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Home»Fan Fiction»K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 13
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta• Episode 13

HafsaaaBy HafsaaaApril 1, 201745 Comments6 Mins Read
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K.R.I.Y.A.M •BeNaam Rishta•
|PART THIRTEEN|??
Krishna-I am here
Everyone turns around and gets shocks
Krishna hairline was filled with sindoor….a mangalsutra was around her neck..she had tears in her eyes…and the shocking part was who she was standing next to …it was not ram but saiyyam
Priya and all the family members ran up to them..
Kushi-What is this Krishna??
Yuvaani-Answer
Priya slaps Krishna….saiyyam felt like his whole body started to pain
Priya- how could you?? (She had tears in her eyes)
Priya’s try to break mangalsutra….suhani stops priya

Suhani- we can’t do anything…you wouldn’t any love or blessing…(suhani couldn’t believe his dearest son would do this)
Soon everyone left with a disappointment…Leaving saiyyam and Krishna alone…saiyyam looked towards Krishna…he then headed towards his room leaving Krishna stranded….Krishna break down…she couldn’t stop crying…her whole life was taken away….now ram couldn’t be hers….her mother and sister hated her now…it was all because of saiyyam..he was the reason that her life was hell….she got herself together and got up..she went near the idol

Krishna-Why bhagwan ji? You know how saiyyam is then why? I could have chosen death instead to live with him
Yuvaani-Krishna I know how you feel but saiyyam isn’t that bad
Krishna-(while turning around)Then why would be do this with me?
Yuvaani-There must be a reason behind it..(they both hug each other sharing their pain)
-Scene shifts to privan’s room-

Priya-I am sorry yuvaan…you must feel disgust from me
(Yuvaan places his finger on priya’s lips)
Yuvaan-Never say that ever…I LOVE YOU (hugs priya tightly)…..and we’ll make it through this too
Priya-(hugs yuvaan back) I LOVE YOU TOO

-Kriyam room-
Krishna entered the room..she looked around and took a long sigh when she couldn’t find saiyyam..
(Krishna while thinking:Looks like saiyyam went to the other room) she begins to lay on saiyyam’s bed but she was pulled….saiyyam hold her hand tightly and looked directly into Krishna’s eyes…

Saiyyam-Get out of here
Krishna breaks free from him although saiyyam broke her Bangle causing her hand to bleed…
Krishna-you brought me here

Saiyyam-I don’t care…(with that he shut the door of the room..closed the lights and slept peacefully…Krishna fall down and cried…asking god for what was she was being punished…she looked towards saiyyam and then looked away…her teary eyes searched the room for a pillow and blanket but it was no where to be found…she lay down on the cold floor while shivering…all she had was her bridal wear to comfort her…and soon she fall asleep…saiyyam opened his eyes as he looked towards Krishna…(he thought:You deserve this Krishna…but i don’t know why I feel bad for u..) he also fall asleep while starting at Krishna..

~Morning~
Saiyyam got up first and looked towards Krishna..she looked indeed beautiful even with so much pain…he then went towards the bathroom and brought a bucket full of cold water and poured it all over Krishna…Krishna quickly got up while shivering..
Saiyyam-(while yelling at Krishna)This is not your room and the faster you understand that it’s much better for you

He left the room with that for a morning jog..Krishna looked at her self in the mirror..
Krishna-bhagwan ji why didn’t you gave me death instead?
Krishna got dressed in blue sarwal kameez….she wore her mangalsutra…applied some sindoor down her hairline…pinned her hair back…she wore green Jhumkis..and applied a decent amount of makeup…and with that she headed downstairs for breakfast…

-Privan room-
Priya wore a yellow colored sari with gold Kashmiri Dejhoor Earrings..applied generous amount of makeup and headed downstairs..Krishna went inside the kitchen because it was her first rasoee..she was about open the gas when priya held her hand
Priya-No Krishna..you can’t do it..please leave from here….

Krishna got hurt by priya’s words and left the Kitchen..priya was also upset that she had to be rude with Krishna..Krishna went back to her room where she found saiyyam coming out of his bathroom in towel..he was half naked and his 6 packs were visible… Krishna tried to tear her gaze from the pale outline of saiyyam’s magnificent form, but it was no use, and his devilishly handsome features shifted into a knowing grin as he caught Krishna staring….

he moved closer and Krishna’s heartbeat rosed…she started breathing faster and faster as he came closer…she could smell saiyyam as he came closer…she could smell every component in the shampoo he used..he smelled like the evergreen forests in Alaska-rugged, undiscovered and comforting even in silence…..Krishna stopped when she hit the side of the bed but saiyyam didn’t stop..he came more closer…she could feel his hot breath…Saiyyam leaned on Krishna and she could feel his heavy body..he looked directly into her eyes…
|aaaa mohla…mohlaaaa…|

Saiyyam’s dark brown eyes Spoke more than he ever did…they had so many emotions,more than he ever showed..they were deeper than the ocean and wider than the sea…saiyyam’s long eyelashes..puffy eyes full of pain..he leaned more closer..Krishna’s heart was thumping like a horses hoofs on a dirt road, it was continuous…Krishna’s heart was beating so loud that she could have bet that saiyyam have heard it but not felt it..he could never understand how Krishna felt or else he wouldn’t have done this marriage with her…saiyyam extended his hand and picked up his shirt and moved back from Krishna…Krishna took a deep breath..saiyyam wore his black long sleeve shirt and pulled his sleeves..The sleeves of saiyyam’s shirt fit too tight over his muscular arms..saiyyam’s black shirt was a startling contrast to his fair skin tone..saiyyam tugged his shirt in his maroon pant which made him looked much more taller than usual..saiyyam turned around and looked at Krishna..saiyyam’s dark chocolate eyes sparkled which made Krishna smile uncontrollably..she blushed and quickly looked away…saiyyam grabbed his phone…black wallet…and took a last look at Krishna before he left…leaving Krishna into his thoughts…what connected them so much…?

•PRECAP•
Krishna-I think I should leave ram
Ram-(Holds Krishna’s hand) Wait…do you love me?
Saiyyam is witnessing all this

“GUYS SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS FF OR NOT??I SEE THAT YOU GUYS ARE LOSING INTEREST IN MY FF”??
Leave your thoughts down below?????

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    45 Comments

    1. raya on April 1, 2017 1:40 am

      No no no please carry on its osmm

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:19 am

        Yes will thanks for the support??

    2. Alisha on April 1, 2017 2:07 am

      Please continue it. The track of kriyam marriage is too interesting, just state the reason of their marriage. After Ram’s real face comes infront of Krishna the track would come to a certain level where everyone would wait the whole day for your fanfiction.

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:25 am

        Well there’s more twist before it happens..twist that you will never believe

    3. Alisha on April 1, 2017 2:09 am

      Please continue it. The track of kriyam marriage is too interesting, just state the reason of their marriage. After Ram’s real face comes infront of Krishna the track would come to a certain level where everyone would request you to upload three parts of your fanfiction regularly.

    4. Hiba on April 1, 2017 2:10 am

      Loved it??

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:25 am

        ??

    5. Somi on April 1, 2017 2:25 am

      OMG .why do they marry all of a sudden?what a twist yaar.p lz continue

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:26 am

        Well there’s not only marriage twist

    6. AnahitaAnnie on April 1, 2017 2:29 am

      U got tons of comment yesterday hafsaa. Don’t worry u r doing great. Please keep posting.

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:26 am

        Thanks and I honestly love your story ??

      • AnahitaAnnie on April 1, 2017 8:39 am

        Thnx a lot hafsaa. It means a lot

    7. saniyaa on April 1, 2017 2:36 am

      seriously…saiyyam got married to krishna…this is an unexpected twist..im so shock..waiting fr nxt…pls update soon…wanna knw what made krishna marry saiyyam

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:28 am

        There’s more suspense

    8. AFANFICWRITER on April 1, 2017 2:51 am

      How could we lose interest in this masterpiece?!?! Are you mad?! ? jk. I love this ff, its so sweet and romantic but also so thrilling because man… this twist… it was shocking! I just want to know why this all happened know- im super excited for it! And wow- your writing.- all you beautiful descriptions of his shampoo and her heartbeat and everything in between…. it was a pleasure to read, truly. Please dont think we are losing interest… and thank you for asking and being interested in my ff it means a lot… ive been too busy to update it recent but im on school holidays now so i will definitely update for you all xx

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:29 am

        Aww means alot♥️♥️

    9. shabnam on April 1, 2017 2:55 am

      Continue awesome waiting for next update

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:30 am

        Submitted ????

    10. Shiza Arif on April 1, 2017 3:02 am

      Noooo plz dont stop…

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:30 am

        I won’t ??

    11. sara on April 1, 2017 4:23 am

      U r storyline is same as ipkknd…r u copying the same plot

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:31 am

        Well it might seem that way but this is the beginning and I surly don’t wanna copy anyone ??

    12. Shaani on April 1, 2017 7:17 am

      Very nice loved it… Wht a twist… So many questions r on mind… Waiting for the next parts to clarify them… Keep going…

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:31 am

        Well shaani there’s more coming up twists that will shock you ????

      • Shaani on April 1, 2017 10:21 am

        Eagerly waiting for to read yaar… Jaldi.. Upload karo na..

    13. Isha on April 1, 2017 7:31 am

      Oh plz continue ‘cuz we r all enjoying it.. and don’t even think to stop this ff… 🙂 the scenes were beautifully written…when her heart beats rose mine also rose.. btw superb epi and update Asap 🙂

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:32 am

        Hahaha thank you ??

    14. Richa shah on April 1, 2017 7:46 am

      Good epi but what a resion sayyam Krishna’s marriage next updates upload fast

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:32 am

        Suspense for now✨

    15. Meyxx13 on April 1, 2017 8:14 am

      Hafsa please continue ♥️♥️

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:33 am

        I surly will??

    16. Kriyam❤️ on April 1, 2017 8:14 am

      Awesome ??

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 8:33 am

        Thanks???‍♀️

    17. rashiverma2199 on April 1, 2017 9:05 am

      Wow…. Amazing…. Continue writing …..???

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:25 am

        I will ??

    18. aaravjaikar on April 1, 2017 9:22 am

      Oh no no no … what r u saying… ur fff was perfect… plzz don’t quit… ur ff got so much… response… then why …. and the marriage suspense…. going to hit the…. floor… loved the way u create.. the suspense…. Awesome writer…..

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:26 am

        Thanks but marriage twist is the start wait for more ???

    19. aaravjaikar on April 1, 2017 9:38 am

      it”s going to be my 2 nd best ff.. on tellyupdates over kriyam….

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:26 am

        Really means alot?

    20. Rasha on April 1, 2017 9:44 am

      Pls don’t stop it is very interesting… Wish u could give lon episodes.. Beautiful writing. Keep it up

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:27 am

        Yes I’ll make longer updates but these were already made

    21. Hibaa on April 1, 2017 10:47 am

      Hafsa no is Interested in your ff ??

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:27 am

        Thanks for telling

    22. Zani Saleem on April 1, 2017 11:26 am

      Nay:3 plz don’t leave…continue it?and the part 13 was???

      • Hafsaaa on April 1, 2017 11:09 pm

        Thanks and I won’t ♥️

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