Hi and hello peeps… Hope you all remember me and my FFs… Finally my exam over and I am hopefully back with regular update and yeah thank you to all of you for showring all your love on my last OS I am overwhelmed with all of your comments and response… Thanks a lot to each and every reader and silent reader thank you to you but I would love to read all of your comment so plz do comment from now on… Okay enough of my blah blah now updates time…
Recap:
Shivay visited Anika in her room and ordered her to stop and break marriage and Anika refused and they have argument and later before leaving Shivay forcefully kissed Anika and after that he leave from there leaving crying Anika behind.
Part 5
As soon as Shivay left from her room Anika started sobbing loudly on her destiny for the first time she felt disgusting with her own self after that lustful touch of Shivay roam over body and that forced kiss by him and crying Anika gather her stamina and rush to bathroom and she started every water source and she stand beneath shower and same time keep emptying bucket full of water on her body and to remove that touch of that devil from her body but she is unable to forget that touch and she broken into pieces once again remembering all the torture devil name Shivay done on her and same time his words started ringing in her ears and mind
“Anika I want you to stop and break this marriage…”
“I am out of my mind and my senses after seeing you. And now you are driving me crazy with passing of each moment…”
“Listen, me carefully, I am mad for you now and from now only I am the one who can stand with you can call you mine so just stop this bl**dy marriage with that looser Daksh. And you are mine now that’s final….”
“I do not want to leave you I damn want you and keep one thing every yes and no of your will gonna affect your life from now..”
Every word of him, his rage, his aggression, his obsession for her, his lustful possessive nature for her are yet sending shiver to her spine and she felt helpless and weak for the first time in her life and she screamed loudly and she thought of informing all to her father and she just come out of shower and get ready in her comfy dress and come out of washroom and she stand in front of mirror to get ready and before she can
Come out from her room her mother’s loud scream catch her attention and she rush there and find her father lying unconscious on land and she called doctor immediately and doctor checked him and informed that due to all this pressure and all his blood pressure was unstable and he became unconscious once again Anika felt helpless as she do not want to give more tension to her father and alone she’ve to fight with devil Shivay and she silently cried over her fate and she sat beside her father and soon her father find her more silent then usual and lost somewhere so lovingly he caresses her hair with father’s love and care and ask
Rishi: What happened beta???
Anika controlling her urge to inform all fact to her father just nod her head in negative and hug her father silently finding solace in fatherly warmth and unknowingly her tears started making her way from her eyes and wetting her father’s shirt and seeing her daughter crying Rishi’s heart skipped heartbeat because he is not able to see his only daughter crying and he cupped her face and speak
Rishi: Ani, What happened???
Anika: Nothing papa, I am just feeling heavy with all this…
And Rishi thought that her daughter is feeling heavy as she has to leave home soon and he caressed her hair and speak
Rishi: Ani, Daksh is good boy plus we are in same city beta and any time you can visit us its your home.
Anika nod in positive and she leave from there to her room after taking promise from her father that he’ll not take tension and will take care of himself and as soon as Anika enter in her room she lost her control over her tears and she cried her heart out and she too do not know when she drift to sleep.
Scene from Oberoi mansion
As soon as Shivay left from her room he did not wait for anything and without biding bye to Rishi shekhawat he left from there and drive his car towards Oberoi mansion like a maniac and all this while his mind is busy in thinking about Anika and her words and he remembered how she refused to him, insulted him by her words but at last remembering his kiss he smirked and does his signature hair move and he entered inside silent Oberoi mansion and he remembered that his parents are not in India and he drag himself towards bar of oberoi mansion and he lost in his imagination and keep drinking and almost after emptying whole bottle of whisky his mind once again crave for seeing Anika and touch her and without any other thinking he drive his car to Shekhawat mansion and silently he peeped inside and he sneeked in Anika’s room and there he find her sleeping and he lock door and sit beside her and look at her face and he found it pale and yet her dry tears are there and he just move his hand over that skin and Anika jerked due to his touch and open her eyes and next second he shut her mouth by his hand before she can scream.
Okay done with update. Howz it???? Plz leave your feedback whether its positive or negative… Any guess regarding what will Shivay do next??? If any then comment that too…
38 Comments
Chocopie you stopped it on right scene . This is not fair and this is cheating???. Nice episode romantic pie ???
Thanks for comment and new name Aksh…:)
Its so good chocopie anika emotions her helpless situation is just awesome u came back with a bang butbupdste next soon????
Love you chocopie
Thanks for comment Nandupie and love you alot too…:)
Oh God
Ab kya hoga
Amazing update Priiii
Plz update soon
Thanks for comment Priyanaka…:)
Intense one Pri.. I know how disgusting that unwanted touch might feel for a girl.. I cant say I liked it but it was a nice attempt
Thanks Sanchi…:)
Nice………. ?☺?
Thanks…:)
Nice-) post next part asap ..=
Thanks for comment dear…:)
Wow!! Every emotion is perfectly carved and I Just loved Anika and rishi’s bonding…????????????????
Shivaay is by God his role will remain as one of my scariest nightmare…?
I just can’t wait for next episode I am so done with my curiosity…?
Keep going…. in love with your ff….
#Jhalli lover of this ff #chocopie’s Cutiepie..
Yeah your # are just perfect and I’ll update next part soon and thanks for comment Chocopie’s Cutiepie… 🙂
Plsss send previous links of your ff I don’t the know the story ??
Thanks for comment dear…:) I’ll give link of previous parts in next update…
It’s nice post asap waiting to now wht hpn next
can’t wait for the next part 🙂 post asap
nyc dear
fab update…..one request in your next update plz give recape from first epi
Fantabulous fantastic update!!!
Fabulous episode…… Waiting for next episode…
nice one waiting for nxt plz update asap
Nice update dear ☺☺
Ohhh my god its just amazing and I loves the way you potrait Anika’s helplessness and pain and all. I just loved Father-daughter duo and its bond its just wow… I don’t want this update to end but you stopped it…????????????????????
Plz update next part soon plz I am eagerly waiting for Shivay’s next action…
Wow what a wonderful episode and I just loved the daughter father bonding it was awesome???
u left it in suspense pri. the last part was so CUTE!!! anika’s expressions….the way u wrote them down is awesome. loved it and pls post next part soon.
Its quite a emotional update being a girl I can understand what Anika might be feeling with that touch and salute to you for narrating that expression and feeling in same way I just love your writing you are wonderful player with word. And yeah this is a cliffhanger update I am feeling restless to know what happened next so plz update next part soon..
PS. You are a wonderful writer..
An awesome update I liked father daughter moment a lot…
Interesting and cliffhanger update
Nerdy you rocked re….
Interestiand nice update…
ohhh!!!!!
what next….???
nice one… eagerly waiting for next
nice dear…update ASAP
Sry for late comment Dr I am not feeling well .really super I loved it
Fab part