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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 33

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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART THIRTY THREE|??
Krishna-Tum?
Saiyyam-Yes
Krishna-What are you doing here?
Saiyyam-I came to know are you okay?
Krishna-You don’t have to care about me
Saiyyam-What if i wanna
Saiyyam started to move closer and closer to Krishna,Krishna’s back hits the wall
Krishna-Look I am telling you stay away from me
Saiyyam-Krishna,how long will you stay away from me?
Saiyyam pressed his cheeks with Krishna’s,Krishna could be his sharp beard
Saiyyam-Why did you gave up?
Krishna-Wh..what do you mean
Saiyyam-Don’t I know the drama of you and Madhavan
Krishna-Drama?

Saiyyam-Pretending to marry him and all that.Wait dose he sleep with you?
Krishna-It’s nun of your business
Saiyyam-Krishna,it’s my business,YOU’RE MY WIFE
Krishna-I was
Saiyyam-I never divorced you so lawfully you’re my wife
Suddenly there was a knock on the door
Simmu-Mama?
Saiyyam let go of Krishna and was shock to see simmu
Saiyyam-she..?
Krishna-Beta,you go I’m coming
Simmu-But,who is he mama?
Krishna-I’m telling you to go
Simmu-Okay

Saiyyam-How could you do this? Huh? (Holding her shoulders tight) Krishna,I LO..
Krishna-Please leave from here
Saiyyam-First look in my eyes and then I’ll leave
Krishna-The door is over there
Saiyyam leaves in anger while Krishna falls down.She was shaking while tears were raining from her eyes
Krishna-Saiyyam,why can’t you see the truth??
Scene shifts to night where Krishna was waiting to Madhavan to return home.
Krishna-Finally you’re here
Madhavan-So you were actually waiting for me?
Krishna-No but simmu sure was
Madhavan-Acha baba sorry I was busy in office work
Krishna-You promised simmu for ice cream
Madhavan-Then lets go
The whole family went to for ice cream.A couple passed by them
Women-What a beautiful family,is this your kid?
Krishna-Yes,simmu say hi to aunty
Simmu was more interested in her ice cream
Krishna-Simmu!!
Simmu-H..Hi

Women-Aww she looks more like her mother than her dad
Madhavan-Everyone says that she looks more like her dad
Women-But she doesn’t look like you at all
Madhavan looks towards Krishna.The women left.
Madhavan-lets eat now
As Krishna sat down,she saw a couple fighting,more in a cute way.She smiles as she remembers her and saiyyam’s fights
Madhavan-Krishna
Krishna-huh?
Madhavan-Krishna,Aren’t you gonna eat?
Krishna-Oh yeah
After eating they all headed to a park.Simmu was running around while madhna were walking together
Madhavan-When will you tell simmu the truth?
Krishna-She’s too young right now
Madhavan-But you will have to tell the truth one day
Krishna-Yeah
Suddenly the was a loud BANG.Madhna turns around and..
Krishna-SIMMUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

•PRECAP•
Doctor-Who is simmu’s father,(looking towards saiyyam and Madhavan) I need his blood
Saiyyam-Madhavan,you go and give blood
Krishna-(while stepping up) no saiyyam,you give blood

-Guys I’m wrapping up this track to and thinking to come up with another one,should I end this track now or extend it?-

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50 Comments

  2. Richa shah on

    Story mai kuch improvement lao sayyam jealousy Krishna madhvan simmu madhvans gril sayyam revenge Krishna at all yesa kuch story long writing plz fast upload

  3. Anika on

    Extend it i want to read more of this track and i want to see more simmu and sayyam bonding plz update soon love reading your ff your story is the best and your ff is my favourite by the way nice episode ???

  6. AnahitaAnnie on

    I was guessing that Saiyyam is thr father but how and when? Girl, u made me restless…. The episode was on fire…. It was sooo good…. I mean I can’t describe it in words. Can’t wait for the suspense. Well the length of the track depends on u. All of ur tracks are soo good that I can’t even decide. First I want to know about another track again this track i also really interesting. Lets see the next epi…. I knw its hard and ur must be busy as u upload a lot but plz try…… Anyways….. Can’t wait for the next one and we were fabulous as always…❤??

  7. Kriyyam fan on

    Yaar tell us na what priya told to saiyyam andmadhavan first meeting. I m confused.. But the epi was nice. From precap it is clear that simmu is the daughter of kriyam.

  8. manisha on

    But when did it happen ?sayyam simmu’s faTher but i think i hvnt miss any episode pls reveal it soon

  9. shivani on

    Marvellous episode hafsaa. All words and dialogues were just awesome. Its filled with suspense to the brim. Suspense awaits in every turn.
    And who is simmu’s father? I had a feeling that madhavan was the single father of hers and then he married krishna in order to fill the vaccuum of a mother’s absence in her life.
    However, the precap has left me gaping. If ram ain’t the father of simmu then who is?

  10. Zani Saleem on

    I think.yew should rap it and start a new track…but I find this one also interesting?ahhh so she’s sayyam’s daughter?

  11. dwidha on

    Awesome episode dear…
    Waiting for the next episode….
    And also suspense to be revealed..

  12. Aarti32 on

    Simmu is Kriyyam’s daughter!!!!????
    All d while I was thinking she’s madhavan’s daughter??
    U successfully fooled all d readers??

  13. Aarti32 on

    I read d episodes after Kriyyam’s marriage, but I don’t think they ever consummated….Then how daughter!!!!

  14. Somi on

    OMG .. That means sayyam is her father I’m shocked only Krishna know this but not sayyam.how can this happen?.?don’t he know really? He must na ?

  19. Hibaaa on

    I knew it it would be kriyam kid?I knew that when Krishna left she was pregnant but she didn’t told sayyam.but good oneee

  20. Isha on

    What saiyyam is simmu ‘s father..saiyyam would he really shocked to know that simmu is his daughter..thank god plaz update ASAP 🙂

  21. Dinu on

    Precap????? it means simmu is kriyam’s daughter. Tnk god.bt how did it happened? How come sayyam didn’t know about dis.too much suspense yaar bt I loved it.plz extend dis track dr.I want 2 see more jealously of sayyam? each epi of urs make us more desperate dr.plz post nxt epi ASAP.cn’t wait????