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It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 3

Pavithra1616By 33 Comments4 Mins Read

Hey guys, this is Pavithra here. And I am back with my ff. And now with its 3rd chapter. Hope you guys like this one. To be familiar with the story, read the intro revised… A big thanks to those who commented on my previous chapter… And thanks to the silent readers…
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Recap: Keerthi knows that Kevin loves her. She unknowingly came to say about her love for Madhav to her friends…
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Keerthi reaches home.

Keerthi: so Kevin loves me. I didn’t know that he had a hidden intention like this. I have only seen him as a friend. Anyway, let him propose me! ( with a kidding smile )

She takes her diary and writes….

Dearest diary,today was a good day. I had done a wrong thing today. Today unknowingly I can to say about my love for Madhav to Sera and Mishal. But I cleared it. I frozed when I was about to say it. The most important thing is that Kevin, you known one of my friends from boys. Sera and Mishal says that Kevin loves me. That’s when I came to say about my love for madhav. After knowing that I was horrified. What should I do diary?? Anyway I have to go know… Bye…

Next day morning at school…

Keerthi was at class with Rakhi and Mishal. They were talking…

Rakhi: Keerthi, I know you must be angry with me for not being in bus in morning. Sorry,Keerthi, Papa said he will drop me at school..

Keerthi: Rakhi, I have totally forgotten about that.. ( in a serious tone)

Mishal: kya Keerthi? You forgot about it. You always scolds her for that. I know… That something else is in your mind these days.. ( with a kidding tone and laughs)

Keerthi: Mishal, what do you want yaar?? I have nothing of such in my mind.. I am just distressed for my exams.. That’s all…

Sera comes to the class and everyone laughs at her funny face and she scolded everyone!!!

The three friends were talking about exams when they saw that Madhav was coming..

Mishal and Sera kept talking. But Keerthi was lost in her thoughts of Madhav…

Madhav enters class. Keerthi looks at him.. And remembers their childhood bond of friendship..

FB : in 4th std

Keerthi: Madhav….( shouting) leave me, I will win this time!!! ( saying while playing)

FB ends…

There were tear in her eyes…

Madhav looked at her and Sera called her at the very same moment and they missed their eye contact…

Madhav(in mind): Keerthi, to my eyes you are the most beautiful girl I have ever met.. Our bond of friendship… That was the best time in my life..

Madhav too remembers some moments while they were playing…

Madhav goes to his seat. Kevin enters class…

Keerthi looks on thinking that yuck! This Kevin, how can he love me?

Kevin goes straight to keerthi’s seat and says showing a book –

Kevin: Keerthi, can you say how do to this? ( pointing to some question they had to do in maths)

Keerthi explains….

Mishal said when Kevin went :- See Keerthi,there is that Madhav who studies in boys and Madhav sits near Kevin.. And Kevin comes to you to clear doubts?? Isn’t it what I said??

Keerthi: maybe ( smiling faintly)
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Precap :- Keerthi and Madhav comes face to face.. They argue and later goes back to class in tears..

At class Keerthi writes her feeling for Madhav and keeps it in her file…

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Hope you guys liked this one. Sorry for this very late update… Actually i was busy with my studies..This was the 3rd chapter for my ff. This is a non serial ff..

(Authors note:- the story mainly focuses on the girls side. But don’t think that it doesn’t focus on the boys side.. It focuses on both the sides but more focus is on the girls side)

Every story has a happy ending and ends like ‘ lived happily ever after ‘…. I thought why can’t a story have a sad ending?? So this ff doesn’t have a happy ending… So here is a story with a ravishing sad ending!! Share your thoughts on this idea.. Please..

Hope you guys enjoyed this one.. Please ignore all the grammatical and spelling mistake. I will update the next chapter as soon as possible. I need your love and support… Thanks for reading.. Let me know what do u think of the story by dropping in a comment and also don’t forget to hit the like button..

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Pavithra….?

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33 Comments

  1. Anuradha123 on

    It’s awesome pabi.. Too good dear….it’s okay if this story had sad ending… Har story ka end happy wala ho yeh mumkin nahi… Once more I will say this is mind-blowing story.. Keep writing dear

  3. varshini on

    its fab dear , i read all the episodes and all were superb . keerthi remembering her fb was emotional , so there were really very good friends at that time . what happened then ? eager to know . its good if it s a sad ending , some sad stories make place in our heart forever , do update soon and if u can pls message me the link , as i dont visit tu much nowadays

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thanks varshu for commenting.. Thanks a lot..?
      U wait and read varshu and u will definetly like the suspense…
      Yes, u r right varshu.. Sad story always make a place in our hearts.
      Of course I will sent u links varshu?? and will update soon as possible…

  4. Ashnita456 on

    Wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more. Waiting for next part.

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thanks ashu for commenting and also thanks for those sweet words…??
      I will update soon as possible…

  6. ahk26barbie on

    Its so lovely Pavi.So well created.Its so beautiful.Try to make a little more one.Love you a lot Pavi my Aniyathikutti.

  7. Mansi on

    Wow it’s superbbbbbbbbbb!!!!!!!!!!….I loved it completely….Ur writing skills are commendable….Keep it up!!!…It’s ok if it’s not a happy ending n is a sad ending….I am up for it!!!….Precap is interesting….Update soon!!!…

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thanks di for commenting.. Thanks for reading too.. Thanks for those lovely words of urs??
      Wait for the next part..

    • Pavithra1616 on

      If u want to know about the story read the intro revised and to know about the characters read intro.. If u want u can ask me and I will sent u links…?

  10. aleya.marzan on

    fabulous, awesome , fantastic .
    what more i can say !!
    i wish i could watch this in real .
    u r greatttttttttttttttt
    carry on.
    n yess do tell me when u publish newer epis
    loves for u
    even best wishes

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thank u aalu for commenting.. And it was very sweet of u to say lovely words like u… I will sent u links aalu?
      Loves for u too??? thanks so much???

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thanks my dearest and dearest aadu for commenting??
      I will update soon aaduzzz??? love u a lot?

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Love u too dear..????
      Niyum polichu mole!! Ni pande poli alle.. Pinne enne kurichu parayano?? ???
      I will update soon as u are waiting for it??!!

  13. niyati on

    Devu……loved it…it is so beautiful…..love u darling…..I really like sad ending , so don’t worry about that…..post next chapter soon ? ? ?

    • Pavithra1616 on

      Thanks di for commenting and thanks for those lovely words???
      So if u like sad endings I will definetly make it a sad ending and proceed it to be a sad story.. Only if u like as u are my dearest and dearest and dearest and dearest sissy in the world and I luv u sooo much that I can’t explain!!
      I will try to post soon.. The days I am a bit busy that’s why I am late posting
      Luv u too sissy..??????

    • niyati on

      It’s alright dear …I understand sis even I don’t get time to post because of studies…..I post two weeks ago….U are also my sweet cute world best lil sis ……Whenever u got time, u post it…love u sis….

  14. riyarocks on

    paavi dear, first of all a big sorry for soooooooooooo late commenting, & reason……of course, exams….uff………btw dear, all things apart, this one’s simply amazing……..& its true, every story doesn’t need to have a happy ending…….luv u a lot sweetuuuuuu………

    • Pavithra1616 on

      No problem for a late commenting!! Anyway u commented na!!! Thanks aot? thanks for those lovely words and luv u too.. Thanks for supporting me di???