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Home»Fan Fiction»K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 20
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 20

HafsaaaBy HafsaaaApril 4, 201732 Comments4 Mins Read
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART TWENTY|⛲️?
(So I have seen many of you saying that you have predicted the suspense about karan and that makes me so happy because you guys are taking so much interest in ff,suspense will soon be open,stay tuned??♥️)
Saiyyam-KRISHNA!!
Saiyyam ran to his car…he looked everywhere but no Krishna
Saiyyam started to panic..sweats of fear,where was Krishna.??

Krishna was sitting in the car,looking around,watching the surrounding..
An old women knocks on her window..
Old women-Beta can you help me carry this to house..(pointing towards a house) It’s right there
Krishna-Ofc aunty
Krishna helped the old women carry her groceries inside her house,as Krishna turned around,a white cloth was placed over Krishna’s mouth and the scene fades as it gets blur….
-Present-
Someone places a hand on saiyyam’s shoulder..saiyyam quickly turns around
Saiyyam-KRISHNA
Ram-Krishna? Where’s Krishna,saiyyam?
Saiyyam-(sweating) I don’t know,I left her in the car and now,(Saiyyam started crying,a strong man like saiyyam would never cry but why was he crying now? Was he afraid to lose Krishna?) she’s gone….
Ram-What? Where? How?
Now both ram and saiyyam started to panic…suddenly saiyyam saw something on the ground..

Saiyyam and Krishna were about to leave when suhani…
Suhani-Krishna,take this bracelet.
Krishna-But aunty,its broken
Suhani-I Know that Krishna,but this was my sasu ma’s bracelet and its old but each beat in it represents our love,her dream was to give this to Saiyyam’s wife,so it’s okay if it breaks
Krishna looks at saiyyam and takes the bracelet and they leave
-Present-
Saiyyam picked up the black beat that was broken from Krishna’s bracelet….he saw some more beats as he and ram follows it..
Saiyyam-(whispers) I’m coming,Krishna
A barn was shown…it was all dark there..soon Krishna was shown,where she was tied with ropes…
Slowly she opens her eyes.
Krishna’s POV
A cool shudder trickles down my spine. Cold, hesitant light streams in through a cracked window, casting eerie shadows on the wall.It was dark as hell or was I in hell?No movement? How come my body couldn’t do any movement? I looked down to see the snake wrapped around,until I saw the actual thing,it was a rope.A rope? Why was a rope wrapped around me?
Krishna-Heellooooo?
A dark figure came across,then a few more.
Goon 1-Wow,this time we got a gold
Goon 2- Yess
Goon 1 came near Krishna and placed his hand over Krishna’s cheeks…His touch was rough and felt like death..
Krishna-(in a low tone) Please leave me
Goon 2-How can we? Hahahahaaa
Suddenly the door of the barn blast opened and there stand our Saiyyam and ram…saiyyam had anger in his eyes,his eyes were hella red and so as ram’s…
ram-leave her
Saiyyam-NOW OR ELSE
Goon 2-or else?
Saiyyam-I’ll show you
Goon 1-(in a evil tone) oooo looks like this Juliet has 2 Romeos
Soon saiyyam and ram started beating the goons up…the goons ran as fast as the could out the barn
-Outside the barn-
Goon 1-Call our boss now
Goon 2 makes a call to their boss
Goon 1- Boss woh….
Scene fades
-Inside the barn-
Saiyyam goes near Krishna..he unties the rope wrapped around Krishna…Krishna quickly hugs Saiyyam tight,feeling the comfort of his warm,safe arms…ram looks away..after realizing her position,Krishna quickly backs off..she starts to cry…instead of saiyyam,ram goes near Krishna and wipes her tears..
Ram-(while wiping her tears) Don’t worry Krishna,I am here
Krishna-(while looking at Saiyyam) I was waiting for you
Kriyam eyelock was broken by ram..
Ram-I think we should leave now
They all head out the barn,Saiyyam drops ram home and kriyam head towards birla mansion..
Saiyyam-How could you be so irresponsible?
Krishna-sorry
Scene shifts to suhani’s room…
Suhani was looking at a picture,it was a young boy, handsome,he looked more like Saiyyam but his height matched more to yuvaan…and his smile,more like yuvaani’s
Yuvaani-Are you missing Arjun?
Suhani quickly wipes her tears…
Suhani-How can I miss him? I never forget about him…
-Scene takes a jump and in happening in kriyam room-
Saiyyam was shown opening his side bed drawer and took out a picture..
Saiyyam-I will never forgive Krishna for this..
Krishna-For what?
The screen freezes there….
•PRECAP•
Krishna went to help saiyyam but her foot slipped and her fall over saiyyam cause the knob of the shower to open,the rushing water drowned kriyam.
|ki darkhaast hai ye
jo aayi raat hai ye
tu meri baahon mein duniya bhula de|???

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Hafsaaa

    My home is made out of ashes ☄️ And your ghost still playing with matches ?

    32 Comments

    1. sanaali on April 4, 2017 9:38 am

      seriously…again a new suspence…im falling for ur ff…cant wait fr nxt..

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:39 pm

        Thank you ♥️♥️

    2. Richa shah on April 4, 2017 9:47 am

      Good epi next upload plz and one think story mai improvement lao sayyam jealous ram sayyam ram se jelus ho etc

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:40 pm

        I’m taling kriyam lovestory to the next level,their be jealousy but in a different way ?

    3. AnahitaAnnie on April 4, 2017 9:48 am

      Wow precap was fantastic…..? and soo happy that krishna looked for saiyyam than ram. And what else fantastic dialogue deliveries. Way to go gf…….??

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:40 pm

        Thanks ??

    4. aaravjaikar on April 4, 2017 9:49 am

      As always.. good one… … Waiting for ur suspense….

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:41 pm

        It will be reveled in the coming eps ✌??

    5. Rasha on April 4, 2017 9:57 am

      Nice.. Soon expose ram.. Loving it. Pls make long episodes with more kriyam. All the best

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:41 pm

        I will surly ??

    6. Meyxx13 on April 4, 2017 10:50 am

      Precap got me so excited

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:42 pm

        Hahahaa ??

    7. Shruti123 on April 4, 2017 10:51 am

      Beautiful♥️ I just love your ff

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:42 pm

        Thank you ??

    8. Soumya10 on April 4, 2017 10:51 am

      Can’t wait for Karan’s suspense to open

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:42 pm

        ❤️❤️

    9. Kriyam❤️ on April 4, 2017 10:52 am

      Romeos ??

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:43 pm

        ???

    10. Shaani on April 4, 2017 11:49 am

      Aww… Nice… ? keep going..

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:43 pm

        Thanks ??

    11. Gulnaz on April 4, 2017 12:16 pm

      Nice ep

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:43 pm

        ??

    12. Zani Saleem on April 4, 2017 1:16 pm

      Oh my god??precap???

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:44 pm

        Aha?♥️

    13. AFANFICWRITER on April 4, 2017 3:48 pm

      I am in love with your ff! Its always got me hooked with your brilliantly genius suspenses and each time i see your ff when i open the website when i see your ff posted i do a little jump of excitement. Sure your parts are short but you post so often that its perfect! I really really need to know whats the answers are ? please post soon x

      • Hafsaaa on April 4, 2017 6:44 pm

        Sure it means a lot ??

    14. Hibaaa on April 4, 2017 9:17 pm

      Precap ???

      • Hafsaaa on April 12, 2017 8:47 pm

        Hehee??

    15. Somi on April 4, 2017 9:33 pm

      Wow hafsaaa dng very very well loved it again

      • Hafsaaa on April 12, 2017 8:47 pm

        ??

    16. Isha on April 12, 2017 8:21 pm

      Yaar aap toh hame suspence mein duba raheho…anyways super episode…

      • Hafsaaa on April 12, 2017 8:47 pm

        Haha thanks again❤️❤️

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