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Home»Fan Fiction»It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 10 Valentines Day special
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It was a mistake to love you.. Chapter 10 Valentines Day special

Pavithra1616By Pavithra1616February 14, 2018Updated:March 25, 201816 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys,this is Pavithra here. I am back with my ff’s 8th chapter. This is a valentines day special chapter.. Everyone, happy Valentine’s day. A big thanks who commented on my previous chapter. Thanks to silent readers too… Hope you guys like this one…


Recap:- Keerdhav have a moment together in the tourist bus during their tour..


Next day, it was Valentines day. Everyone was happy looking fresh.

Sera: oh! At last valentines day…

Keerthi: Yes, Sera..

Sera: And I am happy because I got my dream boy..

Sera: when will you get yours, Keerthi?

Mishal Stoll a glance at Keerthi…

Keerthi stood there for a while feeling sad..

Keerthi: stop thinking such things.. OK..

Sera: hmmm OK!!

Keerthi: Let’s enjoy now

Sera nods….

They were playing truth or dare. Keerthi looked at Madhav who was happily playing..

Keerthi: (in mind) Happy valentines day, Madhav. This is the day every lovers love. I am a lover but my lover dosent know….

Mishal: Keerthi, its your turn…

Keerthi gets shaken from her thoughts…

****

Lunch break….

Everyone was eating their lunch. Madhav became alone at a place and he took out a bright red rose.

Madhav: This is for you Keerthi… Its only for you and you only..

Neha comes…

Neha: Wow! Madhav… Please.. Will you give me that rose??it looks really lovely..

Madhav: Uh! Oh… Sure…

Neha: Oh! Thanks…

The moment Madhav gave Neha the rose, Keerthi, Sera and Mishal came that way. Keerthi watched this at a distance. She was shocked seeing Madhav giving rose to Neha when no one was around. Keerthi was left sad..

Mishal: Keerthi, its OK.. Comeon … Don’t worry…

Keerthi: Yes.. Its OK.. I won’t worry..(trying to console herself)

***

Keerthi was rubbing the board in the break. Some other students were in class

She imagines Madhav.

Madhav comes to class and gives Keerthi a tight hug.

Madhav: Sorry Keerthi. I am sorry for the humiliation.

Keerthi: Its ok , Madhav…. But I told you…

Madhav: That pain won’t end with Sorry, right?

Keerthi: uh! Yes… But why did you hug…me?

Madhav: I was waiting for this question.

Keerthi: What??

Madhav: Yes, its because I love you Keerthi…

Keerthi: Tum mujhe….

Mishal comes and shakes her that’s when everything got over.

Mishal: I was calling you a hundred times. You didn’t hear me?

Keerthi: Uh!! Actually no…

Mishal: what’s going on your mind?

Keerthi: Kuch nahi, Mishal…

Later,Keerthi slaps herself for imagining things like that..

Keerthi: Stop your dreaming Keerthi.. Its becoming too much.

She smiles naughtily..

***

Evening break at school…

Keerthi,Mishal and Sera was walking through the corridor…

Madhav,Nobin,Rupesh and Kevin came opposite to them..

Keerthi tried to walk confidently but she was shivering a bit… Mishal saw this..

Mishal whispered to Keerthi : Keerthi, I told you na? Don’t be another Keerthi for him…

Keerthi: I am trying yaar…

For the very first time, Madhav was walking behind all the boys…

Rupesh paased by and got hold of Sera’s hand and he and she walked away.. Rupesh was Sera’s boyfriend…

Kevin and Nobin passed by. Kevin smiled at Keerthi and Mishal smiled at Nobin..

Last came Madhav…

Madhav stopped near Keerthi..

Keerthi stood beside Madhav. The other side of Keerthi was Mishal..

Madhav: Keerthi…

Keerthi stops walking…

Madhav: I am really sorry for those insulting..

Keerthi: I told you… That pain

Madhav: won’t end by sorry… I know…. But please understand…

Keerthi: OK..

Madhav: Thanks for understanding me…

Keerthi: I always understand you…(whispered..)

Madhav: Did you say anything?

Keerthi: Uh! No…

Mishal thought… They are gonna be united very soon.. Its just like a love story yaar..

Madhav: Anyway… Huh!!! Happy Valentines day, Keerthi..

Keerthi: Thanks and to you too…

Madhav: Thanks (feeling really happy)

Keerthi goes in front of Madhav..

Keerthi: Was that said by a mistake??

Madhav: what?

Keerthi: Its not to me that you should say that..

Madhav: Why not to you?

Keerthi: You should say this especially to Neha.. I saw that Rose scene, Madhav..

Madhav: She asked me for that.. That’s all. (Stammering)

Keerthi: Don’t lie..

Madhav: I am not saying a lie..

Keerthi: Really?

Madhav: Stop this right now, OK?

Keerthi: OK…

Madhav: I love someone else…

Keerthi: who is it? (Feeling a bit down)

Madhav: Do you think I am gonna tell you that?

Keerthi: No..maybe Yes…

Madhav: But anyway.. I love….

Mishal: Keerthi come on let’s go.. He is joking..he is trying to make you a fool..

Keerthi: I understood that Mishal!

They leave…

Madhav: So, you think that I love Neha? Now how will I clear that misunderstanding?


PRECAP:- Exams end and school closes. Madhav didn’t say that this time too.. Keerthi to hate Madhav as per what she said…


Hope you guys enjoyed this. Ignore the spelling or grammatical mistakes. Ignore the short forms, of any…

I remember you all again that this story doesn’t have any happy ending. I mean in this story you won’t find the leads united… To know more about this story check out intro revised..

Sorry for no pictures.. And I don’t get the time to read so pls ignore those short forms and typing error.. Please forgive…

I will try to update as soon as possible. Do let me know what you think of the story by dropping in a comment. Don’t forget to hit the like button. I want all your love and support… Thanks for reading…

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    16 Comments

    1. Meghna on February 14, 2018 5:27 pm

      Loved it!
      My like button is not working!!! ???
      Would have liked it a hundred times if i could!
      Keerti’s imagination was sweet yet heartbreaking!
      Waiting for the next!
      With love,
      M Di

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:31 pm

        Thanks M di.. Glad you loved it this much.. Will update as soon as I can.. Luv u…

    2. niyati on February 14, 2018 5:51 pm

      Fabulous dear ….It is beautiful ….Loved it really….Update soon & lots of love ? ?

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:33 pm

        Thanks niyu di.. Thanks a lot.. Glad you loved it.. Will surely update soon but not so soon as I am busy… Luv u too??

    3. Sania601 on February 14, 2018 9:58 pm

      Nycc…….

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:34 pm

        Thanks di.. Thanks a lot.. Your support is really valuable…?

    4. Mansi on February 15, 2018 12:24 am

      Fantastic update???Valentine’s Day special update was really very special??? Keerthi’s dream???It’s ok no probs?Update ASAP?

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:35 pm

        Thanks Mansi di.. Thanks a lot.. Will update soon as I can…

    5. Anuradha123 on February 15, 2018 10:36 am

      Awesome dear…. Really it’s very very nice story …

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:36 pm

        Thanks anu.. Thanks a lot…

    6. fenil on February 15, 2018 1:18 pm

      Awesome !!

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:36 pm

        Thank u bhai…

    7. ShebaRS on February 15, 2018 10:02 pm

      Pavi…. Superb ….. I love this chapter very much ????….

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:37 pm

        Thanks Sheba… Glad you loved this…

    8. arshiya_princess on February 16, 2018 6:12 pm

      Awesome dear ?Loved it

      • Pavithra1616 on February 24, 2018 5:43 pm

        Thanks Princess… Glad you loved this….??

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