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Home»Fan Fiction»#Jasbatein #Pri&Nans #Episode 5
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#Jasbatein #Pri&Nans #Episode 5

NansshivikaBy NansshivikaMarch 1, 201764 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hi frnds

Thanks a lot guys for ur support through comments. We won’t talk much let’s get into our story… ….

Precap:

Shivay announcing Anika as his wife n their marriage. He proposes Anika. Tej tries to force Om. Om saying he is in love,shivay asks him to bring her to restaurant.

Here it goes,

Late evening:

Shivay n anika r getting ready n Shivay notices Anika lost in thoughts sitting infront of mirror.shivay notices her n comes to her n places his hands on her shoulder. She looks at him in mirror.

Shivay:what happened??

Anika: whatever is happening…. ….al this is right Na?

Shivay smiling: just hold ur trust like always everything will be good.

He starts to buttoning top of the shirt, anika gets up n tries to help him.shivay smiles at her n hold her close by her waist.

Anika: shi…. Shivay… ….what… r u doing

Shivay: what am I doing? (pulling her more close making Anika gasp)

Anika: nothing

And she tries to concentrate on his buttons. Shivay caresses her face with his other hand giving goosebumps to Anika. She looks into his blue eyes loosing herself to him. He comes close and kisses her on cheek making her tighten grip over his shirt.he gets towards her lips………

Rudra: I didn’t see anything.

Shivika get startled n break apart. And notice Rudra closing his eyes with his hand at door. They both feel embarrassed n try to hide their faces looking here n there. Rudra comes forward n slightly opens his eyes n looking that temperature is back to normal, he opens his eyes.

Rudra: naughty boy…. ..me n O always witness ur eyelocks but I think now ur track got forwarded toomuch.

Shivay: shut up Rudra…

Rudra: first u learn to shut doors properly before doing all this. Bhabi at least u should have taken care Na…

Anika blushes hard n tries to go from there. But Rudra holds her elbow n makes her stand beside Shivay.

Rudra: u guys stay like this always otherwise Omru will miss teasing tracks.
(and does logic wala sign)
Anyways come soon I will take om to car.and u can continue wat u were doing n finish it fast.

Shivay slaps him on his head n he runs away from there.

Shivika also leave from there following him.

Lawn:

Om looking tensed:guys it’s.. …

Shivay: u told her to come directly there Na ?? Let’s go

Om:ha?

Rudra: let’s go!!

He drags om to car. After 30 minute they reach falling stars restaurant

All take seat ( u can imagine dbo promo without Sowmya)

Rudra: I am so excited O!! I will meet my next bhabi…. .wow…. ..u also became ishqbaaz like Shivay bhayya Ha…

Om still tensed.

Shivay looking at anika:ishq ka khel sirf ishqbaaz khelte hai…. .

Anika blushing: isme michmichi bhi machti hai Aur raite bhi felte hai…..

Rudra: waah!!???

Om: excuse me guys!!!
He leaves from there.

After some time,

Om: guys meet my girfriend… ..

Shivikaru look at him n a girl next to him smiling. They give surprising look to each other.

Om n the girl come to them.she is wearing white jeans n rose top with a scarf.

Three stand up looking at them.

Om: let me introduce love of my life gauri…..

Shivikaru:ohhhhhhh

Shiv shakes his hand, whie Rudy trues to hug but then shakes his hand and Anika hugs her. They all take seats.

Shivay: so what is gauri full name??

Om: gauri… ….gauri…. ….( looking here n there)

Gauri: Sharma. Gauri Sharma is my name.

Om: ya gauri Sharma. (smiling)

Shivay: oh gauri Sharma ( nodding)

Aniru: gauri Sharma…. ..ahan….. .

Shivay: so tell us ur story right guys. ..

Aniru nod.

Om: I told u Na…. .

Shivay: let her speak om.

Gauri: our story…. …ya… ….its a love story right omi….. ….

Omkara gives her a dead glare.

Shivikaru:omi……wow…. …

Gauri smiles sheepishly : so I met him and I got flatted with his sliky hair. …..and… …….i tried to touch his hair and….. accidentally touched his cheek an he felt a spark…. ..and he asked my name… …we became frnds…. .and… ….kuch kuch hota hai…. ….aap log Nahi samjoge….. ..

Om tries to control his anger gives unwilling smile to them. Shivru mouths r wide opened. Anika looks at them either side n closes their mouths. They come to senses.

Shivay: mind-blowing love story in real sense…. ….

Anika: so gauri where u stay??

Gauri: to stay I need a place Na…. ..

Om looks at her as if he wanted to kill her.

Shivay: what u mean. …

Gauri: I …..i… ..came here for om n I am staying in hotel… ..right omi….. …

Om nods unwillingly.

Shivay: y in hotel ,u can stay in our house.

Om: no way!!

They give him confused look.

Shivay: y not?? Don’t wry abt elders I will talk to them and it’s final she will come with us and ur stuff….

Gauri: don’t wry it’s outside only…. (all give her questioning look while om trying hard to control his emotions)

Om: she means to say that she was leaving after meeting u. So u guys don’t wry ……she has some work n she wants to leave for that. So.. ..

Gauri gives him angry look: no problem I can stay back for my omi baby n holds his Arm closely.

Anikaru:awwwwww

Shivay: so then let’s go!!!!

Mansion:

All elders r looking at Tej angrily who is talking on phone with Mr. Shekawat. He cuts the call n looks at youngsters coming back.

Tej: ur time is good Omkara. Mr. Shekawat said he has some urgent work so they r leaving back n will meet later.

Om:like I care.

Gauri looks at him.

Dadi: who is this girl shivay?

Shivay: Dadi!!she is om girlfriend. They love each other.

All get shocked.

Tej: what? ?

Shivay : yes!!! She will stay here for sometime for all of us.

Tej leaves from there irritatingly. Jhanvi n Dadi come to gauri n om.

Jhanvi: is it true om.

Om lightly nods. Jhanvi n Dadi caresses gauri face. Gauri takes blessings of Dadi. N jhanvi jugs her.

The elders leave to their room.

Shivay to worker: keep the luggage in om room.

Rikara: what? ????????

Shivay : what what??? She is ur gf Na so… .

Shivika Rudra leave from there. Om angrily leaves to his room n gauri follows him running.

Om closes the door n looks angrily at her.

Om: can’t u keep calm. What was the need to say that u stay in hotel n u will stay back for me.

Gauri: oh hello do u forget our deal? ?

Some time before:

Om excusing himself comes out of restaurant.

Om: how to explain u guys?? I don’t want to marry anyone.i don’t want any companion. They just make us weak. I don’t trust wife n husband relation anymore. I wish I can make u understand.but I couldn’t n I lied to all of u being helpless. What to do… …how to bring my girlfriend who doesn’t exist…. …

He hits the car angrily. Suddenly a girl hits him n falls into his arms looking tensed.obvio it’s gauri.

Om/gauri: tum?????
(remember the incident in Delhi. Gauri making him land in mud accidentally )

They both stand properly.

Om: y r u always running n hitting me?

Gauri: Arey leave that first help me. .that day u remember I ran away from forced marriage….. They r again after me even here. I don’t know anyone in Mumbai Plzzz help me…. .

Om: what?? Just go to police foe help.

Gauri: what kind of man u r?? I am not asking for free help me n I will return ur favour someday.

Om: just leave.

Gauri frowns n starts to leave.

Om: one minute! !! What will u do in return of My help?

Gauri: whatever u say.

Om: u have to act as my gf that too now.

Gauri: what?? I will never do that.

Om: OK fine then then save Urself

Gauri thinks a lot : OK fine.

Om: I will arrange a safe place for u to stay but right now u have to come with me inside.my brothers n bhabi r waiting for my gf. I don’t have any so u have to act like one. Remember we r in relation of 5 months n we don’t want Marry now.

Gauri: as if I want to. …..

Om: whatever… …

Present:

Om: I very well remember all that n I said to u I Will arrange a place but u…. .

Gauri: I am not expert in acting OK? ? I was in a problem n it slipped from my mouth.

Om: and what was the stupid story n omi. ….realy… .

Gauri: u should be thankful to me Mr.jhatadarI that I said something n covered it up otherwise ……

Om: oh god u made my problem big n now we both have to stay together in single room

Gauri: no way u stay out.

Om: anyone can See Me n they will get doubt.

Gauri: I am gonna never share the room with u.

Om: listen this is my room

Gauri: then where will I go…. .

Om: see now u have to stay with me for few days. Then we will do drama of fight n breakup. N u can go to place that I arrange. Until then this is only way. U sleep left side of bed n I will right side.

Gauri: what the hell dude! !??me sharing bed with stranger impossible!!??

Om: look u can trust me n I am not dying to share bed with u,the couch is small otherwise I would have slept there. Anyways I will keep pillows in btw.

Gauri reminisces how he saved from those men by misleading them n nods at him trusting.

Shivika room:

Dadi comes n informs that tomorrow eve is their engagement n till marriage is done Anika should stay in another room.shivay smiles get faded away listening this while Anika nods at dadi. Dadi asks her to pack her clothes n waits for her there only not giving Shivay chance to talk to Anika. Rudy is watching all this peeping n Dadi Rudra winks at each other.

Anika packs her bag n is abt to go with Dadi but Shivay stops them saying he wants a file which Anika knows. Dadi says to Anika come fast to guest room as she needed to talk something.

Anika smiles happily. Dadi leaves taking Rudra outside laughing.

Anika happily : shivay which file??

Shivay pins her to wall.

Shivay: y r u so happy abt this??

Anika: r u not happy with our engagement.

Shivay : ofc I am happy for that but what abt we staying in different rooms.

Anika: oh that. …what can I do… .dadi ordered I think I should go now.

Shivay pulls her back: I am kind of totally habituated with u Anika. And I can’t. ….i… …just….

Anika feels his emotion n kisses him on cheek shocking Shivay.

Shivay forgets what he was saying n looks deeply into her eyes while she is blushing hard.

Shivay holds her face n places his lips on her n starts sucking them hardly making Anika moan n hold him by neck. Her fingers r playing with his hairs while his tongue is playing with hers.he kisses her mouthfully not letting her to breath while Anika is feeling the pleasure with his warm kiss.

Omkara room:

Om n gauri on bed with pillows in btw looking into ceiling. They r not moving a bit not knowing what it will lead to .

Precap: engagement preparations gauri bonding with all.rumya.

If possible engagement n Swethlana out of house.

Hope u Lyk this long post.we really Lyk this post of us.plzzz comment n share ur opinions plzzzzzz

With love
Pri&Nans.

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    64 Comments

    1. Anaya on March 1, 2017 2:43 pm

      Awesome

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:52 pm

        Thank u anaya

    2. rena699 on March 1, 2017 2:52 pm

      Nice dear waiting fr the next upload

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:53 pm

        Thank u rena

    3. ally on March 1, 2017 3:01 pm

      Nice….

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:53 pm

        Thank u Ally

    4. lisaaa on March 1, 2017 3:19 pm

      Lovely

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:54 pm

        Thank u lisaa

    5. Shrutika on March 1, 2017 3:26 pm

      Brilliant

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:55 pm

        Thank u shrutika

    6. Vishnusri on March 1, 2017 3:30 pm

      Superb pls.. Just continue waiting for the next ff

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:55 pm

        Thank u vishnusri

    7. Niki on March 1, 2017 3:39 pm

      Super one

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:56 pm

        Thank u niki

    8. Well Wisher on March 1, 2017 3:40 pm

      Nice update so Om lied to all…

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:57 pm

        Thank u well wisher

    9. sso on March 1, 2017 3:41 pm

      Nice update

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:57 pm

        Thank u sso

    10. Ishqbaaz on March 1, 2017 3:42 pm

      Rikara are so cute and Shivika are so much romantic

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:58 pm

        Thank u ishqbaaz

    11. Shama on March 1, 2017 3:43 pm

      Very well written Nandini and I enjoy this so much.

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thank u shama

    12. Apexa on March 1, 2017 3:44 pm

      Super update

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 8:59 pm

        Thank u apexa

    13. Pri_24 on March 1, 2017 3:47 pm

      Perfect episode Nandupie…???????

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:00 pm

        Thank u chocs???

    14. nikitajai on March 1, 2017 3:56 pm

      Nice one dear… Give more rikara scene plzzzzzzzzzzz

    15. nikitajai on March 1, 2017 3:56 pm

      Please update soon ASAP.

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:01 pm

        Thank u nikitajai .rikara story will also be with more scenes in next episodes

    16. Arya on March 1, 2017 3:57 pm

      WOW…Superb…

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thank u arya

    17. Tulasi on March 1, 2017 4:14 pm

      Awesumm dear….waitng for d next…. Luv u both….. ??❤

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:02 pm

        Thank u tussy??

    18. pinkyyy on March 1, 2017 4:26 pm

      Awesome update dear

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:03 pm

        Thank u pinkyy

    19. Lilly on March 1, 2017 4:29 pm

      Awesome… loved it …

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:03 pm

        Thank u lilly

    20. RASHI SHUKLA on March 1, 2017 4:41 pm

      Awesome

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank u rashi shukla

    21. Nita D on March 1, 2017 5:16 pm

      Awesome dear…..!

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank u nita

    22. Hrishi03 on March 1, 2017 5:29 pm

      Hi..It was hot n wow update yaar….waiting nxt update eagerly??❤?

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thank u Hrishi. I submitted next part

    23. shivika on March 1, 2017 7:25 pm

      Wowwwww……..u guys nailed yr…….loved it a lotttttt………post soon eagerly waiting

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:06 pm

        Thank u shivika

    24. anah on March 1, 2017 7:27 pm

      fabulous one nans…..
      waiting for next one

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:09 pm

        Thank u anah

    25. Shivika on March 1, 2017 9:55 pm

      Awesome..

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:10 pm

        Thank u shivika

    26. gayathri.visu on March 1, 2017 10:40 pm

      Wow!! Shivika scenes are so romantic….. Naughty Rudy.. Rikara fight is cute and funny! Post next part soon please….

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:11 pm

        Thank u gayathri

    27. Bhavana on March 1, 2017 11:30 pm

      Awesome….

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:15 pm

        Thank u bhavana

    28. vincy on March 1, 2017 11:33 pm

      Nice… Shivika

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:38 pm

        Thank u vincy

    29. ruksy on March 2, 2017 4:09 am

      Amazing update soon

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:36 pm

        Thank u ruksy

    30. Diyaa on March 2, 2017 6:13 am

      I really enjoyed reading this update. Shivika as usual the most romantic of all and Om and Gauri scenes were cute.

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:37 pm

        Thank u diyaa

    31. Mrunal on March 3, 2017 11:22 am

      wow…. fabulous shivika scenes…
      omri…?? I’m just imagining om’s expression…
      amazing update dear….

      • Nansshivika on March 7, 2017 9:37 pm

        Thank u mrunal

    32. Hrishi03 on March 6, 2017 4:06 pm

      Hi yaar y no update….

      • Nansshivika on March 6, 2017 5:48 pm

        So sorry Yaar I kind of got Health issues n my exams r going on. So… I will post when I will be out of all this n I promise I will be posting daily then ?

      • Hrishi03 on March 8, 2017 2:27 pm

        Oh ok yaar……do well….all d best…..???take care..

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