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JHOOT KE PICHE SAACH TS PART 1 (RAGLAK)

HELLO EVERYONE!!! THIS IS SOBIA BACK WITH ANOTHER TS….THIS ONE IS ON THE CURRENT TRACK OF SWARAGINI…..I KNOW A LOT OF US ARE NOT HAPPY WITH THE WAY THE SHOW IS GOING AND THE NEWS ABOUT THE SHOW GOING OFF AIR HAS A LOT OF US UPSET….HONESTLY BEING A RAGLAK FAN I THOUGHT WE WOULD FINALLY GET A PROPER TRACK BUT I GUESS CVS JUST DOESN’T KNOW HOW TO WORK IT OUT HAHA….ANYWAYS I GOT REALLY TIRED OF THE CURRENT TRACK AND SO I DECIDED TO WRITE IT IN MY WAY…..WE ALL WILL MISS THE SHOW AND OUR COUPLES SWASAN AND RAGLAK BUT WE CAN’T REALLY DO ANYTHING…..NOW WITHOUT WASTING TIME LET US START AND I WILL NAME THIS TS “JHOOT KE PICHE SAACH”

The scene starts off where ragini with nikhil went to the hospital to ask about laksh and doctor told her he died….
Ragini: doctor did you have a patient named laksh? Laksh maheswari? Doctor replies yes but unfortunately he died 3 days ago….she was shocked…..she ran out the hospital whereas nikhil followed her….she was crying and remembering all the moments she had with laksh….

Saari raat aahein bharta….pal pal yaadon me marta…maane na meri mann mera….she recalls the time when they were flying kites…thode thode hosh madhoshi si hai…neend behoshi si hai…jaane kuch bhi na mann mera…she recalls the time when she fed laksh rasgullas…kabhi mera tha par ab begana hai ye…deewani deewani samjhe na ho…she recalls when they both took a selfie of themselves…kabhi chup chup rahe…kabhi gaaya yeh kare…bin poochhe teri taarifen sunaya yeh kare…she recalls when laksh wiped the blood off her neck when kaveri attacked her…hai koi haqiqat tu…ya koi fasana hai…kuch jaane agar to itna ke yeh tera deewani hai re…she recalls when kavya kidnapped laksh and she was stabbed…
She screams lakshhhh…..on the other side a house is seen…the camera zooms in the house….a small girl is seen running and behind her a man is seen…she is laughing her heart out and the man says mishka wait let me give you your milk….beta please wait…she laughs and says no papa you come and catch me…he thinks of something and smiles….he stops running and quickly sits on the floor….ahhh my leg it’s hurting….mishka stops running….she sees the man and runs to him teary eyed….she says papa what happened? Papa I’m sorry…..see I stopped running too….she quickly takes the milk glass and says see papa I finished my milk too…..he starts laughing…..his face is shown….it is laksh aka abhimanyu

She says you’re laughing? He says yes beta because you drank the milk…he gets up and mishka is shocked…she says papa you’re fine? He laughs and says yes dear I’m fine…it was all my plan to make you drink milk…she pouts and says papaaaa…..he says okay sorry…she smiles….suddenly he gets a phone call….he says okay I’ll be there….he says mansi I’m going out…I’ll be back by night time….mansi shouts back okay…..he kisses mishka on her forehead and leaves….
SCREEN SHIFTS TO ROAD
Ragini is still seen crying on the floor….suddenly a car stops behind her….a man comes out….he walks to her and puts his hand on her shoulder….she turns and says tum? His face is shown….he is nikhil….nikhil helps her up and says ragini are you mad? What are you doing sitting in the middle of the road? Its good I saw or some other person could’ve drove over you….she cries and says nik..nikhil my lak..laksh…..he is dead….he is shocked and says what? But how and when? She tells everything that happened at the hospital….
On the other side the same doctor who told ragini that laksh is dead is seen talking to someone….the person gives the doctor money and thanks him for telling ragini that laksh is dead….doctor smiles and the person leaves…the person comes out and is driving home when the person spots ragini….the person is shocked and stops the car a little far from where ragini and nikhil are….he/she thinks I’m sorry ragini but I have to do this…the person gets teary eyed and leaves….it’s 8 pm….nikhil takes ragini home and mansi gives food to mishka and Abhimanyu….

At GM
Ragini comes home with nikhil….he drops her to her room and leaves….ragini is in her room crying….it’s night time and all are sleeping….ragini is the only one awake….her eyes are red and swollen…she thinks laksh why’d you leave me? Am I that bad? Every time I got you something or someone always came in between….she puts her head in the pillow and cries….on the other hand nikhil calls the hospital….he asks if he can speak to dr. Khanna (the same one who told ragini laksh is dead) nikhil asks him where is laksh maheswari? Doctor replies who is this speaking? He is about to say his name but stops and says neil….I’m laksh’s best friend…doctor tells him that laksh passed away 3 days ago…nikhil says okay thanks and hangs up….
After sometime the doctor receives another phone call…the person who came to the hospital earlier who gave him money says did you tell him what I said? Doctor says yes sir I told him….he smiles and thanks him….the screen shifts to mansi’s home….abhimanyu is seen sleeping next to mishka…he thinks about something and thinks I can’t believe I have to do this…how can I hurt this little girl….he falls asleep

The next morning sumi comes in ragini’s room…she sees her sleeping with her head on the bed side and sitting on the floor….sumi thinks my ragini always has to go through hardships…why god? Why always in her life does ragini face troubles….she walks to ragini and puts her hands on her shoulder…ragini wakes up with her mom’s touch…sumi says beta I’m going to temple…do you want to come? She says sure maa let me get fresh…sumi nods and leaves….ragini goes to get ready and then calls someone…she says I’m coming in 10 minutes….the person on the other side says good…ragini hangs up and so does the other person…she reaches temple with sumi and they go inside to pray…on the other side Abhimanyu says mansi I was thinking that we both should drop mishka to her school today…
Mansi thinks and then replies no! I’ll go and you stay home…he says okay as you say…mansi leaves with mishka and abhimanyu smiles and waves bye to them…mansi drops mishka to her school and is coming home….sumi and ragini finish their prayers and sumi says come lets go home. Ragini nods…they are leaving when ragini says maa um I just remembered I have to go to the market so you go I’ll come after…sumi asks are you sure? She smiles and says yes I’m sure….sumi nods and leaves…ragini texts someone and then smiles….she goes towards the highway to catch a auto…
She walks on the road…suddenly there is a car coming behind her…the person is honking so many times but she doesn’t hear it…the person honks again but she still doesn’t hear it….suddenly the car crashes into her and she gets hurt….the person in the car is shocked and the face reveals…it is mansi…she says oh no what did I do…she gets out the car and says ma’am I am so sorry….ragini looks at her and says can’t you see and drive? Mansi says sorry….ragini says sorry my foot….don’t you have eyes? I am a human and visible…you should be able to see me…mansi says look I am apologizing so stop creating a scene…ragini says a scene? You’re the one who crashed into me…mansi says okay I’ll take you to my home and care for you until you get fine now please stop creating a scene….
Ragini rolls her eyes and says now what are you looking at my face for? Help me up….mansi says oh right sorry….she helps her and makes her sit in her car…mansi drives ragini home…ragini thinks something and smiles….they get to her home….

As soon as ragini comes out she feels something…mansi helps her walk and makes her sit on the couch…mansi says you be comfortable I’ll be back…ragini just nods…after sometime mansi comes back with some medicines and paste and puts it on ragini…mansi says come ‘ll drop you till the guestroom…she nods and takes her to the room….mansi leaves ragini…after a while ragini gets a phone call…she says oh no maa…she looks at her watch and sees it says 4 pm…she picks it up and says yes maa…sumi says ragini beta where are you? Ragini says I’m coming home maa….sumi nods…ragini gets up and rushes out….on the other side laksh is coming out from the kitchen…

Ragini and laksh are coming towards each other…both are looking down and they bump into each other…ragini slips and is about to fall when laksh encircles his arms around her waist and holds her…she holds him from his neck…her eyes are closed in fear and laksh sees her….he thinks ragini….ragini slowly opens her eyes and sees someone held her…she sees his face and is shocked seeing laksh….she gets teary eyed and emotional…she quickly gets up and hugs him really tight…she says laksh crying and says where’d did you go?
I looked for you everywhere…I even searched the hospital…the doctors told me you were dead…laksh stands there confused….she hugs him tighter and says I missed you laksh….for 6 months I was alone without you….I love you laksh and I’m so happy you’re back….suddenly mansi comes and gets angry…she rushes there and pulls raglak apart…she says how dare you? Ragini is confused…mansi says how dare you touch my husband? Ragini is shocked….she says husband? She looks at laksh and says tell me she is lying laksh…he says nothing…she shakes him and says laksh say something….
Mansi pushes her back and says hey miss I let you come in my house because you were injured but that doesn’t mean you will try to take my family away from me….ragini says no this is my laksh…I know it….my heart tells me this is my laksh….suddenly mishka comes and hugs laksh aka Abhimanyu….she says papa I missed you today so much!!! Ragini is shocked? She thinks papa? she slowly moves back…laksh kisses mishka and says beta go and change then we will go to eat…she nods and rushes upstairs….laksh comes up to ragini and says miss whatever your name is….my name is Abhimanyu…abhimanyu Khanna and this is my wife mansi and the small child you just saw…she was my daughter mishka abhimanyu Khanna….ragini’s eyes pop open….

He says I don’t know who laksh you’re talking about but this is my family so it’s better if you leave miss…she gets mad and says listen mister first off my name isn’t miss….its ragini….ragini laksh maheswari…..yes I will use my husband’s name in my name because I know for a fact that he is alive and I know that you are also my laksh but you’re pretending for I don’t know what reason…Abhimanyu says how many times do I tell you? I am not your laksh….she yells yes you are and I will prove it…she angrily leaves….mansi gets mad and says to abhimanyu you better remember your promise….he says don’t worry mansi if I had to break my promise then today I would’ve been with my ragini…my love not you and your daughter….mansi smiles and leaves….
Laksh thinks I need to do something fast….on the other side at night ragini rushes home and cries in her bedroom….suddenly someone holds her shoulder from the back and she says tum?
SCREEN FREEZES ON HER FACE

PRECAP: WHO DID RAGINI SEE?? WHAT IS LAKSH AKA ABHIMANYU TALKING ABOUT?? WHO DOES RAGINI KEEP TEXTING AND CALLING? WHO WAS THE PERSON GIVING THE MONEY TO THE DOCTOR???

SO THIS IS THE FIRST PART GUYS….I KNOW IT SEEMS SO CONFUSING BUT IT’LL CLEAR UP SOON LET ME KNOW HOW YOU THINK ABOUT THE FIRST PART….

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