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Home»Fan Fiction»Ishqe the rog seyana! #OS by trisha (part 2)
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Ishqe the rog seyana! #OS by trisha (part 2)

Trisha139By Trisha139September 27, 2017Updated:September 27, 201738 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys Trisha here ! Glad to see you guys again !
Thanku so much for liking my previous part of this ff.
If anyone left that by mistake or unable to read than here is the first part….!

part-1

A very happy birthday to my inspiration friend sister…ANNIE !
As friends go, you’re not one of the best. You’re THE best! May this year’s birthday be the best ever for you.

So let’s persuade to the second part!

***ISHQE THE ROG SEYANA**
(Disease of love is intelligent)
Part -2

It was late evening when Kabeer returned back home ….he stepped towards stairs but before that found his mom sitting in front of TV nd laughing wholeheartedly !

Kabeer- mom !

Kusum- very good shravan ! Keep going by beta !

Kabeer-(little loudly)- maaa !

Kusum(coming back to senses)- haan Kabeer ; you came !

Kabeer- I think so it’s your son in front of here ; but I guess u were lost somewhere else !

Kusum- oh yeah Kabeer ; you must see , how shravan proposed his going love !

Kabeer- really mom lemme see !

His sudden behaviour got the attention of kusum !

Kusum- ahm ahm !

Kabeer- I mean just if u r asking ! Nothing else !

Kusum- me teri maa hu !
(I am ur mom)

Few hours skipped !

It was morning Kabeer woke up with much irritating alarm; nd at first took her diary still sitting in bed !

It was written ;

“1-love letter
2- card
3- propose with surprise
4- with rose
5- kuch kuch Hota haj style !

6- all r impossible for u Kabeer beta”

So the day started !
Everything we’re going usual in sdch when prasha were peeping onto kabeer !

Kabeer in his cabin !
Oh phone;
Kabeer- yes bouquet and one large card !

After few hours when the delivery man came prasha somehow took the parcel …..
They signed as Saachi … at the place of recieved by !!!

Pragya-what the hell ! Who gifts valentine card to propose ?

Isha- ofcourse nd lilies? Kuch nhi hoskta jiju ka !

Pragya- umm so …!

Isha- so ….!

Few more hours later it was late evening ….!

Dr Kabeer got a parcel just inside his door ….he opened that nd was super surprised to find a card from Saachi …. the same card he ordered for her …!

It was written
“These won’t work …. keep trying !
Dr Saachi ”

Kabeer- she got the letter nd …. that delivery man is gone today ….!
It means she too wants me to propose her … yes ! Omg ! Yes !

Saachi was going outside towards her hostel as prasha had left already so Kabeer was behind her walking in corridor of SDCH !

Kabeer- so….

Saachi- yes sir

Kabeer- did you liked boquets !

Saachi- yeah ofcourse infact if we’ll add three more ; conference hall will look superb !

Kabeer-(mind) what ? Hall ? What abt my lilies !

Kabeer-Hm I agree wd you ! Nd what abt lilies !

Saachi- no way sir who idiot used lilies !

Kabeer- what ?

Saachi- I mean for big decorations !

Kabeer- oh !

Saachi- nd did u received the card sir ?

Kabeer- yeah nd ur msg too !

Saachi- one second …. the sample of invitation card that dr Malhotra told us to prepare for coming farewell party !

Kabeer- oho nd what abt love letter ? (He said in one go )

She was looking at him with unbelievable expressions nd deadly glares !

Kabeer- I mean long letter for special guests ?
(Mind- oh Kabeer either you r mad or she’s going to make you mad….shaadi se pehle ye haal hai to shaadi ke baad kya ..)

Hours skipped !

Kabeer reached back home . Kusum was again watching tv !

Kusum- haay how rude these wife’s are I mean see how does house chores by their husbands ….cooking ; washing clothes !

Kabeer lost in his own imaginary world upon listening this ….where Saachi was ordering him nd he was doing house chores !

He came back to senses by punching of kusum !

Kusum- she’s isn’t like that !

Kabeer- I didn’t said anything !

Kusum- maa hu teri!
(I am ur mom)

Kabeer- Jai Mata Di !

So it was morning …. someone knocked saachis apartment nd she went outside to see leaving prasha inside….just to find a tiny box..there !

She took that in nd saw a letter taped folded on that !

It read…”I don’t care if u go …. after all u are also twin of someone in the box ….
from someOne u r waiting for to propose u”

She opened the box nd left that shouting at once …..after all she was super afraid of frogs even if it was a mini frog ?!

Saachi- how dare that hitler ….. ab manugi bhi nhi!
(I won’t agree) huh !

On the other hand in kabeers house ; in his room…!

Kabeer- finally everything done !

Precap: final dhamakedar proposal!

So this was in this part guys hope u like this part pls pls drop a comment that means so much to me ! After this just one more part nd last !
Regards
Trisha

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    38 Comments

    1. Priyanshi on September 27, 2017 4:06 pm

      Superb ? ? ? update asap

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:04 am

        Thanku nd sure

    2. Anonymousaa on September 27, 2017 4:08 pm

      Haha very naughty prasha yaar.
      Cute update yet short.
      Plz post next shot ASAP

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:04 am

        Thanku dear nd sure

    3. Alia on September 27, 2017 4:29 pm

      Superbbbbb. It’s amazing . Kabeer imagining himself doing household chores and kabeer mom saying, She isn’t like this. Was amazing part. How u get such ideas dear. Ure amazing .
      I can’t wait for another chapter plzzz update soon. I can’t wait now . Eagerly waiting for kabeer to propose Sanchi

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:05 am

        AwwThanku dear sure sure sweetie love uh loads

    4. yaashi23 on September 27, 2017 4:57 pm

      Super se uper wala episode it was… poor kabir!

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:06 am

        AwwThanku dear

    5. Nisha on September 27, 2017 5:16 pm

      Haha super cute

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:06 am

        Thanku

    6. Amnaa on September 27, 2017 5:38 pm

      Amazing

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:07 am

        Thanku

    7. Tumpamoni on September 27, 2017 5:53 pm

      Just lv it soo much dear.. Poor kabir..

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:07 am

        Thanku

    8. Anee on September 27, 2017 5:59 pm

      Hi Trishu this was amazing dear………Aur tum mujh se narraz ho kiya? Tell me dear.

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:08 am

        No never
        Nd thanku anee
        Just a bit busy nowads

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:08 am

        Nowadays

      • Anee on September 28, 2017 11:21 am

        Ok nevermind..

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 2:38 pm

        Thanks for understanding me

    9. Anuradha123 on September 27, 2017 7:19 pm

      Three words ” fadoo, fatafati, fabulous “..may God bless you dear… Aise hi likhte rehna… Tumhari stories mein jaan hai… I loved it from the bottom ( uske bhi andar se) of my heart..

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:09 am

        Awwww omg thanku so so much anu
        Ur cmmnt made my day yr

      • Anuradha123 on September 28, 2017 11:13 am

        U r welcome Trisha dear… Please don’t say thanks yaar…. Dosto k beech thanks aani hi nahi chahiye sirf pyaar rehna chahiye…

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:19 am

        I totally agree wd u anu ?
        In real life I don’t have any friends or you can say is m a very introvert type nd here I feel free being frnds wd such amazing people like you ?

    10. Negisanyukta on September 27, 2017 7:38 pm

      Awesome.I just loved it to the core.???
      Keep writing dear.

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:10 am

        Thanku so much sweetie

    11. Khamoshi on September 27, 2017 7:42 pm

      It was so holarious trisha.. the imagination of Sanchi as Ruling Wife was superb..and JAI MATA DI part was fab.. love u dear.. aise hi kabir ki band bajati raho..its very entertaining..
      And 2 to go…so after that we want a party ?? hume kisi article main hi shamil kar lena party sequence main…hum uss main bhi khush ho jayenge ?? just kidding

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:12 am

        Thanku so much mitali
        I am glad u liked it !
        Hnji sure sure party

      • Khamoshi on September 28, 2017 11:21 am

        Are you from delhi? Or north part of india?

    12. Dhruti on September 27, 2017 10:34 pm

      superb superb ekdam khidkitod…
      jai mata di wala scene was so fabulous …
      and sanchi as ruling wife kabir imagination was superb he he he…
      after 2 more ff/os … so we want party…party to…party to…party to banti he …
      update next one soon…

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:13 am

        Thanku dear
        Nd party to banti hai sweetie obviously sure

    13. niyaaa on September 27, 2017 11:58 pm

      Jai mata di hahhaa..best dialogue yaar…amaz mindblowing sweetie…poor kabir…superb tikdambaaz ishgya bechare kabir ki band baja rakhi h….waitting for purposal part…post nxt asap tc

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:17 am

        Thanku so much niyaa

    14. riyarocks on September 28, 2017 1:30 am

      too good Trisha………can’t wait for the nxt one……plz update nxt part asap…………luv u cutie pie……..

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:18 am

        Thanku riya
        Love you loads chocopie !

    15. Divya on September 28, 2017 10:35 am

      Haha???very naughty yaar poor kabir

      • Trisha139 on September 28, 2017 11:18 am

        Thanku

    16. Abhilasha on September 28, 2017 10:44 pm

      Superb trishu dear and that jai mata Di part…he he…..really excited!!

    17. Jessicca on October 3, 2017 12:05 am

      Mind blowing Trishaa…. Amazing… Ossm… Jai mata di wala part was Superb.. Loved it..

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