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Home»Fan Fiction»Journey from Deceiver to Lover – Shivomika FF (INTRO)
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Journey from Deceiver to Lover – Shivomika FF (INTRO)

Ashlyn.GBy Ashlyn.GMay 11, 201747 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey lovely people!!! Ashlyn here… I am here with my first FF ever
Firstly I just want to be thankful to all the talented writers here on the TU for motivating me …You guys are just too awesome…
Umm I am little nervous here…Enough of chattering I think!!!

INTRO-
The Mighty Sun is slowly waking from its another beautiful sleep…Birds are chirping…A cool breeze is blowing…there is a freshness in the atmosphere…Every living being is still awaking from deep slumber…

Scene-1
Despite of this quietness in the surroundings there is going on a lot of hustle and bustle in one of the most magnificient and beautiful mansions of the country,mansion of ‘THE OBEROI’S’.
Whole mansion is been decorated as a new bride as there comes a big occasion after soo many years.

(A middle aged lady is shown in a decent and stylish attire with her chunky jewellery…. directing the members of working staff )
Lady-I know you people are good in this… but I still want everything to be perfect.
Staff-Mam you don’t worry…we will manage this properly
Old lady(in simple attire)-Yes Jhanvi puttar u don’t take stress
Jhanvi-Why not to take stress mummyji?There is a marriage in this house today.

(Suddenly a young girl in her early 20s enters)
Girl-Mumma look,Bade Bhaiya’s wedding will be going to take place in few hours and still my friend cum stylist has not arrived what I’m gonna do
Jhanvi-Don’t worry Ms.Priyanka Singh Oberoi you are gonna be look just perfect and gorgeous.You are my chand na….
(A boy about 25 years with muscular build enters)
Boy-Chand par arz kiya hai ,Say “Irshad” Prinku
Prinku-Rudra bhaiya Aap bhi na I’m not saying anything
Rudra-Say na
Prinku-Okk okk Irshad
Rudra-Kaash tere chehre pr pimples ke daag hote,Kaash tere chehre pr pimples ke daag hote….

Chand toh tu hai hi ,sitaare bhi saath hote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wah wah ! wah wah !wah wah!
Dadi-Oye khoteya
Prinku-Shut up Rudra bhaiya …You are truly Duffer Singh Oberoi
Rudra-Hutt pagli I’m just sooo intelligent you won’t understand my smartness….Accha you were talking about your stylist …Is she cute???
Prinku(thinking something)-Very …Umm I mean Her name is Lovely… she is very pretty and cute You are gonna like her
Rudra-Oh my God ,now I am in much hurry than you

(Then someone enters with three female assistants…..)
Prinku-Oh my god There you are!!! Rudra bhaiya here is my friend cum stylist Mr.Lovely…
To Lovely-Meet my Mom Dadi and brother Rudra….
(Rudra who has started dreaming about beautiful Lovely feels the ground slipping under his feet seeing a male instead of female……(Chhann se joh toote koi sapna jag soona soona lage plays in BG)
Lovely-Hello to all!!!
Prinku(smirking like a devil)-Rudra bhaiya he is nice na…..
Rudra(in a very low tone so that only Prinku can hear)-Prinku ki bacchi you are gonna be murdered by me very soon.

Scene-2
Whole surrounding is just so bewitching…Its as if heaven has come down on earth…atmosphere filled with fragnance of Roses and white orchids making the place look enchanting and beautiful …Everything decorated in a combination of Red and white …In middle of this A beautifully decorated Mandap is shown With a handsome guy Beautifully dressed in the attire of Groom standing there waiting for his beautiful bride
There she comes just looking as the most gorgeous girl on this planet But the thing that catch his attention as always is her charm moon bracelet which she always wear on her left wrist…..But all of a sudden out of no where water is thrown on the groom…..
Guy-Ohh god what is this……
(While looking at his surrounding he comes to reality)
Guy-Oh my god that was dream
Rudra-haan Mr.Omkara singh Oberoi That was a dream….there is still time left for your marriage…khyali pulaon pakana band kro…… O I think something is burning
Om-You are burning duffer who bhi with jealousy ….
(then he sees his shirt which he was ironiong for last 1hr which is now fully ruined)
Rudra-Hey bhagwan O yeh kya kiya …Despite being a well known artist,a millionaire ,an Oberoi ironing your own shirt…..vaise iss pr ek sher aaya hai
“kamre mein baithe baithe O kr rha tha press, Bhabhi ki yaad aayi jal gyi uski dress”wah wah..wah wah…
Om-shut up Rudra…………….

SCREEN FREEZES ON A GUY STANDING OUTSIDE THE OBEROI MANSION WITH HIS BODYGUARD READING THE WELCOME BOARD WITH WORDS WRITTEN ON IT AS ‘OMKARA WEDS ANIKA’…..

SO HERE’S THE INTRO!!! GUYS HOW’S IT???

I know Omkara weds Anika is not at all acceptable….. I am also a huge fan of just and just Shivika because they are just meant to be together….But trust me guys there are some surprises for you and as the story further unfolds We are going to see what we want to see……

PLEASE COMMENT BELOW AND LET ME KNOW YOUR VIEWS GUYS ……..
With lots of love
ASHLYN

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    47 Comments

    1. Nitika on May 12, 2017 12:52 am

      Fantastically funny ff 😉
      Please don’t make Om negative

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:00 am

        Thank u soo much Nitika…I’m glad u like it…Om is a postive guy he will further remain soo…?

    2. Sagithya on May 12, 2017 1:00 am

      Great… but please shivika oly should be getting married…all the best for ur ff..

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:05 am

        Thank you soo much Sagithya…I noe omika is a bit shocking for now…but there are gonna be little twists and turns…soo keep reading and keep commenting …☺

    3. Aashi on May 12, 2017 1:25 am

      gazab ka twist & that too in 1st update
      amazing chapter
      curiosity’s lined up
      update soon

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:07 am

        Thank you Aashi….i will try to update asap☺

    4. Dowlath786 on May 12, 2017 1:27 am

      ? om wed anika i think it will be shivay nice ya

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:11 am

        Thank u soo much Dowlath…I think you are also a big Harry Potter fan like me…btw thanx for commenting dear….

    5. anujohnson on May 12, 2017 1:30 am

      This seems interesting..pls don’t forget to send me links..I don’t come to TU page often…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:14 am

        Thanks a lot Anujohnson…I’m really happy u liked it….i will keep in mind to send you links…

      • Dowlath786 on May 12, 2017 10:01 am

        Ya ashiyn i love harry potter very much

    6. Banita on May 12, 2017 2:33 am

      Awesome dr….. But plzz make shivika only…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 7:18 am

        Thank you Banita…i will keep ur wish in mind dear….☺

    7. Dhar on May 12, 2017 9:44 am

      Awesome episode ??, plzz dont make om a negative character, fab start

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 11:01 am

        Thank you soo much Dhar….??

    8. kanfi on May 12, 2017 10:06 am

      Ashlyn,,its a good start dear…
      I wish there would b surpris,,,dont want asnika n omkara,,,
      Waiting for next part,,

      Ifu have time ,do read mu ff

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 11:09 am

        Thank you Kanfi…I am really happy you liked it dear….

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 11:12 am

        I ‘m gonna read your ff and gonna comment on it too… take care dear…

    9. Arthi on May 12, 2017 10:40 am

      I just loved it and I want them as a pair even though myself being shivika lover and this was superb and don’t make om negative pl……..

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 11:15 am

        Thank you Arthi…your comment means a lot to me…and i will keep your wish in my mind in further updates☺

    10. Rhea on May 12, 2017 11:28 am

      It is awesome episode plz update next part soon

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 8:21 pm

        Thank you soo much Rhea…i will surely try to post next part asap

    11. Alisa on May 12, 2017 12:33 pm

      Please their should be only shivika

    12. Niriha on May 12, 2017 12:40 pm

      Awesome…interesting waiting for next update soon

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thank you Niriha…I’m glad You liked it dear….I’ll try to update ASAP….

    13. Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 12:42 pm

      Hey Alisa dear …trust me You will be going to see what you want to see …thank you for your views..tc

    14. Bhavana on May 12, 2017 1:14 pm

      Wow!! Superbbbbb start!!
      Amazing concept!! Loved it!!!
      Update nxt one asap!!

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thank you soo much Bhavana dear?

    15. aryaraju on May 12, 2017 1:32 pm

      Good one ??

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thanks Aryaraju…..

    16. Anu16 on May 12, 2017 2:12 pm

      Wow nice twist post soon…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 2:27 pm

        Thanxx Anu….

    17. Priya on May 12, 2017 2:19 pm

      Seems interesting ?…waiting for nxt update…

    18. Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 2:25 pm

      Thank you sooo much Priya dear….. I’m glad u liked it….gonna update next pretty soon…till then tc….

    19. alekhika20 on May 12, 2017 8:46 pm

      Nyc intro

    20. Ashlyn.G on May 12, 2017 11:03 pm

      Thank you Alekhika…?

    21. jenny on May 13, 2017 8:49 am

      Ashlyn, that is so amazing.
      If I say in Annika’s language. A khikditod intro…
      And I smell some mystery here…
      In initial days of IB, I liked Annikara as a couple, so I don’t have any problem imagining them as one.
      Shivika too have become my favourite…
      I would love it in both ways.
      But as the focus would be on shivika only, in the end, Would love to see how the mystery unfolds..
      Well done:)

      • Ashlyn.G on May 13, 2017 4:15 pm

        Thank you Jenny dear….thank u soo much for your khidkitod comment….take care ya…

    22. ayshakhan on May 13, 2017 3:01 pm

      superb very nice rudra shairies was soo gud end fuuny …plzzz dear I wnt rudra scene mor in nxt updt if u can

      • Ashlyn.G on May 13, 2017 4:11 pm

        Haha…I know Rudra shaiyris were lame?? but they needed to be match to his below room temperature IQ….???Thanks Aysha for commenting…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 13, 2017 4:13 pm

        And yeah I will try to include more scenes of Rudra if possible… becoz we all love him and his super intelligent brain???

    23. Ankita on May 13, 2017 10:41 pm

      Great start dear… rudra is superb cute… Amazing update…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 14, 2017 8:11 am

        Thanks a lot Ankita for your precious comment….☺

    24. fffan1234 on May 14, 2017 10:05 pm

      Lovely update…

      • Ashlyn.G on May 14, 2017 11:09 pm

        Thank you ff fan…☺ next episode has also been posted

    25. angela on May 14, 2017 11:21 pm

      its awesome ashlyn and its really a different concept looking forward to it

      • Ashlyn.G on May 15, 2017 6:44 am

        Thank you Angela…?

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