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Home»Fan Fiction»KAATIL~(A Revengeful love) shot 16
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KAATIL~(A Revengeful love) shot 16

SameeraBy SameeraJune 28, 201718 Comments6 Mins Read
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Recap : revelation twinkle didn’t killed Manohar he SHOOTED HIMSELF and kunj side of story from which he became beast ….

Shot 16 …
The episode starts with kunj coming back home he was not in his senses ..and was stumbling he came inside and started breaking things …he was fully overloaded …

Twinkle heard the sounds and came out of her room to see what’s happening

Kunj what happen twinkle shouted coming down ..

He sees her then recall her hug with karan when she told him that she is going out for work …

She tried to hold him but he asked her to stay away…

STAY AWAY he shouted his lungs .
Looking at twinkle angrily …

What happen aksed Twinkle again he started breaking things when. He throws Twinkle purse and her reports fall from there …

Twinkle closed her eyes fearing what would be his reaction ..

He held the reports and read them and looked at twinkle …with shocked face ..

U are pregnant ???? He asked her …

Answer me twinkle ??? He again shouted …

Haan I am pregnant twinkle replied opening her eyes …

He again recalled seeing twinkle n karan at hospital ..he was not in his senses ..
He moved towards her while she moves back ..

WHOSE SIN IS THERE IN YOUR WOMB”…he asked …I saw u and karan at hospital today …

Twinkle gets double shocked and slapped him hard across his face that his lips started to bleed he gets triple shocked …

I was wrong I was completely wrong that I thought I will start a new life with you with our baby but u don’t deserve anything she shouted ..

He held her and said u are going for an abortion I don’t want anyone to come between us …he shouted ..now I’ll show you who is kunj sarna..

He called a group of doctors twinkle was shocked seeing him …

Kunj don’t do this plzz why can’t u understand i hadn’t betrayed you kunj ..
I didn’t killed your dad he had SHOOTED HIMSELF …she said crying ..

Another lie why will dad kill himself …haan …aksed kunj …

Bcoz he was involved in illegal activities and he didn’t want you to know about this that’s why she shouted …

Again a lie he said …and took her to their room soon doctors came ..

It was 2 lady doctors and some wardboys and nurses …

No one should know about this he said and handover them money .I want the work to be done by today night itself ..he ended …

The doctors looked at him shocked and then nodded and went to twinkle rooms ..

The sound of screaming were heard kunj was crying what his life has became into completely mess but he didn’t knew it was he only responsible for this ..

Whole night went in the process …soon sunrise came ..
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Soon after few hours the doctors came out …and kunj went towards them .
.
What happen is everything fine ???
Yeah Mr Sarna no need to worry the process succeded …

Hows my wife now ??? He asked in a concern voice finally he was in senses ..

Well she is weak now and will be unconscious for 24 hrs as we have given her anaesthesia here are some medicines give her okay ..

Kunj nodded and doctors left from there
He went towards his room and saw unconscious twinkle ..

He went towards her and looked at her and felt guilty as last night he was not in his senses …

What I did how I will able to show my face to you now …he looked at twinkle everything was revolving in his mind …
He makes the comforter proper when he gets a call from shanaya …

K : yeah Di I’ll be there I have to talk to you about something he said ….

I should go and meet Di until then twinkle will be conscious then I’ll see what I have to do now he said and pecked her forehead …he started to go when she held his hand he loosens the grip and left from there ..
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On the other side ::::

At airport rohan comes out of airport finally I got successful in opening a new branch now I can’t wait to share this news with my baby my twinki I am coming twinki he said and smiles and moved towards shanaya and Kunj house …lil he did knew that his sis life had became more worst even than hell ..
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Next scene ::::

Shanaya was standing in her house and recalled how her pa informed about doctors at kunj house ..she heard some footsteps and without seeing who the person was she started speaking ..

Finally u took our revenge kunj finally u gave rest to papa soul finally twinkle is life less now she said …and turned and got shocked seeing rohan ..

Rohan she speaks and he was angrily looking at her …
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On the other side :::..
After kunj left twinkle woke up and saw her state …and closed her eyes tears came out of her eyes ..

Now enough is enough I had bare everything thinking u will change but u will.never improve …never u are a beast she shouted ..

Now I am going far away from you and your life mr kunj sarna ..she shouted kept the letter after adding something more in it …

She took the bag and saw the house fully tears forms in her eyes seeing the cage for the last time …she touched each n every thing and recalls the whole flashback ….

How happily she was when she came with kunj to THEIR house …
How kunj showed real face to her on the same day …
How she managed to stay here even after knowing truth …
How she missed kunj in his absence ..
How she started taking depression pills ..
How she tried to commit suicide but kunj saved her ..
How he was changing …
How everything changed again ..
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She went towards door and sees it had password she typed the date when kunj confesses his love and it got open ..
Devil has a heart too she said and smiled and left from there …

I am no more MRS TWINKLE KUNJ SARNA ….she snatches her mangulsutra broke it in pieces and left from there ..
Screen freezes…
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Precap : rohan to Reveal everything to kunj …

So how was the shot guys …
Thank u sooo much to all who commented …
See pirga I mean priya Dedi Teri eidi and mere readers ki bhi ????…
Ba byeee guys …
Love u all ?????…
So what’s gonna happen next …
I’ll try to post kuch to hua hai but can’t say as I have full cold and this throat pain ahh ?????…
Keep guessing and stay tuned ..
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    18 Comments

    1. Nishuu on June 29, 2017 12:20 am

      Sam it was awesome my dear
      Loved it to the core
      Plzzzzz post next one soon
      Take care dear
      Love u ????

    2. Sohi on June 29, 2017 12:24 am

      Very thrilling episode
      Ab tho mujhe sachi me is kunj ko chappal se Marne ka Maan kar raha hai
      How dumb head he is

      Finally Rohan came back
      I’m happy that twinkle went away from kunj
      But yes I want them to meet soon

      Waiting for the next update and yes it should be my eidi now ???

      Do continue

    3. nrk on June 29, 2017 12:51 am

      now the kaatil is kunj. he killed his own unborn child. Acha kiya tw chod diya kunj ko.Woh bhi insaan hai kitna sahenki.
      Sam u nailed it.mein kya kahu.its marvellous. waiting for next epi. And I want kunj to suffer for what he did to tw

    4. SidMin23 on June 29, 2017 12:52 am

      Amazing twinkle did right breaking relationship with kunj now do make him suffer how could he told her to do abortion and make him understand and hope rohan will be able to make him understand and now waiting to see kunj suffering as twinkle left house do show some kunj suffer moment too as how he treats twinkle in days do post next part soon and other FF too.

    5. baby on June 29, 2017 1:23 am

      OMG !!!!
      samiieeee……..♥
      take care of urslf plsss dearieee…….♥
      get well soon n take meds properly…….♥
      n yeah also don’t stress ur slf mch……♥

    6. baby on June 29, 2017 1:26 am

      ooooooo teriiii !! sry sry episode par cmnt krna toh bhool hi gayi itna imp kaam…… 🙂
      well schiii mucchiii meriii tohg jaan hi niklal gayi……..
      huhhh had ho gayi bas ab toh how culd kunj be soooo heartless baby abort kra diya enough is enough I hate him huh………
      I know he didn’t knew d truth bt still yrrr aisiiieee koi krta hai kya………
      shi kr rhi hai twinkle shuld go away leaving did man huh…….
      behan kuch bhi khegi kuch bhi kardega kya behan kahegi apne maa ko maardo mardega kya behan ne kaha apne bache ko mardo mardia haddd hai cheeeee………..
      bhottt galat hua…….♥
      srsly u nailed it ♥
      portrayed d meotions scenes amazingly…….♥
      love u sooooooo mch sweetness ki dukaan………♥
      post asap yeh wala ff plssssssssssssssssssssssssss……..♥

    7. Kiya on June 29, 2017 1:32 am

      Superb episode too much emotion yaar???poor twinkle feeling bad for her
      Kunj I will kill him??
      Keshe woh aysha kar shakta hai
      Post soon thanks for eidi I think this is best eidi plz post soon other one also
      Get well soon my dear sami ??❤️❤️

    8. Simiyy on June 29, 2017 2:46 am

      Feeling sad for Twinkle
      Anyway good writing
      Post soon
      Loads of Love

    9. mia12 on June 29, 2017 3:29 am

      Uuunggaaaa Mummmmaaaaa,,???????????????.. Bhootni ki bachiiii Rula dia muje jab ki mai emotional mai bhi hasti hun huh huh,,???. Now this is limit kunj ke bache Aam ke kache had hai iska,,?? or shanaya isko bhej mere pas Mardalungi ab isko to mai,,?? Ufff calm down Priya,? Well sab kuch tujpe hi chor deti hun ok sochle,,??? now what to say Marvelous, out standing, out of word’s I mean no words,????????????? well best emotional drama this is,??????? Plsssssss jaldhi post karde meri Bhootni,,???????????? and thank u sooooooooooooooo much 4 my Eidi,,???? kya Eidi dia huh rula dia hasane ke wajay,,???? Love you so much bhootni,,❤?❤?❤?❤..

    10. Presha on June 29, 2017 6:01 am

      ohh god diii…
      twinkle ka abortion nd now she is leaving too…
      yeh kya ho raha h bit kunj should pay for wat he did…..
      feeling bad for twinkii ..
      mujhe rona aa raha h.,.

    11. Cheena2001Cp on June 29, 2017 7:17 am

      Oh damn?….Sam it is a shocking episode, I am feeling depressed ??….Kya kahun?? For a mother ,the pain of losing her child is the worst pain ever and no medicine can cure it. Now this episode justifies the title Kaatil…yes, Kunj killed his own unborn baby, he killed an unborn soul, he snatched away a child from his mother…..really I feel really sad????
      And this act is really true i.e crimes like this happen in real life also. I don’t think Twinkle will ever forgive Kunj….
      Butttttt it is your ff and I bet you won’t disappoint us☺☺☺Love you Sam ??
      Post next soon ????

    12. Rochika on June 29, 2017 8:33 am

      Sameera diiii i am crying like hell!!!! ???????????????????????????????????? what a damn amazing episode!!!!!! And twinkle did right by leaving him…how kunj be so harsh on her…ufff koi aur hota toh vo bhi vahi krta jo twinkle ne kra hai…u nailed this episode sameera di!???? ..u write emotional stories soo beautifully..i cant express in words ..and di take care of yourself …episode jaldi likhne ki zaroorat nhi hai..first take medicines properly and take rest..u will be fine soon…?????????????
      Take care
      Love u!?

    13. Ramya on June 29, 2017 5:23 pm

      Sam yeh kya ho gaya
      Kunj sabse bada stupid hai
      Aur twinkle me use chod diya ab kya hoga
      Acha hua rohan aa gaya
      Hope everything goes well
      Love you
      Take care
      U nailed it
      Post soon keep smiling

    14. Sia on June 30, 2017 2:08 pm

      Love it di

    15. Purnima.agrawal30 on June 30, 2017 3:23 pm

      Emotional

    16. Shalini15 on June 30, 2017 3:27 pm

      Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww??????????????????????
      Sameeraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ye tune kya kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa???????? Uwaaaaaa Uwaaaaaa ??????????????? haye re meri mata tu toh badi KATIL nikli?????? itna bada zulm???? Ye anyay hai…. I won’t talk to you???????? you are very bad bechare kunj ko itna patthar dil bana diya.. usne apne hi bacche ka Katil bana diya???? I’ll kill you now???? but nahi kar sakti arrey yaar agar tujhe maar diya to phir aage ki story kaun batayega????????? lekin baad mein jaroor marungi twinj ko tadpane ke liye??????????
      Yaar awesome mind blowing fabulous superb nd emotional episode. Feeling really very bad for both of them nd hate this Shanaya… loved it so much today I was feeling like I’m reading real episode of any serial ???????? but a request please don’t separate them but show twinkle’s hatreds nd kunj’s guilty nd their emotional romance nd don’t let twinkle forgive him so easily nd also don’t let kunj too forgive shanaya so easily… jyada demand kar liya na?? Achha chalo baki sab chahe jaisa karna but please sweetheart don’t separate them ???????
      Well post next soonest.

      Love you my sweetness ki dukan ????????????????

    17. Anu on July 1, 2017 10:47 pm

      Ufffffffffffffffff??????……………
      Yeh kya huaaaaaaa??????…….
      Kunj katil nhiiiiiiiiiii?? esa nhi ho skta epi was too emotional

      I cried while reading it really sameera bht hi emotional episode hai

      I was a silent reader today i commented on someones order

      My jaan order me to comment and my jaan is fabeeha look jaanu i do comment

      This comment is on her behalf also

      Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee post nxt asapppppp

      Pleaseeeeeee
      Luv u
      Byee
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Do post soon luv u jaan too and pleaseeee now talk to me pleaseeeee na look i have commented now talk to me pleaseeee

    18. aamu on July 3, 2017 7:52 pm

      Haaye allaaah..!!.
      Tu aisi kaisi ho sakti hai..
      Heartless kahiki..?????…
      Abortion karwa diya..?
      Gadhi..ullu??????…aisa kyu kiya..
      Jaaaaa katti…jab tak next ni padhungi..katti…bye..
      Hate u tooo….tune b hate u bola tha naa abhi..jaa hate u too

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