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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»Kahin Teri khamoshiyan Jeet Na Jaaye Pyaar Se – episode-6
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Kahin Teri khamoshiyan Jeet Na Jaaye Pyaar Se – episode-6

WeirdSisterBy WeirdSisterJune 28, 201625 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hi pplthnx for all d comments…..plz silent readers…comment…so here is epi 6..hope u will like it..

A week has passed….Shravan is busy wid his cases…nd Suman is also busy wid her work….

Shravan is in his cabin…at his office…he is studying a case…when suddenly his office intercom rings…
Lady: Sir there is a lady who is here to c u…shall I send her inside…?
Shravan thinks…who must be there..
Lady: Sir?
Shravan: Oh yaah…send her inside…

After some time d door of d shravan’s cabin opens….Shravan looks up to c and is surprised to find Suman standing there…with a bag in her hand…she is looking stunning in yellow crop top and black jeans….she has her hair tied in a loose side plait….nd is wearing a very pretty pendant in her neck…..
Suman: Surprise..surprise surprise…..
She says wid a smile on her face….Shravan is also very happy to c her…
Shravan: Suman u nd here…everything is fine na?
Suman: Y..shall we meet only when everything is not fine?
Shravan: Oho..nothing like that..its just that u surprised me by coming here… By d way..how did u get my office address..?
Suman: Don’t forget..I m a lawyer…its my work to find out d things which r hidden….
Shravan: OK OK… I get it…but still there must be some reason…to which I owe d visit…
Suman: umm…yes there is….
She takes out a tiffin from her bag….
Suman: Actually I love cooking….nd today I tried making some continental food…nd I don’t hve much friends so I thought to ask u to taste it….nd tell me how is it…
Shravan: We just had our lunch break..
Suman gets sad…she starts packing d food back…
Shravan: Arre…wait..we had our lunch break..but I didn’t eat anything as I was busy wid my work…so now..plz arrange d food fast…I m feeling very hungry…!!
Suman’s lips curl into a smile upon hearing this…
Suman: Of course… Just a minute…
They both start having their lunch together…

Shravan: Suman…r u sure u made this?
Suman frowns at him…
Suman: Of course I did…y r u asking so?
Shravan: Actually… D food is so tasty.. It seems like a world class chef has personally prepared this…
Shravan smiles at Suman…Suman gets super happy upon hearing this…
Suman: Really? U really liked it…u r not lying no?
Shravan: I think u don’t remember our first encounter….I never support lies..
Suman: M so glad u liked it…
Shravan: Now listen…U brought such yummy food for me…so I should also do something for u in return…
Suman interrupts him…
Suman: I didn’t do all this to get something in return..
Shravan: arre I didn’t mean to say that..I know how selfless u r..u will not even think before giving ur life for someone… But y do u always forget to c my point of view…I want to give u something in return..nd as a good friend u will not argue about it…
Suman: U never leave something for me to argue abt…don’t worry.. I will pay u back..when we meet again in d court…
Shravan smiles and says: Surely u will…but for now…I want to u to go home..nd meet me at night for dinner….I will text you d address… Nd yaah u r supposed to wear a saree..actually d dress code there is formal…
Suman: Shravan! I m telling u no need to do all this…and what’s d hurry…I m not dying today night…
Shravan interrupts her….: Hey..y do u always talk abt dying…plz think abt me too..if u die… Who will make such tasty food…nd if u die…there will be no one to defeat me at court…then I will become d best…nd then d country will give me an award for my excellence…nd i will become d hero of d nation
Suman: Oh stop dreaming…I m still alive…I will meet u at night…..now bye…!
Suman turns to go…when Shravan calls out to her
Shravan: Hey Suman…
Suman looks behind…: what?
Shravan: will u be able to wear a saree?.. I mean u don’t look so girly type to me..
Shravan said so teasingly….Suman replies angrily…
Suman: Now u wait and watch…ppl won’t be able to take their eyes off me…u better be dressed nicely…otherwise u won’t look of my standard….nd ppl will think of u as my bodyguard..anyway ur figure is also like one….
Suman says this and goes….Shravan is laughing alone in his cabin and thinks..
Shravan: Oh my gosh…this girl…

Its night… Suman is ready and waiting for Shravan to come…nd then suddenly d doorbell rings….Suman goes to open d door…she opens it and finds Shravan standing there…he was looking so smart in d formal attire…he was wearing white shirt.. Black pant nd black blazer….meanwhile Shravan just can’t identity Suman…she is looking gorgeous in a dark blue saree…she has tied her hair in loose bun…nd some strands of her hair r coming down from both sides…she has applied minimum makeup…but is still looking so beautiful….her dark eyes r highlighting her beauty…nd her pink lips r curled into a beautiful smile….
Suman: Hi…I must say u r not looking that bad…..
Shravan: And u r looking gorgeous my lady….for a moment I couldn’t identify…that u r same Suman kashyap…who I met in d court
Suman: C I told u…u won’t be able to take ur eyes off me…now let’s go we r getting late….
Shravan: Oh yes we r ….
They both sit in shravan’s car….nd reach a very beautiful place…
Suman: Hey Shravan.. I didn’t know ur choice could be so good…this place is so beautiful…if u ever bring ur girlfriend here..she will definetly fall for u…
Shravan stares at Suman when she says this….
Suman: Ohho sorry…now please don’t become d angry young man…keep ur mood good..we r here to enjoy…com’on…give me a cute smile of urs….
Shravan smiles at her cutely….
Suman: Yaah…that’s like u….now let’s go
They both go to d reception….
Receptionist: Hello sir…hello mam…how can I help u
Shravan: I booked a table for two….
Receptionist: may I hve ur name sir…
Shravan: Shravan Malhotra
Receptionist: Just a minute sir….
She searches in her computer
Receptionist: Yes sir…come..let me show u ur table…
She leads them to their table…meanwhile everyone kept staring and Suman and Shravan in awe….coz both of them were looking adorable together….finally they reach their table….Shravan pulls d chair for Suman…she gets seated…nd he also takes his place opposite to her….

Shravan: So shall we order?
Suman: Yaah…I m feeling very hungry….
Shravan: U order..ur choice is good in case of food…
Suman: R u sure…I mean…like u don’t want to order anything on ur own?
Shravan: No..I trust u…hopefully ur choice would be good…hopefully…
Suman frowns at him…
Suman: Wat do u mean hopefully…my choice is always good…
Suman surveys d menu card..while Shravan waits for her patiently….
Suman: Hey shall we order this…this sounds good…
Shravan: Sounds good…we r here to eat food..not listen to it…don’t judge a food by its name…
Suman: Arre…I was just suggesting…
Shravan: Actually I hve a very bad experience regarding this…once I was at a restaurant….I read a dish’s name.. It sounded amazing..so I ordered it..nd when it came..it was nothing less than shit…I m sorry to use d word…but literally…only I know how I survived on that night after eating that food…
Shravan heaves a sigh….
Suman: Ok ok I get it..stop scaring me…I will order something simple…
They order their food….
When they hve finished their food..they order their desserts….when suddenly…some musicians come… Nd start playing violin…nd a waiter comes wid a tray wid two glasses of champagne for them….
Waiter: This one is for u my gorgeous lady….nd this is one is for u sir…
He serves them d glasses…

Suman: Wow shravan…u did all this…I must say u r just so good at planning….
Shravan wanted to say that he had no idea about wat was happening but before he could do so…Suman started drinking champagne….and when she finished..she found a ring at d bottom…she takes it out and looks at shravan quizzically…
Suman: Shravan what is all this!… I thought we were just friends….u planned this dinner for this….
She keeps on speaking…..nd does not let Shravan speak…finally Shravan speaks..
Shravan: Oh…keep quiet…will u plz listen….I didn’t do all this…I was going to tell u when it all started…but u…u r r so greedy… U behaved as if u hve never tasted champagne in ur life…nd gulped it all in one go…who does this…
Suman looks embarrassed….
Suman: Arre its nothing like that…I was just excited…this music nd all….how dare u call me greedy…u could hve stopped me ….u do not hve such a feeble voice…u could hve shouted like u did now ..
Suman turns her face away from shravan…
Shravan: Oh sorry…I didn’t mean that…sorry Suman…now let’s not spoil our own moods and find out how did all this happened…
Suman: Hmm
Till now d music has stopped….
Shravan talks to waiter….
Shravan: Excuse me….but wat is all this..we didn’t plan this…so.?
Waiter: Sir but we were told that…
Somebody comes and interrupts him..
Man: Oh I planned all this for my girlfriend…I wanted to propose her in this way…but u spoilt everything….now wat will I do….!
Waiter: I m extremely sorry sir…I got confused between ur tables ..don’t worry we will do all this again…
Waiter looked extremely sorry….
Suman: Here is ur ring…I must say u r so romantic…!
Man smiles and takes d ring and gives it to d waiter….
Shravan and Suman r on their way back to home….
Suman: Oh my god…wat a day it was….so much happened…
Shravan: Yaah…it did…anyway we enjoyed nd that’s wat matters d most….

Both think in their minds….: I dont know y…but I cherish those moments spent wid u…its like these memories will always be there in my heart ..till it beats…I hve never been so happy wid anyone..then y u….is it because u r like me…no..we r different…so y? I think its because…opposites attract…Bcoz we r different…we complete each other…we r walking on different paths…but I think they were always meant to intersect….we were always meant to meet….

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WeirdSister

    I love writing ..I love the swirl and swing of words as they tangle with human emotions....

    25 Comments

    1. angel_pari on June 28, 2016 4:14 pm

      ws u r amazing yar loved loved loved it

      plzzzz post next soon

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 4:40 pm

        Thanx angel!!

    2. sumo on June 28, 2016 4:28 pm

      so… u again rocked it… damn! could u tell me wat do u eat for dinner? how r u so strong wid d dialogue part dude!!! well go on.. I loved it..???

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 4:40 pm

        Haha..thanx a lot sumo!!

    3. lovely lady on June 28, 2016 4:33 pm

      I reallyyyy loved the story…..
      So much romantic…. the dinnr was sooo tasty 😉
      Post nxt prt soonnnn

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 4:53 pm

        Thnx lovely lady….I will definetly try to…
        🙂

    4. Shiny on June 28, 2016 4:52 pm

      Nice n sweet…loved it…keep writing

    5. WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 4:58 pm

      Thanx shiny…
      🙂

    6. Perry on June 28, 2016 5:00 pm

      It was amazinggggg yr ? … plzzzz post next part soon …. ??

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 5:10 pm

        Thnx perry..will try to post as soon as possible!!

    7. sona on June 28, 2016 5:23 pm

      Hey…sis…(sori weird sister become long..so I called u sis)?
      U wrote fantastic…loved it..and its ssssooo..nice..and Y there is no precap..is there any suspense .?
      Keep writing..like this..dear
      @lovly..sumo..angel..
      I don’t think guys..u r less than her..mind wt u said for u also..as u r also..amazing writers☺?????

    8. WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 5:32 pm

      Thnx sona…Yaah I guess for d suspense..??

    9. Lily on June 28, 2016 6:48 pm

      Nice episode….

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 7:09 pm

        Thnx lily..

    10. maria on June 28, 2016 6:54 pm

      Yr u r a wonderful writer dear!! 🙂 🙂
      It was just awese ! Evrything was mindblowing!! ……… loved it…
      Post nxt 1 soon!! 😀
      Lots of luv!

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 7:09 pm

        Thnx a lot..luv u too

    11. YASH on June 28, 2016 7:03 pm

      I THINK U MAY BECOME A GREAT SCRIPT WRITER U MAY ALSO GET A CHANGE TO WORK WITH EKTA KAPOOR
      U ROCK WS

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 7:10 pm

        Thnx Yash…that was a great compliment..

    12. Nikita on June 28, 2016 7:09 pm

      It is amazing.. You write very well.. Post soon..:)

      • WeirdSister on June 28, 2016 8:14 pm

        Thank you so much sweetheart..will definetly try to..!! <3

    13. Anamika on June 28, 2016 11:22 pm

      Something different and son… very nice ws
      It feel gud to read ur f2f…

      • Anamika on June 28, 2016 11:57 pm

        Osm* not son…. this auto correct problem…?

      • WeirdSister on June 29, 2016 8:07 am

        Thnx a lot anamika!!

    14. Naina on June 28, 2016 11:43 pm

      OMG…..u r a really good writer ??????…..i dont know how to express my feeling but i really really liked it infact i loved it u were awesome too good epi…..i was just smiling all the time while reading it……plz continue like this…..????????

      • WeirdSister on June 29, 2016 8:07 am

        Thank you naina…m glad u liked it..!
        🙂

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