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Home»Fan Fiction»I’ve got you my love
Fan Fiction Swaragini

I’ve got you my love

Shana98By Shana98January 7, 201823 Comments10 Mins Read
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All the characters are the same form the serial, but the love is Unconditional from laksh and Laksh is a police officer ?‍♂️. The family name is ‘Khanna’ instead of ‘Maheshwari’.

The birds were singing our beauts was sleeping ? with out any problems or anything to think about.

On the other side our handsome woke up and was doing his daily routine his workouts, he gets disturbed ? by a a phone call it says ‘Amma’ calling…
He smiles and answers the call

♦

Laksh: hi ma
AP: ….
Laksh: but ma… you know I …..
AP: …….
Laksh: please ma try to understand….
AP: ……
Laksh:I don’t have time….
AP: ….
Laksh: okay, tell me the place and time I will come
AP: …….
Laksh: bye ?? love you.
AP: love you too beta.

♦

Scene shifts… to our beauty

♦

Shomi: Ragu
Ragu: …..
Shomi: RAGUUUUUU
Ragu: haaan
Shomi: wake up baby ??
Ragu: please let me sleep ? please mama.
Shomi: no wake up
Ragini: maaaa please
S: RAAGINIIIII WAKE UP NOW.
R: after that sound our angel woke up.
S: wake up and get ready fast ? the grooms family is coming to see you.
R: what???
S: what, what?! I’m not joking quick
R: ma no please noooooo
S: say that to your dad it’s his best friends son so there is no chance for you to escape.
R: fine.

♦

The door bell ? rings and shomi went to open the door ? all the Khanna’s family were standing outside yes you guessed right the groom is our hero.
They call come in and sits down.
Shomi gives them tea ☕️ to all of them accidentally spilt tea ? on Laksh.
S: sorry ? I’m very sorry ?
L: it’s okay Aunty where’s the washroom
S: straight up and left
L: thank you ?

♥

Laksh goes up and turns to the right forgetting that she said left and entered Ragini’s room and was shocked.
She was roaming around just her towel around her body and dancing

{Laksh was admiring her this is the first time his seen a girl like this and was drawn by her beauty.}

Neethanae Neethanae ❤️
En Nenjai Thattum Satham?
Azhagai Udaidhen Neeye Artham?
Neethanae Neethanae?
En Nenjai Thattum Satham?
Azhagai Udaidhen Neeye Artham?

(Ragini was still dancing ?? without turning and seeing what going on around her)

Im Maalai Vaanam Moththam❤️
Irul Poosikollum Satham?
Ingu Neeyum Naanum Mattum?
Idhu Kavidhayoo?

[ Laksh was just looking at her dance she looked really cute ]

Neethanae Neethanae❤️
En Kangal Thedum Inbam?
Uyirin Thiraiyil Un Paal Kinnam ?

{ they both were lost in their world ?Ragini’s towel fell and she didn’t notice laksh was shocked ?}

Nam Kaadhal Kaatril Pattrum?
Adhu Vaanin Kaadhil Ettum?
Naam Kaiyil Maatri Kolla❣️
Pon Thingal Vizhum?

She finally turned around and saw Laksh and was about o scream but Then she thought if she screamed everyone will come to her room and see the situation and will judge ?‍⚖️ her so she didn’t scream. But then she noticed her towel fell and she quickly put the towel around her…

♥

 

R: W… wh…. what are you doing in my room?? { crossing her hands across her chest to cover herself}
L: actually sorry I came to use the washroom sorry ?
R: please go out, I need to change and don’t say anything about this as a grooms family is coming to see me
L: Btw the groom is me and it was a great meeting wasn’t it for our first time? Also your looking s*xy and without your towel even s*xier and your dance was on point.
He walks out and goes to the right washroom as per ragini’s direction, leaving her shocked by his reply.

♠♣

All were down stairs talking.
Shomi calls Ragini down and everyone was eagerly waiting for her to come down so was Laksh (to see her with clothes on). Ragini came down, she was giving drinks to everyone who has come lastly she goes to Laksh he looks at her and then she looks at him, he winks at her she widens her eyes and give him the glare.

All were speaking and liked each other’s family. So they decided to ask their children if they were happy ? Laksh was very happy ? it’s just our Ragini she was confused ??‍♀️ about her feelings as she liked laksh but because of his job she was quite worried ? as he will have a lot of rivalries and enemies because his a police ?‍♀️ officer. But she said okay as both the families were bonding really well and happy with each other.
As all were speaking …

Laksh: ma
Ap turned around asked: what laksh?
Laksh: actually ma can you ask sumi ma if I can speak to Ragini personally.
Ap was happy that laksh accepted sumi as is mum.
Sumi was happy ? that’s laksh called her ma.
Sumi; yes beta of course you can. Ragini take him to your room and talk
Ragini nods and both goes to raginis room.
Ragini goes in First then Laksh.
Laksh locks ? the door behind his way in.
Ragini didn’t know this she didn’t notice.

Ragini: are you really happy ? with this proposal??
Laksh: I’m very happy ? are you?
Ragini: I’m happy if our families happy, both the families are bonding really well and I don’t want to ruin it.
Laksh: so you don’t like me?
Ragini: it’s not like that
Laksh: then?
Ragini: we need to get to know each other, to know our hobbies and many more.
Laksh: yeah sure why not
Ragini: you number?
Laksh: xxxxxxxxxxxx
Ragini gives him a missed call and they save each other’s number.
Laksh: btw your only for me and I’m only for you if you like it or not. Everything of you is mine better not look so hot in front of other men, like today be careful as it was me I didn’t
Do anything you look really good with out clothes and that should also be in front of me as well you understand??
Ragini:…… ( she didn’t know what to say as she’s shocked that his seen her with out clothes)
Laksh: yes or no.
Ragini: yes.
Laksh: I know you might think I’m a creep but honestly I love you when I saw you dancing ?? your just too hot, cute and beautiful I would be lucky that I got you as a wife. I’ll will tell our parents to fix our marriage as soon as possible. After saying that he was getting close to her step by step

From down stairs:

Ap: LAKSH BETA.
Laksh: yes mum (frustratedly) as his moves flopped by his mum
Ap: both come down please
Laksh: okay

They went down stairs.

All: sooooooo are you really for the marriage?
Both takes a deep breath and says: Yes
Everyone cheers ? in happiness
Sumi: so about in a weeks time we will get them married?
Ap: yes, did you check with the pandit?
Sumi: yes I did and he said there’s a auspicious day in about week time and the next one is next year. So I couldn’t wait till next year so had to choose a weeks time.

Ragini: but ma we wouldn’t have time to get to know each other.
Laksh: it’s okay ma we can get to know each other after marriage.
Sumi: that’s like me son.
Ap: ohooo already on your son in laws side huh?
Sumi: ofc why wouldn’t I be after all I have such loving son, who would take take care of my daughter.
The door bell rings.
They person comes in —>
P: how could forget me? Ma? You also?
Suma: it’s not like that beta we wanted too tell everyone once everything is fixed
P: but ma I’m not everyone, I not going to talk to you and you papa and Ragu.
Ragu: oh come on stop ✋ your drama maya
(Yes guys it’s Jennifer).
M: Ragu I’m your sister who live with her husbands family that too not far why didn’t you tell us
R: how did I know that the grooms family was coming to see me mum woke me up and said it I just got ups and got ready.
M: maaaaaa this is not fair why would you do this to me, I know I’m not your favourite daughter but this is too much, I will see how this marragie will happen without me
(Everyone was shocked by her speech)
S: Maya what are you saying
M: I meant not stop the marriage but if I don’t participate this nothing will not happen.
S: few

A: sumi you didn’t tell us you have an older daughter
S: she’s my sisters daughter she got married last year I didn’t call her as she was busy that’s why she’s acting like this
A: oh okay, omg I forgot too, I haven’t informed about this to my older son and daughter in law
L; mum Anna and Anni are going to murder us by their lectures for not telling them, call them
A: calls them: Hello
P: hello man how are you?
A; I’m fine Avni how are you?
Av: I’m okay ma
Ap: where’s Neil? Is he with you?
Av: yes ma his with me
Ap: okay ?? put the phone ? on speaker ?
Av: done ✅
Ap: hi Neil
N: hi ma
Ap: Neil & Avni I want to tell you something
N&A: what is it ma?
Ap: you brother has said yes to get married.
N: really, omg finally my thambi(younger brother) is getting married, I feel sorry for Sarah she’s going to hate bhai.
laksh: oi I’m listening you know stop exposing me okay

Ragini: who’s Sarah?
N: who’s that? Is that my sister???
Laksh: yes now see she’s doubting me now
R: ofc I will after all I’m going to marry you and after everything that has happens upstairs. Who’s Sarah?
Ap: what happen upstairs?
L: nothing man she doesn’t know what’s she’s saying
Ragini bites her tongue as she blurted it out
N: what happen before?
Sumi: Ragini what happened!
R: nothing ma
L: nothing happened ma dw
All: tell us
Ragini closed her eyes tight: he saw me dancing in the morning.
All laughed
S: is that all?

R: nods as she does want to say the rest
The whole family was happen. So was raglak.
Laksh comes next to Ragini. This family is complete.
Ragini: I love you ?
Laksh: I love you too ❤️?
Ragini hugs ? Laksh while smiling seeing their family handing fun and enjoying themselves while this new relationship grows.
Laksh: I’ve got you.
R: we’ve got each other.

❤️

 

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    23 Comments

    1. Aamy on January 8, 2018 2:39 pm

      Awesome

    2. Anju on January 8, 2018 3:02 pm

      Superb episode

    3. Thahseem on January 8, 2018 3:26 pm

      Nice

    4. Malu on January 8, 2018 3:57 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    5. asra on January 8, 2018 4:38 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…raglak and their families r sooo cute….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

    6. Elizabethlovely on January 8, 2018 4:54 pm

      Awesome

    7. Sherin on January 8, 2018 5:44 pm

      Awesome dear

    8. Arjuna on January 8, 2018 6:09 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    9. Pearly on January 8, 2018 6:24 pm

      Superb dear

    10. Vini on January 8, 2018 6:48 pm

      Loved it, keep going

    11. Raglak_fan on January 8, 2018 7:32 pm

      Fantastic dear continue

    12. Monisha on January 8, 2018 8:23 pm

      Excellent dear

    13. Jiyani on January 8, 2018 9:05 pm

      Amazing dear and do continue

    14. Vennila on January 8, 2018 9:41 pm

      Awesome episode

    15. Soumya on January 8, 2018 10:03 pm

      Simply Superb di

    16. teitokUn1718 on January 8, 2018 10:33 pm

      Superb…

    17. Ashly on January 9, 2018 2:01 pm

      Fantastic awesome superb

    18. Ammu on January 9, 2018 5:53 pm

      It’s interesting episode dear ??? Raglak scenes are beautiful ????? specially their first meet ???? eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Also try to post your other Raglak stories too. Love you dear and take care ???????????

    19. Monu on January 9, 2018 7:25 pm

      Superb dear

    20. Laashya on January 9, 2018 9:20 pm

      Lovely episode didu and lovely raglak and can’t wait for next episode di

    21. Zoya on January 9, 2018 10:05 pm

      It’s nice

    22. Pinki on January 10, 2018 3:04 pm

      Raglak ??????

    23. Raglakian on January 10, 2018 8:55 pm

      Happy to read this story and eagerly looking forward for more

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