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Jndsd-soulmates/ hamari adhoori kahani.. (episode 4)

RockxzBy RockxzFebruary 10, 201711 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys, I know I am late but I am disappointed that on my last ff episode only 6 people commented, I appreciate those who spent their time reading my ff and commented, I am glad …. .. But I need more support from Vitharv fans…. Please comment….
Yessss…. We have one more ff on Vitharv…. Ok..l so, let’s start!!!

Jndsd- soulmates / hammari adhoori kahani (episode 4):

(Vividness has arrived in Mumbai and now she is staying at her friends house.)

Preeti:(to vividha) Vividha I have to go know… Take care of house and be safe….As you know, Karan works abroad, so I had to be extra careful because I was alone with my daughter… But thank god now I have you so I feel a bit secured…… I have to go pick aashi (her daughter) from the boarding school… As you know her vacations are starting….She will be so happy to see you… I was missing her so much…….

Vividha: don’t worry I will take care of house and go hurry or else you will be late and it will make aashi upset…. I will be careful …now go……

Preeti: ok I will go know…. See you in a bit… I will be back soon….good bye…

(Preeti left in her car)
(Vividha is all alone now)

Vividha: let’s go vividha ….. And unpack suitcase (talking to herself)
(She unpacks her stuff and she is not feeling great, she looks sad)

Vividha:(looks into mirror) what’s happening to me?… Why I am looking sad even though I am not.
(She shouts with excitement) wohoo I am in Mumbai…. (Suddenly she became sad again). (She remembers her memories with Atharva in which she was happy, cheerful and excited).
(Hammari adhoori kahani plays….
Paas aaye…
Dooriyaan phir bhi kamm na huyi
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, yeh zaroori nahi
Jaa mile… jaa mile…
Ishq sachcha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein, manzilein…

Rang the, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani
Humaari adhoori kahaani…
Hamari adhuri kahani
Humaari adhoori kahaani…)

…… How much I try I can’t be the same vividha I was… Move on vividha… Stop thinking about past…. (She starts looking at the house)…. This house is so beautiful… (In one room she sees the picture of preeti and Aashi) ah… She is so cute….aashi … I am looking forward to meet you….

(In boarding school principal and teachers are doing arrangements because chairman of school is coming)
principal (to a teacher) : chairman will be arriving soon…. All arrangements should be proper…… You know how disciplined and punctual he is… He wants others to be like that too…. Got it… And go now… Hurry up….

Teacher: yes sir…

Teacher (to a new teacher): how can such a young and handsome men can be chairman of a school….. I was shocked when i first saw him…. I am sure you will be too.
New teacher: let’s see. … How much handsome is our chairman….. And why all girls are in love with him…

Teacher: no good, so many girls like him…. But he is not really into love or something like that… He is actually strict… And he gets angry quite easily… So be careful…

New teacher: ok I will be….

(A black Mercedes arrives… Everyone looks at it…)

New teacher: is this his car???

Teacher: yes…

( driver opens the door of the car… Sujata is in there… She gets out of the car)

New teacher: is chairman a lady… I thought chairman is a men because all of the girls were gaga about him..

Teacher: wait ….
( a motorbike arrives…. (It’s julie) … The boy gets off the motorbike and removes his helmet….
It’s Atharv sujata… He walks toward school with sujata in his style…everyone looks at him…)

Teacher: here he comes…. This is his entry..

New teacher: but why on a motorbike when he got himself a car?

Teacher: no one knows…. Maybe he likes it that way…

New teacher: he is so handsome…… How can he be a chairman… Usually chairmans are fat and old….

Teacher: (laughs) told you… Let’s go or else we will get scolded by a handsome hunk…

( Atharv visit school and tell principal to change something to make school better)

Sujata: are you done… Should we go???

Atharv: haan Maa….. You go I am coming after you…

Precap: (Atharva is about to go but then he saw a small girl crying)… (He goes to her and asks what happened?)

Please comment.
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    11 Comments

    1. Diya on February 10, 2017 10:26 pm

      rockxz er thank u.I am so glad that it’s vitharv ff.and it was really amazing.our atharv is always handsome. post soon and happy Teddy day.

    2. Eva1 on February 10, 2017 10:57 pm

      It’s good, I liked it 🙂

    3. Dimpurose11234 on February 11, 2017 12:06 am

      Ur right atharv is so handsome. K nice, i like that

    4. Silah on February 11, 2017 2:03 am

      It’s really nice…. Waiting for the next part…. I still don’t get why Atharv disappeared…..

    5. Neemu on February 11, 2017 7:06 am

      Good ffs u r writing.
      It’s nothing like that.
      We all like your dr but forget commenting coz we get tired typing in that update page.??

      Keep writing.
      All the best.

    6. Neemu on February 11, 2017 7:08 am

      It’s ff not dr.

      Sorry.

    7. aisha on February 11, 2017 8:17 am

      so nice keep writing

    8. Nazneen Syed on February 11, 2017 10:07 am

      ???. Waiting for next episode.

    9. Nazneen Syed on February 11, 2017 10:09 am

      Rockz it’s not like that. We like your ff’s. But sometimes we feel not like commenting. We will comment ok☺

    10. 143 on February 11, 2017 3:39 pm

      Arey yarrrrrrrrr.. u also got habit of dragging.. u said u meet Vithar soon.But as usual drag………hmmmm that’s ok. good job.
      Waiting for nxt epi.

      Keep going..

    11. ShaSha on February 12, 2017 12:31 pm

      I think that small girl who was crying is Aashi, Vividha’s friend’s daughter…….so excited hope Atharv will meet Vividha soon….pls dont drag…we can’t wait to see what will happen next….so excited

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