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Home»Fan Fiction»K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 28
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 28

HafsaaaBy HafsaaaApril 10, 201733 Comments4 Mins Read
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART TWENTY EIGHT|??
I would like to thanks all,everyone who comment daily on my FF
Hiba

Shruti123
Anahitaannie
Aaravjaikar
Shaani
And shivani thank you so much for the comment on the previous episode…
And many more..I love you all so much,the support you guys give makes me speechless,?? Thank you so much ??
-Episode begins-
Suddenly the door of the stall opens and saiyyam steps in,Krishna’s heart rests in peace,she hugs him tight,melting into his warm,safe arm,even saiyyam hugs her back..
Krishna-I was so scared saiyyam..
Saiyyam-Nothing will happen,we need to get out of here
Saiyyam takes his jacket off and offers it to Krishna
Saiyyam-Take this
Kriyam quickly gets out the stalk and finds a way out,suddenly Krishna hears another gunshot,this time it was more louder than before,she tied her grip on saiyyam
Man-You think it’s that easy for you to leave
Kriyam turned around,a man in a black as hell mask was standing with a gun in his left hand,he was quite tall,muscular, looked somewhat familiar,Behind him was a lot of innocents crying for help.
Saiyyam-Look,let her go and I’ll stay here

Man-Oh really,(he turns around and look at the crying faces) You guys wanna leave right,then my want is THEM (pointing towards kriyam)
Saiyyam-I’ll stay,just let her go
Man-Never
The man points his gun towards Krishna;however,Saiyyam moved Krishna towards him,as the gun point moves and faces towards him.
The man faces the gun point towards saiyyam head first,then his body,slowly moves his head negatively
Man-NAANAAA,I know a perfect place
The man points the gun straight to saiyyam’s heart
Krishna knew she had to something,she couldn’t just stand and watch her whole world collapse
Krishna watches as the death,gun shot,comes closer and closer to Saiyyam.
She closes her eyes and runs
Krishna-SAIYYAM
She moves him and “BOOOM”
Blood shattered everywhere
The man leaves his gun and runs out the door as people gather around kriyam,saiyyam falls down his knees
Saiyyam-KRISHNA!!
Krishna was laying on the floor of death wounded,Seeing Krishna like that saiyyam had a ugly feeling

Saiyyam POV
it felt like the hole in my gum when a tooth falls out.  I could chew, I could eat, I had plenty of other teeth, but my tongue keeps going back to that empty place, where all the nerves are still a little raw (lol I know this is a ugly description but I didn’t knew how to describe it properly and I remembered this line from my teacher)
Saiyyam-SO.SOMEONE..PLEASE CALL THE DOCTOR NOW…(Shaking)
Scene shifts to the hospital
Blood was all over Saiyyam’s shirt as he hold Krishna’s hand..
Saiyyam-DOCTOR PLEASE HURRY UP
Scene fades as shown is shown crying and Krishna is taken to the emergency room
-In the emergency room-
Doctor-Pass the scissors
Nurse-Doctor,do you think the patient will make it?
Doctor-We can only give hope and try our best
{Scene shifts}
Yuvaan-SAIYYAM
Saiyyam-What happened?
Yuvaan-Krishna..
Saiyyam ran to emergency room,where he saw Krishna slowly opened her eyes,it felt as though saiyyam could breath now
Scene shifts back to birla mansion/KriYam room

-SORRY GUYS I SKIPPED SOME SCENES FOR SOME REASON-??
Saiyyam-You stay here I’ll bring you some water
Krishna-(while Holding saiyyam’s hand) I have to tell you something
Saiyyam-I have to tell you something you too (he held Krishna’s hand and took her to the main hall)
Saiyyam-MA,YUVAANI,BHAI
Everyone gather in the hall..
Saiyyam-You’ll wanted to know why I married Krishna,right? Not because I like or something but because…..

•PRECAP•
Priya-You need tell saiyyam the truth and your feelings or I’ll be too late
Krishna-It is already too late,di

-Sorry guys Ik this one is short and all but a really big twist is coming up-
Take you seats and rest back,get ready to be amazed ???

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    33 Comments

    1. AnahitaAnnie on April 10, 2017 9:10 am

      Thank u soo much for mentioning my name Hafsaa. It means a lot..

      And about the episodes. I loved it. And more fascinating is the precap. It looks like I am surely going to die of suspense. U rock as always and I knw something splendid is waiting. U r really great at writing and u never fail to amaze me with ur creative brain. Really it sooo good. Now I know u updated a lot but still I can’t wait for the next one becoz its soo addictive. Really love it…?

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:03 pm

        Aww thanks and I don’t have time to type the next one but I’ll be posted soon today ??

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:04 pm

        It’ll*^

    2. saniyaa on April 10, 2017 9:14 am

      it was a really nyc epi…y did he married krishna??? really wanna knw..n ya pls update soon

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:04 pm

        Hahaa ? I will ❣️❣️

    3. shivani on April 10, 2017 9:30 am

      This episode was too suspenseful and full of love. The way in which you describe sayyam’s emotions is purely fantastic. Your choice of words and sentences is just extraordinary.
      The story is fantabulous and truly thrilling. I really cant wait for the mystery to be unfolded..

      Wanna know what enforced sayyam to marry krishna and how will krishna confess….

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:06 pm

        Okay thanks first and even kriyam confession will take time for now I would say ???

    4. Sanjana on April 10, 2017 9:44 am

      Awesome one…and now we will finally get known why Saiyyam marry Krishna
      Please update soon

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:07 pm

        Well you might know few parts only ☺️?

    5. Somi on April 10, 2017 10:11 am

      Hey great job very well done superb ff.

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:07 pm

        Thanks?

    6. aaravjaikar on April 10, 2017 10:13 am

      Now u again come with a bang episode… .. Waiting to know why …. precap…… love it… plzzz update soon….

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:08 pm

        “Why” will be explained step by step ☺️?

    7. itsAveesha on April 10, 2017 10:21 am

      Love love love… The way you are keeping the readers in suspense like seriously no one can predict what will happen the very next moment you are a great writer moreover you are giving us those kriyam moments which we were longing for past 2-3 months… Ahhh what to say more.. Eagerly waiting for the next part!!! ??????????

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:15 pm

        Awww suspense is the key to writing and kriyam? Well there’s a change

    8. Kriyamfan on April 10, 2017 10:28 am

      any idea if srishti returned from trip

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 6:16 pm

        Yes she did

    9. Shaani on April 10, 2017 12:15 pm

      Thankx for mentioning my name… Episode was great as always..waiting for the next episode.

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 8:22 pm

        You’re amazing ?

    10. dwidha on April 10, 2017 4:27 pm

      Nice episode dear
      Eagerly waiting for next update
      Plz asap

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 8:23 pm

        I will?❤️

    11. Anika on April 10, 2017 5:32 pm

      Sooo good please upload next part soon
      I just love your ff u r an amazing writer ??

      • Hafsaaa on April 10, 2017 9:05 pm

        Thank you and yeah I have submitted it

    12. Shruti123 on April 10, 2017 9:07 pm

      Omg you’re such a great writer and thank you for mentioning my name

      • Hafsaaa on April 11, 2017 9:32 am

        Thanks ?

    13. Hibaaa on April 10, 2017 9:34 pm

      THANKSSSSS HAFSA FOR MENTIONING MY NAME BABE?❤️?

      • Hafsaaa on April 11, 2017 9:33 am

        Ayyye?

    14. Kriyam❤️ on April 11, 2017 5:17 am

      I am so in love with your ff

      • Hafsaaa on April 11, 2017 9:33 am

        Aww ??

    15. Soumya10 on April 11, 2017 5:59 am

      Beautiful yaar

      • Hafsaaa on April 11, 2017 9:34 am

        ??

    16. Isha on April 13, 2017 10:09 am

      Finnally he is going to tell why he married her… precap is making me confused..anyways the gum description was a little funny but we always u know do that… 🙂 superb epi

      • Hafsaaa on April 14, 2017 12:36 am

        Hehe?❤️

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