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Home»Fan Fiction»Jo tu mera humdard hai… part 7
Fan Fiction Kuch Rang Pyar Ke Aise Bhi

Jo tu mera humdard hai… part 7

Riti1107By Riti1107March 29, 2017Updated:March 29, 201733 Comments5 Mins Read
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PART 7
A lot of adventure was already done. Maggi in the lab, the blast, sneaking out to the canteen backyard to eat Maggi. The next job was to reach their class safely. It was decided that they’ll say that Sona had fainted near the canteen (Taking idea from your story Juhi). Sona was not ready to lie. So, it was better to say that she fainted & didn’t remember anything.

There were two ways to reach their class but for both of them they had to cross Lady Bacchan’s room. They prayed that she should not be in the room but maybe God was also taking his afternoon siesta because in her room Lady Bacchan was sitting or wait she was doing something weird. From her room’s window she could be seen running about the room shouting “Gotcha!Gotcha”
Sona: What is she doing?
Elena: I guess… she is playing Pokémon Go!

Jatin: At this age! We’ll have to go very quietly near her room & that too individually. When you reach near her window bend down & crawl. Once you reach there wait for the others to come. Got it?
Everyone: Ay Ay Captain

One by one everyone did as Jatin ordered.
Now it was Sona’s turn. She walked as quietly as possible, she bend down near the window & began crawling but luck was seriously not with her that day. In an attempt to catch her Pokémon Lady Bacchan came too close to the window & she saw Sona.
Lady Bacchan(LB): Good Afternoon young lady! Will you mind coming in for some explaination.
Sona went inside her room.

LB: Will you have some tea?
Sona: No. I don’t drink tea
LB: Good,good. Will you eat something? I am ordering sandwiches for myself
Sona: No ma’am. I’m full.
LB: Have something. That’ll help you kill time.
Sona: Kill time?
LB: Yes till I type a detention letter & send it to do the head office.
Sona: Detention?
LB: Yes what were you doing outside? Playing hide & seek with rats.
Sona: There are rats in the school! Isshhh … I never wanted to come to Delhi… You know ma’am in my Kolkata…

LB: Shut Up! I’ve caught you red handed trying to sneak past my room. You are being detained Ms
Just then our hero made a hero wala entry
Dev: Stop Lad… I mean Sharma Ma’am. It’s not Sonakshi’s fault. Leave her
LB: Then who is at fault Mr. Dixit?

Dev: Mine… I wanted to bunk classes… so I told the headboy to give me some duty but I gave my work to Sonakshi…. She … is … unwell today …. but I misused my powers as a student council member. …I’m sorry. …I am the one who should be detained… not Sonakshi
LB: Very Well then Sonakshi should leave. Well you can stay over tea with me Mr. Dixit while I prepare your detention letter. One more thing I was about to use my veto powers to get you selected as the next headboy but I will have to think about it again…
Dev was about to cry hearing the last sentence but he controlled his emotions. Sona was frozen at her seat. She was blankly staring Dev.
LB: Miss Sonakshi. I know you would like to see your culprit be punished but you should leave
Sona: Ma’am actually

Dev (Shouted): LEAVE SONAKSHI
Sonakshi left the office.
…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
After the school, Dev went into the room where he had to spend the next few hours.
Dev: Chal beta Dev! Ye bhi kar le.
There were 5 seats in the room.
Dev: This is strange. I was told that only I’ll be staying back together. Lagta hai Lady bacchan lady ghajni ban gayi hai.
Suddenly, Dev heard a knock at the door.
Jatin: Hey Dude! Are we invited?
Jatin,Elena,Vicky & Sona were standing at the door with their detention slips in their hands.
Vicky: We’ve owned up.
Elena: Sona forced us… Rather… gave us the courage to.
Dev looked at Sona. She passed a faint smile.
Dev: Did you tell about Yammu Ma’am ?
Jatin: No, it could have cost her job.
Sona: This was also Sona’s idea.

Dev: Thanks everyone
Elena: You don’t need to. Now that we’ve bunked together & have been detained together we are friends right?
Jatin: Yes…
Vicky: This was the weirdest way to become friends though.
Dev: Koi na Vicky! Aam kha guthlia mat gin
The detention actually became a fun stay back. The newly made friends were laughing remembering the day’s incidents, from the fight to the lab adventure, sneaking beneath lady bacchan’s room. In all of this there was someone who was sitting quietly, not even speaking a word. Sonakshi was sitting with her head held down in guilt.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
The detention got over. Elena took a rickshaw to the nearest metro station, Vicky & Jatin left for their tuition. Only Dev & Sonakshi were left.
Dev: I’ll drop you Sonakshi.
Sona just nodded in affirmation.
A kid of about 5 came near them
Kid: Bhaiya! Ye rose le lo.(Please buy this rubber ducky)
Dev: Iska mai kya karu?( What will I do with this?)
Kid: Bhaiya mai khana khareed lunga. ( I’ll get to buy food)
Dev: Fine! Kitne ka hai? (How much is it for?)
Kid: 20 rupees ka hai

Dev: Yellow rose de de…. Mere paas to change nahi hai. Chal tu 50 rakh le. ( I don’t have change… you keep 50 )
The kid ran happily.
Devakshi took an autorickshaw & headed towards home.

PRECAP: DEVAKSHI’S AUTO RIDE & WALK BACK HOME

I know it was short but I am not feeling well today. If it was boring then I’m sorry, I’ll compensate in the next episode.
I’ve replied to everyone please check in the previous ff
Thanks for bearing with me
Keep commenting

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    A little bag of mixed emotions ...........

    33 Comments

    1. Princess. on March 29, 2017 4:36 pm

      Awesome

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:22 pm

        Thank You Princess

    2. fuggysona on March 29, 2017 4:52 pm

      ohh it is really awesome nice dear
      good frnds
      and sona is falling into dev
      wow and my personal message
      take care of ur health dear…
      good luck

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:35 pm

        Thanks
        I’m feeling better now

      • fuggysona on March 30, 2017 3:39 pm

        wow thank god for it as it is his blessings

    3. Ritika on March 29, 2017 5:08 pm

      awesome. post soon…

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:37 pm

        Thanks Ritika
        I’ll try to post soon

    4. Manya on March 29, 2017 5:41 pm

      Awesomeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️
      And take care?
      Post soon?

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:47 pm

        Thanks Ayushi

    5. Harshita1407 on March 29, 2017 5:54 pm

      Great yaar

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:48 pm

        Thanks yaar

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:51 pm

        Thanks

    6. Nida on March 29, 2017 6:14 pm

      Amazing..post soon

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:52 pm

        Thanks Nida

    7. priya12 on March 29, 2017 7:00 pm

      Awesomeee dr…
      Take care of u..write after u become well

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 3:55 pm

        Thanks
        & I am already feeling well reading all these comments

      • priya12 on March 30, 2017 4:08 pm

        Tum acche se feel kartee hun….
        Ab jaldi see post karnaa…

    8. Vaishaali on March 29, 2017 7:26 pm

      First of all i would like to say that you should take care of your health first and then write the ff….we will wait for the next update…no need to hurry up..??
      Total hero style entry Mr.Dixit….!!!???
      Ab bhai hero hai toh hero style entry toh hogi hi na…???
      And i wanna ask that are we gonna get ISHJOY anytine soon….???????
      Actually i’m missing their chemistry…??
      Very nice chapter…good going….
      TAKE CARE…!!??

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:08 pm

        Hero agr Shah ho to hero wali entry me bhi 4 chand lag jaate hai?
        IshJoy are coming back from the 9th episode onwards & you’ll see them regularly

    9. akshita on March 29, 2017 7:36 pm

      Lovely ☺☺ nd plzzzz the care of yourself ☺☺

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:09 pm

        Thanks dear

    10. akshita on March 29, 2017 7:37 pm

      Lovely ☺☺ nd plzzzz take care of yourself ☺☺

    11. V.V.harshita on March 29, 2017 8:23 pm

      Awsome post soon

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thank you so much

    12. Yvonne Codner on March 29, 2017 9:59 pm

      Always a “page turner” LoL..Enjoyed to the max and eagerly awaiting the next episode!

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:12 pm

        Yvonne you have commented after a long time
        I thought you’ve stop reading
        Thanks
        & Keep reading nd commenting

    13. nikkita0194 on March 29, 2017 10:49 pm

      Wow that’s amazing it always remind me of the show krpkab its fab how they all stand 4 each other was very gr8
      Firse hug krne ki icha ho rahi hai apko lady bacchan Ke dialog sabse ache the
      Plz plz plz post soon
      And take care

      • nikkita0194 on March 29, 2017 10:51 pm

        Of the show kmhl not krpkab

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:13 pm

        Iccha puri kar lo Nikita
        Virtual hug le lo

    14. ShrutiP on March 29, 2017 10:49 pm

      Amazing….loved it..post soon☺☺

      • Riti1107 on March 30, 2017 4:14 pm

        Thanks Shruti
        Keep reading

    15. Juhi16 on March 31, 2017 9:50 am

      It was Perfect…jst perfect…
      ✊✊✌(in Dev style)…
      Bt ek baat h di..jaan h to jahan h…first take care of yr health..ff vf…to baad me bhi hota rhega…
      And Thanku so much for making some sense out of my nonsense..??I mean thanks for using my comment..??
      And vry exited for nxt episode..yellow rose haan…hud going….??
      And kuch aisa krna ki Jatin ko thoda daal dena beech me taki Mr. Dayalu ka possessive vala side thoda sa dikhe..cz jb bhi mai dev ka sona ko lekar possessive vali side dekhti hoon na to kuch kuch hota h..tum nhi samjhogi..???
      I mean he looks vry cute then…and Viky aur Elena agar use us tym chidhaye tab to chery on the cake vali baat ho jaati h….
      Sry vo mai phir se bkwas krne lagi…?
      Agar dil kre to ye krna otherwise bhi tumhari story bohot mst h and rahegi..??
      Jb tabiyat ekdam theek ho jaaye tab jldi se nxt episode post kr dena di…?

      • Riti1107 on March 31, 2017 6:46 pm

        Mai samajhti hu Juhi … jab bhi Dev Sona ko leke possessive hota hai to kuch kuch se zyaada kuch hota hai … but serial me to Jatin ko furniture bana diya hai
        Yahan try karungi tumhare ideas ko use karne ke liye
        Thanks for your suggestions
        & I’ve already posted raat tak TU should publish

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