Kanchi OS- I hate you…
Hello guys …Pallavi shah asked for an OS as she scored well in her 10 th and I too had an idea in my mind so I wrote this one …
It was about one and a half year os all the interns in SDCH…
As per saachi- she was simple adorable and a hardworking girl …her main aim was to fulfil her mothers dream…
Now as for dr kabeer… he was mr. Khduus of the hospital…
Saachi always took him as her senior …and so was he… he always considered her just his student …still there was something that always left them wondering ….they were slight more than just being member of SDCH to each other….
It was afternoon…Isha Pragya garv and veer were about to play truth and dare…they skinned the bottle …it turned out to be a different side where saachi was coming ….
Veer- ms. Golgappa please come and plays with us it’s ur turn…
Pragya- haan come na please
Saachi- no way guys I have lots of work to do
Isha- its just till break please
Veer- please saachi Mam
Saachi- ahm ohk just for few minutes ok…
Veer (smirks)-who said she is less than that hitler(in mind)
Veer- so truth or dare…
Isha- of course truth
Veer-she didn’t have courage for dare…
Saachi- shut up veer…I choose dare
Veer- Di you love dr kabeer?
Saachi- no way
Veer- then prove ….your dare is kiss dr kabeer…
Saachi- are you guys mad !!seriously no…
Veer- means you love him!
Saachi- no veer…
Pragya- why is someone turning red here?
Saachi- fumes…
Veer- then as a punishment go and say him”I hate you ” for next 30 days…
Saachi- no thts not fair give any other work…
Veer- ok the kiss him
Saachi- aaammm…ohk I will do the second one….
Next day
In the class…
Kabeer- so guys today I
Am
Going to announce the test results for last weekend …and dr saachi Mishra is not the head intern for this week….
She scored the highest marks and same as dr veer…and dr veer will be the head intern…
And as for dr saachi…prior to her previous performance she will assist me for next 30days….
Saachi was just confused she has to complete her dare ….and at the same time she will be with him
The next 30 days thts not fair…
Veer- so why you thought saachi…
Saachi- I am ready for next 30 days…
Veer- but remember if you missed even one day you have to compete dare second
Saachi- ohk done
Next day …
Early morning …
Saachi- good morning sir ….
Kabeer-good morning
((Veer and the group was looking through the hole)
Saachi- sir I hate you
Kabeer- what !
Saachi- I mean that patient wants to see this movie …
Kabeer- this is hospital not an entertainment room…
Saachi- yes sir …
Kabeer- now leave and start your duties…
Saachi – yes sir …
She turned to go …and hurted her forehead by the door …
Kabeer- I hope you make use of your eyes….
Saachi- how khduus
Kabeer- you or me ?
Saachi- nothing sir…
Day 2 :
Saachi in kabeers cabin- working
She remembered she has to complete her dare…
She took out of her ph and said sir excuse me …
Saachi-(on ph)-I hate you bye
Kabeer became a bit jealous …
Kabeer- was that your boyfriend…
Saachi(coughed)- no sir …
The day passed…
Day 3 :
She was finding it difficult to say him I hate you…
She tried doing the same …calling and then saying “I hate you”
Even he noticed everyday but never said anything …this continued for about 15 days…
Day 16 :
It was late…he was out of his cabin leaving her there to do some written work…
He came back saw her sleeping on her head on the table…
Kabeer- dr saachi r u fine just wake up this is not your hostel…
Saachi-sssh lemme sleep…its sleeping time
Kabeer(shouts)-shut up …
Saachi- (irritatingly) pleassseeee lemmmee sleeeep I hate you …saw today’s challenge completed now gn(in a sleepy tone)
Kabeer tried patting her cheeks …he felt high fever…he felt sorry for his rude behaviour…
He immediately took her to the ward…dripped her…and…took full care for her…
It was the first time she felt his care and he realised whts that special thing btw them….
The night passed…she woke up and saw him around him…
Kabeer- don’t you think you should have taken some rest…
Saachi- seriously dr kabeer…u r such a hitler…ahm I mean strict…
The day passed
Next day in his cabin..ria discussing something with dr kabeer and saachi entered.. ria while leaving gave a jerk to her so that she fell…but much to her surprise…dr kabeer holds her in time….both shared an eye lock…
He was simply admiring her how beautiful she looked with so simplicity…so adorable…
They parted as soon they realised their closeness…
Day by day she was finding it difficult to say “I hate you” because somewhere she realised he is not that khdus anymore…
Around 8 pm
Kabeer-dr saachi don’t you wanna say I hate you today to your secret caller…
Saachi- it’s not that way …he was just my brother…and usually fights with me bcz I didn’t went to meet him
From last three weeks so thts why….(she just let the topic go for that day)
Few days passed…it was aftwenoon a new female patient was admitted..
Kabeer- dr saachi what about her reports…
Saachi- yeah here
Kabeer-how are you feeling now …
Patient- u r so hot …umm I mean I am fine..
Saachi just fumed with anger and he could easily see her jealous face…
Saachi-(to patient)–yes you don’t worry you will be fine …dr kabeer will take your care like an older brother…
Dr kabeer coughed heavily…
Patient- i guess dr kabeer you had a very possessive wife…
This time she coughed …
He holds her hand a took to his cabin…
He locked the door from inside…
Saachi- dr kabeer what are you up to..
He stepped towards her and locked her in btw his arms and wall….kabeer-just ssshh
Was you jealous?
Saachi-no never
Kabeer- are you blushing
Saachi- no
(She turned more red on this)
Kabeer-wouldn’t you say “I hate you” today
Saachi-I …I….
Kabeer- you deserve a punishment for lying about everything saachi…it’s your last day 30th complete your dare!
Saachi- how you…
Kabeer -thts not the topic here! Just say…
He leaned onto her
She closed her eyes..
Saachi- I …I love you dr kabeer…
She didn’t knew what will happen she just can’t say lie that day!
He turned to her ears-complete your second dare then…(he smiled)
That was a fine start to their story…
how do you guys liked this one give ur reviews….
49 Comments
Awesome and superb
Thankq afia
god trisha, u r too good………..its simply osm, loved kanchi scenes a lot……..trisha dear u make us go crazy with ur writings………eagerly waiting for ur next update asap……
I am so
Happy you liked it ria…thanks a lot and yeah sure
Very nice OS ?
Thankyou Neera
Wwooowww…this is the best kaachi os i’ve read…omg…i really loved the last line when kabir said”then complete ur 2nd dare”…?????????????????plzzzz post more os dear…waiting very eagerly….
THANKYOu preetha….so glad you liked it…and sure yr
Really awesome Os.
Thankq
Awesome yaar pls update next episode quick…
THANkyou
Yeah I will do update of ff also
omg os was fab just fell in love with it hope u are going to write more pls do we appreciate ur skills of writing
request pls update next post soon
I am
So happy you liked it shreya …I will try my best dear
awesome amazing mind blowing .
yrr u should have completed the story i mean second dare .but disappointat last .otherwise it was awesome.
yrr plzz write an os where kabir falls in love with sanchi in first sight but sanchi has a boyfriend (but she doesn’t love him) and kabir trying ways to keep sanchi close to him and makings attempts to break sanchi relationship .
plzzz trisha write on this write idea alsoo
First of all thankyou so much alia …but I thought that this ending will be thought based…still sorry for your disappointment…I liked ur idea for OS very much….and will continue soon
Awsm.. Superb.. Mind blowing..fantastic… Words are fail in front of your os…
Glad you liked it richa…this means so much
Wonderful ff.don’t know u come up with such beautiful ideas. But these r just awesome. Keep writing dear ?????
Thanks a lot dear
Nice
Thankyou ashnita
Totally loved it.. And the last line was too good.. And an awesome dare.. Well done veer!!! This time u are not just the queen but the Empress of OS… I want to give u a hug. Pls do one more OS. I know I am too greedy but I just love ur writing.
Thankyou so much ankie …so glad you liked it ….love you
Annie *
I like it plz next episode updated soon plz
Sure
His Trisha . Sorry for not commenting on your previous ff. I am little busy with the counselling. This Os is awesome ?. It showed our khadoos kabir as well as caring kabir. I liked it so much.
Thankyou so much sandhya….this means a lot
os is simply awesome and outstanding .
hoping for part 2..
please post soon
Sure sundari
Shit!! U are just super talented man! ?Os queen really! Amazing os btw?
I am so happy you liked it…love you
Trisha waiting for ur ext update yrr do it fast.
Sure alia
Trisha im not that much disappointed but i think i was expecting something else at the end .like kabeer saying to sanchi so now u complete to ur second dare or i help u like this .
but ur end was also very gud .I really didn’t mean to hurt u .I m sorry if i hurted u unintentionally.
plzz update ur next ff part .and yaa i m wating for u to update an os (idea given by me).
waiting doo fast .
once again sorry if i hurted u
No tht really fine I agree with your opinions ….it didn’t hurted so you need not to be sorry alia …and yeah first I will try to update next let of ff then OS…
Awesome.Loved it yaar.
Thankq
The ending was fab??…loved it!! Where do u get such amazing Ideas??
From support of you guys ?Thankq isha
Good job
Tha kq
Awww
It’s so cute
Awesome
Love it
And of course love u more???
THAnkq and love you too
Seriously trishu… It was a simply sweet story….. Wow……. How u get so amazing ideas….. Keep it up!!!
And plzz I would rqust that write an os where sanchi loves kabir initially bcoz in most kabir first loves sanchi and she takes him a senior…… Just want a modern silly sanchi and kabir to bring her on right path and then falls in love with her… Just a humble request…….. If u r comfortable and have time with u!!
First of all thankyou so much abhilasha …I respect your opinions dear but I have already 2 OS pending with next part of ff and after that I will continue with ur idea ….I guess it would be an TS
Oh god superb. The end was Amaizing
Thankyou