Fan Fiction

Kaanchi OS# Don’t Break My Heart

Hey Guys I’ m here to share with you my first OS. U know what guys your comments inspired me a lot for writing I’m feel praise when I read your such a lovely comments. I sits with my sister when your comments are comes I feel really really happy and told my sis look at Amana’s comment hey read this one sundari is commenting ohh this is richa’s comment,hey there is Abhilasha’s comments Anu, Riya,Rich,Sanju,Swetatli,Ashnita,Divya,QVZRQE3M,Alia and all my friends when they are commenting then I was on cloud nine. So thank so much guys for you love, Support and believe.
And Trisha If u doesn’t mind I called you Trishu. Dear you are such an amazing personality I feel. So I want to hug you.

One day Saanchi was came at Savitri Devi collage and hospital on her Scotty then suddenly collided with car she feel down with her Scotty someone was came towards her and raised his hand then said.
Guy: May I help you?
Saanchi was turned angrily then stands and saw him toe to head then said.
Saanchi: Wow Mr. ek toh larki ko takar marte ho phir hero ban’ne aajate ho. Shakal se aise nahi lagte ho khaate pety ghar ke lagte ho. but I know as very well like guy that you.
Guys Just Looking towards her without says any word. Then isha and Pragya was come there.
Isha: What happened Saanchi? What are you doing here?
Pragya: Arrey haan Saanchi why you get late? We were waiting for you.
Isha: Who is he?
Saanchi: Hai koi jo apne ap ko hero samjhta hai. But guys just leave it. (They leaved).
A guy still looking towards them and smiled then takes the name of Saanchi.
They trio are entered at collage and talking.
Isha: o wow Saanchi so I’m happy that I’m here. It’s our first day at country no: 1 hospital.
Saanchi: yes you are right I’m also happy that finally I’m here to fulfill my father dream and my mother’s revenge. But guys that it all possible just because of you. Really happy that I have friends like you otherwise as you know very well in the past what happened with me…
Pragya put hand on her shoulder and said. Saanchi don’t be upset we are with you for always. Then isha wants to cheer up Saanchi then she said.
Isha: Saanchi who was the hottie guy?
Saanchi: whom?
Isha: Arrey who jisss se abhi tum takrai.
Saanchi: are you talking about him? How I know who was he?
Pragya: but Saanchi He was so handsome yaar.
Saanchi: Don’t go on his looks I know as very well as like that person ok.

When Saanchi isha and Pragya were going then someone suddenly appeared in front of her with takes flower on his hand and said.
Guy: O miss beautiful will you go with me on date?
They were in shocked Saanchi and Pragya looking towards isha and isha also glare towards them in shock because the Guy was proposed to Isha.
Pragya: Abe o kon ho be tum? Who is the hell are you?
Guy: Chill baby if you want flower then I also give you but now she is my crush not you so keep quite don’t you see? I’m talking on very serious topic.
Pragya: Ajeeb zaberdasti hai yaar.
Saanchi: Listen..
Guy: (interrupts) Keep quiet Sister.
Saanchi: (Awkward) Ssisster..
Guy: yehaa Sister keep quiet and see.
Then suddenly someone taps on his shoulder he without see him and said.
Guy: What happen don’t disturb me? Don’t you see that I am doing very important work? (Then turned)
Guy: Dr…Dr…Dr.Dr. K…k…kabikabir.
DR. Kabir: Yes Dr. Veer what are you doing here?
Veer: Nothing sir.
Kabir: ok very Good now go from there your patients waiting for you.
Veer: (head down) ok sir. (He leaved).

They trio were in shock and looking to him.
Kabir: What?? Why are you looking me like that? Have you don’t any work to do?
They trio: yes sir we have
Kabir: why are you standing her? Go get back your work.
They trio were nodded when the start going from there then suddenly Saanchi Was fell down then Kabir holds her from waist then they share deep eye lock.
Back ground music Played: Aankhon main ajab ajab si Adayen hain.
Isha: How Cute.
Then they realized each other’s closeness and parted ways. Both of them felt embarrassed. Kabir leaved from there.
Isha: toh Dr. Kabir hain jin se tum bahir takrai the?
Saanchi: Yes, but I really don’t know about him.
Pragya: Abe O tum apni dukh bari dunya se bahir niklo ko jaano gi na.
Saanchi: I Tells you guys that all boys are same in nature they don’t have feelings.
Isha: yaar Dr. Kabir Is not looks like that.
Saanchi: how much you know boys? Have you any experience? No, But I have so being your best friends I warns you. Do not in falls in boy’s culprit. I tell you guy this Dr. Malhotra and his son they are same in nature. And this Dr.Kabir he is also like them.
After Six months
Saanchi don’t want closeness of Kabir but every passing day makes them close to each other. They did many surgeries with each other, they attend many conferences with each other slowly, and Slowly Saanchi was affected by his presence. But she doesn’t want any kind of distraction in her mission. She was tries to keep distance with him. She was really confused tries to convince herself that doesn’t falls any kind of betray. She will have to focus on her mission not anything else.
In the hospital:
Saanchi Isha and Pragya are walking and talking.
Isha: Saanchi what do you think about Kabir sir?
Saanchi: what are you saying?
Pragya: Don’t be so innocent? We are know that you are understanding our mean.
Saanchi: No guys I don’t understand.
Pragya: You cannot see the love in his eyes for you.
Saanchi: Stop it guys, don’t you know I don’t believe in love?
Pragya: haan yaar par kab tak you ignores him?
Saanchi: Jab tak ho sakega. And by the way I don’t want to talk with you on that matter. Just leave me alone. (She leaved).
When Saanchi was leaved then isha and Pragya were talks about her then Kabir heard them and asked from them about Saanchi’s past.
Pragya: Sir Six years ago when Saanchi was in her collage then she loves his class mate. His name was Nikhil who was most popular boy in collage who was proposed Saanchi and Saanchi accepted his proposal and were leaved happy together but one day Saanchi was got to know his truth when Nikhil got engaged with her best friend Tina. Yes Tina was Saanchi’s best friend in the collage. When Saanchi asked to Nikhil is all about that then he was replied it’s just because of bet between him and his friends. And Tina was his childhood friend and long lasting lover. And she did friendship with Saanchi just because of this bet. After that Saanchi’s heart was badly broken. After that day Saanchi was don’t believe in love she was don’t believe in friendship. Later we were come in her life then she regain believe on friendship. But not on love.
Pragya: Sir Saanchi really wants someone’s love some ones care. Sir please only you can make her happy. Sir will you do this?
Kabir: Don’t worry. I will try.
Isha and Pragya tell him all fake identity truth. Then Kabir decided to help Saanchi.
Kabir (Thought) Saanchi was much tolerated in life but now that’s enough. I can’t see her in this condition Any more. But Kabir why you can’t see her like this its mean that you like her, no like infect youuuuu loloveee her..(Smiled) Wahh Kabir How is this possible? That means you in Love Kabir Hey Kabir You in Loveeeeeeeee.

Time skiped:
It was evening when Kabir called Saanchi and invites for his birthday party. First Saanchi was refused for coming then agreed. Pragya and isha both are looking very tired they both don’t want to go but its Saanchi that convinced them to with her. When they were reached on the place then Isha’s phone vibrated.
Isha: Excuse me Saanchi Dad is calling me. You go I’ll come.
Saanchi: Ok
Then Pragya said: Oh no Saanchi I leave my purse in auto I have to go and take it. Saanchi you go I ‘will come.
Saanchi: but..
Pragya: Arrey go na we will come soon.
Saanchi: ok come fast.
Pragya: ok meri Maa. Now you go.
Saanchi was come and saw a beautiful decorated place where Kabir is also stand there for welcoming her. Saanchi slowly, slowly takes steps looking around herself. She was in big shock. And asked from Kabir.
Saanchi: Sir what is this?
Where are others?
Why you stand here alone?
What is this I don’t understand anything?

Kabir came towards her and put finger on her lips and said.
Kabir: Sshhh aur Kitne sawal karogi?

How many questions will you ask?

Ok I will give answers One by one.
Q1: its beautiful decorated place.
Q2: All are in their homes.
Q3: I’ m standalone just waiting for you.
Q4: This is our first date. And I know you understand as very well.
Saanchi was pushed him and said: now I understand what your intentions you want to trap me.
I know all men’s are same in nature. And you also one from them. I hate men’s and I hate you I hate you.
Kabir was shocked to see her in this condition and felt hurt he never wants to hurt her like this. When Saanchi was going then Kabir said;
Kabir: ok Miss Saanchi go I will never stop you but before going listen to me just once times. Saanchi if you don’t hear then I used this poison and I will end myself.
Saanchi turned and said I know you can’t do this. She turned again.
Then Kabir drink poison falls down on earth. Saanchi was noticed it turned in shock. Then ran towards him takes Kabir’s fore head in her lap then said.
Saanchi: Kabir sir what are you do?
Then Saanchi was got called from Dr. Malhotra who said.
Dr. Malhotra: Saanchi Mishra is here I’m sorry beta tumare papa ka gunehgar main hun, mene apni laalch main aakar boht naa insaafi ki tumari family ke saath.ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena. ab tum akr apne papa ka sapna poora kar sakti jese chahye iss hospital ko chlaskto ho. But I don’t want to lose Kabir please beta tell him that don’t takes resignation from this hospital. This is only Kabir who realized me mine mistake. Hope you forgive me.
Saanchi was totally in shocked she can’t afford to say any word from her mouth. Tears rolling through her eyes. She was looking towards Kabir and said
Saanchi: Kabir sir why are you doing this?
Kabir: Saanchi i…I…waaanttt to…Tell you something.
Saanchi: yes Kabir
Kabir: ssaanchi don’t break my heart I don’t leave without you.
Saanchi: Kabir…. Kabir…. What happened wake up. You don’t go leave me alone. Kabiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiir.
Kabir: sssaanchi… I…. luv you…
Saanchi: I love you too Kabir…Please wake up. (She put head down on his chest).
Then Soft voice was reached in her ears ..I Luv you. Saanchi head up this was Kabir he wakes and hugged her. Then isha Pragya and veer they came there. Saanchi cannot understand anything and asked.
Saanchi: hey what is this all?
They are smiled and said it was their plan to make realized Saanchi’s love for Kabir.
Saanchi angrily looking towards them.
Kabir now don’t angry with them they just tried to unite us. Please smile and hugged him.
Saanchi was smiled they all are happy.
Happy ending.

So guys this was my first OS hope you guys like it and forget my grammatical mistakes.

Anee

Lovely daughter of Mummy and Papa (parents)!!! Crazy fan of "Vikram sakhalkar" and "Harshad Chopra" ❤❤ ❤ Loves reading,writing and painting.

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