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Ishq par zor nahi (Ek ajeeb aadmi) Part 1

Myra...queenBy 7 Comments2 Mins Read

Hey guys this is my first ff and I hope you like it. All credit goes to my niece Sonu…. Thanks dear for the ideas which inspired me. And extra big thanks to Archiya who inspired me the most and it’s you because of whom I am writing this. pls check her ff’s too..And do comment

“Aunty?”Ishqi asks faintly.

“Ahaan se mujhe milao.”Savitri splutters.

“Ahaan kaun,” ishqi asks softly.

“Ahaan Veer malhotra.”

“Kya????” Ishqi’s heart pounds against her hand. Savitri is her saas?

“Ahaan aapka beta hain?” Ishqi asks, nervously. She didn’t even know why she was nervous, her saas was literally in front of her so she should be happy.

“Haan, Ahaan mera beta hai. Jab wo chhota tha tab uske pitaji bohot sharab pite aur fir ek bar…” Savitri’s voice goes off and she faints.

Aur fir kya? ishqi thinks crossly. Kya, kya kya?

The doctor comes to check Savitri and Ishqi goes, lost in her own thoughts.

“Ahaan ko call karu? Nahi, khud hi kuch sochte hun,” she mutters to herself.

While walking she bumps into a strange man. He was decked with black jackets and glares over his eyes.

“dekhkar chalo aurat,” he says roughly pushing ishqi.

“Huh? Nasamajh pagal kahika.” ishqi says.

She gets up to leave, but remembers she has to talk to the doctor about how savitri’s health progress is.

She sees the man in the room next to savitri’s. The fogged glass blocked the female but she could see him clearly.

“Mai iss bache ka baap nahi hun.” the man says. Ishqi gets closer to investigate but her phone rings.

“Uffo, ahaan ki timing wrong thi,” she sighs and gets away. “Haan atti hun,” she says to ahaan and cuts the call. When she looks back the lady from the room goes with the man. No clues are left. Just a gold chain which looks familiar to Ishqi. She picks it up and leaves to go home.

Guys how was it? It’s not the first part but half first part…. Pls give ideas for other half of part 1…

  1. What was savitri saying?
  2. What does the chain hv to do with the mystery. Part 1 full will be out after 15th July
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7 Comments

  1. Archiya on

    Myra.. this is lovely. I liked how you built the mystery around riya. Plus it’s good you didn’t reveal everything about savitri as of now.. u can always add more to it
    I really liked ur style of writing.. keep it up
    Loads of love n best wishes ❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Btw I haven’t done anything much but m glad if I have inspired you

  2. Myra...queen on

    Thanks dear… Currently hv imp work till 12th so after 15th part 1 full will be out..Glad to know you liked it…Loads of hugs

  3. Nia on

    I really enjoyed how you gave a mysterious aura to the story. I guess that gold chain belongs to Riya and that’s why Ishqi finds it so similar.
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    Also, I’m really loving the bond you share with your niece. I’m really eager to know how old she is, if you don’t mind.

  4. Myra...queen on

    Thank you….That will be revealed soon.

    Thanks again, and she’s 9 and a half now

  5. Aldy on

    Wow…. awesome episode….I think gold chain belong ro Riya and that man in black jacket was her bf… eagerly waiting for next..

  6. Myra...queen on

    Thanks dear Aldy…Ya, your close to the mystery…It took me quite a while to think abt that chain…But, finally I thought of it…