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Home»Sony TV»Ek Duje Ke Vaste»Kahin Teri khamoshiyan Jeet Na Jaaye Pyaar Se – episode-5
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Kahin Teri khamoshiyan Jeet Na Jaaye Pyaar Se – episode-5

WeirdSisterBy WeirdSisterJune 25, 201616 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello ppl…I m back wid epi 5..sry for being a bit late…I was busy wid school work….hope u like it…plz comment

Shravan is at his house…. He is standing near d window… Nd looking at d moon…which is shining beautifully amongst d darkness….he is thinking about Suman…
Shravan: Just like this moon….Suman is also shining beautifully amongst this darkness that surrounds my life…whenever I c her… I don’t know y..she makes me forget every bad thing that ever happened to me…I m alive but she brings out d life in me….I don’t know y do I feel that I hve a connection wid her…there r so many whys but no answers….

Suman is also standing near her window nd looking at d moon…she has tears in her eyes as she remembers her mother…
A flashback is shown….
Little Suman is sitting wid her mom near d window at night and her mom is applying oil to her hair….
Suman: Mom…this moon is so beautiful…isn’t it?
Priya (suman’s mom): Yes it is dear….but its not just its appearance that makes it look beautiful…its d darkness that surrounds it that makes it look so illuminating….in this endless sky…it still stands out…bcoz it seems like a light of hope…so my doll..always remember …that if there is darkness surrounding u..don’t get sad or worried… be happy that life is giving u an opportunity to shine like d moon….to spread ur beauty…to spread ur light…
Suman is listening to her mother very carefully and is smiling…
Flashback ends…
Tears roll down Suman’s cheeks….
Suman looks towards d sky and says
Suman: U know mom…after u nd dad left me…I felt so alone …so alone….then as time passed by I got used to d silence… To d never ending pain…I never thought that I would get d care which u gave me….but I don’t know y when I m around Shravan ….he fills in that silence..even when he isn’t speaking…I don’t y..even his presence makes me feel complete….

Both Shravan and Suman go to sleep thinking about each other….

Next morning… Shravan wakes up…nd gets ready…he is looking damn handsome in blue jeans…black shirt nd white blazer…his hair is looking perfect as ever…he stands in front of d mirror nd moves his hand through his hair…he has to go to work but.. But before that he knows he has to go somewhere else….

Suman is at her house…she has just come out after bathing…her hair is wet…nd coming down till her shoulders…her dark eyes are matching perfectly wid her black outfit…she combs her hair….nd lets it down…her face is glowing in d morning beauty…she changes her bandages…but they r in no way letting her glow get less..she is about to go in d kitchen to make coffee but just then her doorbell rings…she wonders who it could be so early in d morning…

She opens d door and is surprised to c Shravan standing there ..wid a very cute smile on his face….
Meanwhile Shravan is just mesmerised by suman’s beauty….he is just staring in her dark eyes…
Suddenly he is interrupted in his thoughts by Suman…
Suman: Shravan?
Shravan: Yes Suman…
Suman: What r u doing here so early in d morning….? Is everything alright?
Shravan: Yaah yaah..actually
I had some important work from u…
Suman: What important work?
Shravan: I came here to marry u….
Suman: What….!!!…What did u say…?!
Suman is just shocked hearing this…
Shravan: Ohho…just joking…u just kept asking questions…so I thought….to just tease u a bit..
He makes a very cute naughty face…
Suman: Oh god Shravan…u just scared d hell out of me…
Shravan: U want to talk about everything here only or u will call ur friend inside also…
Suman: Oh yaah..I totally forgot about it…plz come inside….

Shravan gets seated on d sofa…
Shravan: I forgot to ask u only…how r ur wounds …all ok na..did u change ur bandages…. R u having any problem…we can go to d doctor…
Suman: Ohhhooo…stop…u r just firing questions at me ….at least give me a chance to counter attack u wid my answers…
Her lips curl into a beautiful smile as she says this…
Suman: I m fine Shravan…no need to worry..I changed my bandages just now…nd I m having absolutely no problem….
Shravan heaves a sigh of relief….
Suman: Would u like to have anything…? I m going to make coffee for myself…
Shravan: OK then make coffee for me too…I will wait…
Suman goes into d kitchen…meanwhile Shravan just roams around in d hall…
After 5 minutes Suman comes back wid two mugs of coffee in her hand…nd gets seated on d sofa…Shravan also takes his place…

Suman: So now will u tell me…what important work u had from me…that u couldn’t wait nd came so early at my house….
Shravan: Is it like…I can meet u only if I hve work… I can’t come just to meet u as a normal friend does…
Suman: Oh..shravan.. U r so emotional u know..u get hurt on small small things….I just asked bcoz u urself told so at d door…
Shravan: ok…actually I want u to come wid me to d police station…I know u r not in very good condition..but I will be there wid u…
He smiles…
Suman: That I know…but y do we hve to go there?
Shravan: I want u to help d police trace those goons who attacked u nd Jia…u can just help in making their sketches…
Suman: Shravan…u r still fixed on that….I m fine…
Shravan: Its not just abt u or Jia…its abt..as u say…watching d crime nd staying silent….nd I don’t think so that u wanna become a part of it… so get ready…I m here to pick u up…
Suman: Now I know y u r so good at law…u just know how to tap a person in his or her own words…anyway..I m ready…but let me take my things…just a sec I will come
Shravan waits for 5 mins nd then Suman comes wid her bag…she has tied her hair back loose pony….
They both sit in d car…nd reach d police station….
Inspector: So u r that girl who helped to bring d witness that day..I must say u r very brave..very few ppl hve d courage to do wat u did….
Suman: Thank you so much sir…but it was my duty to do so…
Inspector: OK then..let’s get to work…
Both Shravan nd Suman move wid d inspector… A sketch artist is waiting for them wid his materials ready…
Inspector: OK sir nd mam…now I will take ur leave…mam …u plz describe their features as accurately u can…if u need anything….I m at my table…

After a long time..d sketches r ready…
Suman: Yes…these r those goons…
Suman nd Shravan come outside…
Suman: Shravan I just spoilt ur half day…u should hve gone to work… I would hve managed…
Shravan: Yes Ms. Kashyap I know very well how well u would hve managed….now get in d car…I will drop u back at ur house…
Suman: Yes Your Honour..
They both laugh at this….

They reach suman’s house in few minutes…
Shravan: OK Suman…bye..meet u soon
Suman: What u r going…come inside no…
Shravan: Just few minutes ago u were lecturing me abt going on work… Nd now u want me to come inside…what kind of lawyer r u…u can’t even take a stand…
Shravan makes faces at her teasingly…
Suman: Yaah yaah I get it…don’t try to teach me…now go..u r getting late…
Shravan: Sure?
Suman: Yaah…go..she pushes Shravan…
Shravan starts going..nd then looks being and waves his hand towards Suman…who waves him back…..

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    16 Comments

    1. sona on June 25, 2016 11:58 am

      Ufff…really..after a long time..but..its OK..get happy..after reading this…☺
      But..☺
      Pls..pls..post the next ff..ASAP…weirdsister
      As u knw..increasing ff’s can give u a tough..for you..OK..
      Keep it on.
      .ff is perfect..at all..??☺?

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 3:20 pm

        Thanks a lot sona…will try to post soon:-)

    2. angel_pari on June 25, 2016 12:42 pm

      its was good yar i like moon wala part most 🙂 i got such a nyc feeling while reading that.,,,,, 🙂

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 3:21 pm

        Thank you angel..its my favourite part too…:-)

    3. sumo on June 25, 2016 12:49 pm

      god! hats off girl ?? ? u r just soooo good … m so amazed perfect way of describing… keep up d good work going.. ??

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 3:22 pm

        Thankyou sumo…luv u…<3

    4. shanza sarfraz on June 25, 2016 3:17 pm

      Today’s ff was awwwwesome …. 🙂 … everything is perfectly portrayedc… keep the good work going 😉

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 3:22 pm

        Thnx shanza…for commenting…I will keep posting…but u must keep commenting..:-)

    5. maria on June 25, 2016 3:27 pm

      Wow!!!! 🙂 🙂 must say weirdsister u r a perfectionist writer yr everything was just amazinggggg!!!!!! Loved it!!

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 6:03 pm

        Thanx maria…it was a great compliment…
        🙂

    6. Shalini Naicker on June 25, 2016 3:59 pm

      It was Awesome. Loved it. You are a incredible writer. I loved the scene when Shravan said I came here to marry you.Keep it up Weirdsister. Keep writing. Please post next episode soon.

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 6:04 pm

        Thnx shalini…I will try to post soon..

    7. Khushi on June 25, 2016 5:28 pm

      Oh my god. Yr weirdsister it was amazing… Yr u r tooo good. I loved the way shravu said ki tumse shadi Karne aaya hun..hehe naughty Shravan….. And m really impressed with u literature skills dear…the words u use are amazing… Loved it very much…and yes plz try to post next part soon

      • WeirdSister on June 25, 2016 6:05 pm

        Thanx a lot khushi…u r so sweet….I will definetley try to post soon…

    8. LovelyLady on June 26, 2016 7:34 am

      sry fr late cmmnt …… epi was awsm…

      • WeirdSister on June 26, 2016 8:45 am

        Thnx dear!

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