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The journey together (epi-29)

Hiii…. everyone I’m here again your Sharon shrivatsav?….. I was really overwhelmed with your comments….. And hope you all like my ff and plzz…. comment and tell me whether it is good or bad anything…………and sorry guys I behaved so rudely with you all in the last episode but, I was really depressed? for getting less comments?……. and did not even reply to anyone because I thought I will not get any comments because of my stupidity and did not open the episode itself after my two comments and then I saw I got many comments…..soooo SORRY SORRY SORRY??? guys……..and plzz….keep commenting because I feel somewhat satisfaction ???that I’M doing well in this ff only because of your all comments guys and again sorry for my kiddish???behavior…… ???
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Recap: Lakshya bringing Ragini home? as it was late and the tire? was punctured……..

Raglak?had this sleep after so many days I am saying this because in their respective homes they would miss each other and would cry? remembering each other’s memory and would not sleep hole night……….and remember their nok-jok and also some romantic moments? and also darar?which brought them near and they would also thing that but this problem that is faking is not moving out of their life only……what to do………? (Actually it was a Friday night……….)

@ Morning……….
MM
Swara gets up early? and went to get ready……and came out and sat in front of mirror, she was combing her hair and asked Sanskar to get up Sanskar did not move nor respond……it did repeat for times…..Swara went to him afraid….
Swara: Sanskar……..Sanskar………Sanskar………she was about to call everyone….
Sanskar: I am ok……a bit tired? and want some glucose….
Swara: what? I was so scared……..wait I will bring glucose……..
Sanskar: no need to bring you have it…..
Swara: no…..it not there in the room cupboard wait I will bring and she walks towards door……Sanskar suddenly pulls her towards him and they land upon bed……Sanskar on Swara……….
Swara: Sanskar get up now……you are heavy……..
Sanskar: oh! Really……but you give me my morning doze and then go where ever you want……..?
Swara: morning doze….?
Sanskar: yes…..and makes his lips pouty?and comes towards her……
Swara: Sanskar……and pushes him?…..
Sanskar: what is this Swara……..??
Swara: do not you remember what we did decide…..?
Sanskar: I remember but we are in the half way path now so I need some strength ? to move on……..
Swara: but there is a problem…..
Sanskar: what……….?
Swara: even I need something………
Sanskar: what is it……? Anything for you….
Swara: see….after our marriage you?….
Sanskar: me?….what? Tell it soon…..
Swara: you did not even say…..
Sanskar: say what?
Swara: I LOVE YOU?………
Sanskar: what? Ok……I LOVE YOU?…..now come on and approached her for the kiss
Swara: how unromantic?……..? Not like this….
Sanskar: then……..
Swara: you need to do something special? and propose me……
Sanskar: then……..
Swara: then I will think of other things……..
Sanskar: ok…..be ready to become completely mine soon……..
Swara: let us see….
Sanskar: now kiss at least……
Swara: no……and pushed him to bathroom……..and went down…..

House Mandir⛺……
Swara started her Bhajan and everyone came and stood behind her except for RagLak as they were in deep sleep???……..but Ragini was disturbed due to the Bhajan she heard……..
Ragini got up……
Ragini: where am i…..? Wait……….this is not my room…..and she tries to get up but she sees Lakshya sitting beside her and she holding his hand?…………she starts shouting AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!???
Lakshya got up due to her scream and tried to stop her……by closing her mouth in his palms……..
Lakshya: why are you shouting……??
Ragini indicated him to leave her mouth then she can speak……..?
Ragini: you have kidnaped me and brought me here and asking me why did I shout……?
Lakshya: kidnap……..
Ragini: yes……..and starts to shout again and Lakshya tried to stop her……by closing her mouth in his palms again……….by this time whole MM entered their room and Ragini was shocked and Lakshya also saw them……..
Lakshya: now did you understand I did not kidnap you………
Ragini: what am I doing here……?
Swara and Sanskar explained her everything and Ragini gave a guilty? look to Lakshya but changed it…..
Swara: come with me and change your dress ?and get freshened up……it’s already 8?
Ragini: Sanky you did not go to office?……
Sanskar: its Saturday today……..
Ragini: Swara I will go home?……..
Avni: Bhabi?……..I mean Ragini dii?…..stay here we will even call Raj? we all can enjoy……
Ragini: but……
SwaSan: great Ragini will stay and we will call Raj………and Sanskar called? him and told him to come to which he readily agreed……..
Ragini: but what about my dress.?….
Swara: you forgot we can wear each others dresses?………no come on and she took Ragini with her……..and asked her to freshen up and come down………and she went down……
AP: Swara beta we have to attend a marriage? today so me and your papaji ?are going so you have to take care of home alone today……and even Sumi? aur Shekar ji ?are also coming……
Swara: its ok…..maaa…..i will manage…..
Ragini: even I am there today to help……..
AP: when did you come……..?
Ragini: aunty……when you were giving responsibility to Swara……….
AP: aunty nahi maaa……..
Ragini: sorry aunty……
AP: bolana maaa…..
Ragini: ok….maaa……….
AP and DP went out and Raj entered MM……
Raj: Hiii!!! Everyone I know you all cannot enjoy without me so you all called me……?
Lakshya also comes down……
Avni: nothing likes that…..?
Raj: I know I know……….
Lakshya: bhai……..I am going out ?to meet some clients?……..
Swara: Lakshya………no…..you are not going……..see we all are enjoying after long time……..
Lakshya: any way some body cannot enjoy if I am here so let me go…..???
Sanskar: I called that client already he is out of station✈……..
Lakshya: its ok……i will stay in my friends house ?today and I will come tomorrow……….
Raj: plzz…..Laksh stay no……
Avni: ha! Bhai plzz…..
Lakshya: I told you already some body cannot enjoy if I am here so let me go…..bye everyone and he went out……..
Sanskar: Laksh……Laksh……..he was gone………
Swara: now even I will not come……?
Avni: me too…..?
Ajgini (Ragini and Raj): then why did you ask us to stay here……..?
Sanskar: thinking that everyone one will enjoy…..?
Ajgini: so we will also leave………?
Avni: I have an idea to bring him back……?
SwaSan: what………??
Avni: only if Ragini diii……..agrees……?
Raj: she will do……..?
Ragini: what……….??
SwaSan: for us plzz……you tell Avni……..
Avni tells them something which is muted………. (God: criminal minded??……)
Ragini: no I am not going to do anything like that……..?
AvRaj and SwaSan: plzz…..ladoo……..
Ragini: ok……..? (God: all are partners in crime?………)
Lakshya was driving the car and suddenly Sanskar called him?……
Lakshya: hello bhai………there was no reply……he was about to cut the call…..
Ragini: help me………?
Swara: Ragini?…………..and the call hung up…..
Lakshya was scared ?what might have happened………? He took U-turn and reached MM in no time……

MM
Avni: see he will be here in no time……..
Raj: 5⃣…..4⃣……….
Avni: 3⃣……2⃣……..
AvRaj: 1⃣………and Lakshya entered…… (God: What timing?…….)
Lakshya: Ragini…………Ragini…………Swara…… Where are you all……..? He was so worried that he searched the whole house but could not find anyone and went to terrace and he was shocked………
Ragini: catch me if you can……..
Swara: Ragini……….
Sanskar: Swara times up……
AvRaj: again Swara diii……out……and they all saw Lakshya and acted as if nothing happened……… (God: you all can better go to some acting classes to teach there……..???)
Raj: Laksh you came back so soon……… (God: Dramebaazzzz???)
Avni: bhai you went to meet your friend right……? (God: right ki bacchii?……..)
Lakshya: WO……..
Swara: did you come back to enjoy with us……… (God: enjoy ki bacchii?……he would have died? in few minutes if you were not showing up…..)
Lakshya: no……WO Swara……..Ragini…..phone…… (God: I can understand Lakshya?………take breathes……?)
Sanskar: what are you speaking…..? Tell it clearly……….
Lakshya: why did you call me…..?
Sanskar: me………? (God: if these are selected to Oscar award sure they would only win???……✌✌✌)
Lakshya: haa……..and then I heard Ragini screaming help me………and Swara Ragini……..
SwaRagini: us……..
Lakshya: yess……
Ragini: I was just playing with them asked to help me not to get caught by Swara……
Swara: I was catching her so called her name……
AvRaj: why are you so much worried……?
God: they are overtaking the best actors.?…….what will they do if these enter in Film Industry?……..
Lakshya: I thought something might have happened……..
Ragini: as if you care…….. (God: he cares so he came…?..)
Sanskar: leave all that Lakshya if you want to join us you can……..
Ragini: I will not have any problem…… (God: I know you will be happy..?…)
Lakshya was so exhausted after running around the whole house that he fell down…….. (God: see the natija= (result)……)
Sanskar: Laksh………
AvRaj: Bhai………
Swara: pick him up………

They all were panicking and Ragini was controlling herself……now she could not control…..
Ragini: I will bring water and was about to go……
Lakshya: no…..Swara you bring the water……..
Swara: ok….wait….you are awake……
Sanskar: you are a big Dramebaazzzz….. (God: not more than you…….???..)
Lakshya: when you all can play with me even I can……… (God: tit for tat…..)
AvRaj: what………?
Lakshya: what do you think……? I will not come to know that you all are acting…..
Swara: WH…..what?
Lakshya: what do you all think of me you will fool me and I will get fooled……? (God: never……)
Sanskar: what are you talking Lakshya……?
Ragini: Sanskar…..wait……yes we fooled you is there any problem……?
Lakshya: will you solve it if I tell my problem….?
Ragini: never……
Lakshya: then why do you want to speak…..? Just keep mum…..
Ragini: what…..?
Raj: stop it guys……
Avni: bhai……we are sorry we just wanted you to join us……..
Lakshya: its ok..☺…and I will join you……

All were excited ???now and they thought they will spend some quality time…..
Lakshya: so what do we play…..?
Sanskar: cricket…..
Swara: very funny…..
Raj: hide and seek…..
Avni: child ho kya……? (Are you a child….?)
Lakshya: ok…..final……Antyakshari…..
Ragini: at last something useful……
Lakshya: always mocking people……… (He told it bit slowly…..)
AvRaj: ok….let….s start……
Swara: let us make teams……….all the girls on my side…..
Sanskar: and all the boys on my side……..
They all spread some mat on the terrace and sat on it girls on one side and boys on one side……..and they started with Sanskar……..

Precap: which song will Sanskar sing……..? And emotional atyachar……
Sanskar: Zara Zara behekta hai mehekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon Mujhe bharle apani baahon mein
Zara Zara behekta hai mehekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon Mujhe bharle apani baahon mein he sang the whole song seeing Swara…..
Swara: o rehnuma mere rehnuma
Oo tere naam sa ab koi bhi labhz nahi
Padh kar dekhein sau kitaabein sau dafaa
Dildara dildara, yeh ratti bhar ka jag saara
Dildara dildara, tere nazaro kadam pe sab vaara
Oo dildara dildara tab jeeta jab tujhse haara
Dildara dildara
Darling darling……
Raj: Aa raat bhar aa raat bhar
Jaaye na ghar jaaye na ghar
Hai saath tu kya hai fikar
Jaaye na ghar Aa raat bhar
Jaaye jahaan jahaan jahaan dil kare
Jaane kahan kahan kahan fir mile
Iss raat mein beete umar saari umar
Aa raat bhar aa raat bhar
Jaaye na ghar jaaye na ghar
Avni: Dehleez pe mere dil ki Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi likh di mere humdum
Haan seeka maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seeka maine jeena mere humdum
Na seeka kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Ne seeka jeena tere bina humdum………
Lakshya: mujhse hi aaj mujkho mila de
Dekhoon aadaton mein tu ahi ki nahi
Har saans se pooch ke bataa de
Inke faaslon mein tu hai ki nahi (x2)
Main aas-paas tere aur mere paas……
Tu hai ki nahi…….. (x4)
Ragini: Matlabi ho ja zara matlabi
Duniyaki sunta hai kyun
Khud ki bhi sun le kabhi (x2)
Kuch baat galat bhi ho jaaye
Kuch der ye dil bhi kho jaaye
Befikar dhadkane iss tarah se chale
Shor goonje yahaan se wahaan
Sooraj dooba hai yaaron do ghoont nashe ke maaron
raste bhula do saare gharbaar ke
Sooraj dooba hai yaaron do ghoont nashe ke maaron
Gham tum bhulado saare sansaar ke………
Raj: so each of us sung a song
Avni: and the points are equal……..
They started again….by Lakshya……
Lakshya: Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behat aur beshuman aaya hai (x2)
Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise
Jaise shaakon se patte be-haya
Bikre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab lega ya
Na fiqar na sharam na lihaaj ek baar aaya hai
Phir zaare zaare main deedar aaya hai
Phir zaare zaare main deedar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai
Behat aur beshuman aaya hai (x2)
Ragini: nai nai naina mere doonde hai dar pe dar kyu tuhje
Nai nai manzarie takte hai iska dar kyu muhje
Zara Zara poolonpe chadne laga dil mera
Zara zara katonse ladne laga dil mera
Mein parishaan parishaan parishaan parishaan
Aateshe wo kahaa
Mein parishaan parishaan parishaan parishaan
Ranje se hai duaa
Kash kaake galiya mudune lagi hai mudne lagi hai
Rahon se teri jadne lagi hai jadne lagi hai……….

Avni: enda engapuraye pundudke indanla aala
Mandi kattikadayi bindala ayedi bai…. (Actually I do not know Tamil so adjust….)
Raj: he pelli Tamil terayada hindi le once again da…..
Avni: punam kichandu ko gungat ke neeche chupake…..
Laai tere liye duniya se nazare churake
Raj: piche kuwa aage mere kaii tuhi bata jaahu mein kaha
Mujko duwa kiski lagi baari aake pada rahu jo yaha
Avni: ille phikar aaja idar beet pe lagalete dumkaa
AvRaj: one two three four get on the dance floor
one two three four get on the dance floor
bump shake bump shake thapan guchi rad four
SwaSan: shoulder hichik pichik body hichik pichik
Give me give me give me give me some more
RagLak: one two three four get on the dance floor
one two three four get on the dance floor
bump shake bump shake thapan guchi rad four
shoulder hichik pichik body hichik pichik
Give me give me give me give me some more
They all start dancing in pairs SwaSan, AvRaj and Raglak (God: wow forgot everything……)
every pair danced to the beat of their hearts and enjoyed a lot with each other and while dancing they didn’t care about any thing else in the world……
they all had forgotten where they were……especially RagLak they we’re having immense eye lock…… so we’re others but AvRaj were now falling for each other…….and they actually did not know what they we feeling but felt something for each other….. which was liked by them….. and everyone danced singing the whole song together……. and came back to senses when they finished the song as well as dance…… and everyone’s eyes we’re still locked with their partners…….but ragini ra. from there she did not see which room but went and locked it asnd Lakshya was behind her……

Precap: Ragini………locked herself……is it suicide???……..? This time it is not flash back guys……..and plzz….do tell me whether I should make her die or unite them………….comment fast guys it all depends on you guys……

GUY’S ALSO SUGGEST A GOOD GIRL NAME FOR THIS FF…… plzzz….???
SO HERE IS THE REPLY……..✨✨✨
Rafee, Sindhu rm, Harani, Nisha Malik, Priya, Sarah, Kruti, Ani, Kaira, Aarti, Swati, Naimi, Kalai, Adhrika, Arshi, Ruhani, Heena, Ayushi, Neha, Taiana, Ammu, Meghs, Anzana (actually anzana as telling the complete history in middle would be boring hence I have stopped it and continuing like present and in middle, middle past hope you understood and I think if u refer to older episodes from episode 24 onwards you will understand better…….) THANK YOU EVERYONE, EACH AND EVERYONE AND ALSO I’M REALLY VERY VERY SORRY FOR MY BEHAVIOR IN THE LAST EPISODE I WAS JUST DEPRESSED OF NOT GETTING ENOUGH COMMENTS AND I SHOWED IT ON YOU ALL SOOOOOO…..SORRY GUYS…..PLEASE FORGIVE ME….???I know asking sorry is not enough but please forgive me…..♡♡♡

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