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Home»Fan Fiction»Just You and Me [Raglak~Episode 1]
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Just You and Me [Raglak~Episode 1]

Jiya_AniBy Jiya_AniJune 16, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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Just You And Me#Raglak~Ani
[Episode 1]
∆PROLOUGE∆

{Swara and Ragini are not Sisters in my ff}

Maheshwari Mansion~
“Sujata…Main sach kahun toh pareshan ho gyi hoon … Laksh sara din sirf kaam karta hai…aur jab kaam se fursat milti hai toh auro ke kaam main busy …ye ladka apne baare main kab sochega??…ghar bhi zyaada nahi reh pata kaam k chakkar main…bas office…uski life toh bas ghar se office aur office se ghar…!”… Annapurna said quite upset while having evening tea.

“Jiji…apki is pe-ro-be-lem ka ram badn ilaaj h …dekhiye pehle parineeta aur phir Swara ke ghar main bahu ban ke aa jane se … Adarsh  aur Sanskar kaise ghar se bandh gye hain…kabhi kabhi Sanskar office bhi nahi jaata…bas …aap ab ek achi si sushil si ladki dhund kar Laksh ki bhi shaadi karva do…aur apna laksh kitna acha dikhta hai…aap ijazat toh do… mere paas toh pehle se hi uske liye aye rishton ki list tayaar h..”….

Ap thinks something..

~Next Scene~

“SURPRISE!!!!!…. WELCOME ME TO MUMBAI”..a guy wearing a jacket with t-shirt and jeans said on a call after he got off private R44 {Robinson44~chopper only for 2 people…1passenger and pilot.. Telling just incase if anyone didn’t knew…and get confused about the scene}

“Thank God man you came ..Mujhe toh laga ki tum meri shadi main aao ge hi nahi…I am glad ki ‘the Business tycoon Laksh maheshwari’ got some time for my marriage…Come soon”…the girl on the call said….so the guy is our hotsome.. Laksh

~Next Scene~

A lavish party hall is shown… People are present in the best of their looks..
The decorations were for a Christian marriage.
Laksh is seen with some of his college friends…{guys the marriage is of Laksh’s college friend Hannah D’cousta}
All were enjoying the party..the rituals still had time..
{Let me name all the friends fast…
Tisca , Karan, Ali, Niel, Ananya… Enough for just supporting roles}

Laksh was looking damn charming …he was wearing a maroon kind-of blazer with pants and a white shirt…
Tisca noticed him a bit lost!….he was thinking about something…
“Laksh….where are you lost?”…she asked..
“Aaahem…dil kya kare jab kisi se …kisi ko pyaar ho jaaye…jane kahan kab..kisi.”…Niel sang teasing him…and a chocolate ball went into his mouth shutting him…Yeah!… Laksh did that
“Oooooooo”…all said…
“So finally the heartthrob is in Love!!”…Ananya said while Laksh took out an anklet..{Song changed to Mere Rashke Qamar in the background}
“I don’t know if its Love or not… There’s just a charm in her from which I can’t come out”… Laksh said looking at it…he reminisced..

~flashback

[Mere rashke qamar tune pehali nazar
Jab nazar se milayi maza aa gaya (x2)
Jab nazar se milayi maza aa gaya
Bark si geer gayi kaam hi kar gayi
Aag aisi lagayi maza aa gaya]

Laksh was walking out of a cafe…
“Help”…a girl wearing a kurti and coaty coat with leggings and had tied a scarf on her face…only her eyes were visible
“Help..some goons are behind me”.. Laksh was lost in her beautiful eyes…

[Jaam mein ghol kar husan ki mastiyaan
Chandani muskurayi maza aa gaya
Ho.]
She snapped in front of him and told that she was in a hurry..
He nodded and sat on the seat that girl held his blazer and he made her sit at back of his lavish bike…he rode off …a few goons were following them..

[Be hizjabaana woh saamne aa gaye
Aur jawaani jawaani se takra gayi
Aur jawaani jawaani se takra gayi]

The girl was asking him to hurry…so he speed up..the girl unintentionally clinched his shirt..

[Aankh unki ladi yu meri aankh se
Aankh unki ladi yu meri aankh se
Dekh kar yeh ladai maza aa gaya
Mere rashke qamar tune pehali nazar
Jab nazar se milayi maza aa gaya]

“Stop ..stop…vo gye..”…
“Thank you soooooooo much…..You don’t know you saved two lifes today…. Thanks a lottttt……………..”….she kept on saying getting off his bike but Laksh was completely lost in her beautiful eyes… he didn’t even realized when she went away like an angel..

[Mere rashke qamar tune pehali nazar
Jab nazar se milayi maza aa gaya (x2)
Jab nazar se milayi maza aa gaya
Bark si geer gayi kaam hi kar gayi
Aag aisi lagayi maza aa gaya]

Laksh was upset that she went …his heart wanted to stop her for some more time infront of him…but she was gone..his eyes fell on the bike’s lower paet and there he found an anklet.. her anklet got untied and tangled on his bike.
Her anklet~https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQEnr_vq7K-LAqxZ5xZXN5XHzFkqssVMBj91QMcXKGhYJgDIoAP-2LqCoT3

He took it and smiled..
~flashback ends.

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Sorry for being late…I was quite busy with all of my ffs and family…

Hope you guys liked the start….
Next epi asap..
And yes if anyone​ needs translations…do tell….I’ll give for you …?

Do comment down
With Love ?

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    23 Comments

    1. Sunny on June 16, 2017 5:45 am

      Interesting.keep going and update soon.

      • Jiya_Ani on June 16, 2017 10:57 am

        Thanks a lot …
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    2. avika on June 16, 2017 9:38 am

      nice

    3. Asw on June 16, 2017 12:05 pm

      I think it’s been long time u update raglak ff it’s interesting keep going

    4. Rehna on June 16, 2017 12:19 pm

      Superb prologue dear

    5. asra on June 16, 2017 12:48 pm

      plz write in English dear…

    6. Sherin on June 16, 2017 7:50 pm

      Awesome

    7. Arjuna on June 16, 2017 8:13 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

    8. Pearly on June 16, 2017 8:50 pm

      Superb intro

    9. Ashly on June 16, 2017 9:47 pm

      Awesome superb

    10. IQRA222 on June 16, 2017 10:37 pm

      jiyu didu it was totally fab!!
      loved it soo much
      so lucky is already in love <3 <3 yay!!
      raglak meet was so interesting
      waiting for the next part

    11. Aamy on June 17, 2017 10:09 am

      Awesome

    12. Malu on June 17, 2017 10:30 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    13. Jiyani on June 17, 2017 11:23 am

      Awesome episode

    14. Monu on June 17, 2017 1:54 pm

      Awesome episode

    15. Elizabethlovely on June 17, 2017 5:36 pm

      Awesome

    16. Anju on June 17, 2017 7:03 pm

      Nice

    17. Vennila on June 17, 2017 7:33 pm

      Superb nd Plz write in english

    18. Laashya on June 17, 2017 7:53 pm

      Beautiful start but I can’t see her anklet

    19. Soumya on June 17, 2017 8:39 pm

      Awesome di….post next soon

    20. Ammu on June 17, 2017 9:13 pm

      Interesting episode and please continue ????????

    21. Vini on June 17, 2017 9:34 pm

      Loved it

    22. hemalattha on June 19, 2017 6:01 pm

      Nice

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