JNDSD FF….. Main Adhoora Tere Bina (Episode 1)

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hi friends, I’m planning to write a fan fiction of Jaana Na Dilse Door.. of our favourite ViTharv.. hope you all will like it. all other shows have ff. so I wanted to write an ff for jndsd. plzzz support me. some facts to be known before starting ff. 1. my story will begin with Vitharv separation i.e vividha and atharv were going to get married but kailash separated them and atharv was badly beaten up. 2. story will take a five year leap 3. vividha is not married to anyone (ravish) so name of the ff is Main Adhoora tere bina…………….
story begins..

its morning time. a beautiful region is shown…..full of snow covered mountains. Its SHIMLA. a school is shown. children are repeating words with their teacher. the teacher is shown and its vividha.
viv; bachooo… once more repeat with me. how many planets are there in solar system?
children; 8
viv; very good. now what is the position of earth?
children; third
viv; ok… what are…. (bell rings) ohh bell rang. so bacho home work bhulna math.. main kal zaroor check karoonga.
children; ok maam
vividha goes out of the class. her colleague Rekha comes to her
rek; vividha… are you coming my home today evening? it will be fun
viv; today? whats special?
rek; ooho its valentines day
vividha looks on shockingly Jaana na plays……….she gets teary eyed
viv; noo… I have some imp work
rek; mmmm…. ok fyn see u tmrw. bye
viv; bye
vividha turns back and tears roll down her cheek. she takes half day leave and goes to her cottage. she sees herself in mirror and speaks
viv; its been 5 years… 5 years.
she freshens up and wears a beautiful red saree with black borders and tries to smile looking at mirror. she closes eyes and goes to flash back with atharv.

vividha gets up early and dresses up beautifully. she goes down to atharv and smiles excitingly. he smiles back casually. she gets annoyed as he doesn’t mind her and does his work. she goes near him.
viv; atharv…
ath; mmm…
viv; where is sujata chachi?
ath; she has gone to her friends daughter’s marriage. will return evening.
viv; ooo… by the by you look more handsome today
ath; oo thanks
viv keeps on asking stupid questions and atharv finally aks her to shut up. she gets annoyed and leaves. atharv smiles.
vividha in her room thinks
this duffer atharv doesent know anything. he has forgotten valentines day? how can he???? how??? he is the number one fool.
ath: how dare you call me fool
vividha finds him sitting on window
viv; you here? why? you were tooo busy r8? now go I don’t want to talk
ath; ooho so much anger? let me talk ur dad
viv; no one is in the house. all has gone to temple for special pooja
atharv stops and suddenly smiles naughtily and turns to vividha
ath; u mean no one is in the house..
viv; ya… cant u hear. I told no one
ath; only u and me… I mean a young dashing boy and young hot girl
atharv smiles naughtily and vividha understands
viv; noooo atharv noo….she smiles shyingly
he moves forward and she backward. the wall stops. atharv and vividha get clser. he kisses her on forhead and cheek. she closes her eyes. he whispers in her ears happy valentines day ms vividha kashyap. I have got something for you. he gives her a saree. she jumps in happiness and gives him a packet and wishes him. they spend some cute moments. flashback ends.

vividha opens her eyes. she looks at atharvs photo.
viv; this is the same saree u gave me. u wanted me to see in this r8. where are you atharv? where r u? pls come back? I need u.

precap; some one is shown coming to a office. everyone looks at him shockingly and stands up

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  1. Antonio conte

    Nice…keep it up…

  2. Hey very nice keep it up.
    Such a romantic flash back

  3. Avanikamdar

    Really amazing plz keep going

  4. Nice..

  5. Superb..? keep it up ..all the very best ?

  6. Aam2000

    thank you so much for these comments. waiting for more. hope you will all enjoy. pls don’t hesitate to inform if you find it boring.

    1. really awesome di….

      sry fr late commenting actually i have been busy so i didn’t read ths…bt as i read m speechless nice way of making the ff with every sweet way possible…gud luck fr next part!

  7. Nicee.. ???

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