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Home»Fan Fiction»Kanchi #OS #the bday_2 #cravings on the top #by_trisha
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Kanchi #OS #the bday_2 #cravings on the top #by_trisha

Trisha139By Trisha139August 10, 201757 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hlo guys …This is trisha here …I am back after a 24 hr break …I am really sorry for making you guys wait and this is second and last prt of my latest OS- the birthday…

Now it’s…-“cravings on the top”…you guys can take it as another OS or may be continued with first part of previous OS…

First of all a BIG THANKS to all my dear readers friends brothers sisters and well wishers …for their appreciation and wishes….I won’t be able to take their names here as I hv to frst complete this part ….

Keep commenting guys even silent readers too this means a lot to a author ….we guys get satisfaction atleast what they wrote bring a smile on few faces ! ?

KEEP SMILING…ALWAYS ??

Anyways wd out wasting anymore time ( well I know I have wasted your much time ?? ) …let’s persuade to the story ??

….so it was 3 months when kabeer told saachi that she was pregnant …he got to know this from her gynaecologist…(when actually saachi needed to tell this to him )…

Third month of saachi’s pregnancy….!!

With the start of period of pregnancy cravings ,requests ,orders ,and poor kabeer …he was forced to listen this after all his “dharm patni” was pregnant……

It was a usual morning in SDCH…kabeer veer Isha Pragya even Ria all were under the orders of our “to be” mother saachi ! They tolerated her mood swings and cravings most importantly…and specially kabeer ….?

@in the canteen…
Veer( to waiter )- fast ! Quick ! One strawberry ice cream ….

Waiter – sir it will take 5 minutes …!

Pragya shouted from behind -“what 5 minutes ?( shocked)… in these minutes she would demand 1000 new varieties ….so pls arrange fast !!

Kabeer -(shouted from backwards)- “guys”…making a
“Oh god ” type face !!

Veer and pragya understood what he was trying to say ….

Veer – cold coffee ?

Prgya- veg sandwich ?

Veer – jalebis ?

Prgya- hot chocolate ?

Both stood clueless for few seconds …

Kabeer- shahi paneer with sweet sauce and ….

Pragya and veer gave a “what else” look ?

Kabeer- and green mango !

Saying this …he patted his forehead but what could he have done he had to listen to his majesty….

Isha came running from behind …gasping ….she looked up just to find kabeer veer Pragya giving her a “now what” look !

Isha – black cappuccino…!

Veer- oh god why this miss golgappa wakes at this hour of night…!

Waiter- sir it is 12:10 am now can I go …?

Kabeer and all have him a disgusting look…

Kabeer – I guess u should thank god that she didn’t woke u at 3 am !! We were fortunate working late today otherwise we had to roam the whole city !

Ria calls veer – veer saachi is calling you people where r u left…?

Veer- coming little sis !

@in saachis cabin….

Saachi- guys he kicked !!(giving an excited look)

Kabeer – its just 3 months saachi !

Ria- yes saachi ..!

Isha – here is ur cappuccino..!

Saachi- oh it came now ?

Veer- u know what saachi I am dammn sure ur beta or beti will be exactly khduus like u !

Saachi-(starts melodrama)- oh god !( keeping her hand on forehead)… where I am today…..look My husbands first wife is pregnant and they people don’t care at all !

Kabeer- what do u mean by first wife ? I am a person not a….whtever !

Saachi- huh who knows when will u marry someone else…!

He just patted his forehead and all left for their places…after all what else he could have done …this was from last two months and will be for next 6 months …??…(pity on our Kabeer)

So after two days during break time….

Saachi- oh god ! You know jaan these irritating patients they just argue over everything…!

Kabeer- it’s ok baby…u r a dr nd u hv to face this !

Saachi- oh wow ! Here ur wife is pregnant nd u r taking that side…

Kabeer- I said what was right and there is nothing in this to get sad !

Saachi- acha suno Na get me that hot chocolate pls pls …

Kabeer- what ! You just had coke !

Saachi- wow now u r too arguing what is left here all always blame me oh god (drama queen)…u know what green mangoes are tastier than yellow…

Kabeer- oh god….!!

Always arguments arguments and arguments…and case always wins to saachi’s side…

Once again some arguments…

Saachi- suno Na mr hubby …pls take me to that hill cliff where u proposed me …

Kabeer- it’s ok I will show that view here in 3D…

Saachi- no no no …I will go there today only…

Kabeer- Saachi its fine upto mood swings and cravings …it’s never about places dear…!!

Saachi- huh ! I am craving for that ! How would u know …have u ever been pregnant…! Khdus !

Kabeer- devi ji…pranam ??????

Authors note; if u guys want I will try to write an ss after few days on these cravings…but for now as this is an OS I have to end this soon ! Pls tell me ur views on this…!

After 5 months and 24 days ;

Her labor pain started…. she in the stretcher running towards OT….

Saachi- oh help ! Mother father uncle aunty maasi mausa… Indian people…single wife’s…craving women…

Saachi : Kabeer , I’m in pain, tell that doctor to give me any painkiller. I can’t handle it any more. I feel weak. Promise me if anything happens to me, never ever get married again!! Don’t give our baby a stepmother. Please, promise me!! Please….

Kabeer- relax saachi …this is normal !

Saachi- normal ? Oh god never… u know what I am going to kill u dr….this is hurting…and kabeer you too …u shouldn’t have marrd me…I never want to get pregnant again…

After delivery….

Saachi- Kabeer ; girl or boy?

Kabeer- girl !

Saachi- she have long hairs right !

Kabeer- oh god she’s just born Saachi !

After few hrs;

Veer- thnkgod sir now we will sleep peacefully nd specially u !

Saachi- huh ! Wht do u mean guys I was not that stubborn…yes I agree I was quite picky but it’s ok !

Kabeer- picky you were….

But he stopped…even after ending of pregnancy she was still that stubborn Saachi…who would have the guts to take “panga” again…!

Saachi- Pragya pls get me a …

All looked shocked towards her and shouted …” hot chocolate?”

Saachi burst out laughing looking at their tensed faces..!

So ”this was it guys…next will be next part of kanchi forever…!
Keep commenting
Regards
Trisha

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    Hates chocolates....loves writing...reading....travel (sometimes) Singing ?...Not My cup of tea ! In love wd myself ❤️?❣️?????????

    57 Comments

    1. Tisha on August 11, 2017 12:13 am

      Nice One….. please kaanchi forever post kardo na aaj… please..?

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:46 am

        Thanku tisha and sure dear

    2. Premamohan on August 11, 2017 12:18 am

      Awesome Dr u r the real Queen of is…

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:46 am

        Thanks a lot prema

    3. Vrushti on August 11, 2017 12:19 am

      Ooh god! Trisha u can’t even imagine how much I was waiting for your is or ff. My day doesn’t go without reading your is or ff. Wow Yarr it was funny and superb os .& again one thing,sorry dear my name is vrushti not vrushi but if u like calling me vrushi you can.

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:47 am

        Thankyou vrushti and sorry I didn’t saw clearly so I wrote vrushy before…

    4. Vrushti on August 11, 2017 12:21 am

      It is alway typed is in place of os

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:48 am

        Its absolutely fine dear …the thing is u must like the OS else don’t matter

    5. RANdomfANCreationz on August 11, 2017 12:47 am

      This os is ????????? oh god yeh Saanchi Ko Kya hogaya I can never imagine her like this ???? yeah to riya Se Bhi ziddi nikli ???
      Poor kabir and haha veer and pragya too ???? , this os is really funny loved it a lot ❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:48 am

        Hehe ? right …! Thankyou randomfancreations

    6. anu on August 11, 2017 12:54 am

      So nice yaar

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:49 am

        ThNkq anu

    7. Riya on August 11, 2017 1:16 am

      Trisha Trisha Trisha…. I can’t control my laughter at all while reading this ????????? oh my God ??????? I feel pity on u guys…kabir, veer, isha, pragya & ria????? every single line..i mean what to say…everytime it felt like I’m watching(aah..reading in fact)a comedy movie ???u really hv a very good sense of humour & its highly appreciable ???luv u a lot dear ??

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:50 am

        Thankyou so much riya…glad u liked it dear

    8. Tisha123 on August 11, 2017 1:35 am

      Please post ur ff kaanchi forever

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:50 am

        Yes sure Tisha I will post it today

    9. niyaa on August 11, 2017 1:54 am

      Amazing trisha lgta h sanchi n apne pregnant hone ka sara badla kabir se l liya h u r 2 gud m chahti hun tum dear aage bhi iska part likho kaise sanchi or unka baby kabir ki raton ki neend kharab krte h maa k sath beti ki bhi farmishein puri krta khadus kumar awww lovely meri taraf se tumein ek juppyyy n pyari si kissi

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:51 am

        Hihi ??thanku niyaa for jhppii nd kisses
        Meri trf se return kisses …thanku niyaa nd yeah I will do that after ff nd another ff ?

      • riya on August 11, 2017 10:00 am

        i totally agree with u niyaa……… would be really a treat to read this…….normally every update ends up with hero-heroine ka milan, we want something more…….. now kaise kabir maa beti ke tantrums sehta hai……..it’ll be amazing episode……….plz trisha dear, one update based on this also………..luv u dear……….

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:10 pm

        Sure riya I will try mah best

    10. Neera on August 11, 2017 4:01 am

      Fabulous dear u nailed it again

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:52 am

        Thankyou neera

    11. Vasundhara on August 11, 2017 4:35 am

      Poor people especially kabeer…. It is tooooo funny….I loved it… Eagerly waiting for ur next post

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:52 am

        Thanks a lot vasundhara I am glad u liked it

    12. Alia on August 11, 2017 5:06 am

      Ooohhh my God its amazing Sanchi sweet little revenge . Amazing part kabir girl or boy. Kabir_girl and Sanchi saying she have long hairs natural it was mind blowing .and her drama during her labor pain was awesome .
      Dear how u get such ideas. It something incredible ure amazing .
      And yaad my favorite writer too.

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:53 am

        Thankyou alia for such a wonderful comment …I always wait for few comments nd u r one of them sweetie…

    13. Divya on August 11, 2017 5:11 am

      Awesome Trisha this so funny can’t control my laughter super Trisha. And ur ff soon take care

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:53 am

        Thankyou divya nd yes ff will be posted ni today I hope …

    14. Ashnita on August 11, 2017 7:40 am

      Awesome superb mindblowing

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:54 am

        Glen u liked it dear

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 8:54 am

        GLad*

    15. Divyapatel2198 on August 11, 2017 9:34 am

      Hii Trisha
      I am silent Reader of your fanfic and os….i love what you write. you are amazing writer
      This os is really very funny and it is superb I can’t stop laughing

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:12 pm

        Thanku divya Patel its good to see you commenting here dear

    16. Amnaa on August 11, 2017 9:48 am

      You possess amazimg writing skills it was fantastic continue it when u have time

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:12 pm

        Thanku amnaa and yep sure dear

    17. Richa1496 on August 11, 2017 10:43 am

      OMG… Can’t stop laughing??…. This os is very funny…. What happened to our dear sanchi… Seriously couldn’t imagine her lilke this… And I know we’re our imagination stops, Yours start… Seriously os was superb and mindblowing… Loved it a lot ?

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:13 pm

        Thanku rich and for ur beautiful cmmnt this means a lot dear

    18. Anee on August 11, 2017 10:46 am

      Ohh Trishu Again i tell u.u r amazing dear.And it was super duper amazing.

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:13 pm

        Aww I ma so gla u liked it anee

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:14 pm

        Am*

    19. AnahitaAnnie on August 11, 2017 11:51 am

      OMG Trish… Thats so cute.. Especially when the squad went to the cafeteria.. Poor Kabir he has to take so much trouble to met up with saanchi’s craving.. And the step-mom dialogue.. U surely got me on that one.. Though my mood was off today becoz I got in an argument with my brother but ur OS totally made me jump out of bed and bro even apologised.. So, I am good. Anyways, u are one of the best OS writers in TU. A big cheers for our queen and the bday girl… Love u loads..❤? btw, can I call u Trish?

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:15 pm

        Thankyou annie…thts so sweet of you …it’s a BIG pleasure for from me to get such appreciation from a writer like u …and yes sure u can call me whtever u like

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:15 pm

        Nd Love u too sweetie

    20. QVZRQE3M on August 11, 2017 11:59 am

      Seriously Trisha it’s amazing nd saanchi’s scene were funny means she suddenly just changed it was the best part, loved it a lot ur writing is mind blowing.

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:16 pm

        THankyou dear I amna so so happy u liked it

    21. sundari on August 11, 2017 12:04 pm

      trishna this os is simply awesome and so funny.
      I keep on laughing after reading this os
      no words to say trishna my dear you rock it
      as usual “Queen of OS” . iam waiting for next super os from u

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 12:17 pm

        Thankyou sundari …your words means so much to me dear…thnku for the title sweetie nd sure

    22. SIYA on August 11, 2017 12:51 pm

      it was fun seeing them rush everywhere….really liked it……poor kabeer he had to tolerate a lot…….it was really funny……i had a hearty laugh……..

      i read all ur ff and os……but could not comment as i was busy with my exams……but now they got over

      plzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part of ur ff as soon as possible……i m a very impatient person…….cant wait any longer…….really very curios

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 1:58 pm

        Siya thnku so much for this dear and I have submitted next part of ff …it will be posted soon

    23. RuCh23 on August 11, 2017 1:38 pm

      ???? no words to say Trisha dear. Simply AMAZING. loved how pregnancy changed Sanchi’s personality and the way Kabir and the gang had to tolerate her. Loved it yaar ??

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 2:00 pm

        Thanku ruwani …I am glad u liked it

    24. Swetatitli on August 11, 2017 4:03 pm

      It was really very funny. It was awesome ???

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 4:30 pm

        Thankq

    25. Nutts on August 11, 2017 4:30 pm

      Its mindblowing and do write an ff related to this in detail and with some more twists

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 4:53 pm

        Sure nutts ..!

    26. Abhilasha on August 11, 2017 4:52 pm

      This was really funny…. I m laughing and laughing….. O god my mouth is aching….. Really well trishu!!

      • Trisha139 on August 11, 2017 9:21 pm

        Thanku

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