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Home»Fan Fiction»K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 8
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 8

HafsaaaBy HafsaaaMarch 29, 201718 Comments4 Mins Read
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART EIGHT|?♥️
-I promise that the next one will be a bit longer-??

Krishna excepts the saiyyam’s hand…As her hand melt into saiyyam’s hand the whole world seems to have stop for them….Saiyyam pulls Krishna towards him with the use of his hand ….Krishna’s hits saiyyam’s chest sending a current through her back…Saiyyam could never describe how he felt when he was close to Krishna….describing his touch touch for Krishna was like describing the taste of water…impossible

Krishna’s POV
I felt so nervous all the sudden I didn’t knew why I don’t feel like this towards ram…I got a jittery feeling in my belly, my palms started to sweat and a flutter of electricity runs through my body..
All the lights in the room dim and spotlight focused on kriyam
Saiyyam’s POV I could hear the music starting in the background but all I could focus on was those eyes…Haaayyye i simply loved those eyes,their just beyond beautiful..they should so much emotions…
|is qadar tu mujhe pyaar kar

jise kabhi na main sakoon phir bhula…|
I twirl her around and she looked the most beautiful thing ever existed….I just couldn’t help…I swing back on my chest..I removed few pieces of her hair by her neck…I could hear her breath,I understood that she refused so I stopped…
|bhula de…bhula de…bhula de..|
I didn’t knew when the music ended until I heard yuvaan clapping and coming towards me and Krishna…Krishna quickly pulled herself away from me
Yuvaan-Bhai I am surprised…itna romance
Yuvaani-Afterall yuvaan it was your and priya’s lovestory or was it? ?
Priya-Stop teasing my brother-in-law
-Scene fades to ram-
Ram was walking forth and back..his palms were sweating..Suddenly someone places a hand on ram’s shoulder
Riyaa-Kya hoya Jaan?

(A beautiful girl was shown..she was wearing a purple net sari with her hair side-parted..she had Vermilion in her hair line and a big mangalsutra down her neck..)
Ram-Kuch nahi,you go and sleep plus I wouldn’t come home for few days because of my office work( kisses riyaa’s forehead)
Riyaa-I wouldn’t go until you come along..(she drags ram into their bedroom and slowing the door closes as the scene shifts to birla mansion)
Few girls are shown dancing in background….Krishna enters the scene as music begins…suhani and kushi also join her as well
|Chanda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjaoon
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re|
Everyone has tears in their eyes…(While yuvaani gets a call)
As yuvaan and saiyyam sees everyone crying they quickly join the dance floor…suhani and kushi moves aside expect Krishna
Yuvaan pulls Krishna with his hand on his side
|”Jind Maahi Ve…..”|
Saiyyam pulls Krishna on his side

|”Jind Maahi Ve….”|
He releases Krishna and all three swing their hands as they all dance firing he dance floor ??
|”Aaja Mahi Ve…..Aaja Mahi Ve..”|
The song ends and yuvaani runs and hugs both saiyyam and yuvaan..Krishna smiles seeing the sibling bonding..
Yuvaani-Guys you won’t believe what happened..!!!
Suhani-What happened beta? Is everything okay?
Yuvaani-(While smiling widely) MA Karan called me and said he’s coming Back!!!!!!
Yuvaan-Omg we need to celebrate this…
Priya-Yes (placing her hand on yuvaan’s shoulder) tomorrow? How about a bachelor party?
Yuvaani-that’s perfect(While hugging priya)

Saiyyam was lost in his own world…he just couldn’t Believe that Karan was coming back…It just didn’t seemed right..Krishna noticed this but decided to remain quiet.
-Scene shifts to ram and riyaa’s bedroom-
(Ram and riyaa were lying together…both were naked yet covered with a blanket…riyaa was sleeping as her head rested on ram’s chest..
-Ram thinking-
Birlas you don’t know your future but I surly do….Attacking on your enemy’s weakness is the biggest achievement…wait and watch NOW…The scene slowing fades as ram smiles mischievously

•PRECAP•
(Ram on his knees)
RAM-Ms Krishna Mathur,WILL YOU MARRY ME??

-woh isqh he kya jishme junoon na ho aur woh jonoon he kya jishme jahlan na ho-
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    18 Comments

    1. Hiba on March 30, 2017 2:09 am

      OMGGG….noooooo….. I freaking hate ram so muchhh??????

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 9:00 am

        lol don’t ?

    2. shabnam on March 30, 2017 2:20 am

      Perfect awesome????????????

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 9:00 am

        Thank you ??

    3. aaravjaikar on March 30, 2017 3:29 am

      Precap
      . Cool one.. early waiting for next epi…..

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 9:01 am

        I’ll upload it tomorrow cause I’m having exams??❗️

    4. AnahitaAnnie on March 30, 2017 5:44 am

      Ws really good. Can’t wait fr the next post.

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 9:01 am

        Glad you liked it✨

    5. Richa shah on March 30, 2017 8:07 am

      Preacp amezing interesting I hope ki sayyam jealous ho ye sun kar kuch sayyam ko negative kar do

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 10:49 am

        Hahahah ???

    6. Shaani on March 30, 2017 8:44 am

      Omg precap…? well written… Waiting for the next part..

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 10:50 am

        Waiting for it to be posted

    7. asia on March 30, 2017 10:05 am

      Very nice and beautiful

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 10:50 am

        Thank you ♥️

    8. Isha on March 30, 2017 10:12 am

      No!!! plz krishna no bol de na..plz update ASAP 🙂

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 10:51 am

        Well wait for the next…many new twist on it’s way??

    9. Zani Saleem on March 30, 2017 1:38 pm

      The episode was on fire?

      • Hafsaaa on March 30, 2017 9:19 pm

        Thank you ??

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