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Kahani Mohabbat Ki (Chapter 1)

AkiattaBy AkiattaMarch 6, 201710 Comments5 Mins Read
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Author Notes: This is a different story from the show. It starts from the time Ishita became pregnant. Instead of the bomb exploding in the bus, the driver places the bomb in Ashok’s car and Ashok dies. The driver get’s arrested and Sooraj is later arrested for fraud. Sarika never lied about Rohit, meaning Rohit was really Romi’s kid and Rinki never died. Also, the story will be in English, but dialogues in Hindi. Hope you guys like it.

Chapter 1:

Raman and Ishita are in their room. Raman had put a blindfold on Ishita eyes as he led her into the room.
“Raman! Kya dekana chahate ho app?” Ishita asked.
“Madrasan. Tand Rakh!” Raman added and then slowly took off her blindfold.
Ishita opened her eyes as she saw the huge box which was gift wrapped.
“Yeh kya hai?” Ishita asked.
“Kol ke dekho…” Raman grinned.
Ishita looked confused and walked over to the box and opened the box.
Out of the box jumped a dog.
“Muthu!” Ishita said, surprised.

Raman grinned, seeing her response.
Ishita was so happy as Muthu was running around Ishita in excitement, “Ye sab kya hai, Raman?”
“Woh kya hai… Ruhi dadi nee order deya hai kee Ishima ko kabhi akela chod na…” Raman made her sit down as he continued, “Toh, Brilliant papa ne teri bodyguard ko bula liya…”

Ishita blushed a bit as Muthu stood in front of the two. She brushed his head and Muthu nodded, going out of the room to downstairs. Ishita then turned to Raman. She softly pulled Raman’s cheeks and said, “Aap na… Kabhi Kabhi bohut sweet cheesay kar dete ho…”
Raman smiled as he moved his hand over to Ishita’s abdomen, “Ishita… Tum to Ruhi ki sabse badi kushi ko la rahe ho… Toh itna he to kar sakta hu main.”
Ishita blushed and gripped his hand over to her abdomen tightly. It’s been a month since they learnt about this and that was the most happiest month.
She moved closer to him and went into his arms as she said, “I love you, Raman…”
“I love you, Ishita…” Raman replied and kissed her forehead…
He then remembered something and sat up straight, “Arre… Teri soone ka time… ” He looked over to the side table and picked the glass of milk and brought it over to her.
Ishita took the glass. Now used to drinking milk every night, took a huge gulp and took it all in.

Raman made her comfortable as the two cuddled up to sleep. Raman stayed awake as Ishita slowly drifted into sleep.

Few Hours Later,

“Raman!” Ishita exclaimed as she woke up shocked.
Raman woke up instantly and was alert, “Kya hua, Ishita?” Raman was frightened a bit…
Ishita saw Raman and hugged him tightly. “Aap mujae kabhi chodke math jao…” Ishita said, her voice heavy as if she was about to cry.

Raman comforted her as he said, “Ishita… Kya hua… Kuch bura sapna dekha kya tune?”
Ishita nodded as she got away and began, “Mujae humare bache ka sapna aaya.. Ashok apko…” Ishita was frightened as she explained how she dreamt about Ashok taking away Raman and her baby.
Raman was a bit hesitant as he said, “Aisa kuch nahi hoga… Ashok kuch nahi kar payega.”
Ishita was still worried and said, “Aisa kaise keha sakte hain?”
Raman took a breath as he got serous and said, “Ek hafte pehalae Ashok ka… accident hogaya.”

Ishita looked shocked, “Accident?! Kisa accident?”
“Woh… Rakhi ke din tumpe accident karne wala driver ne gusse me Ashok’s ke car me bomb laga de. Aur… Ashok nahi bacha….” Raman explained.
“Sa… Sachi?” Ishita asked. A bit relived even though she didn’t want to think bad for someone who just died.
“Han Ishita… Ab, hame our hamare bacchon ko koi alag nahi kar sakta…” Raman assure and hugged her again.
Ishita had a comforting smile, knowing that there won’t be any danger in their life anymore.

“Ab… Tum sojau. Subha… Hum bahar ja rahe hai.” Raman replied.
Ishita smiled as she reclined back, still holding on to Raman, “Kahan?”
“Arre Madrasan… Kitna sawaal poochegi?” Raman teased.
Ishita laughed and said, “Acha… One last question…”
Raman sighed, “Puchlo…”
“Sirf hum jayenge?” Ishita asked.
Raman grinned and diverted the topic, “So jao… Kal patha chalega…”
Ishita smiled and closed her eyes.

Raman stayed with her as he watched her sleep peacefully. He was so glad that this baby happened. How this was a miracle to them and how much he loves Ishita and their kids.

End notes: Hope you guys liked it. Leave a comment below to say what you guys think and if you guys want more of this… I have lot of ideas for this story and can’t wait to bring all of them to you. ?

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Akiatta

    Love writing! Huge Ishra fan. Currently writing Fanfiction. If things go right, will be a future Television Writer. xD

    10 Comments

    1. kumud on March 6, 2017 9:06 pm

      Nice and can u pls translate I’m English subtitles really weak in reading hindi

      • Akiatta on March 7, 2017 1:42 am

        Oh! Well, I can put in translations beside the dialogues in next chapters if that would help?

    2. Ishan on March 7, 2017 6:31 am

      wow…superb story line…i miss this from yhm..eagerly waiting for next one…

      • Akiatta on March 8, 2017 2:47 am

        Thanks for the comment. 🙂

    3. Isuri on March 7, 2017 8:19 am

      Superb dear

      • Akiatta on March 8, 2017 2:48 am

        Thanks a ton! 🙂

    4. jyoti on March 7, 2017 12:47 pm

      nice update pls continue soon

      • Akiatta on March 8, 2017 2:49 am

        Glad you liked it. Will update soon. 🙂

    5. Adejoke on March 8, 2017 3:17 am

      I am a Nigerian and I don’t know Hindi, pls write in English language. Thanks

    6. Parichary on March 8, 2017 12:13 pm

      Nice Akiatta!!!

      Please translated it!!!

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