Hello guys!!im not getting proper reviews over my fan fiction..plz tell me if itz boring…I want all ur opnions…it just makes me feel ,not to update it..ur comments motivates me a lot..I want reviews guys..come on…
Raman:what r u saying,then who is Amma and appa
Ishu:appa was working under my dad..my dad was a big businessman and always succeed in everything..this brought more enemies…so when we were travelling on my birthday …an accident …bot my parents died…and all d other ppl who were working under my dad wanted me to,get married to their son so they can take property…that’s when appa came to me…
Flashback shows
Appa:beta u come with me ..I ll take care of u…we ll leave tonight we l, settle in some other place..leave the property as it is…
Flashback shows ishu agreeing and they both leve that night…
Flashback ends…
Ishu:I was born and brought up as a typical Brahmin…from day 1 they made me feel like their own daughter…and I m grateful to them…from small I spent most of the time with appa more than my own dad…I trusted him and came…
Ishu bursts out crying…
Raman:ishu plz don’t cry…it makes me cry..plz don’t…
Ishu:they died on my birthday….I always felt there was no one for me…
Raman:I ll slap u if u say that…I’m there for u..plz don’t cry…
Saying this Raman put his hand around ishu..and held her tightly…
Ishu:I feel so comfortable when I’m with u Raman….
Raman smiles…
Ishu couldn’t resist and put her head on his chest and wanted to be there forever…
She put her hand around his waist…
Ishu(mind voice): ishu what r u doing???hes just ur friend ..u don’t if he likes u back!how can u do this..what if he just think itz friendship …ishu don’t create this to ur self….move away from him…
But ishu couldn’t..his feel wanted her more….and more….
9 Comments
Dude make it long update thn all will like it.
Plz don’t say that..
I was waiting ur for ff
IT’S REALLY AWESOME
plz don’t stop in between
I beg u
Nice but pls a bit longer
Wow so touching….continue dear…???
Come on…I was waiting for Ur ff….but plz make it a bit longer so that we can enjoy….even though loved it….eagerly waiting for next one…plz update it soon.
Plzzzzzzzzzz don’t stop this…………….I am soooooooooooo Excitedly waiting for ur ff……U know that?????Plzzzzzzz its not boring………Don’t stop this……………&Make it a Lil bit long……………..Plzzzzzz………..
Oh gosh peppy how can u say so……… u think that we can just forget ur ff? Noooo u ar wrong my dr we love ur ff soooo much……… Today episode was mind blowing and also fantabulous!
??????????????????
It’s good don’t stop.. .
Oh my god. It’s a heart breaking news for me.please don’t stop t