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Joru ka Gulam (A riansh OS) by Aisha08

Aisha08By Aisha08July 4, 2021Updated:July 8, 202180 Comments8 Mins Read
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Namastey mitro! Suprabhat!!

I know many of u are ready with jutta chappals but i was not in frame of mind to write anything still feeling the same i am trying but unable to write..kaafi mushkil se ye likha hai .

So i have decided that i will post an OS every Sunday..

Congratulations to me i got a new phone,πŸ₯°

Will post FFs soon…

Here i go!!!

Scene 1

A beautiful lady is running here and there flaunting her baby bump shouting no!! No !! Please leave me..
Dont do this to me..i will kill you ..leave me..alone..mere pss mt ana..jao yaha se..

Her Pov

Huff!! Hello!! Stop laughing on me ok

Have some mercy on pregnant women

Well i am riddhima raisinghania and right now i am running from my devil husband who is chasing me with a glass of milk

Yuckk! I hate milk..

But vansh ! My puppy ! Ups! My hubby is extremely possesive about me and his princess who is kicking me from inside and troubling me like his father

He keeps making me eat something every hour..

C’mon man i am caring 1 child not 100..

Ok now stop talking and let me run…

Pov ends

Vansh’s pov

Hello! I am the great vansh raisinghania

People just scared by my name and here i am running behind my little wife with a glass of milk..

She is drama queen…

N number of times i told her to take care but she is reckless

I wish my princess won’t get this trait of her mother..

Well we are living in a resort right now because of my work.i can’t leave her alone at home so she is accompning me..

My colleagues always talk about us..how i stick to my wife 24*7 like a lost puppy etc etc…

C’mon you should praise me that i stick to my wife only not to other’s πŸ˜‚

Ok let me go now… My little wifey is troubling me like hell

Pov ends

Scene 2

After 2 hours

Riddhima is sitting with one of vansh’s colleague Shruti chit chatting but vansh appears out of the blue with a plate of food in his hand making her agitated again

Vansh – it’s time for lunch sweetheart now have this without any tantrum

Riddhima (pouting) – I am not hungry na vansh please not now

Vansh – you have to take your medicine also..

Riddhima pick a morsel and about to eat but vansh holds her hand stopping her

Vansh – Angre!! First check the food properly then only my sweetheart will eat

Shruti – i also ate the same food vansh..its nice

Vansh (ignoring) – But you are not my sweetheart so better not to interfere again ..

Shruti leaves stomping her foot on ground

Riddhima smiles seeing vansh with tears brimming in her eyes

Vansh makes her eat food like a baby

Scene 2

Riddhima is walking in garden with some colleagues of vansh ( don’t ask me anything they all are velle like me)

Shruti – vansh cares for you so much na riddhima ..you are lucky

Riddhima – he is my world i can do anything for him..

Suddenly vansh comes there with with his male colleagues

Vansh – how are you feeling sweetheart now

Riddhima – my legs are paining vansh

Very next moment she is in air in her husband’s arm

Riddhima – what are you doing vansh drop me ..see everyone is staring us..

Vansh – then let them..you are important to me not they..

He leaves from there ignoring everyone’s stare..

Scene 3

Riddhima is scolding vansh for holding her heels in his hands and walking in public place

Riddhima – vansh give me my heels..

See your colleagues are staring you..

Vansh – they are straight riddhima relex

You are my wife and you are my responsibility not they..

From now no more heels you will wear only flatter ok..

He takes her from there leaving people talking about them behind..

Scene 4

Riansh are cuddling on bed with each other

Vansh – i am so excited sweetheart just 2 months more and we will have our princess

I promise i won’t let anything happen to you both this time

Riddhima (kissing his forehead) – as fas you are with us nothing can happen to us..

Vansh – she will be in my team and we both will trouble you alot

Riddhima(pouting) – not fair i will be alone then..

Vansh (teasing)- we will have a Prince then😜

Riddhima (hitting him)- you pervert!!

Vansh pulls her more closer and they slept in each other embrace..

Scene 5

All the colleagues of vansh are sitting together and making fun of vansh

C1- he is joru ka gulam..seems like he is afraid of his wifeπŸ˜‚

C2- he keeps clinging to his wife as she will run away..

C3 – he praises her so much!!
Like seriously who praise his own wife this much

C4- this kind of man is shame on the name of men..

Bs biwi ke piche dum hilane ko bolo…

Itna bhi kya care krna…

We should dominate our wife

Suddenly riddhima comes there in anger

Riddhima(angry)- one more word about my vansh and i will rip you guys apart..

you stereotypes people don’t have any work..

Always gossiping about others without knowing their story..

But i will tell you today why my vansh cares for me this much..

I was pregnant 1 year ago and that time vansh was on trip to london due to his work

He couldn’t taken care of me and i had a miscarriage ..we lost our baby..

I was in depression for 4 months and my vansh blamed himself for this..

But he didn’t give up he took care of me and took me out of dipression.. without caring about himself

He had N number of sleepless night sitting beside me and soothing my pain..

You guys don’t know how much he suffered ..

He makes sure now that I don’t face any problem..

I beg please don’t hurt him more..

She leaves from there crying

Scene 4

All the colleagues of vansh’s are asking forgiveness from him

C1- we are sorry sir..we bad mouthed so much about you without knowing your ordeal..

C- please sir forgive us..

Vansh – its ok no need to ask forgiveness..

Just stop judging people without knowing their story

And taking care of your own wife won’t be a shame on your so called men’s tag

Nobody will be on you side at your death bed..

But your partner will be the one who will be with you in every phase of life .

This society won’t take care of you they won’t feed you..they won’t sacrifice their needs for you .

It’s only life partnerΒ  your wife who will support you everytime..

And taking care of her is a pride for me because she is my queen and i am proud of it..

I don’t give a damn what this stereotypes pathetic people will think about me..

I won’t be a joru ka gulaam ..but you will surely a dharti pe bojh..

Riddhima – I am indeed lucky who got vansh as my life partner..

Every wife needs a husband like vansh so that no domestic violence case no dowry case will lodge and no wife will have to do suicide..just because their husband don’t value their efforts..

She holds vansh hands and smiles saying

Riddhima – He is my king and i am proud of him!!

Vansh (smiling) – She is my queen and i loves her more than the shit society has..

Scene 5

After 2 years

A man is running behind a 2 years old girl with a glass of milk

Man – vanya!! Baby stop don’t trouble your papa have your milk

Vanya (showing her tongue) – milk che che!! Mumma baby don’t like milk!!

A lady comes from behind and picks vanya in her arms and the men encircles them with protectivenss

Man – Not fair riddhima!! This little devil is in your team .and you both trouble me alot ( you guessed right they are our riansh)

Riddhima (pouting) – We both love to seek your attention vansh..

Vansh – and i love to give my all attention and care to you my lifelines

But now give me a prince who will be on my side

vanya (angry)- No other baby!! Only vanya..mumma papa and vanya..

Riddhima (laughing) – she got the traits possesiveness from you vansh..

He kisses riddhima and vanya..and they share a family hug

The end!!

Hope u all liked it..

Do comments and support..

Lob u all

 

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    80 Comments

    1. N Ayesha on July 4, 2021 8:46 am

      Itni late aai didu aap.
      Pout 😢😢.
      Jab bhi aati hoon Kamal kar deti hoo.
      Loved 😍😍😍😍 it…

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 9:03 am

        Sry yr..bt i was unable to write..i m trying..
        Thnq for missing me
        Tysn for ur support

      • N Ayesha on July 4, 2021 9:52 am

        Congratulations didu for your new phone πŸ₯³πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸΊπŸ»πŸ₯‚ . Party de dena virtual hii… baki mil kar double party lenge ..

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:10 am

        Bilkul πŸ˜‚

    2. Stuti Abigail Tyagi on July 4, 2021 9:01 am

      Brilliant 🀩🀩

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 9:02 am

        Thnq dear..

    3. @Mj on July 4, 2021 9:04 am

      Superb❀❀❀

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:14 am

        Thnq.. dear…

    4. Pomu on July 4, 2021 9:12 am

      Super Amazing OS aishu❀️❀️❀️Its so cute and have a wonderful message too.

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:14 am

        Tysm dear..
        I tried my best to convey right msg

    5. TG on July 4, 2021 9:15 am

      InsaneπŸ˜πŸ’–

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:14 am

        Thnq..dear..

    6. Tanya K on July 4, 2021 9:17 am

      amazing and cute didu❀

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:13 am

        Thnq so much sweetheart 😍

    7. Varshini on July 4, 2021 9:18 am

      Amazing 😍

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:13 am

        Thnq…dear..

    8. prapti0809 on July 4, 2021 9:18 am

      awesome di. loved it. come back soon with your ff

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:13 am

        Tysm dear..
        Will be back soon

    9. Anannya07 on July 4, 2021 9:33 am

      Amazing episode di. I am very happy because you have posted an os. Eagerly waiting for your update

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:12 am

        Tysm dear
        Me khud bhi kafi khush hu,πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    10. Cutuuu on July 4, 2021 9:37 am

      Amazing πŸ’™πŸ§‘
      Congo for new phone 🀭🀭

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:12 am

        Tysm dear..
        Yeah saalo bad naya phone aya h#khush khbri.

    11. Akshara on July 4, 2021 9:41 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:11 am

        Tysm dear..keep supporting

    12. Mennahussein55 on July 4, 2021 9:47 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 10:11 am

        Thnq menna..

    13. 1234Aayu on July 4, 2021 10:14 am

      Amazing!
      Congratulations for new phone..✨

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:57 pm

        Thnq dear

    14. Pinky on July 4, 2021 10:36 am

      How sweet 😍

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:57 pm

        HowπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Well tysm..

    15. Priyanshi_13 on July 4, 2021 10:48 am

      Amazing os aishu 😍 loved it πŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:58 pm

        Tysm dear…

    16. Tanvi_5117 on July 4, 2021 10:48 am

      That was so cute πŸ’œ
      Congratulations for new phone πŸ’–
      Yahan ek bhi nahi mil raha πŸ˜‚

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:58 pm

        Tysm dear..
        Mujhe bhi kafi brso bad mila hπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    17. Palak on July 4, 2021 10:49 am

      Cute πŸ₯°
      Congratulations for your new phone πŸ¦‹

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:58 pm

        Tysm dear..
        ,😍😍

    18. Aishwarya Wanjari on July 4, 2021 10:50 am

      Awesome di chaloo mai bht khush hu ki aap vapas aye….. Post next soon and once again congo

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:59 pm

        Tysm dear..
        Me bhi kafi khush hu πŸ˜‚

    19. Diya on July 4, 2021 11:20 am

      Beautiful

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 12:59 pm

        Thnq dear…stay tuned..

    20. AarushiSoni on July 4, 2021 11:28 am

      Wow di… Amazing!!! Title hi itta gjb tha.. I couldn’t stop myself from peeping inβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..
      Congo for a new phone πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:00 pm

        Hhaha bdi mushkil bad soch k rkha tha..
        Tysm😍😍

    21. Prabhleen 😊 on July 4, 2021 11:43 am

      Awesome OS. Can understand that someotime we are not in frame of mind. So no jutta chuppals. I’m happy that you posted. Congratulations for new phone.

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:00 pm

        Tysm dear for ur understanding..it means alot..

    22. Sristi on July 4, 2021 11:54 am

      Sooo cuteeee πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
      Also it gives such an important message …

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:01 pm

        Thnq dear..
        My main motive was to convey that msg only

    23. Priya Singh on July 4, 2021 12:21 pm

      ❀️

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:01 pm

        😍….

    24. Priyanka Thakur on July 4, 2021 1:04 pm

      Awesome OS Aishu congratulations for new phone

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:50 pm

        Thnq dear…

    25. SUMISHA on July 4, 2021 1:13 pm

      Wonderful dear 😍😍😍😍

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:50 pm

        Tysm…

    26. Chhavi on July 4, 2021 1:14 pm

      ❀

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:51 pm

        😍,.

    27. Attractiveuser on July 4, 2021 1:29 pm

      Amazing episode ❀️❀️.
      Congratulations new phone mil gayaπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ₯³πŸ˜›.
      Really very nice os with wonderful message πŸ’―β€οΈ

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:49 pm

        Tysm dear….

    28. Jasmine kaur on July 4, 2021 1:34 pm

      This one was really amazing aisha di 🀩
      Bichara Vansh kya socha kya hogya πŸ˜‚

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 1:49 pm

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚tysm dear..

    29. Gauri on July 4, 2021 2:08 pm

      It was truly divine 😍😍😍. Like are you serious , I cannot say it’s one of the best, because it’s the bestestest πŸ’—. Great possession portrayed ☺. Har sunday post karna zaroori hai!!!!

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:16 pm

        Awww…thnq dear..
        Its not obliged to post i guess

    30. Sajal Ali on July 4, 2021 4:38 pm

      Amazing os, congratulations for ur new phone. Again lovely os.😘❀❀

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:17 pm

        Thnq dear…

    31. Jayashree on July 4, 2021 4:51 pm

      Wow amazing πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ˜. Really excellent dr. When your r relief then post dr. Iam always waiting for your updates πŸ˜Šβ€οΈπŸ’—. Lot’s love you frd Aisha. Keep smiling

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:20 pm

        Aww..thnq dear for always showering love on me..

    32. Priyadarshini on July 4, 2021 4:51 pm

      Super πŸ’žπŸ’ž

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:19 pm

        Thnq..dear..

    33. JJ on July 4, 2021 4:52 pm

      Wonderful πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ’•

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        Thnq dear….

    34. Vkjhp on July 4, 2021 4:53 pm

      Wow fabulous ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        Thnq…

    35. Sree on July 4, 2021 4:53 pm

      Fantastic OS 🌹🌹❀️❀️😍

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 5:18 pm

        Thnq..

    36. Parita on July 4, 2021 5:32 pm

      Awesome di!!
      Such a cute OS and i loved the way you brought out that husbands should help their wives!
      Waiting for your other posts….pls post soon.
      Congrats for your new phone!

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 8:57 pm

        Tysm dear for ur constant support…

    37. jaskiranarora0605 on July 4, 2021 6:53 pm

      Great one…loved it ❀

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 8:58 pm

        Tysm…

    38. Sayani Sinha on July 4, 2021 8:57 pm

      Fabulous.. Please update soon

      • Aisha08 on July 4, 2021 8:58 pm

        Thnq dear…..

    39. Rukaiya on July 4, 2021 10:01 pm

      Amazing os aisha ❀and congratulations for your new phone. Where is the party???

    40. Zara on July 5, 2021 1:00 pm

      Amazing os dear

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