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Home»Fan Fiction»ishq ki kahaani part 23
Fan Fiction Ishqbaaz

ishq ki kahaani part 23

niku16By niku16June 22, 2017Updated:June 22, 201727 Comments5 Mins Read
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part – 23

at evening in om
rudy – abhi tak toh bhai , bhabhi must have boarded the flight for london
shivaay – nhi anika will not go anywhere , she will come back and now no one will talk that she wiil not come back
rudy – okay

in gaukara’s room
gauri was crying that this all raita was due to her
om comes near her and wipes her tears with his thumb
om – no my gauri cant do anything , and u knothi g happened bcoz of u , it was the destiny and now stop blaming urself
gauri (stammering) – omkaraji , gauri kumara sarma ka plan fail ho gyaa and not that nika bhauji humme chodeke chali gyi
om – no gauri no ….om kisses gauri on forehead seeing her condition . he then calls hari kaka and tells him bring food as gauri hasn’t taken her dinner
hari kaka brings it
om – gauri , just stop crying and take ur food
now (ordering her)
gauri nodded no – nhi mjhe bhook nhi h
omkara then sits beside gauri and feeds her with her own hands and gauri was staring omkara that how kindly he was feeding her like a baby and she loves the moment
she has never been cared of like this by anyone except her mother whose mental condition detorioted when she was 11 yr old

now at morning in om
shivaay did nt slept at night nor any member on oberoi mansion
omru came at shivaay’s room to calm him when a phone calls come
shivaay was not in a mood to attend any call but omru insist him to take it
shivaay saw the name mr.raheja on phone and in a fraction of second picks up the call
ritick – goodmorning mr.oberoi
shivaay – goodmorning mr.raheja
ritick – actually there is a good news for u , we have not gone to London still in Mumbai at raheja ‘s resort
shivaay was so happy but
ritick – don’t become so happy before I complete my sentence annu convinced us to give u one chance to prove ur love for our annu so u have to live in raheja’s resort
shivaay – no problem , I ll be there
ritick – thts not it , there is something more
shivaay – what else u want
omru says to shivaay to keep his phone on speaker
ritick – I don’t want my sister to get heart by any person of ur family so I want not only u in RR but whole oberoi family to live here in RR and prove ur love for anu
shivaay becomes angry listening this , he feel insulted and was going to shout on ritick but before that
omru – okay we all will RR , there is no problem in that , we will take our bhabhi back

call ends

at RR
ritick (pov) – I don’t think that shivaay will come here after all coming here would be like his insult , I know shivaay has ego problem , he would never like his family being insulted let see what happens
then ritick thinks what happened at airport
fb starts
anika was dragged to the car , all were at airpot and anika was continuously crying
ritick – annu plz don’t cry for them
anu – bhai do u love me
ritick – anu , what type of question is this , yes ofcourse I love u and I cant see u crying
anu – bhai if u loves me then just listen what I want to say
ritick – kk speak anu
anu shouting and crying loudly – bhai apko kya lagta h ki bina koi nkk ke koi bhi insaan kisisko bachane ke liye goli khaa lega , bhai shivaay ne mere liye goli bhi khayyi h , unhone mjhe uss phscyo daksh se bhi bachaya tha , inhone sahil ko bhi kitni baar bachayaa tha , jo unhone mera saath bura kiya tha , uske liye vo aaj bhi ane app ko zimmadar mannte hei , btayi nbhai koi karta h kisi anjaan ke liyye yh sab
(bhai what do u think , that any person takes gun on him for that whom I m a stranger , the one who don’t have nkk , u don’t know bhai how many times shivaay saved me , he have saved me from that psyco daksh , u don’t know bhai , how many time he save my sahil , and the thinks he had done wrong with , he still consider himself guilty , teel me bhai does anyone do this for any stranger)

anika starts crying badly
anika – bhai he really loves me , he do
rd – stop it anu , u cant see that he is doing becoz u r raheja …….
daadi was interrupted by ritick
ritick – daddi , I think we should give one chance to anu , let us also see how much shivaay loves our anu , so anu , we give a chance to shivay to prove his love for u
anika happily – yes bhai , he will definitely prove u his love
daadi (shouting ) – ritick
ritick – daadi there is something more I want to say , I promise u daadi I will not disappoint u
ritick saying towards anika
ritick – annu but if shivaay failed than u urself will come back to London with us r u okay with it
anika – kk bhai

then they all move to RR

FB ENDS

guys thank u to all who commented on my ff but what this there is no use of my surprise pack , and I am not going to update my ff if I ll not get atleast “25 COMMENTS” . it really hearts u know when u get low comments
and special thanks to those who daily comments on my ff

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    27 Comments

    1. Shreya on June 22, 2017 5:12 pm

      Awesome please post next part asap

    2. Anitaaa3 on June 22, 2017 5:17 pm

      Awwwsome….

    3. Sairan on June 22, 2017 5:24 pm

      Superbbbb
      Let’s see shivay ke sath Kya hoga

    4. Charitha on June 22, 2017 5:26 pm

      Awesome

    5. Anoushka on June 22, 2017 5:55 pm

      Awesome dear I think whole mansion members will be at rahejas resort after all they love Anika right very interesting how shivay will handle this situation nice update dear

    6. Niriha on June 22, 2017 6:11 pm

      Awesome

    7. Sagithya on June 22, 2017 6:26 pm

      Awesome yaar

    8. fffan1234 on June 22, 2017 6:51 pm

      Interesting update

    9. gayathri.visu on June 22, 2017 7:32 pm

      I don’t like this Anika. I love independent n tadibaaz Anika only. I agree she longed for family. But no one have any right to take Anika life’s decision not even Shivaay. Only she has that right. Why Shivaay proves his love for Anika to that Rehejas? This is Shivika’s life. Why that reheja’s always took Shivika life’s decision? Just leave that pinky ponky dinky aside. Let them take their life’s decision. Let make Anika gives punishment for Shivaay not ritick or rd! Bcz whenever Anika wants someone on herside that time Shivaay is there for her not ritick or rd!

      I M EXTREMELY SORRY IF I M HURT U, but I can’t take this crybaby Anika! Once again I m sorry…..

      • niku16 on June 22, 2017 8:31 pm

        i m happy that u express ur view even i want all my readers to tell their view and just think about the condition of anika , she has got her family after so many years , we all know that shivaay loves his family more than anyone so that anika , how she can leave her family for whom she was longing and dear dont worry , soon u will be seeing the tadibaaz anika in her style

      • niku16 on June 22, 2017 8:33 pm

        and one thing more dont think i m justifying ur satament , thanku for tellung ur desire , i will really take care of it from nowonwards in my writings
        with love
        ur niku16

      • gayathri.visu on June 23, 2017 9:55 am

        Thanks dear for taking it has a positive view. Even I m also don’t tell that Anika leaves her family for Shivaay. I just told that let her take her life’s decision. Waiting for tadibaaz Anika dear.

    10. Arthi on June 22, 2017 7:44 pm

      I love this condition of ritick……and Superb dr….

    11. alekhika20 on June 22, 2017 7:56 pm

      Amazing update

    12. UF on June 22, 2017 8:06 pm

      AWESOME INTERSTING NICE SUPERB??????

    13. aryaraju on June 22, 2017 8:08 pm

      Superb ??

    14. niku16 on June 22, 2017 8:34 pm

      thank u to all my friend and dont forget that atleat comment should be 25 than i ll post my surprise pack or i will continue with one only , all depends on u

    15. Anju on June 22, 2017 8:49 pm

      Interesting… waiting for next part

    16. Shanaya on June 22, 2017 9:25 pm

      It was superb update soon

    17. Lauren on June 22, 2017 9:42 pm

      Amazinggggg Niku…post next asap….

    18. Banita on June 23, 2017 1:28 am

      As always AMAZING epi niku….

    19. Tahura on June 23, 2017 1:44 am

      Fabulous episode……. Waiting for the next one…………. Want tadibaaz anika back

    20. Tahura on June 23, 2017 1:45 am

      Fabulous episode……. Waiting for the next one…………. Want tadibaaz anika back……..

    21. nikita_jai29 on June 23, 2017 10:17 am

      It is awesome dear

    22. Madhuani on June 23, 2017 12:59 pm

      awesome…
      i think rithik has planned something.

    23. kanfi on June 23, 2017 3:31 pm

      Ammmazing dear…
      Srry for not replying on previous parts,,bt i’ve read all parts

    24. Mrunal on June 23, 2017 10:28 pm

      awesome update

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