thank u guys for motivating me to write..I would try to make it the best i can so that it is enjoyable to read…n there might be a few parts coming that actually none of us would like bcuz no food is tasty with a variety of spices added in it! n at the end i am kali n yug lover ….n since this is my first ff please be there wid me to point out whats ridiculous n whats amazing..PS i need ur support….umm so here is it
BREIF DESCRIPTION:
Beforehand i had thought to start off with the current track but i feel it wud create a haphazardic situation..so i ll start with the leap n i may just copy paste things at some pt of thing..when i fell tht this aint no better….n most of the characters are the same but there r slight differences
YUG will 90% be the same! the 10% change is that he is academically excellent n is on verge of running business ..n here he has to find the truth of…
KAALI – i would prefer her to be bold n strong and a girl who is tuff n ready to stand for herself..she lacks confidence at times n her main motto is to get respect frm vishwa, protect
gauri n to be free of all the stereotypes tht vishwa create..n to stop the mess taiji creates..
NEELKANTH will be not someone who works under influence of anyone..and has a stud sort of personality..he is good to everyone but at the same time harsh to those who try to do something bad with his loved ones…..n he loves his both the sisters most…n dosent like vishwa much
SHARMILA is sweet n not a revengious personality…also she isint ill treated by any1..though there r still little boundaries for her bcuz she is already engaged
AND ALL THE OTHER CHARACTERS POSSES THE SAME FEATURE!
n about GAURI we all want her to be good,dont we? but there is one thing which hits me is that can u eat the same kind of food everyday even though there r different spices..we cant..similarly if al of us start making gauri good(except the real show:i want her to be good) then what will be the fun of reading each n every ff…u know then the things would be around 15-20. there wont be 100% difference..n i feel its good to try each variety of food..So i promise it wont be that bad n infact good..so she wont be goddie to shoes but she wont be a vamp too..she will be just like a leo..a little arrogant,fear-free,n she cud speak anything in front of anyone withouth thinking n she too is fond of kaali..(I hope its nt bad till nw)
N MOST IMPORTANT THING IS THAT THERE WOULD BE A NEW ENTRY ..A NEW MAIN LEAD..n also a few entries..which will come time to time with their character sketch…
so this is how it will start ( a small glimpse)
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the curtains are raised and a profound sculpture of ramji is shown
An immense crowd is listening to the sweet voice of her..n she.. she is lovingly singing “sunlo meri iltejaah oh ramji!” she is kaali….when she stops singing a huge crowd head her starts hooding n there is only one fragrance around, the fragnance of her warmth voice n a beautiful song..the judges praise her..n soon the anchor announces that the time has come when we announce the much awaiting result of the evening..The voice of Mithila is…
PRECAP: Yug says that i am in love with her voice when gauri n kaali arrive at the cafeteria….
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i made it very short so that i could aask that is this style of writing suitable n convincing or should i mould it…n make it to fully to a dialogue conferencing rther than making it a play n a story sort of a structure..i will only continue when i get the reviews that this start is convincing or not and this writing is good or not…so that u like it further
PLEASE SUPPORT ! THANKU FOR READING! n suggest a title also: someting related to yug n kaali love forever which is their biggest strength n something related to destiny