sure if you can then I will help u in this comment box …you have to register first and is there is an error try finding out that and removing …once u register it will be so easy for u to post…
Sorry its hurt.
No never dear
God Trisha u made me cry this time ???i mean like every time I kept consoling myself it’s just a story, but still yaar..couldn’t control my tears……. ?
it can only be you who can be an amazing writer all the time..luv u a lot sweetie ??
Thanku riya for such a beautiful cmmnt sweetie …luv u too ??
Trisha your ff was amazing please tell me about IG post divya his bare mein kab rahi hai
Thanku u hv to register than u can post